2014屆高三8月摸底考讀寫任務(wù)講評

1、2014屆高三8月摸底考讀寫任務(wù)講評審中文以“人生需要幫助”為話題搜要點(diǎn)概括(概括短文的主要內(nèi)容)一個(gè)小男孩在從沙箱里搬走一塊大石頭時(shí)遇到困難。雖然努力嘗試，仍然搬不動。最后在父親的幫助下成功了。 抓首句正文第一段(讀完文章的感受)讀完這篇文章后，我十分贊同父親的話。他幫助兒子認(rèn)識到幫助的重要性。正是因?yàn)樗膸椭?，他兒子最終才成功了。 正文第二段（以自己的親身經(jīng)歷談?wù)剮椭闹匾裕┪乙苍蓄愃频慕?jīng)歷。（我也曾經(jīng)是從別人的幫助中獲益的一員。）我還記得去年夏天的時(shí)候，我正獨(dú)自一人去北京旅游。不幸地我丟失了行李。更糟糕的是，我身無分文，回不了家。正是在當(dāng)?shù)鼐斓膸椭挛也拍馨踩鼗貋?。我的?jīng)歷教會了

2、許多幫助對于我們猶如陽光對生物。 正文第三段（你是否會幫助別人，為什么？）如果看到有人遇到困難我也會毫不猶豫盡量提供幫助。正如我們所知，幫助別人是一種美德，它會使問題容易解決，使人們感受到別人的溫暖，使我們的生活越來越美好。 IV 寫作 第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)參考范文：In the passage, the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work, such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality/necessity for the organi

3、zation of the society, and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly. There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is much harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand, they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are sill in the sweet

4、sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street whether it shines strongly or snows, winds heavily. Nobody could imagine what a bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we go, there is rubbish

5、. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this! From the above, I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most seeming