2020中考英語作文熱點(diǎn)素材范文14-減負(fù)

1、2020中考英語作文熱點(diǎn)素材熱點(diǎn)14減負(fù)熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)減負(fù)無疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它給我們的生活帶來了很大的影響。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語寫作預(yù)測(cè)話題是：減負(fù)?！绢A(yù)測(cè)題目】（一）假如你是李明，你的美國朋友Jack聽說中國的中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封回信，談一談減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的變化。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.過去課后常常做很多作業(yè)，甚至周末會(huì)上課，睡得很晚；2.現(xiàn)在有很多自由時(shí)間讀課外書，參觀博物館等；3.周末不上課，可做自己想做的事情；4.晚上有時(shí)間看新聞，不必再熬夜；5.補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人情況。、I 注意：1.書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入

2、總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)：60-80；3.內(nèi)容要連貫得體。參考詞匯：used to v.過去常常free adj.自由的museum n.博物館Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again! _Lovely yours,Li Ming參考范文】Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, thingshave changed a lot. I used to have to do endless

3、homework after class and attend classes even on weekends. Now Ihave more free time. I can do some reading and visit museums and so on. On weekends, I can follow my owninterests such as going for a movie and visiting friends. In the evenings I can watch mews on TY . Whats more, I can go to bedearlier

4、.Lovely yoursLi Ming【解析】本文是材料作文，關(guān)于中小學(xué)正在減輕學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，因?yàn)槭菍?duì)比減負(fù)前和減負(fù)后的情況，所以要注意時(shí)態(tài)，減負(fù)前用過去時(shí)，減負(fù)后用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描寫的時(shí)候要以時(shí)間 為順序，選擇合適的單詞或短語、句型把要點(diǎn)的含義恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)出來，考生還需要用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把各要 點(diǎn)連接成流暢的文章，同時(shí)要變換使用各種句式，豐富文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。減負(fù)之后，同學(xué)們有了更多的課余時(shí)間。某校英語角就如何讓課余生活更有意義？”展開了討論，大家各抒己見。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time MoreMeaningful?為題，用英語

5、寫一篇短文。注意：(1)短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫(2)詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)(3)短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。參考詞匯：提升素養(yǎng)promote literacyHow to make our spare time more meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time moremeaningful? _【參考范文】Nowadays, we students have mu

6、ch more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, its good to help our parents do some housework to show our love forthem. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us t

7、o get close to nature and relaxourselves.In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. Whats more, we can take an active part in somesocial activities as volunteers to help those in need.In a word, lets make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.【解析】 本文屬于材料作文，

8、要表達(dá)如何讓課外生活更有意義。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下 文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、 主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, whats more, take anactive part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及 “比較級(jí)and比較級(jí) ”等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文 意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作

9、時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放 的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及 簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自 然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu) 是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦

10、的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。真題再現(xiàn)為了促進(jìn)中小學(xué)生健康成長，近日教育部印發(fā)了中小學(xué)生減負(fù)措施（減負(fù)三十條）。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你站在中學(xué)生的立場(chǎng)從下面幾個(gè)方面向你的英國筆友Mike簡(jiǎn)單介紹其中的內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ā?作業(yè)方面：初中家庭作業(yè)不超過90分鐘;2電子產(chǎn)品方面：嚴(yán)禁學(xué)生將手機(jī)帶入課堂；3習(xí)慣方面：上課專心聽講，課后主動(dòng)復(fù)習(xí)；4你的看法. 注意：1詞數(shù)80100;2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,In order to improve studentshealt

11、h, our country carried outot 3re0drucl es（ 減少）students pressure（ 壓力）. Let me tell you something about them._Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【參考范文】Dear Mike,In order to improve stude ntsheath, our country carried out 30 rules（減少ducestude ntspressure力）. Let me tell you somethin

12、g about them.Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.Firstly, homework for middle school students should take no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more timeto relax.Secondly, mobile phones shouldnt dbetoaallpopwear in clas

13、s because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as heal

14、th.Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】題目解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，作文內(nèi)容是向筆友介紹中小學(xué)生減負(fù)措施，提示給出三個(gè)方面： 作業(yè)方面、電子產(chǎn)品方面和習(xí)慣方面。除介紹這三個(gè)方面外，還需要發(fā)表自己的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)控制在80-100字。根據(jù)提示可知，文章主要人稱是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，題材為說明文。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文采取多段式的寫法，第一段總領(lǐng)全文，以Let me tell you something about them.開頭，”引出下文對(duì)措施的介紹，第二、三和四段采用分條分段的方式，分別從作業(yè)方面、電子產(chǎn)品

