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1、高考閱卷體會(huì)高考閱卷體會(huì)閱卷那些事閱卷那些事整理課件閱卷流程閱卷流程 6 6月月1313日下午閱卷點(diǎn)負(fù)責(zé)人就嚴(yán)格閱卷程序和評(píng)卷日下午閱卷點(diǎn)負(fù)責(zé)人就嚴(yán)格閱卷程序和評(píng)卷守則對(duì)全體閱卷老師進(jìn)行了守則對(duì)全體閱卷老師進(jìn)行了集中培訓(xùn)和動(dòng)員集中培訓(xùn)和動(dòng)員； 6 6月月1414日上午下發(fā)日上午下發(fā)20122012年高考評(píng)卷評(píng)分細(xì)則，仔細(xì)年高考評(píng)卷評(píng)分細(xì)則，仔細(xì)研讀和學(xué)習(xí)后，進(jìn)入了研讀和學(xué)習(xí)后，進(jìn)入了試評(píng)階段試評(píng)階段，專家選取了，專家選取了1212篇比篇比較典型的高考作文讓我們?cè)嚺?。試評(píng)之后，進(jìn)入了較典型的高考作文讓我們?cè)嚺?。試評(píng)之后，進(jìn)入了正正評(píng)階段評(píng)階段； 6 6月月2121日上午閱卷工作結(jié)束。日上午閱卷工

2、作結(jié)束。整理課件 閱卷過程的管理十分嚴(yán)格，真正做到了閱卷過程的管理十分嚴(yán)格，真正做到了層層監(jiān)督層層監(jiān)督，2020位閱卷老師為一組，由小組長(zhǎng)統(tǒng)一監(jiān)管，從省考試位閱卷老師為一組，由小組長(zhǎng)統(tǒng)一監(jiān)管，從省考試院到閱卷點(diǎn)負(fù)責(zé)人直至質(zhì)檢組則隨時(shí)抽查，每一位閱院到閱卷點(diǎn)負(fù)責(zé)人直至質(zhì)檢組則隨時(shí)抽查，每一位閱卷老師閱卷的卷老師閱卷的平均速度、有效度、吻合度、評(píng)分區(qū)間平均速度、有效度、吻合度、評(píng)分區(qū)間等各項(xiàng)精確指標(biāo)在監(jiān)督人員那里隨時(shí)都有反映，本著等各項(xiàng)精確指標(biāo)在監(jiān)督人員那里隨時(shí)都有反映，本著對(duì)考生負(fù)責(zé)的態(tài)度，力求做到對(duì)考生負(fù)責(zé)的態(tài)度，力求做到扣分有理，得分有據(jù)扣分有理，得分有據(jù)。 質(zhì)檢小組成員和組長(zhǎng)對(duì)閱卷老師的閱

3、卷質(zhì)量和速度質(zhì)檢小組成員和組長(zhǎng)對(duì)閱卷老師的閱卷質(zhì)量和速度都提出了較高要求，和往年一樣，今年依然采用都提出了較高要求，和往年一樣，今年依然采用“雙雙評(píng)評(píng)”的模式，的模式，雙評(píng)差額線為雙評(píng)差額線為6 6分分，閱卷過程中每天完成，閱卷過程中每天完成量平均為量平均為600600左右，大約每半分鐘閱一篇作文。平均分左右，大約每半分鐘閱一篇作文。平均分為為2121分左右。分左右。整理課件20122012年普通高考評(píng)卷英語作文評(píng)分細(xì)則年普通高考評(píng)卷英語作文評(píng)分細(xì)則極優(yōu)檔極優(yōu)檔 (30(30分分) )：書寫規(guī)范；覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；：書寫規(guī)范；覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；詞匯豐富，行文流暢，有修辭意識(shí)。詞匯豐

