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1、精選優(yōu)質文檔-傾情為你奉上 15-Sentences Solution to IELTS Writing第1句:背景介紹 Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education. 現(xiàn)在,越來越多的人關心大學教育的目的。 Explanation: l Nowadays, a
2、n increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that l Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about thepurposes that university education
3、0;serves. l Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities. l Universities are one of the most important institutions in
4、60;modern society. 如果很難再短時間內想出第一句內容,就直接表達觀點,兩句話寫完首段。 l I agree with the view thatReasons are as follows. 我贊同的觀點是原因如下。 第2句:交代辯論話題 A. “是否應該” However, whether universities should mainly p
5、rovide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue. 但是,大學是否應該主要提供給學生工作相關的技能是一個飽受爭議的話題。 B. “是這樣還是應該那樣” However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills or
6、pure knowledge to graduates has caused a heated debate. 但是,大學是應該主要提供給學生工作相關的技能還是純粹的知識造成了激烈的爭議。Explanation: However, what kind of knowledge and skills universities should mainly provide to gr
7、aduates is a controversial issue. 但是,大學的應該主要提供給學生哪一種知識技能是一個飽受爭議的話題。 C. 一些人認為;另一些人認為 Some people state that; others believe that Some people state that universities should focus on
8、;giving access to knowledge; others believe that the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace are more important for university graduates. 一些人認為大學應關注提供知識;另一些人認為工作所需的技能對大學畢業(yè)生更重要。 第3
9、句:交代你自己的寫作觀點 In my view, , My view is that(表語從句) I agree with the view that (同位語從句), for the following reasons. My view is that job-related knowledge and skills
10、;should be the main focus of universities. I mainly agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons. 第二段 第1句:本段中心句 這一段的寫作目的是以理服人。用it is clear that這個主語從句寫出你認為最重要、最明顯的論據。
11、;Firstly, it is obvious that for most students, the purpose of receiving university education is to obtain practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to become
12、 qualified employees in the job market in the future. 首先,很顯然對大部分學生來說上大學的目的是學習實用的知識技能,這些技能能讓他們在將來的職場中成為合格的雇員。 Explanation: l Firstly, it is clear/obvious/true that l Firstly, there is no
13、;doubt that l One reason for this is that 第2句:對中心句進行拓展、解釋、說明。 A. This is because這是因為(想上一句話的原因) This is because most of them, after graduation, will enter the workp
14、lace, earn a living, and support their own families. 這是因為大部分學生畢業(yè)之后會進入職場,掙錢謀生,建立家庭。 B. This means that這意味著(想上一句話的結果)This means that the courses focusing on jobs will become the most
15、 welcomed subjects which the majority of students will select. 這意味著那些專注于使用知識的課程會成為大多數(shù)學生選擇的熱門專業(yè)。 C. If not (反正中心句) If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills, m
16、ost graduates will not be able to find satisfactory positions in the workplace, leading to a higher unemployment rate. 如果大學不重視這種技能的培養(yǎng),大部分學生將會很難再職場上找到工作,導致社會失業(yè)率增高。 Explanation: 可用下面的短語拓展解釋中心句:
17、0;l In other words, 換句話說 l More specifically, 具體來說 l More precisely, 準確點說 第3句 重申寫作觀點。其實是對第一段最后一句話,也就是你的寫作觀點進行改寫表達。 So universities, as service providers, have to give top pri
18、ority to these customers real needs. Explanation:推薦一個固定句型來寫本句,讓寫作更簡化:Therefore, it is necessary/crucial/important for sb. to do sth. l Therefore, it is crucial for universities to give&
19、#160;top priority to the students real needs. 第三段 第1句 首句仍是該段中心句,是你絞盡腦汁想出的第二個原因論據。 Moreover, focusing on the job-related skills can benefit the university itself. 另外,關注工作相關的技能能使大學本身受益。
20、Explanation: 可選用Moreover, In addition, Besides等詞開始。 第2句 該段第2句就是舉例。 For example, the sci-fi blockbuster “Avatar” has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and drawn massive
21、 interest in 3D technology. 例如,科幻大片阿凡達已成為電影業(yè)的一座里程碑,并且激發(fā)了大眾對3D技術的廣泛興趣。 Explanation: 如果感覺上面的句子單詞太難,我們可以簡化為:For example, 3Dtechnology has become a hot topic after the movie “Avatar” made the whole
22、160;world crazy. 例子越具體,越國際化,越時尚流行,越好。 第3句 上一句已經舉出了阿凡達和3D的例子,為什么我們要提這個例子呢?接下來的這句話就是要寫出我們舉這個例子的原因,并證明本段首句的正確性。 If a university can quickly respond, and consolidate teaching resources to offer courses about&
