寫段落主題句

1、How to write the topic sentence評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及解題要求讀寫任務(wù)寫作（讀寫任務(wù)寫作（25分）分）概括概括（5分）概括全面，表述清晰寫作內(nèi)容（寫作內(nèi)容（20分）分）:主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富2007-2012的廣東高考卷中，都給出三條內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。的廣東高考卷中，都給出三條內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。因讀寫任務(wù)因讀寫任務(wù)“寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容”所列要點(diǎn)的順序已具有所列要點(diǎn)的順序已具有內(nèi)在內(nèi)在的邏輯性的邏輯性，所以考生應(yīng)該按照試題所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)順序，所以考生應(yīng)該按照試題所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)順序?qū)懽?。一般是每個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)安排為寫作。一般是每個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)安排為一個(gè)自然段一個(gè)自然段，且將，且將寫作內(nèi)容的寫作

2、內(nèi)容的每個(gè)要點(diǎn)作為各段的主題句每個(gè)要點(diǎn)作為各段的主題句，將主題句放，將主題句放在各段的開頭在各段的開頭，這樣既可以避免考生在寫作時(shí)，這樣既可以避免考生在寫作時(shí)跑題或跑題或遺漏要點(diǎn)遺漏要點(diǎn)，又方便閱卷老師落實(shí)要點(diǎn)是否齊全，又方便閱卷老師落實(shí)要點(diǎn)是否齊全 。 Definition（定義）（定義） The topic sentence is the theme of a paragraph which is often summarized in one sentence. . 直接回答要點(diǎn)直接回答要點(diǎn) Model: 假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境假如你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境,你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)？你會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)？

3、 （2009廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)2） If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me. 你理想中的大學(xué)生活是什么樣的？你理想中的大學(xué)生活是什么樣的？ 寫作要點(diǎn)是詢問考生寫作要點(diǎn)是詢問考生的的看法、原因看法、原因時(shí)，對(duì)時(shí)，對(duì)提問直接作出回答。提問直接作出回答。In my eyes, my ideal college life is wonderful/relaxing.常用詞組：常用詞組： In my opinion / as for me / as

4、far as I am concerned/from my point of view模式模式1 1回答個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)回答個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) 回答原因回答原因 Model: 使我們生活發(fā)生變化有哪些原因？使我們生活發(fā)生變化有哪些原因？ There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. The reasons for this are obviousThere are several reasons that contribute to for reasons as follows The reason why

5、is thatUseful expressions for reasons: 你支持青少年的秘密應(yīng)該與父母分享的理由是什么？你支持青少年的秘密應(yīng)該與父母分享的理由是什么？ I insist that teenagers secrets should be shared with their parents for reasons as follows. 的原因顯而易見的原因顯而易見的原因有多種的原因有多種的原因如下的原因如下的原因是的原因是 句型提示句型提示 回答感受回答感受 Model: Tom 來信說他現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，請(qǐng)來信說他現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀阕x信后的感受談?wù)勀阕x信后的感受 I f

6、elt terribly sorry for you when I read your letter, in which you expressed the pressure from your study.吳菊萍挽救了一個(gè)從吳菊萍挽救了一個(gè)從10樓掉下來的樓掉下來的2歲女嬰后被歲女嬰后被稱為稱為“最美媽媽最美媽媽”，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀銓?duì)此感受。，請(qǐng)談?wù)勀銓?duì)此感受。After reading the story, I was absolutely touched by Wu Juping who saved the two-year old baby.常用表達(dá)：常用表達(dá)： I appreciate wh

7、at you say and am sorry to have caused you so much worry. Im also touched that After reading the passage, I was deep in thought. After reading this speech, I felt really sorry for the student who.1. Having read the passage，I felt greatly inspired and convinced that 表明立場表明立場 Model: 你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。你

8、認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。 (2009年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)3) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.明確表示對(duì)某觀點(diǎn)支持、明確表示對(duì)某觀點(diǎn)支持、贊同或反對(duì)。贊同或反對(duì)。模式模式2.2. I disagree with the idea that I am opposed to the idea that I disapprove of the idea that In some way, I agree with but What the writer said sounds reasonable, bu