4、富，行文流暢，有修辭意識(shí)。優(yōu)秀檔優(yōu)秀檔 (26-29) (26-29) ：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，行文較為流暢行文較為流暢，顯示出，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，語言小錯(cuò)不超過語言小錯(cuò)不超過6 6個(gè)個(gè)。 良好檔良好檔 (22-25)(22-25)：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，實(shí)，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)。 一般檔一般檔 (18-21)(18-21)：緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，能夠：緊扣主題，基本

5、覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，能夠表達(dá)基本內(nèi)容，語言錯(cuò)誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但表達(dá)基本內(nèi)容，語言錯(cuò)誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確。多數(shù)句子基本正確。 整理課件20122012年普通高考評(píng)卷英語作文評(píng)分細(xì)則年普通高考評(píng)卷英語作文評(píng)分細(xì)則較差（較差（13171317） ：內(nèi)容不完整，要點(diǎn)不全，行文不：內(nèi)容不完整，要點(diǎn)不全，行文不連貫，語言錯(cuò)誤（尤其是大錯(cuò)）較多，多數(shù)句子基連貫，語言錯(cuò)誤（尤其是大錯(cuò)）較多，多數(shù)句子基本正確。本正確。 差（差（712712） ：內(nèi)容混亂，或主要內(nèi)容偏離主題，：內(nèi)容混亂，或主要內(nèi)容偏離主題，能夠?qū)懗錾贁?shù)與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的可讀句。能夠?qū)懗錾贁?shù)與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的可讀句。 極差（極差（

6、0606） ：只能寫出與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞語，沒有：只能寫出與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞語，沒有有效信息，抄寫其他文章，或只寫出與作文無關(guān)的有效信息，抄寫其他文章，或只寫出與作文無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。內(nèi)容。 整理課件注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)： 1. 1. 無題目，寫成書信格式均不扣分。作文引言中無題目，寫成書信格式均不扣分。作文引言中沒有明確提到背景（沒有明確提到背景（“在學(xué)校舉辦的英語競(jìng)賽中獲在學(xué)校舉辦的英語競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)得一等獎(jiǎng)”等等）的也不宜做扣分處理。等等）的也不宜做扣分處理。 2. 2. 評(píng)分時(shí)，評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)的涵蓋度及語言表達(dá)先根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)的涵蓋度及語言表達(dá)來初步確定是否達(dá)到及格線來初步確定是否達(dá)到及格線。

7、3. 3. 詞數(shù)若少于詞數(shù)若少于120120字，從應(yīng)得分中扣字，從應(yīng)得分中扣2 2分。分。關(guān)于大錯(cuò)、小錯(cuò)問題的說明關(guān)于大錯(cuò)、小錯(cuò)問題的說明：小錯(cuò)：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、冠詞、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤。小錯(cuò)：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、冠詞、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤。大錯(cuò)：搭配錯(cuò)誤、用詞錯(cuò)誤（介詞、名詞、動(dòng)詞、大錯(cuò)：搭配錯(cuò)誤、用詞錯(cuò)誤（介詞、名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞）；時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、非謂語形容詞、副詞）；時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、非謂語動(dòng)詞、句式等錯(cuò)誤。動(dòng)詞、句式等錯(cuò)誤。整理課件 假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。不久前在學(xué)校的假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。不久前在學(xué)校的英語競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫一篇稿件刊登在英語競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)

8、。校報(bào)請(qǐng)你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上。介紹你在課外學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)英文版面上。介紹你在課外學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇短文。以下提示用英語寫一篇短文。 1.1.參加英語角的益處；參加英語角的益處； 2. 2.堅(jiān)持寫英語日記的作用；堅(jiān)持寫英語日記的作用； 3.3.英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（英文閱讀網(wǎng)站（EnjoyReadingEnjoyReading）對(duì)你的幫助）對(duì)你的幫助注意：注意： 1. 1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)120-150120-150 2. 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫高考題目重現(xiàn)高考題目重現(xiàn) 整理課件Dear students, I am luckily