23、#160;3D, not only will its graduates be more competitive in the job market, but the university itself will keep pace with the technological development and move forward.&
24、#160;如果一所大學能迅速反應,整合教學資源提供3D相關的課程,那么不僅畢業(yè)生在職場上將更有競爭力,大學本身也能跟上技術發(fā)展并向前邁進。 Explanation: 這里沒有固定句式要用,可隨意發(fā)揮,要寫出例子和中心句之間的聯(lián)系。 當然還可以再舉一例:Another example is sth. 然后解釋說明。 如在考場上實在想不出好的例子或并列例子,該段從第2句開始參考第二段的寫作框架,再講一次道理。 第四段 第1句 寫讓步段落的兩大好處:大多數(shù)考生絞盡腦汁也想不出第三個原因論據。
25、我們何不換一個角度,想一想支持反方的一個原因或例子呢,那會容易得多。兼顧了反方觀點,不會出現(xiàn)評分標準中因為partly address the task而丟分的情況。 A. That is not to say that.not . 這并不是說(反方觀點完全沒有道理) That is not to say that universities should not pay
26、0;any attention to developing pure science and knowledge. B. It is also true that. (反方觀點中的某些方面)也是事實。 It is also true that universities should develop pure science and kno
27、wledge. C. Those whoharbour the view that. believethat. 那些持有(反方觀點)的人們認為. (這個句型中包含了定語從句、同位語從句和賓語從句) Those who harbourthe view that the main function of universities should be to give
28、0;access to the knowledge believe that the theoretic knowledge is the foundation of any practical skill. Explanation: 在討論優(yōu)勢和劣勢的文章中,我們可以直接使用下列句型:l This is not to say, however, that&
29、#160;we should neglect the problems it has caused. l But to acknowledge only the positive impact would be short sighted. 第2句 想反方觀點的論據,或在特殊、極端情況下的一些合理性。進一步說明該段第一句話。 There are,
30、;of course, students interested in knowledge for its own sake, and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society. Expl
31、anation: 可選用Of course或 Indeed開始本句。 第3句 讓步后最終轉折。表達“即便如此,反方觀點在大多數(shù)情況下還是不可行的”或“即使存在上面提到的負面,正面影響仍是大于負面的”。 But unfortunately these people are few and far between. Explanation: 可選用But, However, Yet等詞開始本句。 該
32、段為文章次要信息,可點到為止,不可花費過多時間和筆墨糾纏。 實在不知如何反駁了,可用無賴寫法:“(雖然反方觀點也有道理)但正方觀點仍然更有道理?!眑 But still, job-related skills are more important for most students. l But still, the cos are far greater. 其實本句還可以不用反駁,再寫反方第二論
33、據,或針對第一論據的拓展、支持、舉例。不過這樣處理后在結論段要表達相對中立的觀點態(tài)度。 第五段 第1句 結論段。重申寫作觀點。這句話其實是針對首段最后一句話改寫。 l In summary, 總之 l In conclusion, 總之 In summary, the major function of universities should be providing
34、0;most students job-related skills, guaranteeing a high rate of employment, and thus helping the society function better. Explanation: 通常,考官讀完一篇作文后印象最深的會是文章中的例子和結尾段。所以該句不是簡單的改寫,而應是遞進或強調??捎脧娬{句型:It is s
35、th. that. 第2句 照顧反方觀點。表達“同時,我們不能忽視反方觀點的價值,或低低估某事的負面影響”。Explanation: 模板句式 Meanwhile, we should not ignore/neglect/overlook/underestimatesth.s negative effects. 第3句 其實末段有了上面兩句話已經完整了。如果要沖刺高分,我們要再加一句話,給文章畫一個有力的句號,或提升文章的思想境界,立意升華
36、。 l By doing so we can ensure that. l Only by doing so can we make sure that. (only在句首注意倒裝)15句高級作文寫作分析 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Writ
37、e about the following topic: Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss
38、both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words
39、. Model Essay Watching TV is one of the most important childrens leisure activities. However, discussion now centres on whether it brings more harm than good. My
40、60;view is that too much time spent on it surely has negative impacts on kids and parents should filter out the inappropriate programs and channels for them. 首
41、段 第1句 背景引入 第2句 交代辯論話題 第3句 作者觀點,中立 With the rapid development of science and technology, TV shows are designed so vivid and attractive that not only kids but
42、60;eve adults are much easier to get addicted to them. When children spend more time sitting in front of a screen, they are isolated from the real world. They
43、160;do not have enough time to socialize, or to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth. Also, their eyesight will be weakened by st
44、aring at the screen for too long. 第2段 第1句 第一論據:看電視易上癮(形式問題,對兒童身體發(fā)育不好) 第2句 展開支持。其實寫的是:看電視上癮的結果是什么。省掉了This means that. 第3句 繼續(xù)展開。其實是不良結果并列 第4句 繼續(xù)并列。因為思想充分,想說的太多,代替了so,. 重申觀點這個句子 Moreover, que
45、stionable contents on TV will have negative effects on children since their minds are impressionable. The fact that many developing countries including China lack a TV programme
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