Module 6 外研版英語(yǔ)九（上）模塊主題寫作詳解與訓(xùn)練

1、外研版英語(yǔ)九（上）Module 6模塊主題寫作詳解與訓(xùn)練模塊主題寫作整體感知 話題分析本模塊以“Problems”為話題，講述了青少年在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中遇到的一些問題，并提出了解決問題的方法。通過(guò)本模塊的學(xué)習(xí)，要求學(xué)生能正視問題，并樂于幫助他人排憂解難，學(xué)生應(yīng)該樹立正確的人生觀和價(jià)值觀，并能學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用if條件句，同時(shí)熟練運(yùn)用提建議的句型來(lái)描寫某種假設(shè)情況。該話題是常考點(diǎn)，在考查角度上，多以某個(gè)問題或煩惱為切入點(diǎn)，讓學(xué)生提出合理建議。 常用表達(dá)1. I would like to suggest that. 我想建議2. If I were you, I would. 如果我是你，我會(huì)3. It see

2、ms to me that you could. 我認(rèn)為你可以4. I think it would be better if you. 我想如果你可能會(huì)更好。5. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望這些建議對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)有用/有幫助。實(shí)例分析 典型例題假如你是劉斌, 昨天你在放學(xué)回家的路上看到一只受傷的小鳥, 于是你把它帶回家養(yǎng)傷, 可是卻遭到媽媽的反對(duì), 因?yàn)樗龘?dān)心養(yǎng)鳥會(huì)影響你的學(xué)習(xí)。你很苦惱, 想從知心姐姐Angel那里得到幫助。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封70個(gè)詞左右的信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 思路

3、點(diǎn)撥1. 體裁：應(yīng)用文；2. 人稱：第一人稱；3. 時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。寫作模板描述問題Yesterday I saw a little bird on my way home.心理活動(dòng)I worried about the bird. I feel very sad and helpless now.征求建議What should I do? 連句成篇Dear Sister Angel, Yesterday I saw a little bird on my way home. The bird was hurt. I worried about the bird. It was so p

4、oor that I decided to take it home to look after it. When I got home and told my mother all about it, my mother said I couldnt leave it home. She said the bird would make noise and be bad for my study. I feel very sad and helpless now. I dont want the bird to die and I dont want to make my mother un

5、happy. What should I do? I look forward to your reply. Yours,Liu Bin范文欣賞（一）張燕是九年級(jí)學(xué)生。她父親在一家公司工作，家里幾乎天天來(lái)客人。他們?cè)诳蛷d高聲談笑，有時(shí)還一起打牌，弄出許多噪音。這種吵鬧的環(huán)境使張燕無(wú)法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。她不知道如何解決這個(gè)問題。請(qǐng)你幫她給青少年輔導(dǎo)員王老師寫一封信，談?wù)勊臒啦⒄?qǐng)王老師提出寶貴意見。Dear Mr Wang,My name is Zhan Yan. Im a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.My

6、father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home.They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I cant focus on my study. I dont know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some sugge

7、stions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.Best wishes！Yours sincerely,Zhang Yan（二）初中學(xué)生蘇梅遇到了難題：好朋友Peter總想抄他的作業(yè)。蘇梅想制止他，但又怕Peter會(huì)不理解自己。假如你是蘇梅，請(qǐng)給Peter寫封70詞左右的信，說(shuō)明你對(duì)抄作業(yè)的態(tài)度，并告訴她，你和他永遠(yuǎn)是好朋友。Dear Peter, I know that you didnt have enough time to finish your homework yesterday. So you wanted to copy my

8、 homework this morning. Im sorry I cant give my homework to you. Because I think copying others homework is a bad habit. If you copy others homework, youll never know how to solve problems and may become lazy. I think it would be better if you do your homework by yourself. Its good for your study an

9、d finally youll get good grades in the tests. I hope youll do well in your test.yours,Su Mei（三）下面是某報(bào)刊登的一封讀者來(lái)信，請(qǐng)你以編者Serina 的身份給這位同學(xué)回信，并針對(duì)她的問題給出合理的建議。80詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Serina,Lisa and I are in the same class and she sits next to me. She is an excellent student and I can learn a lot from her

10、. However, she talks so much that sometimes I cant pay attention to my studies. I want to change seats with another girl, but Im afraid it will hurt Lisas feelings. What should I do?Yours, WinnieDear Winnie,Im sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies.

11、However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you. Whats more, she can help you with your studies. In my opinion, you should get to know her better. Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem. Im sure she will understand

12、 you.I hope you like my suggestion.Yours,Serina（四）假設(shè)你是某文雜志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen，請(qǐng)閱讀下面的這封求助信，并根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。要求：1. 70詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實(shí)信息。Dear Helen,Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his ca

13、mera without telling him. Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didnt work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I havent told him till now. when I face to my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?Yours,DavidDear

14、 David,First, I think youd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, hell be angry with you. But at least youll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldnt use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you cant afford it. If you o

15、ffer to do some jobs around the house, hell realize that youre truly sorry. Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Yours,Helen自我展示假如你是心理醫(yī)生Dr. Clark，你收到學(xué)生Lucy的來(lái)信。她在信中說(shuō)，自己很喜歡看電視，但是父母擔(dān)心影響她的學(xué)習(xí)，不讓她看，她有時(shí)和父母爭(zhēng)吵，很煩惱，卻不知道怎么辦。請(qǐng)你給Lucy回封信，給出解決辦法。80詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實(shí)信息。提示詞：argue with sb. 和某人爭(zhēng)吵Dear Lucy, Yours, Dr. Clark外研版英語(yǔ)九（上）Module 6模塊主題寫作自我展示答案Yours, Dr. ClarkDear Lucy,Thanks for telling me about your problems. First, stop arguing with your parents. Arguing with them cant solve any problems and makes you angry. Remember: your parents love you deeply. Second, you shoul