語(yǔ)法填空短文改錯(cuò)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練Ⅳ(各4篇附詳解答案)

1、語(yǔ)法填空+短文改錯(cuò)41、 Everyoneneedsfriends.Friendsarepeoplewitwecansharesecrets.Andwecanalsoturntothemforhelpwhenintrouble.Friendsbringushappinessandhopeinourlives.Buttheabilitytomakefriends(change)frompersontoperson.Tosomepeople,makingfriendsiseasy,andtoothersitsverydifficult.(make)friends,youmustfirstofall

2、befriendlyandkind.Smileatothersandyouaresuretogetasmilereturn.Andyoushouldthinkmoreofothersthanof(you).Notwopeopleare(exact)thesame.Ifyoudontagreewithotherpeople,youshouldstillbefriendly.Donotargue,discuss.Youwillalwayslosefriendsifyouarguetoomuch.Dontcomplain.Nooneiswillingtohearyourendless(complai

3、n)allthetime.Therefore,youshouldlearntoacceptwhatyoucantchange.Hereismoregoodnewsforpeoplewhohavefriends.Theylivelongerthanpeoplewhodonthave.Why?Itcouldbethattheyare(happy).Beinghappyhelpsyoustaywellandcouldbegoodjustknowingthatsomeonecaresaboutyou.2、 LastMonday,myfatherwouldbeona(busy)tripforfiveda

4、ys.Havinggottenmypromiseofbeinggreatathomeandtakingcareofmymother,herestassuredandputhisluggageintothetrunkofhiscar.(see)myfathersdrivingaway,mymotherandIwavedourhandsandsaidgoodbyetohim.Foramoment,Ibegantomissmyfather(wish)thathewouldbesafeandwellthenextdaysIthoughteverythingwouldgowell,asthiswasno

5、tthefirsttimethatmyfather(be)awayforseveraldays.Yet,(fortunate),mymothercaughtacoldthenextmorning.Lookingatherpaleface,I(experience)highlevelsofanxiety.However,ItoldmyselfthatIhadtocalmdownandlookaftermymumIpromisedtomydad.ThemomentIgotmymumtosleep,Iputcoldtowelonherforehead,found1pillsinthemedicine

6、box,andmadesomenoodlesforher.Luckily,shewokeupandfelt(good),aftertakingthepillsandthenoodlesherfeverwasgonerelievedandsatisfiedmealot.Inthenextfourdays,Iwastakingherbodytemperaturetwiceaday,ensuringthatshewascompletelywell.Toourdelight,mydadwentbackhomesafelyandhealthilyonSaturday.OnhearingIhaddonet

7、omymum,he,aswellasmymum,beamedatmeandgavemeabigthumb.Hearingtheirpraisesandseeingbrightsmilesontheirfaces,Ireallyfeltoverjoyedandthrilled.Conceivably,takingcareofmyparentswas,indeedanddefinitely,mymissionandobligation.3、 Nomatterwhereyouare,humansareconstantlymeasuringandcheckingtime.Someofusaregood

8、ataplanninganddoingthingsaheadoftime,othersarealwaystryingtobeattheclockanddothingsattheeleventhhour.Tardiness(拉)canbeserious.Ifyou(be)oneminutelateforwork,wouldyouresign?Itmaysoundextreme,butthatisexactlyoccurredintheUKupperchamberofparliament,theHouseofLords,inJanuary2018.Internationaldevelopmentm

9、inisterLordBatesarrivedoneminutelate,and,asaresult,wasunabletoansweraD(schedule)question.Insteadoftrying(make)upforlosttime,asmanymightdo,heresignedonspot.Heapologizedforhisdiscourtesy禮)andstatedthathewasashamed.Hisresignation,though(reject)bytheUKprimeminister.So,howlateistoolate?Manyculturestakepu

10、nctualityveryseriously.Incontrast,othersseemtoviewtardiness!)justthenormalwayofthings.Whatisconsideredacceptableisbasedonculture.Thatis,ifyoudonaiting,itmightmindbebesttoattendyoui(appoint)ingoodtime.Andiftheworstcomestotheworst,remembertheoldEnglishproverb,(well)latethannever.4、 TwonewsatellitesofB

11、eiDonNavigation(導(dǎo)航)SatelliteSystem(BDS)(send)intospaceonaLongMarch-3DcarrierrocketfromtheXichangSatelliteLaunchCenterinSichuanProvince,Chinaat2:07a.m.onNovember19,2018.ThesatellitesenteredaMediumEarthorbi(safe)morethanthreehourslaterandwillworkwith17otherBDS-3satellitesalreadyinspace.Theyarealsothe4