9、to be the first one in the English game. Our English teachers hope we can share the experience of learning English with each others. Now, I want to tell you mine. At first, I can take part in the English anction every time, taking part in the English is a very useful way to learn English, it can inc

10、rease our spoken-English. Then you should write date book everyday. if you can do it, I believe you will learn English more and more easily. If you want to find a English Website to study, I have a good one, it is EnjoyReading. There are many good books for you to read. I hope it can help you. Thats

11、 all my experience. I hope to know your study ways. I believe it will better than mine.1818分分 樣卷樣卷1整理課件 As is known to all, English is an important subject. Its necessary for us to learn it well. Therefore, I want to share my own experience with my classmates. As for me, I have been studying at the

12、corner of English since I was 10 years old. I think its very useful. It can help us to improve our level of English speaking. Furthermore, Im used to writing English diary. Its good for our handwriting and expression. And in my opinion, surfing the English website is also helpful. EnjoyReading is ve

13、ry good. It helps me a lot. Anyway, as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in a day. We should be persistent. Come on!2222分分 樣卷樣卷2整理課件 Im glad to win the first prize in English Competition. I think it is related to my studying habit. So there is some experience I want to share with you. In the fi

14、rst place, I keep taking part in the English Corner 3 times a week. I think it provides us with an opportunity to communicate with others, which is good for our spoken English. In the 2nd place, I keep writing English diary where I try to use some good sentences. Gradually, I made a great progress i

15、n writing. Finally, I often suffer the Internet. EnjoyReading is a good website which has an effect on my reading. Just keep going until you succeed.2525分分 樣卷樣卷3整理課件 Im LiHua, studied in XinHua Middle school. Im the student who won the first at the recent English competition held by our school. Beca

16、use of the invitation of the school newspaper, Ill introduce some experience of my English study after class. To begin with, Im studying at an English Corner, where I can improve my spoken English by communicating with others. Moreover, its a good way for us to keep on writing English diaries, which

17、 can train your writing skills and the ability of English spelling. Whats more, the website called EnjoyReading can also do us a favor on learning English well. It can make our vocabulary large. We can get more important information of learning English through it as well. As far as Im concerned, if

18、you take these suggestions, youll make a large progress at English.2727分分 樣卷樣卷4整理課件My Experience of Learning English Hello, every classmate, Im Li Hua, who got the 1st prize in the schools English contest recently. Today Im honored to have a chance to deliver my experience to you. As we all know, or

19、al English is very important. As for me, I usually go to English corner to practice my spoken English with foreign teachers. Additionally, improving my grammar and structures of sentences, writing English diary also benefits me a lot. Furthermore, it is the website called EnjoyReading that promotes

20、my reading skills and vocabulary. Indeed, what really counts is that I can stick to these good habits, or nothing miraculous like my success would have happened. So believe yourself and do what I do, you can succeed as well.2828分分 樣卷樣卷5整理課件 Hello everyday. My name is Li Hua. Last weekend, I got No.1

21、 in English text. I have a lot of experience in English. As far as Im concerned, take part in English Activity can improve you speak skills. you can make lots of friends and study plenty of experience. Then, take English daydate everyday. It is befits to yours write skills. you can write something i

22、nteresting and happily story in you daydate. Fininally, read English EnjoyReading can help you realise a lot of voluable. It is good to you reading skills. you can read English story. If you have some problems in English, you can tell me. I think if you make hard, you can success in English. 1616分分

