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1、PERSONAL STATEMENTBy Liu Kaixi如果你高考因成績不理想沒有被大學(xué)錄取，你現(xiàn)在要讀博士學(xué)位，該怎么寫自述？當(dāng)然，不能說謊！這篇文章的作者高考時(shí)沒有被本科學(xué)校錄取，只上了大專，在原稿中，作者擔(dān)心讓人知道這一點(diǎn)，實(shí)際上經(jīng)過處理后，這一經(jīng)歷并沒成為劣勢。那些在以往考試中成績不盡如人意的申請者可以參考本文的寫法。經(jīng)過挫折并不是壞事，關(guān)鍵是如何看待，能夠從逆境中取得成績更加難能可貴，更能獲得錄取官員的好感。A Chinese graduate student of composite materials, I would like to pursue Ph.D. studies

2、 in a program in which I can do advanced inter-disciplinary research that is built upon my expertise in both chemical engineering and composite materials. I find that your program is one of the few where such research is possible.I am due to complete my Master's studies next year at the Beijing

3、Institute of Light Industry, a well-respected higher-learning institution that has served as a major cradle of engineering talents for light industries in this country. Majoring in structural mechanics of composites, I have focused my studies on honeycomb sandwich and its applications for civilian p

4、urposes. Although I did not take many of the traditional undergraduate courses in this field, my graduate studies have proceeded well. Building on my extensive working experience with all kinds of materials, I have completed a host of projects, as listed in the Appendix, that are not only technologi

5、cally advanced but also commercially profitable. My research has been highly commended by the school.To accomplish what I have accomplished, I have had to be more intelligent and overcome more difficulties than most of my classmates, for I did not get to receive a regular undergraduate education. Al

6、though I performed strongly in the 1988 National University Entrance Examinations and met the requirements for university acceptance, I did not craft a good enough strategy in applying to the universities. As a result, my application fell through cracks, leaving me only the opportunity to study in a

7、 two-year college program. Not to be discouraged by this mishap, I studied with diligence and creativity, and succeeded in firmly grounding myself in the studies of material propensities and structures. When I completed that program, I was as capable as most graduates from the honors program in hand

8、ling practical material problems from the angle of chemistry. （這一段就是具體的處理，通過講述自己沒能讀本科的原因，以及后來的結(jié)果，前后對比，給人留下了深刻的印象。）Upon graduation in 1990, I first took up the job of an assistant engineer in a biochemistry pharmaceutical manufacturer, where I was in charge of the development and analysis of several

9、lines of products. I was given the responsibility for VD Calcium Tablet in the first two weeks, as I demonstrated that I was able to do independent research, particularly in terms of quantitative analysis and microbiology inspection, from five raw materials to semi-made and finished products. As my

10、talents showed up, I took charge of the production and inspection of more and more products. Towards the end of 1991, I was awarded the honor of Excellent Employee in the factory of almost two thousand people in recognition of my contribution to its business.Armed with the ability to quickly grasp t

11、he essence of new things, I made even more contribution to my second employer, a Joint-Venture Company of cosmetics. In this company, In the first two months after I was hired, I established, with reference to both the ISO and national standards, the company's standards of packaging materials fo

12、r 35 different products from corrugated box to paper lid , from glass bottle to plastic cover. During the first half year, I turned myself from just a user of cosmetics to quality engineer of cosmetic actively engaged in R.&D. Three new products (Elysee Vitamin E Cream, Elysee Tonique and Elysee

13、 Lipbalm) I helped to develop were recognized as Provincial Scientific Achievements, for which I was conferred three certificates of Honor. I believe that when one embarks on a new career, he should be quick in accepting changes even though he must still stick to his old principles.（最后加上一句總結(jié)，使得前后呼應(yīng)，

14、結(jié)構(gòu)更加緊湊。）In these six years of working experience, I greatly improved myself in terms of technological expertise. I made chemical and microbiological examinations of different drugs skillfully and independently, successfully developed several new types of cosmetics, some of which merited the designat

15、ion of Provincial Scientific Achievements. But more importantly, I learned to ask more sophisticated questions and then answer them. The years of being an engineer has taught me how to be a person. I learned to be both a team leader and a team player.（這句話十分精煉，表明既能統(tǒng)籌領(lǐng)導(dǎo)，又能團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作，可以作為寫作時(shí)的參考。） Working in

16、conjunction with others, I have always held onto the principle of being honest, modest and helpful to others, whether I was just a technician, an engineer or even the assistant to the general manager. I enjoy working with other people. I have been well liked by my colleagues. At the farewell parties

17、 for me, some of my friends were so reluctant to say goodbye to me that they would burst into tears.While working for the Chinese factory, I was once "borrowed" by a college to teach there as an adjunct instructor for half a year. During those months, I often worked late to check students&

18、#39; work and prepare for the next day's classes. I believe that this teaching experience will serve me well should you be able to offer me the position of a teaching assistant.At the graduate school, I have met new challenges the old way. I first acquired a profound understanding of the basic c

19、oncepts and theories of mechanics (theoretical and material ones), and then applied the fundamentals to my major: composites. As you can see from the transcripts of academic record, this approach paid off. My first academic article Honeycomb Sandwich Composite will be published in the second edition

20、 of the Journal of Beijing Institute of Light Industry of 1998. Now I am writing my Master's Degree thesis, in which I shall compare the mechanical properties of corrugated cores and honeycomb cores, analyze the outstanding characters of the latter, establish the standards of civil-use honeycomb

21、 fiberboard, and consider the marketing future of honeycomb fiberboard.I am confident that the combination of my extensive working experience and my solid academic training has adequately prepared me for advanced studies in my chosen field of specialty in your distinguished program. To undertake such studies, I have learned English well, so well that I was appointed first the English secretary to the factory's di