12、2ndand43rdD(member)oftheBDSsatellitefamily.ChinalaunchedthesesatelliteswithaimofprovidingnavigationservicesforcountriesandregionswhichparticipateintheBeltandRoadProposalbytheendof2018.“ThisisakeystepforBDSdevelopingaChineseexperimentalsystemtoaregionalandthen(globe)navigationsystem,saidYangChangfeng

13、,chiefdesigneihofBeiDousystem.Thepositioning(accurate)oftheBDS-3systemhasbeenimprovedto2.5metersto5meters,saidYang.(name)aftertheChinesetermforthePlough,theBeiDousystemhasbeenservingChinafor18yearanothersixBDS-3satelliteswillbeputintotheMediumEarthorbitfrom2019to2020.Thesystemisexpected(provide)firs

14、t-classservicesaroundtheglobebytheendof2020.答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：whom;changes;Tomake;in;yourself;exactly;but;complaints;happier;it解析：【文幸大意】這篇文章主要介紹了朋友對(duì)個(gè)人的影響及如何交友。1. whom考查定語(yǔ)從句owithwhomwecansharesecrets是介詞+關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞people2. changes#查時(shí)態(tài)。交友能力因人而異”講的是一般性情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；主語(yǔ)是abiHty,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。3. Tomake考查非

15、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。Tomakefriends是不定式短語(yǔ)作目的狀語(yǔ)。4. in考查固定搭配。inreturn的意思是得到回報(bào)”。5. yourself考查代詞。這里的意思是要多想著別人，少考慮自己，故用you的反身代詞。6. exactly考查詞性轉(zhuǎn)換。由于修飾的是形容詞，故用exact的副詞形式。7. but考查連詞。not.but.是習(xí)慣搭配，意思是不是而是8. complaints考查詞形變化?？崭裰兴顔卧~在句中作hear的賓語(yǔ)，故用complain的名詞形式；這里用其復(fù)數(shù)形式表示沒(méi)完沒(méi)了的抱怨9. happier考查比較級(jí)。這里說(shuō)的是宥朋友的人比那些沒(méi)有朋友的人更幸?！惫视胔appy的比較級(jí)

16、happier。10.it考查代詞。it在句中作形式主語(yǔ)，真正主語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)knowingthatsomeonecaresaboutyou2答案及解析：答案：business;Seeing;wishing;hadbeen;Unfortunately;experienced;as;better;That；what解析：1、一次商業(yè)旅行,busy是形容詞，這里應(yīng)是名詞修飾名詞，busy的名詞是business故填business2、句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是waved所以see是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；句子的主語(yǔ)mymotherandI和see是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分tW故時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，故填seeing3、bega

17、n是句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，所以wish是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；句子的主語(yǔ)I和wish之問(wèn)是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀態(tài)，故填wishing。4、此處是一個(gè)固定搭配It/This/Thatis+thefirst(second泗me+現(xiàn)that完成時(shí)態(tài)+，如果主句用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，則從句用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)，故此空填hadbeen5、fortunate幸運(yùn)的，是形容詞；此處表示遺憾的是，修飾整個(gè)句子，用副詞，故填Unfortunatelyo6、此處描述的是上星期一的事，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，所以填experienced7、此處表示正如我給我父親許諾的”故填as。8、前面提到讓她吃了藥，吃了面條”很幸運(yùn)地，她醒來(lái)后應(yīng)該是比以

18、前更好了，故填比較級(jí)better。9、此處是一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句，她的發(fā)燒退去這件事，使我非常滿意”故用That引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句,That只起引導(dǎo)作用。10、hearing后面是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從何，賓語(yǔ)從何缺少引導(dǎo)詞，同時(shí)從何的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞haddone缺賓語(yǔ)，故填what?？键c(diǎn)：考查語(yǔ)法填空。3答案及解析：答案：while;were;what;scheduled;tomake;the;wasrejected;as;appointment（s）;Better解析：1 .考查連詞。該空的前一句說(shuō)我們中的一些人擅長(zhǎng)提前計(jì)劃和做事情”后一句說(shuō)其他的人總是試圖在最后一刻趕時(shí)間做事情”的句話之間是對(duì)比關(guān)系，所以這里應(yīng)該填連詞