15、方面和習(xí)慣方 面三個(gè)方面介紹，第五段以“In myopin io n開頭引出自己的想法。這樣分段條理清晰，表述明確。上下文的連接過渡詞使用得當(dāng)，文中多次應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語態(tài)、從句和一般將來時(shí)，為文章增色。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：be expected to；go over；in time；so that；in my opinion；be helpful to；as well as。句型：And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.；Secondly, mobile phones shouldntbe allo

16、wed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.；If we follow them, we can improve our study aswell as health.（二）最近,為了給學(xué)生減負(fù),部分地區(qū)出臺(tái)了一系列政策限制學(xué)生上各種各樣的補(bǔ)習(xí)班。對(duì)此,家長和學(xué)生持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以 “Should parents stop pushing their children from class to class?為題，參照表內(nèi)提供的信息寫一篇英語短文。Parents ideasYour i

17、deas1.stre ngthe n（鞏固）what is lear ned in class1.2. be good for their future2.3. lear n a lot3.要求:1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中家長的觀點(diǎn)和你的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。【參考范文】Should pare nts stop push ing their childre n from class to class?Nowadays, some parents stop pushing their children from class to class, but some don t. Bec

18、ause they want toprepare better lives for their kids. And they believe it can help them learn more, which is good for their future. After all, kno w-ledge islife.However, I don t thi nk so. On the one hand, we stude nts n eed orga ni zed activities. On the other hand, we are under too muchpressure,

19、so we need time and freedom to relax ourselves. Also, we need time to do things by ourselves.So, I think parents should give us a bit more time to ourselves.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求寫要不要給孩子上各種補(bǔ)習(xí)班，為什么家長要給孩子上補(bǔ)習(xí)班，最后給出自己 的觀點(diǎn)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文通過對(duì)要不要給孩子上各種補(bǔ)習(xí)班，為什么家長要給孩子上補(bǔ)習(xí)班，最后給出自己的 觀點(diǎn)等一一講述。語句通順，條理清晰，詞組，短語，句型等運(yùn)用靈活。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：st

20、op doing,prepare,rit做形式賓語； 非限制性定語從句；.after all,諺語know-ledgeis life,On the one hand . On the other hanby ourselves等?，F(xiàn)如今很多學(xué)生都在抱怨學(xué)習(xí)壓力太大，以此為題，寫篇不少于80字的文章。【參考范文】As a student I am very pleased to see that the burden of learning have reduced .Endless homework and classes made me crazyand we all hate learni

21、ng,but we have no choice but to accept them . Now days the burden of learning gradually reduce: we need not togo to school so early, we have fewer jobs, on weekends and holidays we dont need to worry about making up a missed lesson . Wecan have more free time to play games together with students and

22、 friends , have more time to rest, to see our favorite films andtelevision, to read some interesting books. Have a good rest help us to meet the lessons more of spirit. Of course,we can not becompletely study free time means that we can make full use of time to improve learning with in all it is sur

23、ely that reducing burdenbenefit all stude nts.作為一名學(xué)生，我很高興看到學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)減輕了，沒完沒了的家庭作業(yè)和課堂作業(yè)讓我瘋狂，我們都討 厭學(xué)習(xí)，但我們別無選擇，只能接受?，F(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)的負(fù)擔(dān)逐漸減輕了：我們不必這么早就上學(xué)了，我們的工 作更少了，周末和節(jié)假日我們不用擔(dān)心補(bǔ)課。我們可以有更多的空閑時(shí)間和同學(xué)們一起玩游戲，有更多的 時(shí)間休息，看我們最喜歡的電影和電視，讀一些有趣的書。好好休息，幫助我們更多地吸取精神上的教訓(xùn)。 當(dāng)然，我們不能完全研究自由時(shí)間意味著我們可以充分利用時(shí)間，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。所有這一切肯定是減負(fù) 惠及所有學(xué)生。（四）寫作要求:1.作文中

24、可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情景。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅照片的理解用英語寫一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容:1描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等;2結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢?3舉例說明你能為家長減負(fù)做些什么。【參考范文】The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from

25、 theirown childre n.The picture shows us a touch ing mome nt whe n a little girl comes to greet her work ing mom. Realiz ing her mom must be verytired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. I n resp on se, the mom kn eels dow n to show how happyand tha nkful she feels

26、.All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally en gaged in myown study, I seldom pay my atte nti on to what mother n eeds and feels, and always think study ing well is the only thing I could do inretur n. Now I know I can do my bit to he

27、lp with the everyday wash ing, bedroom clea ning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so asto share mothers daily burde n. The picture convinces me it is even more importa nt to be a good daughter tha n a good stude nt.常用表達(dá)1. So I think this activity ben efits not only our health but also our stud

28、y.2. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier.3. Whats more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.4. In a word, lets make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.5. In this way we will be able to learn much

29、 more and be more effective in our studies.6.In a nutshell, reducing the learning burden not only gives us more time to have fun but also offers a freedom to develop on our own.7. Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework.8. We are young and we have young hearts.

