高一英語短文改錯專練一

1、高一英語短文改錯（一）DearElli,Imaseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidntwanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofImfat.Imkindtoher,butwhycansthebefriendofmine?Otherpr

2、oblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepills?Anddoyouknowanyotherway?Pleasegivemesomeadvices.Yours,Mary（二）DearSir,IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.Iquiteinterestmedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkImfitthejob.Asastudent,Ivereadalotandhavemanyknowled

3、geindifferentfield.ImfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,ImeasilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoImsureIcandothejobwellifIwillm lookyinogurforrewpalyr.d togetthechanceworkforawebsite.I（三）Haveyoueverheard

4、fromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthatthework

5、youdoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek.（四）DearTracy，AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesnvtaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyin

6、garoundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays：“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcantbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.（五）EverymorningSt

7、evewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Heg

8、otonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!,heshouted.”（六）Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computersaregett

9、ingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.

10、Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.（七）In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewomanshandbag.Hepulledbot

11、hLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedforthegroundfloor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.（八）OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemor

12、ningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshiveringandIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Im

13、usthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.（九）countryside. Take my auntIvisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthesfamilyforexamsupplep.lyWperecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworking

14、forthemselves.Theirfamilyincomesreachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusetha

15、thehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade.（十）Thankyouforyoure-mail!Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavoritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselde

16、rthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Plea

17、see-mailmesoon!Lisa（十一）HereisaphotowhichIvekeptforman.yLoyeoak,rsthechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely?Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.IaskedmymotherhowoldIwasthem.MothersaidthatIwasthreeyearsoldinthattime.Canyouseethehouseallmakingofwood?Thehous

18、ewhichwasnewthen,butitisveryoldnow.Iwasborninthisoldhouseandlivedhereforeighteenyears.Ilikelivinghere,becausethereweremanyfriendlyneighborswegetalongverygoodwitheachother,butitsagreatpitythatWewillmoveawaysoon.Totellatruth,Ireallycantbeartopartfromthem.（十二）Goodmorning,everyone.YesterdayIreceivedalet

19、terfromaelderlygentleman.Hetoldmetheotherdayhesawthatsomestudentinourschooluniformcrowdedontoabuswithoutwaitingtheirturns.Onthebustheyrefusetooffertheirseatsforoldpeople.Whatwasworse,theyevensaiddirtywordstoeachother.Iamverymuchsorryforthis.Todaysyoutharetomorrowsleo.ldRpesepoepcttheoldandcaringfort

20、heyoungisafinetraditionofourChinese.Everyoneofushavetheresponsibilitytokeepitup.Ihopethatyoucanlearnsomethingthisincidentandyouwillhavegoodmannerswhetheryouareinsideoroutsidetheschool.Thankyou.（十三）HenryRoycedidnotlikehiscar,thatranbadlyandoftenbrokeup.Sohedecidedtomakebettercarhimself,butin1904hepro

21、ducedhisfirstnewmodel.CharlesRolls,acarmaker,wasveryinterestinginRoycescaandsoonRollsandRoycegointobusinesstogether.OneoftheirfirstmodelwastheSilverGhost.In1907,aSilverGhostbroketheworldsrecordbydrive14,371mileswithoutbreakingdownonce.Afterthedrive,itwascostjustover£2toputthecarbackintoperfectc

22、ondition.ThisisnotsurprisingthattheSilverGhostwasregarded“thebesttheworld”.（十四）Howmuchtimesdoyouspendwithyourparents?Whendidyoulasttellthemwhatisonyourmind?Youparentsareyourdearestpeopleintheworldwhenyouareyoung.Andtheyalwayscareofyoudeep.Buteventhoughmanychildrenstilllovetheirmumanddad,familiesmayb

23、ecomemorecloseasyougetolder.Theendoftheyearisatimeforfamiliestogettogether.Haveyoueverthoughtwhatyoucanshowyourparentsthatyoulovethem?Findchanceanddosomethingforthemortohaveasinceretalkwiththem.Ifyoucandothis,yourparentswillbeveryhappy.十五）“Practicemakesperfec”twasanoldsaying.Ittellsusthatitdoesnotan