19、whileo2 .考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣。本句是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，即非真實(shí)條件句。表示的是假設(shè)或?qū)嶋H可能性不大的甚至完全不可能發(fā)生的情況，故采用虛擬語(yǔ)氣。句意：如果你上班遲到一分鐘，你會(huì)辭職嗎？表示與將來(lái)事實(shí)相反，所以采用“if柱語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞一般過(guò)去式”的結(jié)構(gòu)，所以這里be動(dòng)詞改為were。3 .考查連接代詞。本句是表語(yǔ)從句，從句中缺少的成分是主語(yǔ)，這里的主語(yǔ)指代的是事情，所以用what。4 .考查形容詞。在冠詞a和名詞question之間應(yīng)該用形容詞，所以把schedule變成形容詞形式scheduled傾定的）。5 .考查動(dòng)詞不定式。固定搭配trytodosth（試圖干某事），所以這里填tomak

20、e。6 .考查定冠詞。固定短語(yǔ)onthespot衽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)）。句意:他并沒(méi)有像許多人那樣，試圖彌補(bǔ)失去的時(shí)間，而是當(dāng)場(chǎng)辭職。所以這里應(yīng)該填冠詞the。7 .考查時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)。根據(jù)本段時(shí)態(tài)和句意可知，主語(yǔ)resignation和reject為動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故用過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)形式。句意：盡管他的辭呈被英國(guó)首相拒絕了。故用wasrejected8 .考查介詞。固定搭配viewas把看作。句意:相比之下，其他人似乎認(rèn)為遲到是正常的事情。所以這里填aso9 .考查名詞。形容詞性物主代詞后面應(yīng)該跟名詞。句意：如果你不介意等的話，最好在合適的時(shí)間去參加你的約會(huì)。所以這里填appointment(s)。10 .考查副詞比

21、較級(jí)。英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)“Betterlatethanneve遲做總化不做好)，所以這里應(yīng)該填Better。4答案及解析：答案：weresent;safely;members;the;from;global;accuracy;Named;where;toprovide解析：1. weresent#查時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和主謂一致。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)at2:07a.m.onNovember19,2018可知,本旬要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；send發(fā)送與句子主語(yǔ)TwonewsatellitesoftheBeiDouNavigation(導(dǎo)航)SatelliteSystem(BDS)被動(dòng)關(guān)系，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；且主語(yǔ)中心詞是復(fù)

22、數(shù)名詞satellites.故謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)間用復(fù)數(shù)形式。2. safely考查副詞。本空修飾句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞entered故要用副詞safely安全地”。注意:safe變副詞時(shí)直接加-ly即可，切不可去掉詞尾的e。3. members考查名詞的數(shù)。根據(jù)前面的the42ndand43rd可知,此處為復(fù)數(shù)概念,member成員”是可數(shù)名詞，故要用member的復(fù)數(shù)形式。4. the考查冠詞。withtheaimof目的是為固定搭配，故填定冠詞the。5. from考查介詞。根據(jù)空后的“aChieseexperimentalsystemtoaregional.navigationsystem可知，此處表示從

23、一個(gè)中國(guó)的試驗(yàn)件系統(tǒng)到地區(qū)性導(dǎo)航系統(tǒng)再到全球?qū)Ш较到y(tǒng)，故用from與to構(gòu)成from.to.從到搭配。6. global考查形容詞?？仗幮揎椕~navigationsystem根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，應(yīng)用形容詞global全球的。7. accuracy考查名詞。本!據(jù)空前的Thepositioning和空后的of可知,本空應(yīng)填名詞作主語(yǔ),accuracy精確性，準(zhǔn)確性。8. Named考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，本空應(yīng)填非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，name在此是動(dòng)詞，意為給命名匕句子主語(yǔ)是邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，故填過(guò)去分詞Namedoname.after.,以給命名。注意:本空位于句首，所填詞的首字母要大寫。9. w

24、here考查定語(yǔ)從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，空處引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從何修飾先行間China,因從何不缺主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)，且先行詞表示地點(diǎn)意義，關(guān)系詞在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，故應(yīng)用關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句。注意：該定語(yǔ)從何與先行詞被時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)for18years隔開(kāi)了，導(dǎo)致部分考生誤填when。10. toprovide考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)sb./sth.beexpectedtodosth.某人/某物被期望做某事搭配可知，本空填不定式。5、假定英語(yǔ)課課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏

25、字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Mymumisavolunteerinahospital.ShebroughtdinnereverySundaytothepeopleattendingtheirrelativeswhoareinhospital.OneSunday,Mumaskedmetohelphewithdinner.Atthefirst,Ididntwantto,sointheendshepersuaded

