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1、四級寫作考試沖刺班內(nèi)部筆記聽力課堂,開放式外語學(xué)習(xí)平臺！TingC聲明：本資料由 HYPERLINK / 聽力課堂網(wǎng)站收集整理，僅供英語愛好者學(xué)習(xí)使用，資料版權(quán)屬于原作者。- PAGE 29 -四級寫作考試沖刺班內(nèi)部筆記 寫作的重要性 6分最低限，只要結(jié)構(gòu)不出錯，得分應(yīng)該為9分。 評判作文 四級考試作文主要看內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)、語言三個方面。 內(nèi)容不跑題即可，注意：1.不要妄圖以情動人;2.不要妄圖在構(gòu)思上出奇制勝。 結(jié)構(gòu)上牢記總分總：先寫主題句(Topic Sentence)，再寫分論點，最后寫總結(jié)句(Conclusion)。 語言最重要，往往使評分產(chǎn)生重大差異，語言要模仿和包裝。 根本表達 人們認

2、為：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越來越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 萬能理由(Omnipotence) 1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3. 節(jié)省和浪費：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift; waste time/ money/ space; costly, lav

3、ish 4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,considerate, confident, creative, sociable,perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative 5. 人的身體健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6. 娛樂：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax, tired, boring, lonely 7. 環(huán)境：environment,

4、 pollute, poisonous, dirty 8. 平安和危險：safe, danger, risk 9. 經(jīng)驗：experience, social experience, enter the society 10. 人際：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 寫完之后修改注意：(內(nèi)容方面盡量不要修改) 1、字母大小寫 2、怪符號 3、單詞拼寫 4、主謂一致 5、動詞時態(tài) 6、名詞單復(fù)數(shù) 實例一 題目：BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China提綱：(1)為什么自行

5、車在中國這樣普及(2)和汽車的比擬(3)自行車在中國的前途 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car whic

6、h is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to l

7、earn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesnt ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isnt too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesnt need any oil, and it cant cause the polusion. All of these are the goo

8、d needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles. Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thous

9、ands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles. 注：1. 第一句總寫，第二句和第三句分寫，最后總寫。 2. During the rush hour 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭。 3. 破折號內(nèi)容為同位語,句式多變化。 Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, c

10、onvenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. More

11、over they often cause traffic jams and accidents. 注：1. Compared with cars 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭。 2. be superior to/ be inferior to 優(yōu)于/ 低于 3. thirst, second, third 英語語言有層次感，信號詞 4. cheap 廉價，最好用inexpensive 5. be good for health 對健康有好處(萬能理由) 6. Moreover 表示遞進 In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Sinc

12、e China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. 注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in todays China. Bicycl

13、es are very important means of transport in peoples daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the riders strength, bicycles are popular all over the world,

14、 especially in China. 注：第一句應(yīng)該用there be結(jié)構(gòu) Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car. I think the population o

15、f Chinas bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that its quality will be im

16、proved. I、比照觀點選擇題：1.有人認為; 2.另外一些人認為; 3.談?wù)勀愕挠^點和看法。(最好寫成4段) 實例二 99年6月真題 Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1. 有人認為讀書要有選擇2. 有人認為應(yīng)當博覽群書 3. 我的想法 How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue tha

17、t with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books,

18、we must read selectively. But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kind

19、s of knowledge, we must read extensively. Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field. 典型的比照觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)： (啟)Paragraph I：(1)引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點; (2)簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。 Score

20、: 14分 How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(啟) 注：第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解 典型的比照觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)： (承)Paragraph II：(1)提出一種觀點或優(yōu)點;(2)本段的支持性分論點;(3)本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。 Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and

21、technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.(承) 注：1. 本段總分總結(jié)構(gòu) 2.

