2017年寧波中考作文講解

1、寧波市英語中考作文講解 -江東校區(qū)英語張定蓉一、 寫作注意事項(xiàng)：結(jié)構(gòu)+要點(diǎn)+邏輯+語法+亮點(diǎn)1、 結(jié)構(gòu)中考最流行的結(jié)構(gòu)就是三段式，觀點(diǎn)-要點(diǎn)-總結(jié)第一段：簡單明了，開門見山，不超過2句話。第二段：分2-3點(diǎn)說明什么第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論述，可以得出結(jié)論，但要注意不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華，也可以提出希望、建議。2、 要點(diǎn)實(shí)際上中考英語寫作就等于兩個(gè)字“翻譯”，因?yàn)橹锌加⒄Z寫作一般會給出幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。文章寫得再好，只要缺少要點(diǎn)就會扣分。所以要點(diǎn)，也就是文章的第二段內(nèi)容，要做到全，圍繞中心。3、 邏輯實(shí)際上就是邏輯詞，最常用的就是表示遞進(jìn)的，轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞。遞進(jìn)：fi

2、rst, second, third, finally等，還可以使用高級點(diǎn)的如：first of all, in addition, whats more, moreover, in a word, all in all. 轉(zhuǎn)折：but, yet, however等，有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的閱卷老師會很注意這些邏輯連接詞，因?yàn)檫@些詞體現(xiàn)了整個(gè)文章的思路。4、 語法其他幾點(diǎn)都不是硬性的要求，不那樣做不能說是錯(cuò)，只能說好與不好，但語法是硬性的。如單詞的使用，時(shí)態(tài)。5、 亮點(diǎn)前八個(gè)字都做到很完美的時(shí)候只能得到一個(gè)二等文，要想得到一等文，最后兩個(gè)字“亮點(diǎn)”至關(guān)重要。設(shè)想是閱卷老師，兩篇寫人美麗的作品擺在我們面前，都是

3、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的三段式，要點(diǎn)都很全，都用了一些邏輯詞，都沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，但是A篇只用beautiful, good-looking. B篇卻用了attractive, charming, catching ones sight. 正常人都會給B篇高分，這些高級的詞匯、句型就是我們得到好作文的絕招。所以寫作文要養(yǎng)成一般詞匯限量用的好習(xí)慣。二、 訓(xùn)練方法1、 記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。2、 練。每練一篇書面表達(dá)，都要自己學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，平時(shí)可以采用循序漸進(jìn)，靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式，從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句、翻譯句子到寫幾句話，最后寫到流利的文章。3、 寫。進(jìn)行實(shí)踐寫作。三、應(yīng)試策略1、審題目，

4、要切中題意 認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要著急動筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在頭腦中構(gòu)思一個(gè)框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱的資料和信息審題。2、圖要點(diǎn)防止要點(diǎn)遺漏，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出3、 列提綱為寫作文做好準(zhǔn)備，根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)，短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。4、 定基調(diào)定出時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾等5、 寫全文四、 實(shí)踐準(zhǔn)備1、 常用的過渡詞和連接詞：first，second, third, finally ,in addition, furthermore, besides, whats worse, more importa

5、ntly, in contrast, because, since, now that, therefore, consequently, in that case, as a result/consequence, in conclusion, to sum up, in a word, in my view.2、 萬能句式 the+ est+名+主詞+have +ever+ v-edHelen in the most charming girl that I have ever seen.Mr. Chang in the kindest teacher that I have ever h

6、ad. nothing is + more+ adj. +than to + VNothing is more important than to receive education.Nothing is more enjoyable than to listen to Mozard.cannot emphasize the importance of + n +too muchWe cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.We cannot emphasize the importance of rece

7、iving education too much.there is + no+名+ that.There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.There is no doubt that our educational system needs to be improved.it is universally acknowledged that.It is universally acknowledged that trees are necessary to us.It is w

8、idely known that trees are necessary to us.with the development of (引起話題的事情), there are heated discussions on the topic. many ways can contribute to (解決問題)，but I think the following may be the effective ones. First of all,. Besides, Last but not least,.there are not the only ways we can do about (引起

9、話題的事情), whatever we do, we must make a start right now.五、 實(shí)踐1、 提綱類作文 固定句式：recently we had a heated discussion about whether. different students hold different opinions(peoples ideas vary from person to person). 40% of the students are in favor of it. Here are the reasons (the reasons are as follows/

