小學英語六年級作文范文喜好習慣介紹

1、第7頁 共7頁小學英語六年級作文范文-喜好習慣介紹請寫一個你最喜愛的季節(jié)，要寫出你喜歡的原因。 My favorite season My favorite season is summer. Its hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I dont go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to

2、the beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation. My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. Its long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what th

3、at is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. Its round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? Whats your favourite food? 【要領點評】 My Favourite F

4、ood 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是簡單地列舉出自己最喜歡的每一種食物，而是有詳有略地進行介紹。整篇文章用詞準確、語言流暢、沒有語法錯誤。另外，文章中出現(xiàn)了一些生詞，可見小作者是用心了。 同學們，你一定有很多的愛好，請你寫一個你的愛好，字數(shù)不少于60個單詞。 My hobby My hobby is collecting sts(集郵). There are many sts in my room. I like sts very much. There are many things on the sts. They are colorful and beautiful. After s

5、chool I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting sts. I like collecting sts very much. My hobby I am Cindy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often

6、play with them. I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body. Whats your hobby? Can you tell me? My Seasons We have four

7、seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when its wind. And I can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but its not long time. I often go swimming. It c

8、an make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter es, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a sn

9、owman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature. 【要領點評】 寫法：這篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在寫法上，是根據(jù)春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替來寫的，先講明每個季節(jié)的特征，之后再寫在這個季節(jié)中的主要活動或比較有代表性的活動。同時講一些自己的真實感受，最后闡述自己最喜歡的季節(jié)。在實際的寫作的時候我們還可以先寫出自己喜愛的季節(jié)及主要的活動內(nèi)容，之后再去講其他幾個季節(jié)，還可以多講解一下地域的季節(jié)特征和大自然中

10、的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黃，農(nóng)民在收割等等，這樣寫出來的四季更貼近實際。 時態(tài)：這篇習作講的是“我的四季”，是比較慣常的一些行為，所以我們最好采用一般現(xiàn)在時和情態(tài)動詞結(jié)合活動的寫法。即：在什么季節(jié)，天氣如何，我們可以做什么。 注意：在寫作內(nèi)容上，不可以像以往的內(nèi)容那么簡單，因為有四個季節(jié)，所以要寫明季節(jié)，季節(jié)天氣，季節(jié)性活動，活動的人，活動的感受等，要求句子順序要正確，在寫作中還要注意關聯(lián)詞的使用，如用了“因為”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同時出現(xiàn)。詞量要控制在80個詞以內(nèi)。 【要領點評】 寫法：這篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在寫法上，是根據(jù)春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替來寫的，先講明每個

11、季節(jié)的特征，之后再寫在這個季節(jié)中的主要活動或比較有代表性的活動。同時講一些自己的真實感受，最后闡述自己最喜歡的季節(jié)。在實際的寫作的時候我們還可以先寫出自己喜愛的季節(jié)及主要的活動內(nèi)容，之后再去講其他幾個季節(jié)，還可以多講解一下地域的季節(jié)特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黃，農(nóng)民在收割等等，這樣寫出來的四季更貼近實際。 時態(tài)：這篇習作講的是“我的四季”，是比較慣常的一些行為，所以我們最好采用一般現(xiàn)在時和情態(tài)動詞結(jié)合活動的寫法。即：在什么季節(jié)，天氣如何，我們可以做什么。 注意：在寫作內(nèi)容上，不可以像以往的內(nèi)容那么簡單，因為有四個季節(jié)，所以要寫明季節(jié)，季節(jié)天氣，季節(jié)性活動，活動的人，活動的

12、感受等，要求句子順序要正確，在寫作中還要注意關聯(lián)詞的使用，如用了“因為”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同時出現(xiàn)。詞量要控制在80個詞以內(nèi)。 I often go to Zhongshan Park. In the park you can see many trees and flowers. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and tall. You can see a hill in the park, too. At the foot of the hill, there are several p

13、aths. A lot of people in my city like going to the park. Some young people like taking a walk there. Some old people like singing there. Some children like dancing or playing games there. Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation.www._zzstep.* 生單詞： 1. several:幾個 2. relaxation:放松中國教_育出版網(wǎng)*&

14、; 點評：陳祖新小朋友的這篇作文簡單明了。首先，作者向大家簡單地描繪出了公園的風景：有山有水有花。然后，作者寫了人們在公園里的活動：青年人在公園里散步，老年人在公園里唱歌，小孩子在公園里玩游戲，多么快樂的一組畫面??！最后，作者作出總結(jié)：中山公園真的是一個放松心情的好地方！ Li Ying s Hobby Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio.

15、 She watches TV only on Saturday evening. Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy. 【要領點評】 這一篇寫愛好的文章,小作者的寫作思路很值得我們學習,他沒有具體寫到劉瑩的某一種愛好,而是從學習到課余的多種愛好入手,對劉瑩的各種愛好

16、進行了粗線條地勾畫.從“愛好”這個角度來看劉瑩的話，我們會覺得這個形象很飽滿。 小朋友們寫這種“敘事寫人”作文時，可以從兩個角度下手：一是具體地描繪；二是和上面小朋友一樣，粗線條地勾畫，二者各有所長，另處在行文中使用一些問句，使用一些轉(zhuǎn)述的話，可以使作文更有靈氣，避免了平鋪直敘的缺點。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesnt.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不錯的句子，使讀者眼前為之一亮。 描寫一種你最喜愛的動物，要對它進行外形描寫。 My Favorite Animal My favorite animal is rabbit. I