2020中考英語作文熱點(diǎn)素材范文05校園欺凌

1、2020中考英語作文熱點(diǎn)素材熱點(diǎn)5校園欺凌熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測校園欺凌無疑是今年的火爆熱點(diǎn)之一，它為我們的生活帶來了負(fù)面影響。今天，選擇的2020年中考英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：校園欺凌。【預(yù)測題目】(一)近日，校園欺凌”(bullying in school )已經(jīng)成為社會熱點(diǎn)話題，閱讀完上面的帖子后你有何感想？ 請你根據(jù)下面的寫作要求，寫一篇演講稿談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1 .校園欺凌”對我們有什么危害？2 .碰到此類事件，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做？請?zhí)岢鰞牲c(diǎn)建議。3 .人人有責(zé)保持校園安全，并呼吁同學(xué)們抵制校園欺凌作文要求：1 .不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2 .語句連貫，詞數(shù) 8

2、0個左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，不必抄寫在答題卡上。Good afternoon, everyone .Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school.That ' s all. Thank you【參考范文】Good afternoon, everyone .Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafeand unhappy. It

3、 makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. Ifsomeone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldn t be afraid to stop it .First, we should trust ourseand tell them it s not right to do like that. Sweceocnadn, ask teachers and parents for he

4、lp.It s everyone s duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.That s all. Thank you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇演講稿談?wù)勀銓Α靶@欺凌”的看法。 結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Today I am going to , It makes us hard to , If s

5、omeone bulliesus, It ' s everyone ' s duty，hope等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我演講稿的目的是談?wù)摗靶@欺凌”， 接下來介紹“校園欺凌”的危害以及如何面對這個問題，最后呼吁同學(xué)們抵制“校園欺凌”。 此處 talk about, in one s opinion, make sb do sth,get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly

6、to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。（二）請結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，以How do you behave at school? 為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1 ）請簡要描述兩幅圖片；2）如果你受到欺負(fù)時，你該如何應(yīng)對（至少2 點(diǎn)）；3） 針對這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做（至少 2 點(diǎn)）。注意：1 ）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3） 100 詞左右，已給出的部分不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：beat, kick, respect, harmonious（和諧的）,stop bullying （欺凌）How do you behave at s

7、chool?There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,【參考范文】How do you behave at school?There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, we can see a group of students holding sticks. They are beating and kicking other students. In Picture Two, an elder and strong

8、er student is asking for money from others. This is called school bullying.If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. In this way, I can keep myself safe. Safety is always the first. Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents

9、 and my teachers so that they can help me. I won' t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you nexttime.As a student, I think we should respect each other. If we have different ideas, we' d better discuss infighting. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in troubl

10、e. Let' s stop bullying and build a Ischool.How do you behave at school?"【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，請結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，以“為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1）請簡要描述兩幅圖片；2）如果你受到欺負(fù)時，你該如何應(yīng)對（至少2點(diǎn)）；3）針對這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象，談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做（至少2點(diǎn)）。2.例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用第一人稱，時態(tài)采用一般將來時為主；本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句

11、成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn):短語： a group of students； asking for； protect myself； keep myself safe； so tha； instead of fighting ； instead of fighting 。句型：賓語從句 If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself.

12、I think we should respect each other.目 的狀語此句 Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.原因狀語從句 I won ' t keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.真題再現(xiàn)敢去學(xué)校，甚近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問題等嚴(yán)重后果。請以 “My opi

13、nions about school bullying 為題， 寫一篇英語短文， 談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1 .所給提示信息應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2 . 80詞以上。參考詞匯：心理問題 mental health problems .My opinions about school bullying【參考范文】My opinions about

14、 school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bull

15、ying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓π@欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、 主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如

16、make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, onone' s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中 it 作形式主語以及 E匕較級 and 比 較級 ”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相

17、關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。（二）請你根據(jù)上面五個問題的內(nèi)容及你的回答，結(jié)合以下提示，以“ Howcan we protect oursel

18、ves at School?為題，寫一篇80-100 詞的英語短文。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。提示：1. 謹(jǐn)慎交友。2. 不參與打架斗毆。3. 面對校園欺凌怎樣自我保護(hù)。參考詞匯：1. self-protection （自我保護(hù)）2. bully （n./v. 欺凌）3. personal safety （人身安全）4. have violent behaviors （打架斗毆）How can we protect ourselves at School?【參考范文】How can we protect ourselves at School?School bullies happen in

19、 almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens.

