定語從句在基礎寫作中的運用學課件

1、定語從句在基礎寫作中的運用Chen XudongOct 24th, 2013Lead inHe, who knows nothing but pretends to know everything, is indeed a good-for-nothing. 不懂裝懂,永世飯桶。 Lead inNo man or woman is worth your tears, and the one who is, wont make you cry. 沒人值得你流淚，如果有，他/她不會讓你哭。基礎作文的潛規(guī)則 fewer sentences, but more information.句子個數(shù)少，信息

2、量大。寫好基礎作文第一神器Attributive Clauses定語從句實戰(zhàn)一個最古老的故事從前有座山，山上有座廟Do you know the story?故事精簡版從前有座山，山上有座廟，廟有有倆和尚，一個大和尚，一個小和尚，小和尚要大和尚講故事，故事里面說生詞提示和尚 monk廟 temple要求: 一個英文句子寫完這個故事。One possible versionLong long ago, there was a mountain, on which stood a temple, in which lived two monks: an old one, a young one,

3、who asked the other one to tell him a story, which goes like thisPut it back into ChineseLong long ago, there was a village, in front of which stood a big tree, in which lived two birds, the young one of whom asked the old one to teach him a song, which goes like this從這里，你可以體會到定語從句不愧為第一神器的稱號。Time to

4、 have another try!【寫作內(nèi)容】請根據(jù)以下信息，介紹一位熱門人物。姓 名：莫言（管謨業(yè)）出生日期：1955年2月17日出 生 地：山東省高密一個窮苦人家興趣愛好：自幼喜歡閱讀、書法(calligraphy)性格特征：開朗、幽默教育經(jīng)歷：1986年畢業(yè)于解放軍藝術學院（ PLA Academy of Arts） ；1991年畢業(yè)于北京大學并獲文學碩士學位（ Masters Degree of Arts ）。主要成就：2011年憑借蛙獲中國最高文學獎“矛盾文學獎”；2012年獲諾貝爾文學獎。評 價：第一位獲得諾貝爾文學獎的中國作家，被譽為是對中國文學做出巨大貢獻的作家之一。1.審：

5、時態(tài)_ 人稱_2.抓：抓要點，定表達。3.合：整合信息，連詞成句。4.連：連句成篇，注意連貫。Basic writing一般過去時一般現(xiàn)在時第 三 人 稱2.抓：抓要點，定表達。be born in Gaomi on February 17, 1955 ,show great interest in ,graduate from,obtain a degree /receive a degree ,win the award of/ obtain the prize of,the first person to do，be honored as ,make great contribution

6、s to,姓 名：莫言（管謨業(yè)）出生日期：1955年2月17日出 生 地：山東省高密一個窮苦人家興趣愛好：自幼喜歡閱讀、書法(calligraphy)性格特征：開朗、幽默教育經(jīng)歷：1986年畢業(yè)于解放軍藝術學院（ PLA Academy of Arts） ；1991年畢業(yè)于北京大學并獲文學碩士學位（ Masters Degree of Arts） 。主要成就：2011年憑借蛙獲中國最高文學獎 “矛盾文學獎”；2012年獲諾貝爾文學獎。評 價：第一位獲得諾貝爾文學獎的中國作家，被譽為是對中國文學做出巨大貢獻的作家之一。3.合：整合信息。3. Mo Yan, originally named Gu

7、an Moye, was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955. 2. Mo Yan, whose original name is Guan Moye, was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955, 1. Mo Yan named Guan Moye firstly and he was born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Pr

8、ovince on February 17, 1955.句型多樣化、高級化1. Mo Yan has been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood and is outgoing and humorous.2. Mo Yan, who has been interested in reading and calligraphy since his childhood, is outgoing and humorous.句型多樣化、高級化3. Not only has Mo Yan been interested in re

9、ading and calligraphy since his childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous.2. Mo Yan, who graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later. 1. Mo graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986

10、 and went to Beijing University to gain a Masters Degree of Arts in 1991.3. Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later. 句型多樣化、高級化 Mo Yan, originally named Guan Moye, was born i

11、nto a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955. Whats more, not only has he been interested in reading and calligraphy since childhood but he is also outgoing and humorous. Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree of Arts from Beijing University five years later. 4.連：連句成篇，注意連貫。With a talent for literature, he won Chinas highest literary prize, Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frog in 2011. To all Chineses excitement, this year he became the first Chinese