26、metogo.Halfanhourlate,wearrived.Wequicklysetupatableandstartedgivingpeoplefood.Thepeopleservingthereweredeeplymovedandshowedourgratefulness.Itwasamazetablookatpeoplesface,especiallythoseofchildren.Itmademefeelgladlyforbeingthere.ThatdayIrealizedthatthevalueoflifeisnotonlyaboutreceiving,butgivingaswe

27、ll.6、假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Ilikeeatingfruitandvegetableswhatareofgreatbenefittoourhealthy.Notonlydotheypreventusfromfallingintoi

28、ll,buttheyhelpusloseweight.Iusedtohatevegetables,butfollowthedoctorsadvice,Igraduallykickedthebadhabit.Justasanoldsayinggoing,“Anappleadaykeepstoheway”.However,therearestillmanychildrendislikefruitandvegetables.Oncontrary,influencedbythisorthatkindofadvertisement,manywerecrazyaboutjunkfood.Consequen

29、tly,theybecomeweakerandweakerinsteadofgettingstrong.Inmyopinion,wemusttakeactiontochangethem.7、假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及二個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。Goodeveni

30、ng,ladiesandgentlemen.Ifeelgreathonoredtospeakonbehalfofallthecampmembers.Firstofall,Idliketoexpressmysincerethanktoalltheteachersandhostfamilieswhichhavegivenusalotofhelpinlifeandinstudy.Duringpastfewweekswehavehadawonderfultimeandachievealot.Thehostparentstookcareofus,whichmadeusfeelingathome.Butw

31、iththehelpoftheteacherswehavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.Meanwhile,wehavegottoknowmoreaboutwesternhistoryandculturebeforeseeingsomanyplacesofinterests.Whatsmore,thevisittsuchfamousuniversitiesasHarvardUniversityandStanfordUniversitythathasbroadenedourhorizons.Whattheyhavegainedfromthiscampisnotonlykn

32、owledge,butalsofriendship.Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastforever.Thankyou!8、假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及二個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增力口：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。DearGeorge,Imsogladtodiscussyouh

33、owwestudentsspendtheweekend.Inafact,differentstudentshavedifferentwaysforkillingthetime.Forexample,someofmyclassmatedosportsandsomelistentomusictorelax.Asforme,myweekendtimeisalwaysinterested.SometimesIspendmyweekendshelpmyparentsdohousework.SometimesIgoinforsociallypracticewithmyclassmates.Lastweek

34、endtheywenttotherailwaystationtodovolunteerwork.Ididsomecleaningtohelpprotecttheenvironment.Ifeltsuchexperiencesaremeaningful,thatcanhelpuslearntoworkforthegoodofsociety.Howdoyouspendyourweekends?Yours,LiHua5答案及解析:答案：Mymumisavolunteerinahospital.ShebroughtdinnereverySundaytobringsthepeopleattendingt

35、heirrelativeswhoareinhospital.twantOneSunday,Mumaskedmetohelpherwithdinner.AHMirst,Ididnto,-so-intheendshepersuadedmetogo.HalfanhouTae-,wearrived.Webutlaterquicklysetupatableandstartedgivingpeoplefood.Thepeople5ervingtherewereserveddeeplymovedandshowed-ougratefulness.Itwasamazedtolookatpeoplestheira

36、mazingfacefaces,especiallythoseofchildren.Itmademefee卜gladlygladforbeingthere.ThatdayIrealizedthatthevalueoflifeisnotonlyaboutreceiving,butgivingaswell.解析：1 .句意:她每周日都給照顧生病住院的親人送飯。根據(jù)上下文含義及句中的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)everySunday可以確定此處用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。故把brought改為brings。2 .句意:她每周日都給照IB生病住院的親人送飯。固定搭配：attendto照顧。故在attending后力口to。3 .句意

37、:起初，我不想去。固定搭配:atfirst起初。故把the去掉。4 .句意:但最終她勸服我去。根據(jù)句意，前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用but。故把so改為but。5 .句意:一個(gè)小時(shí)后我們到了。固定搭配:一段時(shí)間+later,表示一段時(shí)間以后。故把late改為later。6 .句意:在那里服侍的人深受感動(dòng)。serve和被修飾詞thepeople之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)。故把serving改為served。7 .句意:并表示他們的感謝。根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該用their指代前面的thepeople故把our改為their。8 .句意:看著人們的臉，尤其是看著孩子們的驗(yàn)，這讓人很驚訝。It作形式主語(yǔ)，真正