9、tDiscuss the expressions of supporting and objecting I agree with the statement that I am in favor of I appreciate that I approve of the idea that I believe that I agree with what the writer said/says.表示支持或贊同的句型：表示支持或贊同的句型：表示反對(duì)或不贊同的句型：表示反對(duì)或不贊同的句型：你對(duì)用金錢鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法。你對(duì)用金錢鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法。 (2010年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)1) I a

10、m not in favor of encouraging kids with cash just because they have got good marks. 重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn) Model： 在生活中諒解他人有何重要意義在生活中諒解他人有何重要意義.From the story I learn that understanding and forgiving others plays an important role in our life. 不直接回答寫作要不直接回答寫作要點(diǎn)，而是點(diǎn)，而是翻譯翻譯要點(diǎn)作要點(diǎn)作為段落主題句。為段落主題句。be closely related to/b

11、e linked to /be associated (connected/ concerned) with /have something to do withplay an important role/parthave a bad/good influence/effectdo harm to詞組積累詞組積累be different from模式模式3.3.中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別. As we all know, college is widely different from middle school. (2008高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)3)常用句型：常用句型： W

12、e should take some effective measures. We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties. We should solve the problems that we are faced with. It is necessary that proper actions/ steps should be taken to end the phenomenon. It is obvious/clear/apparent/well-known that It goes without sayi

13、ng that It is widely accepted/ universally acknowledged thatModel: 說說人們對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)所采取的措施。說說人們對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)所采取的措施。 Luckily, more and more measures are being taken to protect the environment. 如何才能養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣？如何才能養(yǎng)成好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣？As students，it is of great significance to cultivate good study habits.引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷 簡述你經(jīng)歷過的一次困難或考驗(yàn)。簡述你

14、經(jīng)歷過的一次困難或考驗(yàn)。(2010茂名一模)It reminds me of my own experience when I came across a tough problem.常用句型：常用句型： It reminds me of the time when It reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago. After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend who The story above reminds me of on

15、e of my experiences There was a time when I 用來引出記敘文的具體用來引出記敘文的具體事例。事例。模式模式4.4.好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣幫助你成功的經(jīng)歷好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣幫助你成功的經(jīng)歷 After reading the story above, I recall the time when I dared not speak English because I was poor in pronunciation. 回答要點(diǎn)回答要點(diǎn)段落主題句的模式段落主題句的模式 表明立場表明立場 重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn) 引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷Part 3 鞏固練習(xí)鞏固練習(xí): 根據(jù)給出的要點(diǎn)寫

16、出主題句。根據(jù)給出的要點(diǎn)寫出主題句。1. 你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。 2. 這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語演講比賽這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語演講比賽 的經(jīng)歷的經(jīng)歷 。3. 應(yīng)該采取措施解決住房問題。應(yīng)該采取措施解決住房問題。 4. 你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。 5. 你支持拆舊圖書館的理由是什么。你支持拆舊圖書館的理由是什么。 6. 分析學(xué)生之間存在競爭的利弊。分析學(xué)生之間存在競爭的利弊。 表明立場表明立場 引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷 重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn) 回答要點(diǎn)回答要點(diǎn) 回答要點(diǎn) 重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn) 1. 你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該

17、穿校服上學(xué)。你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。 I approve of the requirement that students should wear school uniform on the campus. 2. 這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語演講比賽這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語演講比賽 的經(jīng)歷的經(jīng)歷 。The story reminds me of my own experience when I entered an English speaking competition one year ago. 表明立場表明立場 引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷 3. 應(yīng)該采取措施解決住房問題。應(yīng)該

18、采取措施解決住房問題。 We should take some effective measures to solve the housing problem . 4. 你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。 In my eyes, a good teacher should treat his students fairly as well as make the class lively and interesting. 引出建議、方法、引出建議、方法、措施、步驟等措施、步驟等 回答要點(diǎn)回答要點(diǎn) 5. 簡述你支持拆舊圖書館的理由。簡述你支持拆舊圖書館的理由

