2019-2020學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit3FamilymattersPeriodⅣWriting教學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊

1、PeriodWriting|讀后續(xù)寫回憶親人本單元的寫作主要是讀后續(xù)寫，寫作主題是回憶親人。在寫作此類型文章時要注意以下幾點：1原文中的人稱和時態(tài)。既然是讀后續(xù)寫，就要和原文的人稱和時態(tài)保持一致。2原文中的人物信息。主題是回憶親人，對原文出現(xiàn)的人物特點要精準(zhǔn)掌握。3原文中的故事發(fā)展。在續(xù)寫故事時，故事的發(fā)展脈絡(luò)和邏輯要清晰合理。1Howeverdecisiveshemaybeattheoffice,shewillsecondguessherselfconstantlyasamother.任憑她在辦公室多么果斷，作為母親，她仍經(jīng)常后悔當(dāng)時的決定。2Iwantmysistertoknowthate

2、verydecisionwillnolongerberoutine.我想讓我妹妹知道，她將再也不能按照常規(guī)做出決定。3Mymommymadeitjustforme.我媽媽專門為我做的。4Atthefrontofthefirstcarlookingoutthewindowatthetrackthatlayaheadwereamanandhisson.在頭節(jié)車廂的最前面，坐著一個男人和他的兒子，他們正透過窗戶觀賞著一直往前延伸的鐵道。5Hekeepsbegginghisparentstolethimseehissister.他一直乞求父母，讓他進去看看小妹妹。6Theotherwomanthatm

3、ywifewantedmetovisitwasmymother.我妻子想讓我去拜訪的另一個女人，就是我的媽媽。7DadnevertriedtohugorkissmewhenIwasachild.在我很小的時候，爸爸從來不抱我，也從來不親吻我。8Whatmakesagoodmotheranyway?是什么能成就一個好母親？閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。(Iwastouchedthroughexperiences,memories,books,stories,animals,angels,andmostofallotherpeople.Peoplehavemovedm

4、eandmolded對影響重大)mewithmomentsofloveandexamplesofkindness.OnetimeonthedaybeforeChristmasmanyyearsagowhenIwasaminimumwage(mill(工廠)worker,Ifoundmyselfwithverylittlemoneyandverylittletimetobuymysmallchildrenafewsimpletoys.IknewthattheywouldhavetobecheaponesandIhopedmychildrenwouldlikethem.Ihatednothavin

5、genoughtogivethemmore.Ihatedbeingpoor.AndIhatedfeelingbadatChristmasratherthanhappy.Ipulledintoastoreparkinglotandcountedmymoneyagain.ItwasntmuchbutmaybeIcouldgetsomethingsmallwithit.AsIwasgettingoutofthecarInoticedtheSalvationArmy(救世軍)bellringerattheentrance.IfeltbadagainbecauseIdidntfeelIcouldspar

6、eanythingtogivehim.Istartedwalkingtowardstheentrancewhentwocarspulledintoemptyparkingspotsinfrontofme.Thefirstwasashiny,newCadillacandIfeltatwingeofjealousywhenIsawit.“Hownice，”Ithought,“woulditbetohaveenoughmoneytobuyacarlikethat.”Thesecondcar,though,wasanancientsedan(轎車)morebeatupandrustythantheon

7、eIwasdriving.Amanhopped沖)outoftheCadillacandhurriedintothestorerightpastthebellringerwithoutasecondglance.Outoftheoldsedancameayoungmotherwiththreesmallchildrenintow(緊隨著).Herclotheslookedaswornoutashercar,yetshestoppedinfrontofthebellringer,smiled,openedherpurse,anddroppedabillinhisredkettle(錢罐)注意：1

8、所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：.IstoodthereforaminuteinastonishmentParagraph2：Inthatsecondastreamofwarmthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,andalltheloveandjoyfilledme.精彩范文Paragraph1：.Istoodthereforaminuteinastonishment“Maybe，”Ithou

9、ghttomyself,“itsbettertoberichontheinsideinsteadoftheoutside.”Thatrichmanshouldhavedonesomethingtohelpthepoor,buthedidnt.Sometimesitwasreallywrongtojudgeapersonbyhisorherappearance.Ireallyhadrespectforthepoormotherfromthebottomofmyheart.Shesetagoodexampleforherchildrentofollow.Paragraph2：Inthatsecon