38、的主語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞不定式。amazing令人驚訝的。9 .人們的臉”應(yīng)該用thepeoplesface耕巴face改為faces10 .feel為系動(dòng)詞,后面用形容詞作表語(yǔ)。句意：我很高興能在那里。故把gladly改為glad。6答案及解析:答案:Ilikeeatingfruitandvegetableswhatwhich/thatareofgreatbenefittoourhealthyhealthNotonlydotheypreventusfromfallingin4oill,buttheyhelpusloseweight.Iusedtohatevegetables,butfollowfollo

39、wingthedoctorsadvice,Igraduallykickedthebadhabit.Justasanoldsaying竺幽,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.goesHowever,therearestillmanychildrendislikefruitandvegetables.Ondislikingthecontrary,influencedbythisorthatkindofadvertisement,manywerecrazyaboutjunkfood.Consequently,theybecomeweakerandweakerinstead

40、ofgettingstrongstrongerInmyopinion,wemusttakeactiontochangethemit解析：1 .第一句:what-which/tha跨查定語(yǔ)從句，此處從句缺少主語(yǔ)，修飾前面的先行詞fruitandvegetables2 .第一句:healthy-health查名詞。根據(jù)前面的形容詞性物主代詞可知后面應(yīng)使用名詞。3 .第二句:去掉into考查介詞。fall川是一個(gè)固定詞組，意為生病”不需要使用介詞into。4 .第三句:follow-followin翳查現(xiàn)在分詞。此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。I與follow構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系。5 .第四句:going-g

41、oeS查時(shí)態(tài)。此處作謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。這是一個(gè)諺語(yǔ)，使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。6 .第五句:dislike-disliking查現(xiàn)在分詞。此處是現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語(yǔ)，修飾前面的children。7 .第六句：在on和contrary之間加the考查冠詞。此處是一個(gè)固定詞組onthecontrary,意為相反地”。8 .第六句:were一ar翳查時(shí)態(tài)。本文以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，敘述現(xiàn)在的事實(shí)，故應(yīng)用are。9 .第七句:strong-strong考查形容詞。與前面的weaker對(duì)比，此處指變得更加強(qiáng)壯10 .第八句:them-it考查代詞。此處指代壞習(xí)慣，因此使用it。7答案及解析:答案：Goodevening,ladie

42、sandgentlemen.Ifeelgreathonoredtospeakongreatlybehalfofallthecampmembers.Fistofall,Ithankdliketoexpressmysinceretothanksalltheteachersandhostfamilieswh1chhavegivenusalotofhelpinlifeandinwho/thatstudy.Duringthepastfewweekswehavehadawonderfultimeandachievealot.Thehostparentstookcareofus,whichmadeuee11

43、ngathome.-But-withthefeelAndhelpoftheteacherswehavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.Meanwhile,wehavegottoknowmoreaboutwesternhistoryandculturebeforeafterseeingsomanyplacesofinterests.Whatsmore,thevisittosuchfamousuniversitiesasHarvardUniversityandStanfordUniversity廿athasbroadenedourhorizons.Whattheyhavega

44、inedfromthiscampisnotonlyknowledge,butalsofriendship.weIhopeourfriendshipwilllastforever.Thankyou!解析：1 .副詞greatly（極大地）修飾形容詞honored徐幸的），故把great改為greatly。2 .thank是可數(shù)名詞，這里很明顯要用復(fù)數(shù)。3 .此處為定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞alltheteachersandhostfamilie總指人，弓I導(dǎo)詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)要用關(guān)系代詞who或that,故把which改為who/that。4 .詞組Duringthepastfewweeks在此處特指在過(guò)去

45、的幾周時(shí)間里”故在during后面加the。5 .兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞并列，共用一個(gè)have故把a(bǔ)chieve改為achieved6 .makesb.dosthU:某人做某事，后接不帶to的不定式作賓補(bǔ)，不能接doing作賓補(bǔ),故把feeling改為feel。7 .上文說(shuō)的是寄宿家庭的父母給了我們很好的照顧，下文說(shuō)并且在老師的幫助下我們的英語(yǔ)有所提高，前后是承接關(guān)系，故把But改為And。8 .句意:在我們看了如此多的名勝古跡之后，我們對(duì)西方的歷史和文化知道得更多了。故把before改為after。9 .此句中hasbroadene配謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，主語(yǔ)是thevisit,沒(méi)有從句，故刪除that。10 .上文說(shuō)的都是we我們”此處也應(yīng)該是we,人稱前后要一致，故把they改為we。8答案及解析:答案：DearGeorge,Imsogladtodiscussw