24、ymatterifweareslowatdoingsomething.Aslongaswekeepontryingandpractice,welldoagoodjobintheend.ThesayingisespecialusefulinEnglishstudy.Sinceastudentispooratspeaking,heshouldgraspeverychancetoopenmouthandspeakEnglish.HisoralEnglishmaybeexcellentonedayduetohishardworks.NotonlyisthesayingusefulinEnglishst

25、udy,itisalsohelpfulinourdaylife.Toanextent,itisnoshortcutindoingeverythingsincekeytosuccessliesin“Practicemakesperfec”t.（十六）AtaFridaynight,apooryoungartiststoodatthegateofthesubwaystationandplayedhisviolinwithlargepieceofpaperonthegroundBeforelong,hewassurroundingwithpeople,whowereallattractedbythew

26、ordonthatpaper.Itsaid,“l(fā)astnight,agentlemanputanimportantthingintomyhatbymistaken.Pleasecometoclaimitsoon.Seeingthis,peoplewonderedwhyitcouldbe.Afterabouthalfanhour,amancameandbroughtbackhislotterywhichwonaprizeof500,000.Latesomeoneaskedtheviolinist:“Whydontyoutakethelotteryticketforyourself?”Hesaid

27、,“WhileIdonthavemuchmoney,Ilivehappily.However,Ilosehonesty,Iwontbehappyforever.”（十七）AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartinacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIhavelearnedtospeakGermangoodinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Atthefirstclass,theteacheraskedusd

28、oapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhy."Ifinditgreatfuns.It'sthefirsttimeI'veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent."heexplainedit.（十八）OnedayIhappentof

29、indachattingroomonmyQQ,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprised.IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulw

30、ordsandexpressions.Withtimewentby,IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely.（十九）WhiletraveledtoParisonabus,Ibecameverysick.Awell-dressingmanonthebushelpedmegreat.Hetookmeoffthebus,foundoutwherethedoctorsoffice.andtookmetotherehimself.Thenextd,ayhecametovisitme.IdidntspeakFrenchwell,so

31、IcanttalkwithhimverymuHowever,evenifwecouldntatlk,butwecouldcommunicate.Icommunicatedmyselfthankstohisgreatkindness,andhecommunicatedhisconcernformyhealthy.ThroughthisexperienceIhavelearnedthatcommunicationcantakeplacewithoutmuchactuallanguageatall.（二十）TheInternetisplayingaimportantpartinourdailylif

32、e.Onthenet,wecanlearnaboutnewsbothhomeandabroadandsomeotherinformationsaswellWecanalsomakephonecalls,sendmessagesbye-m，ailgotonetschools，learnforeignlanguagesbyourselvesBeside，wecanenjoymusic，watchsportsmatche，sandplaythechessorcardsThenetevenhelpusdoshopping，makeachatwithothersandmakefriendswiththe

33、m.Inword，theInternethasmadeourlifemoreeasier（二十一）DuringtheweekendItraveledbyairthefirsttimeinmylife.Igenerallytravelbytrainandbus.Itisbothcheaperandsafe.Butthiswasashortjourney.InthebeginningIdidnotfeelveryhappily,butthisfeelingdidnotlastlonger.Thejourneywasveryexciting.Iwassoonhighupintheskyamongth

34、ecloud.Theviewsofmountains,fieldsandriverswereinterested.Ienjoyedmyshortandcomfortablejourneyverymuch.Thisexperiencehaveshownthattravelinginairisactuallythesafestwayofmakejourneys.（二十二）Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaytothecinema.ImetanEnglishwoman,whomhadlostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmandt

35、ookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplacehereinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmesomethingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,butIstillfeltveryhappy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpracticedmyspeakingEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldnothavebeenableto

36、helphim.（二十三）Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenasthetelephonerings.Iwenttoansweritimmediately.Shewasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalkingonaphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothekitchen.Theroomfullofsmokeandthebeefwasbadlyburnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,openingallthewindows,andthenwentoutofthehouse.Inmysurprise,twofireengineswereoutsidemyhouse.Iamratherworried.Itoldaboutthefirementhatitwasmycarelesscookingwhichcausedtheheavysmoke.（二十四）IreceivedyourletterwasdatedAprill6thedaybeforeyesterday.Allofourfamilygre