22、they argue that = they think that 3. with the development of. 隨著的開展 4. whats more 遞進關(guān)系，moreover 5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的比照觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：(轉(zhuǎn))Paragraph III：(1)承上啟下的過渡句; (2)提出另一種觀點或缺點;(3)本段的支持性分論點(4)本段總(可以省略)。 But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it

23、was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(轉(zhuǎn)) 注：1. But 轉(zhuǎn)折詞(信號詞) 2. they emphasize that = they think tha

24、t 3. todays society is not what it was 現(xiàn)代社會今昔非比 4. 許多知識 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge; 獲取知識 acquire/ get knowledge 5. knows nothinglittle;he may be uselesshe may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉 典型的比照觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：(合)Paragraph IV：(1)平衡兩種看法;(2)給出自己的觀點

25、。 Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.(合) Score: 11分 When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do no

26、t agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better. 注：結(jié)構(gòu)非常好，可以套用。 Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way.

27、So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. 注：1.“people, who.,應(yīng)去掉逗號，改為限制性定語從句。 2. as many as bad books 改為 as many as bad ones 3. lead us to the wrong way 改為 lead sb. astray 4. they suggest that = they think that 5. touch 碰(閃光點詞匯：如教材P7：shouldering

28、 the responsibility of doing sth. 肩負起責任) But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more

29、, to read more. So they believe that reading extensively is better. 注：1. hold 認為 同樣表示“think的詞還有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2. the best book 在西方國家是“圣經(jīng)的意思 3. to know more, to read more 錯誤，中式英語 To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good b

30、ooks as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. 范文22. Is Television a Blessing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in peoples lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a bles

31、sing or a curse. 注：it is generally accepted that 人們通常認為 As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and sti

32、mulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into ones room. 注：1. As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2. “使不用make，而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather

33、than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems. The major one is its effects on young people. They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened. Even wo

34、rse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted. In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, telev

35、ision in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society. 范文5. Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons. They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning

36、. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have. 注：geographical and historical 押尾韻，如：押頭韻 clear & clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons. They would argue that travelling means a consider

37、able amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you. In practice, travelling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time. It will at least enable

38、you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love. 注：1. in practice = I think 2. does more good than harm 好處比害處多，其他表達方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比方：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3. enable 使 范文1. Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? A test

39、 of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years

40、 cannot even communicate with a native speaker. Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely. A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus he

41、lp them with their communicating skills. 使句子具有表現(xiàn)力的手段：1、用形容詞修飾名詞;2、副詞修飾動詞、副詞修飾形容詞 On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under

42、 considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fi

43、xed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck. In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highl

44、y competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study. 范文21. Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly. Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking. They

45、always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed. And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship. Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go. 注：1. vary greatly 許多種2. be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that 3. get rid of

46、 the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清氣爽 4. Giving and being given 給與被給。主、被動關(guān)系在英文中用現(xiàn)在、過去分詞表達。 But other people consider it very harmful to peoples health. They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second. And they have heard the doctors warning th

47、at smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack. In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents. Thus it has become a major threat to peoples life and property. 注：1.They have heard the official reports that . 官方報告說明. 2. be more

48、likely to 更有可能，更容易3. chance 可能 There is some truth in both arguments, but humans life and property outweighs anything else. If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, cant we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us

49、refreshed?注：1. outweigh 比重要，同樣的表達：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2. 最后用兩句反問句結(jié)尾，非常精妙。 課后作業(yè) Private Cars 寫成4段的首段寫法： In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. Peoples attitude toward private cars varies widely. With the increase in th

50、e general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car. Yet, peoples opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the contrary./ differs sharply. In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ pro

51、blem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. Peoples views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely. 寫成3段的首段寫法： With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more people can o

52、wn private cars. cars are entering ordinary families. the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言) 支持段的主題句： Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages

53、of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely. 支持段的分論點： 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation. 舒適 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm. 炫耀 Thi

54、rd, only a private car can show a persons social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career. 否認段的主題句： However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides. While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us,

55、 we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make. Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits. However, private cars are not without shortcom

56、ings/ faults. Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced. Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well

57、 lead to potentially adverse consequences. 否認段的分論點： 占有空間 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space. 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen. 污染環(huán)境 Whats more/In addition, private cars give off/ d

58、ischarge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air. 注意：所謂上義詞是指抽象、概括和籠統(tǒng)的，就是比擬superordinate的詞;而下義詞就是具體的東西，即subordinate的東西。 第四段(總結(jié)段)的寫法： Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, Im sure

59、they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved. Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us. Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is

60、 a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated. Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, o