10、 the following are the reasons); however, some are strongly against the opinion. In the first place, whats more personally speaking. Everything has two sides and is not an exception(2)真題回顧隨著手機(jī)使用的日益廣泛，“作業(yè)幫”等手機(jī)運(yùn)用軟件的出現(xiàn)，現(xiàn)在，手機(jī)又有了新的用途 -隨時(shí)查找作業(yè)的答案部分學(xué)生認(rèn)為：有時(shí)作業(yè)太多、太難，不得不向手機(jī)求援。自己的觀點(diǎn)：抄寫答案不能提高學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)能力，只能阻止學(xué)生思考。 恰當(dāng)運(yùn)

11、用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，不依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)?！窘馕觥?、主題和要點(diǎn)：本文的主題是就“利用手機(jī)做作業(yè)”這一現(xiàn)象談?wù)劜糠謱W(xué)生和自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章主要從兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作：（1）部分學(xué)生對“利用手機(jī)做 作業(yè)”的看法；（2）自己對“利用手機(jī)做作業(yè)”的看法。 2、時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 人稱：第一、三人稱（3）寫作模板段首句：.now have a new use for the Internet - use mobile phones to find out . But different people hold different ideas about. (描述現(xiàn)象，引出話題)中間句： some students think th

12、at they have so that they dont have. And some of the . Are too hard for them to .So they have to use . to find out .(介紹部分學(xué)生的看法)I think .cant improve ., In my opinion, we can . And cant depend on it(介紹自己的看法)結(jié)尾句: Studying online can be a way to., but the best way is .(簡要總結(jié)，表面如何正確對待網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)問題) （4）范文重現(xiàn)Some

13、students now have a new use for the Internet- use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people hold different ideas about it. Some students think that they have so much homework every day that they dont have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them

14、 to work out. so they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers. However, I think copying the answers cant improve the students abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my view, we can make proper use of the Internet and cant depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, bu

15、t the best way is to study by oneself. （3） 問題解決類（提出生活中的某一問題，要求考生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示給出合理的解決方式）真題回顧 同學(xué)們，你們生活中有煩惱，學(xué)習(xí)有壓力嗎？那我們應(yīng)該如何正確面對煩惱，有效緩解心理壓力呢？請根據(jù)以“How to solve our stress”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，提示詞必須用完。 提示：1.積極參加體育鍛煉，有一個(gè)健康的身體； 2. 多與老師、家長和朋友交談，說出自己的煩惱； 3. 多聽聽音樂，多看看書 4.盡自己最大的努力學(xué)習(xí)，勇敢面對自己的成績 5.如果經(jīng)常壓力太大，可以去看看醫(yī)生 【

16、解析】主題和要點(diǎn)：本文的主題是如何解決我們的壓力問題。文章主要從五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作：體育鍛煉；與人交談，傾訴煩惱；聽音樂看書，放松心情；努力學(xué)習(xí)，面對現(xiàn)實(shí)；壓力過大，看醫(yī)生；時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱寫作模板 段首句：we all have some problems and stress in.(描述現(xiàn)象，引出話題) 中間句：Firstly, we should .can help us to. Secondly, we need to. Thirdly, we can also. Its a good way to. Fourthly, we should try our best t

17、o.（具體介紹解決壓力問題的建議）結(jié)尾句：if we have too much stress,wed better .(針對嚴(yán)重的情況。提出建議)范文重現(xiàn) How to solve our stress We all have some problems and stress in our lives. How should we solve them? Firstly, we should take more part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Secondly, w

18、e need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends, try to tell them our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Thirdly, we can also listen to music and read books. Its a good way to relax ourselves. Fourthly, we should try our best to study hard and learn to face our grades bravely. Fifth

19、ly, if we have too much stress, wed better see a doctor.（4） 主題闡述類（ 針對社會生活中的某一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行必要的提示，要求考生根據(jù)提示緊緊圍繞主題進(jìn)行寫作。常見話題有保護(hù)環(huán)境、助人為樂、保持健康、文明禮儀等）真題回顧為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識，提高自我保護(hù)能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇演講稿。 提示：慎重交友；遇險(xiǎn)報(bào)警；安全飲食；其他（1-2點(diǎn)）【解析】主題和要點(diǎn)：本文的主題是就“如何保持安全”這一話題，根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行闡述。文章有四個(gè)要點(diǎn)：慎重交友，遇險(xiǎn)報(bào)警，安全飲食和自己的觀點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)

20、在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作模板 段首句：.here are some of my suggestions.（提出建議） 中間句：first, we should be. When we.（慎重交友）second, if we are.we must.（遇險(xiǎn)報(bào)警）also, we ought to .（安全飲食）last, we must remember.（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)） 結(jié)尾句：in short.（簡要總結(jié)）范文重現(xiàn) How to keep safe?As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep s

21、afe? Here are some of my suggestions. First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially on lone. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police foe help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safety. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to ou