23、樣卷樣卷6整理課件不及格的作文中普遍存在以下問題：不及格的作文中普遍存在以下問題：1. 1. 內(nèi)容太少，要點(diǎn)和次要點(diǎn)遺漏，詞數(shù)不內(nèi)容太少，要點(diǎn)和次要點(diǎn)遺漏，詞數(shù)不達(dá)標(biāo)。達(dá)標(biāo)。2. 2. 病句太多，語法錯(cuò)誤層出不窮，語言運(yùn)病句太多，語法錯(cuò)誤層出不窮，語言運(yùn)用不當(dāng)。用不當(dāng)。3. 3. 表達(dá)單一，遣詞造句單調(diào)，形式不豐富，表達(dá)單一，遣詞造句單調(diào)，形式不豐富，連貫性差，結(jié)構(gòu)散亂，缺乏恰當(dāng)?shù)倪壿嫵薪印＿B貫性差，結(jié)構(gòu)散亂，缺乏恰當(dāng)?shù)倪壿嫵薪印?. 4. 文不對(duì)題，生搬硬套，文體錯(cuò)亂或不得文不對(duì)題，生搬硬套，文體錯(cuò)亂或不得要領(lǐng)，不知所云。要領(lǐng)，不知所云。整理課件1一嘆：卷面不整，字跡潦草一嘆：卷面不整，字跡

24、潦草2二嘆：機(jī)械翻譯，內(nèi)容貧乏二嘆：機(jī)械翻譯，內(nèi)容貧乏3三嘆：小錯(cuò)不絕，大錯(cuò)不斷三嘆：小錯(cuò)不絕，大錯(cuò)不斷23最具代表性，令人嘆息的三個(gè)問題最具代表性，令人嘆息的三個(gè)問題 整理課件原因主要有兩種：原因主要有兩種： 一是學(xué)生不知道該如何論述觀點(diǎn)。一是學(xué)生不知道該如何論述觀點(diǎn)。 “論點(diǎn)論點(diǎn)”提出之后應(yīng)該有相應(yīng)的提出之后應(yīng)該有相應(yīng)的“論據(jù)論據(jù)”作支撐。作支撐。 二是學(xué)生有二是學(xué)生有“論據(jù)論據(jù)”的意識(shí)，卻因找不到合的意識(shí)，卻因找不到合適的詞語來表達(dá)自己的思想，不得不放棄很多有適的詞語來表達(dá)自己的思想，不得不放棄很多有一定內(nèi)容和深度的想法。一定內(nèi)容和深度的想法。 整理課件基本詞匯也能難倒一片學(xué)生基本詞匯也

25、能難倒一片學(xué)生English Cornerdiary journalspoken /oral Englishwritten EnglishImprove常見的冠詞錯(cuò)誤常見的冠詞錯(cuò)誤 a English competition held by our school, a important thing make a progress, an advice, an experience English center, English angle, English Foot, English Jiao, English Juedaily, dictionaryjournalist, journeys

26、peaking English speak Englishwriting English writting Englishprove, impress整理課件大錯(cuò)大錯(cuò)1. speak with English (in)2. I think join/ take an active part in the English corner is important.( joining/ taking)3. You an speak English correct. (correctly) Im pleasure to have a chance to share my experience. (pl

27、eased)4. Insisting on keeping diaries play an important part in studying English. (plays).5. I very like English. Good good study, day day up.6. EnjoyReading is a website which is useful. I am to English what fish is to water.介詞使用錯(cuò)誤介詞使用錯(cuò)誤非謂語使用錯(cuò)誤非謂語使用錯(cuò)誤詞性混淆詞性混淆主謂一致主謂一致句型使用不恰當(dāng)句型使用不恰當(dāng)漢語化表述漢語化表述整理課件一奇：經(jīng)

28、典句式和句型的靈活運(yùn)用一奇：經(jīng)典句式和句型的靈活運(yùn)用二奇：連接詞語和成分的恰當(dāng)使用二奇：連接詞語和成分的恰當(dāng)使用三奇：語法和語言結(jié)構(gòu)的合理應(yīng)用三奇：語法和語言結(jié)構(gòu)的合理應(yīng)用231令人驚奇的亮點(diǎn)令人驚奇的亮點(diǎn) 整理課件經(jīng)典句式和句型的靈活運(yùn)用經(jīng)典句式和句型的靈活運(yùn)用1. Its my great honor/ Im honored to / Im more than delighted to share my experience of learning English.2. Nothing is more important than to join English Corner.3. The