20、 We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and can

21、 t have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.I m hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so?【解析】這是一篇話題作文，以“ How Can We Protect Ourselves at School? 為題，寫一篇 ”80-100 詞的英語短文。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，認(rèn)真審題，確

22、定主題，確定要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100 詞。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：在學(xué)校我們?nèi)绾伪Ｗo(hù)自己？幾乎每個學(xué)校都有欺負(fù)學(xué)校的行為。在我的學(xué)校里，我們有時會被欺負(fù)，一些學(xué)生會受到傷害，所以在學(xué)校欺負(fù)別人或被欺負(fù)對我們來說真的很不好。當(dāng)我們遇到校園欺凌的麻煩時，我們應(yīng)該阻止任何校園欺凌。例如，在發(fā)生欺凌行為之前，我們應(yīng)該保持冷靜。與他人交朋友時，我們應(yīng)該總是友好和樂于助人。以下是我關(guān)于制止學(xué)校欺負(fù)的一些想法。首先，我

23、們將學(xué)習(xí)如何自我保護(hù)，因?yàn)槲覀兊娜松戆踩亲钪匾?。第二，我們要時刻與他人和睦相處，不能有任何暴力行為。最后，遵守校規(guī)也是避免學(xué)校欺負(fù)的一種方式。我希望將來學(xué)校里不會發(fā)生欺負(fù)學(xué)生的事，你這么認(rèn)為嗎？【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，語言要規(guī)范，時態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，信息表達(dá)清晰、完整，意思連貫。寫作六步法：1.審題：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.

24、改正錯誤：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。（三）你覺得你的校園生活安全嗎？請你以“ How tokeep safe in School 為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?”內(nèi)容包括：1. 描述一件發(fā)生在你身上或你看到的發(fā)生在校園里的意外事件（經(jīng)過與結(jié)果）2. 提出解決這種校園意外事件的建議（至少兩條）3. 希望每個學(xué)生要注意校園安全【參考范文】Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough. For example, one day, two

25、 students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in the hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep one eye on the stude

26、nts after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般過去式敘述一件發(fā)生在學(xué)校的意外事件。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文觀點(diǎn)分明，論證了學(xué)校安全的必

27、要性。本文用到了征求建議的語氣I think students should always walkbut not run in the hallways. 這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。提出了學(xué)生和老師在學(xué)校應(yīng)怎么注意安全。（四）假如你是李華,校園英文報的編輯,近日收到讀者John 的來信， 談?wù)摰剿灰恍┩瑢W(xué)欺負(fù)的經(jīng)歷，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給John 寫一封回信。寫作要點(diǎn): 1. 安慰他不要害怕和差愧；2. 學(xué)校也正在采取相關(guān)措施:1 月 16 日 （周四） 晚上 8 點(diǎn)在學(xué)校會議室有一個關(guān)于如何應(yīng)對校園欺凌的講座。3. 你的建議: （至少兩點(diǎn)）寫作要求: 1. 80 詞左右，第一句已

28、給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2 .必須包含以上寫作要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3 .文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。4 .語句通暢，語法正確，書寫工整。參考詞匯:欺凌 n. bullying 欺凌者 n. bullies 措施 n. measuresDear John,I am sorry to learn what has happened to you.【參考范文】Dear John,I am sorry to learn what has happened to you. I think you should be brave to face it and don shamed because it is

29、 not your fault.Our school is taking action to solve school bullying. What s mored,eallewcithurbeuollnyinhgowwitlolbe held in the school conference room on Thursday, Jan.16th, at 8 p.m.In my opinion, you should tell your experience to your teachers and parents, they are adults and they will help you

30、. Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. Tell bullies nobody should be bullied and bullying itself is wrong. I am sure everything will be better.Yours,Li Hua【解析】題干解讀：這是一篇書信作文。要求根據(jù)針對John的問題和提示的內(nèi)容給John回信。寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示

31、。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用三段式；時態(tài)選用一般現(xiàn)在時；將題目要求的要點(diǎn)都很好地融入到文章當(dāng)中，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：happen to； take action； In my opinion ； Meanwhile 等。句型： Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. 使用了定語從句和賓語從句。I am sure everything will be better. 使用了賓語從句?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清文章的要求和要點(diǎn)；其次，理順自己