22、r health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it is dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first!（5） 事實(shí)講述類（針對某一事實(shí)設(shè)計(jì)考題，要求對考生對題目中的事實(shí)進(jìn)行描寫）真題回顧假如你即將在學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。提示：1.幾個(gè)月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞 2.從那時(shí)起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞 3.現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友 4.有些鄰居有意見，認(rèn)為音樂很吵，無法入睡 5.你認(rèn)為

23、人們可以跳廣場舞，但.【解析】主題和要點(diǎn)：本文的主題是介紹奶奶跳廣場舞的情況。文章主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作：奶奶跳舞的情況；鄰居的看法；自己的觀點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)：介紹奶奶幾個(gè)月前的情況用一般過去時(shí)；介紹鄰居的看法和自己的觀點(diǎn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱：第一、三人稱寫作模板段首句：Im very happy to speak here and Id like to talk about.（引出需要談?wù)摰膬?nèi)容）中間句：a few months ago, my grandma went to . Since then, she has been in love with.now, she is much .than

24、before. Whats more,she has a lot of .（介紹奶奶跳廣場舞的情況）Some neighbors have a complaint against. They think that the music is so.that they cant.（介紹一些鄰居的看法）結(jié)尾句：in my view, people can. Because it is a good way to. They should think about. And they shouldnt.（自己的觀點(diǎn)）范文重現(xiàn)Boys and girls, Im very happy to speak h

25、ere and Id like to talk about my grandma. A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. Whats more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the peop

26、le who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they cant fall asleep at night. In my view, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldnt make a lot of noise. Thats all. Thank you!2、 書信類

27、投訴信的開頭和結(jié)尾常用句式 I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.I would like to have this matter settled by the end of 詢問信的開頭和結(jié)尾常用句式I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning I am writing to s

28、ee if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.I am looking forward to hearing from you.請求信的開頭和結(jié)尾常用句式I am writing to seek for your assistance in I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter.道歉信

29、的開頭和結(jié)尾常用句式I am writing to apologize for I am writing to say sorry for I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.感謝信的開頭和結(jié)尾常用句式I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for I must thank you again for your generous help.介紹類（從人物、事物和地點(diǎn)等方

30、面設(shè)計(jì)試題，要求考生利用書信的形式對試題中的人物、事物、地方進(jìn)行介紹）真題回顧假如你是李華，你寫電子郵件給外國朋友Tom介紹中國春節(jié)的情況。電子郵件包括以下內(nèi)容：春節(jié)是中國最重要的節(jié)日；春節(jié)一般在一月或二月；除夕夜，家庭成員聚在一起吃年夜飯；年夜飯過后，人們通常會看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會；晚上，我們會放鞭炮；春節(jié)期間，爺爺奶奶、父母等長輩會給我們發(fā)紅包【解析】主題和要點(diǎn)：本文的主題是介紹有關(guān)中國春節(jié)的情況。文章從三個(gè)方面介紹有關(guān)中國春節(jié)的情況。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。寫作模板段首句：let me tell you something about.（提出春節(jié)的話題，引出下文）中間句：it is

31、the most .festival in China. It is always in.（春節(jié)的重要性和時(shí)間）On the eve of the Spring Festival .got together and then .people like to .we like to .at night. During the Spring Festival, we get. From.（詳細(xì)介紹春節(jié)期間人們的活動）結(jié)尾句：we always have a .time. Welcome to.（簡要總結(jié)，對朋友表示歡迎）范文重現(xiàn)Dear Tom Thank you very much for yo

32、ur email. Let me tell you something about the Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China. It is always in January or February. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and then have a big dinner. After dinner, people like to watch TV. There is a great Spring Fe

33、stival Gala on TV every year. We like to let off fireworks at night. They are really wonderful. During the Spring Festival, we get presents of money in red packets from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles. We always have a good time. Welcome to our country. Yours Li hua 3、 圖表圖畫類窗體頂端首段的寫作圖表作文

34、有表格(table)、柱形圖(bar chart)、餅狀圖(pie chart)和折線圖(diagram)From the chart we can see clearly that the average number of hours a student spends on Internet per week has increased from less than two hours in 1998 to nearly four hours in 2000, and then to 20 hours in 2004.From the chart, we can see clearly t

35、hat in a big city in China, state?owned houses declined from 75% in 1990 to 60% in 1995 and then to 20% in 2000, while private houses rose from 25% to 40% and then to 80% during the same period.第二段的寫作主觀：We believe that three reasons can account for this phenomenon.I believe that three reasons can ac

36、count for this phenomenon.In my mind, the reasons why the overseas students are on the rise are as follows.主觀之變體(使用插入語，突顯主語)：Three reasons, we believe, can account for this phenomenon.Three reasons, I believe, can account for this phenomenon.Three reasons, I firmly believe, can account for this phen