29、re is no denying / There is no doubt that vocabulary is of great significance in English study.4. There is no one but longs to learn English well.5. It is conceivable/ universally acknowledged that English is drawing more and more attention.6. It is high time that we spent/ should spend more time in

30、 studying English.整理課件經(jīng)典句式和句型的靈活運(yùn)用經(jīng)典句式和句型的靈活運(yùn)用7. By looking through the website, such as EnjoyReading, we can broaden our horizon.8. The harder you work, the more progress you make.9. The reason why we should keep writing diary is that it can improve our English level.10. We cant emphasize the impor

31、tance of English Corner too much.11. As far as Im concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view, if you take these suggestions, youll make great progress.12. When it comes to English corner, no one can deny its important position.整理課件連接詞語和成分的恰當(dāng)使用連接詞語和成分的恰當(dāng)使用遞進(jìn)：遞進(jìn)：then, besides, furthermore, moreov

32、er, in addition轉(zhuǎn)折：轉(zhuǎn)折：however, but, on the contrary總結(jié)：總結(jié)：finally, at last, in brief, in conclusion強(qiáng)調(diào)：強(qiáng)調(diào)：indeed, certainly, surely, above all對(duì)比：對(duì)比：while, in the same way, just as, on the one handon the other hand整理課件語法和語言結(jié)構(gòu)的合理應(yīng)用語法和語言結(jié)構(gòu)的合理應(yīng)用1.1.用詞準(zhǔn)確用詞準(zhǔn)確count /benefit/ beneficialsignificance/ significan

33、t/ essentialmarvelous/ miraculous2.2.短語搭配短語搭配be based on .due to/ owing tocontribute todraw the conclusionbroaden ones horizonspare no effort to do/ insist onbe beneficial to / be of benefit to/ be of great importance (significance) 整理課件3.3.強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句 It is a website called EnjoyReading that plays a sig

34、nificant part in learning English.4.4.it做形式主語或形式賓語做形式主語或形式賓語 It is my privilege to have a chance to share my experience here. I hope you can make it possible to form the habit of writing diary.5.5.倒裝句倒裝句 Only in this way, can we go further on the way of English study. On no account/ By no means can

35、we ignore the value of knowledge. Not only can I speak English correctly, but also I speak it fluently.整理課件6.6.非謂語的使用非謂語的使用 Whats more, the website called EnjoyReading can also do us a favor on learning English well. Taking part in the English corner is a very useful way to learn English. I usually

36、go to English corner to practice my spoken English with foreign teachers.7.7.虛擬語氣虛擬語氣 I couldnt have made such amazing progress without it. If it were not for / But for the habit, I wouldnt lay so solid foundation. What really counts is that I can stick to these good habits, or nothing miraculous li

37、ke my success would have happened.整理課件8.8.從句的使用從句的使用 What really counts is that I can stick to these good habits. Im studying at an English Corner, where I can improve my spoken English by communicating with others.9.9.諺語的使用諺語的使用 No pains, no gains. Rome was not built in a day. Practice makes perfec

38、t. Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it. Where there is a will, there is a way. Well begun is half done. Constant dropping wears the stone. There is no royal road to learning.整理課件一悟：嚴(yán)抓基礎(chǔ)，過好詞匯關(guān)一悟：嚴(yán)抓基礎(chǔ)，過好詞匯關(guān) 在平時(shí)的教學(xué)中要嚴(yán)抓基礎(chǔ)：針對(duì)重要詞匯，學(xué)生應(yīng)會(huì)讀、在平時(shí)的教學(xué)中要嚴(yán)抓基礎(chǔ)：針對(duì)重要詞匯，學(xué)生應(yīng)會(huì)讀、會(huì)拼、會(huì)用，把詞性和意義理解到位；在固定搭配方面

