中考英語作文指導(dǎo)課

1、How can we write a good composition(作文作文)?中考寫作指導(dǎo)課中考寫作指導(dǎo)課 Dear Mr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing. And then its sodifficult for us

2、 to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent Whats more, there are so many ne

3、w words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do.meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let aloneSometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone( (更不更不用說用說) )answer the questions about them. But the most answer the que

4、stions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Pleasegive us some useful

5、 advice. Thank you very much. Write to give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. me soon. Lets go for it! Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文）（正文）健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)

6、查，右圖是他們此次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告調(diào)查報(bào)告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。進(jìn)行假日休閑。審審(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 如何度假如何度假 調(diào)查報(bào)告調(diào)查報(bào)告 倡議假日休閑倡議假日休閑stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。簡單的句子列出文章的要

7、點(diǎn)。 A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列(list) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch T

8、V or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加加(add) 加首尾加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔、漂亮。 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. Accordin

9、g to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連(connect)方法一方法一: :善用善用高級詞匯高級詞匯Which is better? 他們很早就到了。他們很早就

10、到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could. 我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法二方法二: :活用多種句型活用多種句型方法三方法三: :妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1.表示并列或遞進(jìn)表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示選擇表示選擇: or, ei

11、theror3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示條件表示條件: if , unless6.表示對比表示對比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解釋表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other wo

12、rds,to tell the truth8.表示順序表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào)表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結(jié)論表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short _ I am tired, I keep on

13、working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt last How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey a

14、nd here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連(connect)美美(beautify) We inte

15、rviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or paren

16、ts also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美(beautify) According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing

17、the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify) And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（諺語）（諺語）/saying集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)集中注意

18、力于學(xué)習(xí)We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加諺語加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾?？捎糜陂_頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加入英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法加入英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfec

19、t.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加諺語加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾?？捎糜陂_頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失敗是成功之母。失敗是成功之母。6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjo

20、y some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn. 方法四方法四: :妙用諺語和例子妙用諺語和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and sa

21、ve the earth. For example, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子加例子加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.Let

22、s Do it now ! / Dont do it again!As students, we should start from ourselves. Dont wait. Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today!How amazing! I cant wait!Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!It will be great fun! First，some of us arent interested in Englis

23、h. We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. we are always afraid to join the group discussio

24、n. Whats more Whats more, there are so many new words we , there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. what to do. SometimesSometimes we cant understand the we cant understand the main idea,main idea, let alon

25、elet alone( (更不用說更不用說) )answer the questionsanswer the questions about them. about them. ButBut the most difficult thing is to the most difficult thing is to write. write. We often use wrong words and sentences. We often use wrong words and sentences. Lets go for it!1 12 23 34 46 65 5 Dear Mary, I h

26、eard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to li

27、sten to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（試填一填）（試填一填） Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading

28、 English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English

29、is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenThenYour turn to go for it!（check）1 12 23 3 During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my friends and me shopping

30、in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she cuondt found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I di

31、d in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.Check and correct this article.a lot of things happened.helpingIwere shoppingcryinghappened tocouldntfindhelp herfind.Theycould also, so滿分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：滿分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：（第一檔：（1720分）分） 完全完全符合符合題

32、目題目要求要求，觀點(diǎn)正確觀點(diǎn)正確, 要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)齊全，齊全，立意立意高高。 句式句式多樣多樣，詞匯，詞匯豐富豐富。語言。語言準(zhǔn)確準(zhǔn)確，語意，語意連貫連貫，表達(dá)表達(dá)清楚清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有合理，具有邏輯性邏輯性。 卷面書寫干凈，卷面書寫干凈， 整潔，無涂抹，字跡大小整潔，無涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標(biāo)適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標(biāo) 點(diǎn)，大小點(diǎn)，大小寫正確。寫正確。 最好能有一兩個(gè)最好能有一兩個(gè)亮點(diǎn)句亮點(diǎn)句。（主從，定從，表從，諺語）（主從，定從，表從，諺語） 規(guī)范規(guī)范三寫三寫：大大 小小 寫寫, ,拼拼 寫寫, ,書書 寫 隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來越多的地方隨著人口的增多，人

33、類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住，而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變居住，而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動(dòng)物的棲息地；成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動(dòng)物的棲息地；許多動(dòng)物遭到獵殺許多動(dòng)物遭到獵殺所有這些都導(dǎo)致所有這些都導(dǎo)致了越來越多的動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。然而動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)肆嗽絹碓蕉嗟膭?dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。然而動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)祟惖呐笥?，我們有?zé)任去保護(hù)他們，而不是傷害類的朋友，我們有責(zé)任去保護(hù)他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們?；颢C殺它們。 請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于8080詞的英語短文。詞的英語短文。 要求：要求： 1.1.語言規(guī)范、意思連貫、表達(dá)完整；語言規(guī)范

34、、意思連貫、表達(dá)完整； 2.2.提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。Its your turn! (練練筆練練筆) Lets Help Our Friends （ 滿分作文賞析滿分作文賞析） With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a result, we change the forests into farmland. I feel pity for the animals. More and more new cities and roa

35、ds are built on animals habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want

36、to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Dont you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them. Dont put it off！Lets try our best to help ou

37、r friends today!Thank you! Goodbye! A good passage= HOMEWORK:書面表達(dá)（共書面表達(dá)（共20分）分） 根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。符合邏輯的英文文段。注意：注意：1字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)60一一80。 2所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮） 3發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。（請不要發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。（請不要抄寫在答

38、題卡上）抄寫在答題卡上） 假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大的赴加拿大“綠色之旅綠色之旅”夏令營活動(dòng)。請你準(zhǔn)夏令營活動(dòng)。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。 name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology InterestFree Time ActivitiesFuture JobHopedrawingg o c a m p i n g , d r a w pictures of plants,

39、enjoy the singing of brids in nature.biologist, grow upgood friends,do ones best, make the earthDear friends,Im very glad to introduce myself to you. Thats all. Thank you for listening. Dear friends , Im very glad to introduce（介紹）（介紹） myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin . Im fifteen years old . I li

40、ve in Beijing . One of my favorite subjects is biology . Im interested in drawing . In my free time , I often go camping（野營）（野營） , draw some pictures of plants , and enjoy the singing of birds in nature . I want to be a biologist（生物學(xué)家）（生物學(xué)家） when I grow up . I feel lucky to join you . I hope we can

41、be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener . Thats all . Thank you for listening . I like many sports, such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is my favorite sport.I like basketball best because it can help me keep health. I play basketb

42、all with my classmates at school twice a week. I make a lot of good friends when I play basketball. And it bring me a lot of happy. Whats more ,it can make me to grow not only taller but also strong.I love play basketball. I hope be a basketball player in the future. My favorite sportswimming,fishin

43、ghealthybringsstrongerto be/ I will behappinessplayinggrow The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade

44、 Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Il

45、l spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it! Its your turn! （ 滿分作文賞析滿分作文賞析）Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.1. I climed slowly and was very tried.2. I think it is an un

46、forgetable thing because I helped sb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.Spelling（拼寫）（拼寫）（others)Friday4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together. I cant forget that day because5. What a crazy day it was, I wi