37、omenon.主觀之變體(使用插入語)：Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this phenomenon.客觀：Several reasons can account for this phenomenon.（1） 數(shù)據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)類（針對某一調(diào)查結(jié)果采用圖表的形式來設(shè)計(jì)，考察考生對圖表的觀察能力、分析能力）真題回顧請根據(jù)以下交通事故因素（factors）統(tǒng)計(jì)圖表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents” 為題，用英語寫一篇簡短的分析報(bào)告，向?qū)W校英語報(bào)投稿。注意：1. 報(bào)告需逐條陳述下面 pie chart 和 bar

38、 chart (柱狀圖) 中呈現(xiàn)的主 要內(nèi)容。（至少 5 點(diǎn)）2. 提出你對交通安全總的看法。（至少 2 點(diǎn)）3. 詞數(shù)：100 詞左右，所給標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【解析】主題和要點(diǎn)：本文的主題是介紹交通事故產(chǎn)生的主要因素。文章主要從兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作：一是描述pie chart 和bar chart中給出的信息，并指出交通事故產(chǎn)生的主要原因。二是對交通安全的看法。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱。寫作模板段首句：there are all kinds of traffic accidents reports.as a result,its important for us to analyze.（

39、描述現(xiàn)象，引出話題）中間句：according to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors:85%.10%.5%.another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons. Including. Which is.（介紹交通事故的主要因素）結(jié)尾句：in my view. I hope.（說明自己的觀點(diǎn)）范文重現(xiàn) Major Causes of Traffic Accidents Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports

40、 from newspapers, TV news and so on. As a result, its important for us to analyze the major causes. The followings are two reports: According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors: 85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, its quit

41、e clear that the first one is the key point. So another bar chart points that there are 4 reasons to causes it, including spending which is 50%, drunk driving which holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%. In my view, everyone should keep in mind that traffi

42、c safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!6、 寧波英語中考作文回顧與趨勢1、歷年中考話題2013年：“光盤行動”，提倡“節(jié)約型社會”，屬于觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)類2014年，以書信體回憶去年和父親一起爬山的難忘經(jīng)歷。屬于記敘和書信結(jié)合考點(diǎn)。2015年，就俱樂部的英語學(xué)習(xí)做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，分析圖表寫一篇報(bào)告。屬于圖表類作文。2016年

43、，以“獅子會”宣揚(yáng)“傳遞愛心，服務(wù)他人”介紹好人事跡，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。2、 寫作話題趨勢預(yù)測交通問題 越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。例如，上個(gè)月，你的4名同學(xué)在上學(xué)的路上打鬧玩耍，不小心被一輛小汽車撞了，他們被送到醫(yī)院搶救，幸運(yùn)的是他們傷得不重。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文(80字左右) 內(nèi)容包含：1.遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。2.別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。3.勸父母不能酒后駕車。 (你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。)參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 ze

44、bra-crossing 斑馬線注：第一段已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it improves our life. But unluckily, it also brings many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents. For example, last month four students played on the way to school and they were hit by a c

45、ar. They were sent to the hospital at once. Luckily, they were not hurt badly. Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on the sidewalk. When we cross zebra crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Dont play football on the roa

46、d. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through the red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving and so on.In my opinion, whether we drive on the road or walk on the sidewalk. If everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business, we will be safer. 低頭族  

47、;隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用，身邊的“低頭族phubbers”隨處可見。請根據(jù)圖中提示，結(jié)合表格所給的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇100詞左右的文章。 要求：1. 短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 題目與開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：1. 影響have effects on        2.面對面交流 face-to-face conversations  3.正確使用make good use ofRefuse to Be Ph

48、ubbersWith the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be(1) seen here and there.Some family members( 2)play with their smart phones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It (3)has effects on the relationship between them. Some people l

49、ook at their smart-phones (4)while walking even riding or driving. It may (5)increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.( 6)Some children play with smart-phones before sleeping at night. Its (7)bad for their health and study.In fact, face-to-face conversations (8)are much more convenient and b

50、etter than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones (9)are helpful and necessary tools for modern life. (10)But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.霧霾 去年冬天，我國北京，天津等地多次出現(xiàn)霧霾天氣，極大地影響了人們的健康與生活。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Bill來信詢問你家鄉(xiāng)天津的霧霾情況。請按下面要求寫一封電子郵件：1.感謝他得關(guān)心; 2.介紹情況:(1)去年以來以發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣(2)人們已認(rèn)識到霧霾天氣的危害，正采取各種舉措減少其發(fā)生3.你認(rèn)為我們中學(xué)生為減少霧霾應(yīng)該怎么做？ 要求80-100詞提示詞語：occur(發(fā)生), ride a bike, wear mask(戴口罩), enviro