2014高考英語 書面表達 2013暑假練習題（3）

1、2014高考英語書面表達：2013暑假練習題（3）及答案解析第二節(jié)：書面表達(滿分30分)請根據(jù)下圖寫一篇100-120個詞的短文。你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點：1. 簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容；2. 說明圖畫含義；3. 談?wù)勀愕目捶?。注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。 As is shown in the picture above, 參考答案及評分標準第三部分：寫作第二節(jié)：書面表達 As is shown in the picture, a boy is shouting at his dad, who looks upset, not knowing what to do with his son.

2、It seems that they dont get along well with each other. Nowadays, many families with teenagers face such a problem, which is extremely bad for the growth of a child and the harmony of a family. For example, quarrels can often be seen when parents attempt to prevent their child doing what is not suit

3、able in their opinion, such as playing computer games, because the kid is unwilling to do it as told. What has caused the frequent conflicts between them? There can be many reasons, of which, I think a lack of understanding and communication is the most important one. It is inevitable that disagreem

4、ent between parents and kids will appear. However, if we learn to communicate with each other peacefully and equally, a harmonious relationship can be easily born.書面表達評分原則： 1上文僅為參考范文，學生可用不同的語言表達形式來表述要點。內(nèi)容必須包括三個部分：描述，寓意和觀點。2本題總分為30分，按以下5個檔次給分。評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。第一檔：(16

5、分)只能寫出一兩個要點；語言錯誤很多，只有個別句子正確；第二檔：(712分)能寫出部分要點；語言錯誤多，影響意思表達；第三檔：(1318分)能寫明基本要點；語言雖有較多錯誤，但能基本達意；第四檔：(1924分)能寫明全部或絕大部分要點；語言有少量錯誤；行文不夠連貫，表達基本清楚；第五檔：(2530分)能寫明全部要點：語言基本無誤；行文連貫，表達清楚。 3詞數(shù)少于80的，從總分中減去2分。 4評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：時態(tài)、人稱、內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。 5拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫

6、及詞匯用法均可接受。6如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。*結(jié)束第二節(jié)書面表達你的室友李華和高朋上周一晚上發(fā)生小摩擦。原因是李華打開手電筒看書學習，高朋認為這影響他休息，兩人發(fā)生爭執(zhí)。你幫助他們化解了矛盾。請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇120個詞左右的短文。包括下列要點：1. 敘述矛盾發(fā)生時的情景2. 你對這件事的看法注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)） 參考詞匯：摩擦 friction 手電筒flashlightLihua and Gaopeng are my roommates._參考答案及評分標準書面表達參考范文(滿分30分) Last Monday Lihua stayed up

7、reading after 10oclock in our dormitory. After a whole day of study , feeling very exhausted, Gaopeng went to bed immediately the dormitory light was turn off.However, he couldnt fall asleep with the torchlight. At first he tried to keep calm, but after a while he began to lose his temper, complaini

8、ng about Lihuas selfishness. Neither of would give in and friction continued. While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their fault and made up finally. After all, we share the same dormitory and every one is part of the family. W

9、henever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. When we think more for others, we can create a harmonious environment.*結(jié)束第二節(jié) 書面表達(滿分30分) （改編自浙江省金華十校2012屆高三上學期期末考試）請根據(jù)右邊的圖片，寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1描述漫畫內(nèi)容； 2說出其中的寓意；3發(fā)表你的觀點。注意：1可適當增添內(nèi)容，使文章層次分明，行文連貫。2字數(shù)120左右。3開頭語已為你寫好（不計入

10、總字數(shù)） High expectations harm a childAs is shown in the picture above，_第二節(jié)：書面表達（滿分30分）High expectations harm a childAs is shown in the picture above，the parents hold a bar over their heads excitedly, urging their child to jump it over while the child stares at the bar blankly. Perhaps, parents do this

11、 with good intentions, but the results are quite different.Such is the case with us in our daily life. Parents today are setting too high expectations for their children. Surely high expectations serve as a necessary drive for children to improve, but sometimes going fast is as bad as falling short.

12、 When the goals are far beyond their reach, childrens interest and self-confidence may suffer seriously, which can do great harm to character-building. So its time for the parents to adjust their standards and tell their children how proud they are of him for whatever he has achieved. 書面表達評分原則： 1上文僅為參考范文，學生可用不同的語言表達形式來表述要點。內(nèi)容必須包括三個部分：描述，寓意和觀點。2本題總分為30分，按以下5個檔次給分。評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。第一檔：(16分)只能寫出一兩個要點；語言錯誤很多，只有個別句子正確；第二檔：(712分)能寫出部分要點；語言錯誤多，影響意思表達；第三檔：(1318分)能寫明基本要點；語言雖有較多錯誤，但能基本達意；第四檔：(1924分)能寫明全部或絕大部分要點；語言有少量錯誤；行文不夠連貫，表達基本清楚