39、，要讓會(huì)拼、會(huì)用，把詞性和意義理解到位；在固定搭配方面，要讓學(xué)生掌握準(zhǔn)確，不可似是而非，模棱兩可。此外，有學(xué)生對(duì)短學(xué)生掌握準(zhǔn)確，不可似是而非，模棱兩可。此外，有學(xué)生對(duì)短語的使用缺乏重視，不妨提倡學(xué)生使用語的使用缺乏重視，不妨提倡學(xué)生使用“短語優(yōu)先短語優(yōu)先”原則，引原則，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生不斷積累短語。導(dǎo)學(xué)生不斷積累短語。 如果學(xué)生總是使用簡(jiǎn)單詞匯和表達(dá)，不妨介紹一些更為高如果學(xué)生總是使用簡(jiǎn)單詞匯和表達(dá)，不妨介紹一些更為高級(jí)的詞匯和短語讓他們進(jìn)行替換。級(jí)的詞匯和短語讓他們進(jìn)行替換。整理課件good excellent/ amazing / wonderful/ terrific/ outstanding

40、/ fantastic / marvelous important vital/ of great importance/ significant/ of great significance/ essential/ nothing is more important than to do very quite/ fairly/ pretty/ considerably/ extraordinarily/ extremely/ remarkably/ amazingly/ strikingly / impressively I think in my opinion/ in my point

41、of view/ as far as I am concerned / from my perspective 作文中的高級(jí)詞匯和句式就是我們?nèi)粘＝虒W(xué)的重點(diǎn)作文中的高級(jí)詞匯和句式就是我們?nèi)粘＝虒W(xué)的重點(diǎn)知識(shí)的再現(xiàn)。在教學(xué)中，要引導(dǎo)學(xué)生養(yǎng)成在具體語境中知識(shí)的再現(xiàn)。在教學(xué)中，要引導(dǎo)學(xué)生養(yǎng)成在具體語境中學(xué)習(xí)詞匯與短語的好習(xí)慣，從而學(xué)習(xí)詞匯與短語的好習(xí)慣，從而培養(yǎng)英語思維培養(yǎng)英語思維，避免對(duì)，避免對(duì)詞義進(jìn)行漢語化理解或者為了用高級(jí)詞匯而用高級(jí)詞匯，詞義進(jìn)行漢語化理解或者為了用高級(jí)詞匯而用高級(jí)詞匯，結(jié)果使用不當(dāng)?shù)默F(xiàn)象。結(jié)果使用不當(dāng)?shù)默F(xiàn)象。整理課件二悟：句式多變，語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣二悟：句式多變，語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣 一

42、篇好的文章，應(yīng)該是一篇好的文章，應(yīng)該是長(zhǎng)短相間，簡(jiǎn)繁交替長(zhǎng)短相間，簡(jiǎn)繁交替，句式多，句式多樣的。樣的?！皟?yōu)秀檔優(yōu)秀檔”中很重要的一點(diǎn)要求是中很重要的一點(diǎn)要求是“語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富詞匯豐富”。但在平時(shí)的教學(xué)中，如果不給學(xué)生充分的素。但在平時(shí)的教學(xué)中，如果不給學(xué)生充分的素材，學(xué)生很難去自覺探索和嘗試較為高級(jí)和復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)材，學(xué)生很難去自覺探索和嘗試較為高級(jí)和復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。因此，在平時(shí)寫作訓(xùn)練中，可以有針對(duì)性地提供學(xué)生構(gòu)。因此，在平時(shí)寫作訓(xùn)練中，可以有針對(duì)性地提供學(xué)生一些句型和語法結(jié)構(gòu)，并且就其使用的范圍和數(shù)量提出相一些句型和語法結(jié)構(gòu)，并且就其使用的范圍和數(shù)量提出相關(guān)的要求，這樣

