高中英語寫作ppt課件

1、英語書面表達英語書面表達English Composition Writing In summary, it is wiser . 正確使用有關連接詞 時間先后：時間先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,since then, after a while 轉折關系：轉折關系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless因果關系：因果關系：because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that讓步關系：讓

2、步關系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that遞進關系：遞進關系：whats more, in addition, furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand, 條件關系：條件關系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表表 列列 舉：舉：for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows表表 總總 結

3、：結： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated豐富的句式：豐富的句式：(常用到的句型結構）常用到的句型結構） 利用不同的句型來表達同一個意思，利用不同的句型來表達同一個意思， 能增加文章的文采。能增加文章的文采。 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 感嘆句感嘆句強調句強調句e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you

4、 can come if possible. e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a han

5、dbag in her hand.倒裝句倒裝句省略句省略句with短語短語 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.定語從句定語從句e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help a

6、t present.各種名詞性從句各種名詞性從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.各種狀語從句各種狀語從句1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）2. Though Im weak, Ill

7、 make the effort. (使用倒裝句)3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯Weak as I am, Ill make th

8、e effort. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont be

9、lieve what he says. （no matter what狀語從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.9He had no sooner

10、come back from than he was sent abroad. (使使用倒裝句用倒裝句)10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of

11、him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Summary:ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切題切題)? LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words? Are

12、 there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高級詞匯）（高級詞匯）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?Lets improve it:Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Somestudents liv

13、e a very expensive life _. _, they hope to look smart and special. _, they want to win others admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . _, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life . _ , it is advisable for us to donate some p

14、ocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening! the reasons why they do so are as follows B. firstly C. last but not least D. whats more E. as far

15、as I am concerned F. SecondlyABCDEF蘇州市蘇州市2009屆高三教學調研測試屆高三教學調研測試 最近，國家教育部要求中小學生參加冬季長跑活最近，國家教育部要求中小學生參加冬季長跑活動：建議小學生每天跑動：建議小學生每天跑1000米，初中生米，初中生1500米，米，高中生高中生2000米。對此，有些人表示支持，有些人米。對此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反對。請你根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇以表示反對。請你根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”為題的短文，談談你的看法。

16、為題的短文，談談你的看法。 支持方的理由 反對方的理由 你的看法及理由 1可以促進對體育的重視；2可以增強學生的體魄；3更有利于提高學習效率。 1學生以學習為主，考試成績決定個人前途；2過高的要求學生難以達到；3長跑可能引起感冒或傷害。(考生自行發(fā)揮23點) 留意：留意：1詞數(shù)詞數(shù)150左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2對所給要點，逐一陳述，設當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。對所給要點，逐一陳述，設當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。第一段：第一段：1.Some people agree to NO. One, because they usually think

17、 that .In the meantime , . In addition.2. Some people think that A is right because .3. Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.4. Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .第二段：第二段：1. On the other hand, some people hold that B is

18、right. They think .2.But many more people dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary, some people hold that .4.Some people think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also. 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列舉等方式在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列舉等方式展開段落。展開段落。第三段：提出自己的見解并且加以論證第三

19、段：提出自己的見解并且加以論證1.In my opinion B is better than A. There is no doubt that .2.I support A. The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally.4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything has both its posit

20、ive and negative sides. We should keep an open mind. 5.People will continue to argue over the questions, I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on. 6.Of these two ways of .I prefer.First of all,. Second,.Should we give more attention to students health o

21、r grades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always off

22、er various views. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades. However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects. Meanwhile, many cant meet the high requiremen