32、的行文思路；再次緊扣要點(diǎn)，注意句子之間 的連接與過渡；最后要仔細(xì)檢查是否有單詞拼寫錯誤和標(biāo)點(diǎn)的誤用等，還要注意是否出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，有無 重復(fù)遺漏，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。常用表達(dá)1. Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes.2. I am sure everything will be better.3. There is something unpleasant happening at school.4. Let ' s pla

33、y a role in building a harmonious school5. I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways.6. I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.7. obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.8. it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bull

34、ies on my own9. If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each other.10. I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.11. I won ' t keep it to myself because may

35、be the bad guys will go to you next time.12. It ' s everyone ' s duty to make schools safe .13. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying.14. As a student, I think we should respect each other.15. If we have different ideas, we' d better discuss instead of figh

36、ting.16. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble.寫作模板The topic of （主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides ofopinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of （支持 A 的理由一）What is more, 理由二）.Moreover, （ 理由三）.Whi

37、le others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,（ 支持 B 的理由一）.Secondly （besides）, （理由二）.Thirdly （finally）, （ 理由三）.From my point of view, I think （我的觀點(diǎn)）.The reason is that （ 原因）.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former

38、 is surely a wise choice .必、背篦文（一）請結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，以"How to behave表現(xiàn)）at school?為題寫一篇短文。要求：1 .簡要描述兩幅圖片，并針對這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做（至少2點(diǎn)）；2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3 .80個詞左右，已給出的部分不計人總詞數(shù)。Fi中A *參考詞匯：beat, kick, laugh at, respect（尊重）,harmonious（和諧的）How to Behave at School?There is something unpleasant happeni

39、ng at school. In Picture One,【參考范文】How to Behave at School?There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture Two, two girls are beating their classmate. InPicture One, a group of students are laughing at a poor boy because he failed in the exam.How rude they are! We should say no to such

40、 things. As a student, I think we should respect each other and befriendly to others. If we have different ideas, wed better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should helpclassmates when they are in trouble. Lets play a role in buildoinugs sachhaoroml oni【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，簡要描述兩幅圖片, 并針對這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约?/p>

41、在學(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時，人稱為第一、三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There is ；two girls are beating ；I think we should ，Let ' s等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了兩幅畫的內(nèi)容，接下來介紹針對這些校園欺凌現(xiàn)象談?wù)勛约涸趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該如何做，最后我們在營建和諧校園應(yīng)起作用。此處 a group of, laugh at, each other,

42、be friendly to, be introuble, play a role in doing sth 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。（二）請結(jié)合下面兩幅圖片所示內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文。要求：1 . 用約30 詞概括上文主要內(nèi)容:2 .用約120 詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括 :校園欺凌的危害（至少兩點(diǎn)）：（2）你對改變這一現(xiàn)象的建議（至少兩點(diǎn)）。【參考范文】School bullying, thanks to the film Better Days, is now coming under the spotlight. Despite some successful attempts to

43、 tackle it, it still takes joint efforts to prevent it happening. (30 words)School bullying can definitely threaten individuals' growth and undermine social harmony. For one thingcauses severe psychological trauma to the victims, subjecting them to long-term depression. Worse still, what a vicio

44、us cycle if victims follow in the bully' s footsteps! For another, school bullying can make the bully go furthto believe in violence and commit crimes.Undoubtedly, only when nipped in the bud can school bullying stop snowballing. First, laws should be in place and give explicit guidelines on wha

45、t will be done if it occurs. Second, it is urged that schools should maintain clear channels of communication for both victims and bullies so that they do not bottle up their feelings. It is never too late to face school bullying by taking preventive steps. (126 words)學(xué)校欺凌現(xiàn)象在各個國家都很常見。這種行為無論是對受害者還是加害

46、者都造成了嚴(yán)重的心理影響， 有些甚至導(dǎo)致悲劇性的結(jié)果。話題：1 、你認(rèn)為學(xué)校欺凌現(xiàn)象的原因是什么？ 2、你有沒有好的方法來阻止類似現(xiàn)象的發(fā)生？ 3、你曾經(jīng)有過類似的經(jīng)歷嗎？（無論是加害者、受害者、旁觀者或阻止者）說說你的故事。 注意：以上話題選擇一個回答即可。注意緊扣話題本身?！緟⒖挤段摹緽ullying, as far as I know, is prevalent in secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced thatmore or less. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. I believe there are some factors that contribute to the prevalence of school s bullying.Naturally, schoolingsho uld be the most obvious and uninsurable reason that comes into our mind