10、dastreamofwarmthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,andalltheloveandjoyfilledme.Isearchedforabilloutofmyownpurse,droppeditintheredkettle,andwishedthebellringeramerryChristmas.Ifoundafewfunthingstogivemykidsanddrovehomewithmyheartsinging.IknewitwasgoingtobeawonderfulChristmas.Icouldhardlywaittose

11、emychildrenenjoyingthepresentsboughtforthem,includingaspecialgiftloveforthoseinneed.總評文章整體寫作流暢自然，心理和精神層面的描寫細(xì)膩生動，體現(xiàn)了變化和轉(zhuǎn)折，充滿正能量。亮點呈現(xiàn)(1)“Thatrichmanshouldhavedonesomething.”中shouldhavedone表示“應(yīng)該做某事而實際上沒有做”，準(zhǔn)確體現(xiàn)出作者對富人行為的批評態(tài)度。(2)“fromthebottomofmyheart”，“setagoodexample”詞組的運用準(zhǔn)確得當(dāng)。(3)“withmyheartsinging”，

12、“seemychildrenenjoying”結(jié)構(gòu)的運用簡潔生動，令文章句式顯得高級。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。MyDadsBestFlowertheIremembermyfirsthomewasasmallapartmentonsecondfloorwithalovelyandspaciousbalcony.Whenmymumwasbusyinthekitchen,sheletmestayonthebalconywatchingthekidsplayinginthestreet.OnthatbalconyIplayedsometimeswithmyelder

13、sister,Maria.Shewassevenyearsoldandwhenmymumwasabsent,shewaslikeamothertome.Thebalconywasagreathobbyplaceformyfather.Afterhisworkheusedtogrowcarnations(康乃馨)inflowerboxes.Hiscarnationswerered,pinkandwhite,andeveryoneappreciatedthemfortheirbeauty.Hetookcareofthemwithsomuchloveanddevotion.Hedealtcarefu

14、llywithhisflowerslikeamothertakingcareofherbaby.ManytimesIsatonthefloorofthebalconyforhoursobservinghimandhislovelyflowerswithpatience.Hewasalwaysdoingsomethingonthatbalcony.Hewaswateringthemeveryday,cleaningthebalconyfloor,changingthepottingsoilandwhenthestemswerethick,strongandhighenough,hestarted

15、hisimprovementoperationattentivelylikeadoctor.Mydadtookatinyknifeandwithhislefthandheheldthestemofthecarnationandmeasuredtheheight.Thenhemadeasmallmarkonthestemwithhisfinger.Afterwardshemadeasharpcutwiththeknife,justenoughtofitinagrainofbarley(插穗的芽).Thenhebandagedthestemwithasmallbandage.Hisjobwasth

16、entowatertheplantsandtotakecareofthem.“Nooneshouldtouchthem，”hesaidtoMum.Everyday,whenhecamehomefromworkhewentstraighttothebalcony.Mumusedtotellus,“DonottouchDaddysflowers.”Forusitwasafascinatingexperiencetowatchhowthesmallstemsweregrowingandmakingflowers.Whenthecarnationshadgrownbigenough,mydadenjo

17、yedwatchingthemeveryday.Wethekidsdidtoo.注意：1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Oneday,myeldersister,wholovedDadverymuch,hadagreatidea.Paragraph2：Whenmydadarrived,hewentasusual,straighttothebalconyandsawhisflowerslyingonthefloorlikedeadanimal

18、s.寫前導(dǎo)讀：本文是一篇記敘文。“我”小的時候，父親十分愛花，在家里的陽臺上種植了康乃馨，他精心照顧這些花，擔(dān)心他的花受到傷害，特別叮囑母親不要讓人碰觸他的花。精彩范文Paragraph1：Paragraph2：課外拓展閱讀中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個單詞)或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。TraditionalChineseWeddingTraditionalChineseweddingcustomshavebeenaroundforthousandsofyears.Theymayvaryfromplacetoplaceandtimetotime,buthavebe

19、enholding1importantpositioninthelivesofChinesepeople,2(cause)farreaching(影響深遠的)effectsonthewaytheChineseleadtheirlives.AtraditionalChinesemarriageusuallyconsists3somenecessaryprocedures,suchasmatchmaking,engagement,meetingthebride,andthreebows.Inaddition,atypicalChineseweddingnowadays4(go)likethis:whenanewcoupleisengaged,5followsisachoiceofthedateoftheirmarriage.MostpeoplewouldfavorapublicholidayorspecialChines