托福寫作優(yōu)秀賞析

1、托福寫作優(yōu)秀賞析Passage OneGovernmenMA You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choicets should definitely spend more money on improving all forms of public transportation. These include buses, subways and trains. Th

2、is is the best way to preserve natural resources and reduce pollution.If I had enough money to buy either a house or a business, Id buy a house. A business may succeed or fail. Its also possible I might change my mind about what I wanted to do in business. However, a home is a lifetime gift to mysel

3、f.Right now Im in small apartment, with barely enough room for everything. All my furniture and things Ive accumulated since I left college barely fit. I have almost no closet space left. This means my clothes are always wrinkled because theyre crushed together. I dont have any place to put my clean

4、ing supplies, nor room for more than one set of sheets and towels. A new house would mean a lot more room for all these things.I love having plants around. Its very healthy for the air inside and its cheerful to have living things growing in a room. Id like to have a garden instead. That way I could

5、 grow a lot of different kinds of plants and flowers, and I could have a vegetable garden in the summer.Besides having a garden, Id like to have a backyard with lots of trees and a small fountain in the corner. I love watching birds and listening to them sing. On the windowsill of my apartment, I pu

6、t out bird seed every morning. In the hot weather, I put out a shallow tin plate with water in it for birds. The trees and the fountain in my backyard would gibe me pleasure, but theyd really be for the birds. The trees would give them a place to nest, and the fountain would be a source of fresh wat

7、er when its hot.Can you picture my dream house? A business would only give me money. A house would give me someplace special to be myself.Passage TwoShould governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spends more money on improving public transportation ( buses

8、, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.Governments should definitely spend more money on improving all forms of public transportation. These include buses, subways and trains. This is the best way to preserve natural resources and reduce pollution.As a planet

9、, were dealing with a finite amount of natural resources. Once theyre gone, they cant be replaced. They cant fill our need for oil and gasoline forever. But we seem to forget that and consume them at an incredible rate. In wealthier counties, some families have two or three cars. As soon as teenager

10、s get their drivers licenses, theyre given cars so their parents wont have to drive them places.Public transportation hasnt been sufficiently developed. Because of this, suburban areas surrounding cities have been allowed to sprawl more and more widely. This means that people cant even go to the sto

11、re without having to hop into the car. Everything is too far away from where they live. If there were better and more frequent public transportation, people would be able to give up their cars for local driving.As a result of all the cars being driven, were dealing with terrible pollution problems.

12、In big cities, there are days during the summer when the elderly and people with respiratory problems are advised not to leave the house. Ten years ago this was unheard of! Now its the norm. Public transportation would cut down considerably on air pollution.Public transportation also encourages a se

13、nse of community. People who travel to work together all the time get to know each other. Car isolate us from neighbors. However, people feel they need to drive because they cant depend on public transportation to fit their schedules. If more money were available, buses, subways and trains could run

14、 24 hours a day. Then they would be available all the time to the people who need them.I always try to take public transportation whenever possible, and I encourage friends and neighbors to try it too. I think we must support public transportation in order to create a better world.Passage ThreePR So

15、me students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Study habits are a very individual thing. Some people like to study alone, while others like to study with a group. Personally, I would ra

16、ther study alone, but I can see advantages to both ways.It can be very helpful to study with other students. For one thing, you can exchange information about the topic. Not everyone is going to hear everything the teacher says in class. Comparing notes is a good way to be sure you get what you miss

17、ed. You can also discuss various aspects of the topic. Other students can bring a different perspective to the discussion. They can point out things you may not have thought of , and help you make your arguments clearer.Studying with other students can also help keep you focused on studying. If your

18、e in a study group, you have to be at a particular place to study at a particular time. This is good discipline. The group reviews all the material available and then begins studying. Theres not a lot of wasted time, if things work the way they should.Of course, it doesnt help if youre in a study group that doesnt take studying seriously. Then youd be much better of studying by yourself. If youre trying to study with friends and all they want to do is talk about other things, youd get more done going somewhere