30、9. We love study as well as amusements.10. We hope that the number of exercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities.11. How nice to hear from you again!12. You want to know what is going on in schools in China?13.I n order to improve stude ntsheath, our country c

31、arrieketib 30duce stude ntspressure14. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.15. Recently Ive made a survey about the“Reducing Burden”activity being carried in our school寫作模板The topic of- （主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides ofopinions about it.

32、Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of- （支持A的理由一）What is more,-理由二）.Moreover,-（理由三）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-（支持B的理由一）.Sec on dly （besides）,-（理由二）.Thirdly （fin ally）,-（理由三）.From my point of view, I thin

33、k- （我的觀點(diǎn)）.The reason is that- （原因）.As a matter of fact, there are some other reas ons to expla in my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise必背范文（一）你校為推進(jìn)素質(zhì)教育，進(jìn)行了教學(xué)減負(fù)”活動(dòng)。假如你是學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)的學(xué)習(xí)部長，對(duì) 減負(fù)”前后的情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查，調(diào)查情況如下圖，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此圖寫一篇文章發(fā)表在校報(bào)上。注意：1短文必須包括圖表內(nèi)容;2可適當(dāng)增加評(píng)注性語言;3詞數(shù)100左右;4文章的第一段已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Reducing Burdenac

34、tivity beingocdcried in our sch【參考范文】Recently I have made a survey about the“Reducing Burden”activity being carried in our school.We middleschool stude nts used to be heavily burde ned with all kinds of homework. We spe nt more tha n 6 hours in theclassroom. At home, we still had to spe nd over 3 ho

35、urs on our homework. So we had less tha n 7 hours to sleep.Besides, we had only about 3 hours free time. As a result, our health was hardly damaged.Now things are gettingbetter, thanks to the activity. We can only spend about 5 hours in the classroom and hours for homework are shortened to about two

36、 hours so that we have two more hours to sleep and also two more hours for free time.So I think thisactivity ben efits not only our health but also our study.I1(Recently Ive made a survey about the給學(xué)生 “減負(fù) ”成了當(dāng)前的熱門話題。 那么，你認(rèn)為學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)重不重？重在哪里？過重的學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)會(huì)造 成什么樣的后果？請(qǐng)你就這些問題，結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶ǎ⒛愕目捶▽懗梢黄蚬f明文。【參考范文】

37、We are at senior high school. Every day, we have many exercises that we cant complete and many books that wecant finish reading. The teachers continually repeat the words that we are already able to recite.Teachers and students all work hard in order to improve the percentages of those entering coll

38、ege. But the burdenof work in class is so heavy that we have little time to do sports, which has left many of us in poor health. Whats worse,many students have lost interest in their studies altogether.It is known to all that good health is as important as knowledge. Virtues such as bravery, discipl

39、ine and love of ourmotherland cant be learned only in classes, but should also be learned through social practice. We should be given thetime and opportunity to be exposed to society so we can learn what cant be taught from books.We are young and we have young hearts. We love study as well as amusem

40、ents. We hope that the number ofexercises class will be reduced so we can take part in more after-class activities. In this way we will be able to learn muchmore and be more effective in our studies.本文第一段和第二段前半部分是擺學(xué)校課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)重的事實(shí)，談的是原因。從第二段后半部分開始分析 負(fù)擔(dān)過重帶來的結(jié)果。作者分析了四種結(jié)果，即負(fù)擔(dān)過重會(huì)影響身體健康，會(huì)使學(xué)生失去學(xué)習(xí)興趣，會(huì)使 學(xué)生學(xué)不到社會(huì)公德，還會(huì)使學(xué)生失去娛樂活動(dòng)的機(jī)會(huì)。所以，本文是一因多果說明文。（三）給學(xué)生“減負(fù)”成了當(dāng)前的熱門話題,結(jié)合你自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)効捶?，自由發(fā)揮，寫篇 文早。【參考范文】Middle middle school students were heavily burdened with all kinds of homework. In the past, they spent about 6.5hours in their classroom a day. At home, it took them 5