43、學(xué)生才能漸漸培養(yǎng)出關(guān)的要求，這樣學(xué)生才能漸漸培養(yǎng)出語言運(yùn)用的意識(shí)和能語言運(yùn)用的意識(shí)和能力力，逐步提高寫作水平。，逐步提高寫作水平。 需要指出的是，不少學(xué)生背誦了一些句型，在寫作過需要指出的是，不少學(xué)生背誦了一些句型，在寫作過程中生搬硬套，寫出了與文章內(nèi)容關(guān)聯(lián)不大的信息和生澀程中生搬硬套，寫出了與文章內(nèi)容關(guān)聯(lián)不大的信息和生澀的表達(dá)，這些基本可以算作無效信息和內(nèi)容，閱卷老師可的表達(dá)，這些基本可以算作無效信息和內(nèi)容，閱卷老師可以跳過或忽略。因此，完全的以跳過或忽略。因此，完全的“拿來主義拿來主義”不提倡。提倡不提倡。提倡將知識(shí)內(nèi)化吸收，表達(dá)自然，言之有物，多實(shí)少虛，避免將知識(shí)內(nèi)化吸收，表達(dá)自然，言之

44、有物，多實(shí)少虛，避免套話、空話，從而提供有效信息。套話、空話，從而提供有效信息。整理課件三悟：層次清晰，合理謀篇布局三悟：層次清晰，合理謀篇布局 寫作訓(xùn)練中應(yīng)指導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫作訓(xùn)練中應(yīng)指導(dǎo)學(xué)生認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題，確保，確保要點(diǎn)齊全要點(diǎn)齊全，科學(xué)合理地科學(xué)合理地布局文章層次布局文章層次，哪些先寫，哪些后寫，哪，哪些先寫，哪些后寫，哪些簡(jiǎn)寫，哪些詳寫，哪些內(nèi)容放在一起寫，提前做好些簡(jiǎn)寫，哪些詳寫，哪些內(nèi)容放在一起寫，提前做好安排。如：按時(shí)間、空間、邏輯順序安排要點(diǎn)。注意安排。如：按時(shí)間、空間、邏輯順序安排要點(diǎn)。注意指導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫好段落的指導(dǎo)學(xué)生寫好段落的主題句和支撐句主題句和支撐句，緊扣中心，在，緊扣中心，在

45、恰當(dāng)?shù)奈恢迷O(shè)計(jì)有亮點(diǎn)的句式是很有必要的。不失時(shí)恰當(dāng)?shù)奈恢迷O(shè)計(jì)有亮點(diǎn)的句式是很有必要的。不失時(shí)機(jī)的點(diǎn)睛之筆不僅是恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用語言的表現(xiàn)，也可以提機(jī)的點(diǎn)睛之筆不僅是恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用語言的表現(xiàn)，也可以提高寫作品位，在遣詞造句上提高表達(dá)的檔次。高寫作品位，在遣詞造句上提高表達(dá)的檔次。 此外，英語寫作不是單純的句子堆積，用好各種此外，英語寫作不是單純的句子堆積，用好各種連接詞，連接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊，從而使文章，從而使文章內(nèi)容更明確，更清晰，更有條理性。巧用連詞，連句內(nèi)容更明確，更清晰，更有條理性。巧用連詞，連句成文，即要點(diǎn)間的有效銜接和過渡會(huì)給閱卷老師留下成文，即要點(diǎn)間的有效銜接和過渡會(huì)給閱卷老師留下思路清晰的印象和感覺。思路清晰的印象和感覺。整理課件四悟：循序漸進(jìn)，練習(xí)應(yīng)多樣化四悟：循序漸進(jìn)，練習(xí)應(yīng)多樣化 寫出完整而正確的句子是寫作的基礎(chǔ)和保障。做寫出完整而正確的句子是寫作的基礎(chǔ)和保障。做到要點(diǎn)全，行文流暢，句子無錯(cuò)誤的文章一般在平均分到要點(diǎn)全