19、。 6. 分析學(xué)生之間存在競爭的利弊。分析學(xué)生之間存在競爭的利弊。 My support for tearing down the old library is based on the following reasons.As we all know, competition among students has advantages as well as disadvantages. 總述原因總述原因 重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn) 綜合運(yùn)用綜合運(yùn)用 寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容以約120個(gè)詞就“school rules”這個(gè)話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：（1）同學(xué)們?cè)趺纯创銈兊男Ｒ?guī)；（2）你認(rèn)為校規(guī)的作用是什

20、么；（3）你對(duì)校規(guī)的制定有什么建議。直接回答要點(diǎn)直接回答要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn)【參考例句】 1) As far as Im concerned, in our school, my classmates often complain about the bans on wearing long hair and jewellery. （直接回答要點(diǎn)）（直接回答要點(diǎn)） 2)But school rules really play a very important and necessary part in school life.（重述要點(diǎn)）（重述要點(diǎn)） 3)However ,th

21、ere are some suggestions before working out school rules.（重述要點(diǎn)）（重述要點(diǎn)）綜合運(yùn)用綜合運(yùn)用 寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容 以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“如何對(duì)待孩子的錯(cuò)誤”的看法，內(nèi)容包括：（1）描述一次你犯錯(cuò)的經(jīng)歷及你父母對(duì)此的反應(yīng)；（2）評(píng)價(jià)你父母的做法；（3）你認(rèn)為家長應(yīng)該如何對(duì)待孩子的錯(cuò)誤。 引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷表明立場表明立場直接回答要點(diǎn)直接回答要點(diǎn)【參考例句】 1) The passage reminds me of my experience.（引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷） 2)I appreciated how my father handled

22、 the problem very much.（表明立場表明立場） 3)In my opinion, adults should deal with the kids misbehaviors properly.（直接回答要點(diǎn)）（直接回答要點(diǎn)）綜合運(yùn)用綜合運(yùn)用 寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容 最近，你學(xué)校英語俱樂部組織了一次學(xué)生交流最近，你學(xué)校英語俱樂部組織了一次學(xué)生交流活動(dòng)，討論活動(dòng)，討論“90后現(xiàn)象后現(xiàn)象”。請(qǐng)就。請(qǐng)就“The post-90s Phenomenon”談?wù)勀愕目捶?，?nèi)容要點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑑?nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：包括： 1) 你怎樣看待你怎樣看待90后現(xiàn)象；后現(xiàn)象； 2) 你的理由是什么；你的理由是

23、什么； 3) 你對(duì)你對(duì)90后有何建議。后有何建議?；卮鹨c(diǎn)回答要點(diǎn) 引出建議、方法、引出建議、方法、措施、步驟等措施、步驟等 總述原因總述原因 【參考例句】 1) As far as I am concerned, what the post-90s children do nowdays is totally unacceptable. 2) The reasons why I would put forward such an opinion can be listed as follows. 3) As one of the post-90s individuals, I have co

24、me up with some effective suggestions in view of the seriousness of this problem.綜合運(yùn)用綜合運(yùn)用 寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容 以約以約120個(gè)詞就個(gè)詞就“寬容寬容”這個(gè)話題發(fā)表你的看這個(gè)話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：法，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：（1）上文給你的啟示；）上文給你的啟示；（2）敘述一次你寬恕他人或被他人寬恕的經(jīng)）敘述一次你寬恕他人或被他人寬恕的經(jīng)歷；歷；（3）學(xué)會(huì)寬容的意義。）學(xué)會(huì)寬容的意義。直接回答要點(diǎn)直接回答要點(diǎn)引出經(jīng)歷引出經(jīng)歷重述要點(diǎn)重述要點(diǎn)【參考例句】 1) As for me, from the story

25、I realize how important and powerful forgiveness is in our daily life.(直接回答要點(diǎn)直接回答要點(diǎn)) 2)It reminds me of my own experience.（引出經(jīng)引出經(jīng)歷歷） 3)The spirit of forgiveness and tolerance plays an important role in our life, which is like sunshine, lighting the hearts of people who forgive and who are forgiven.（重述要點(diǎn)）（重述要點(diǎn)）2011年茂名一模讀寫任務(wù) 以以120詞就詞就“The price of b