在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)家長博客上你看到如下內(nèi)容課件

1、在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)家長博客上你看到如下內(nèi)容在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)家長博客上你看到如下內(nèi)容 第 十 六 議 論 文由實(shí)例說起課下多練筆專題講座寫作寫作三步曲由實(shí)例說起課下多練筆專寫作三步曲在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)家長博客上你看到如下內(nèi)容題目要求(2011陜西高考)假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)生家長博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù) 、 和 ，給這位家長回復(fù)。博客內(nèi)容寫作要點(diǎn)要求題目要求博客內(nèi)容寫作要點(diǎn)要求 Im the mother of a fourteenyearold. I have a rule for my daughter: be amo

2、ng the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong? Im the mother of a fo寫作要點(diǎn)：1表明自己的看法；2陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；3提出至少兩條建議。要求：寫作要點(diǎn)：1短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。2短文詞數(shù)不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。3內(nèi)容

3、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。4書寫需清晰、工整。Hi, TigerMom, 1短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。 What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is _ What puzzles you is ac技法指導(dǎo) 議論文是用來論述某個(gè)道理、闡明某種觀點(diǎn)的一種文體。它通過擺事實(shí)、講道理、辨是非來表達(dá)作者的見解和主張。議論文可分為許多種類，但中學(xué)英語書面表達(dá)所要求的議論文是一種限定的寫作，其論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證都比較明確。技法指導(dǎo)有的文章提出問題，如：為什么？怎么辦？該采取什么措施？考生可以結(jié)合問題要

4、求，闡述相關(guān)的觀點(diǎn)，切忌隨意發(fā)揮。近幾年的高考書面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來呈現(xiàn)寫作材料的。有的文章提出問題，如：為什么？怎么辦？該采取什么基本要求：1文章直接闡述事物的道理，明確表露作者的思想觀點(diǎn)。2表達(dá)方式以議論為主，輔之以說明、敘述等方式。議論文中的記敘和描寫是為論點(diǎn)提供根據(jù)的。因此，記敘應(yīng)該是概括的，描寫應(yīng)該是簡要的。3內(nèi)容重在說理，堅(jiān)持?jǐn)[事實(shí)、講道理?；疽螅?議論文主要包括三個(gè)要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證方法。論點(diǎn)是指需要證實(shí)的問題；論證是指闡述道理以理服人；論據(jù)就是用于論證的具有說服力的事實(shí)和證據(jù)。論點(diǎn)解決“證明什么”，論據(jù)解決“用什么來證明”，論證解決“怎樣證明”。

5、5觀點(diǎn)正確，論據(jù)充分，語言精練，論證合理，有嚴(yán)密的邏輯性。6語言應(yīng)該簡練、準(zhǔn)確；盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語。4議論文主要包括三個(gè)要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證方法。論在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)家長博客上你看到如下內(nèi)容第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文謀篇布局第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文黃金模板Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that _(表明自己的觀點(diǎn)). 黃金模板 Although high grades are an important factor in

6、evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. _ (舉例陳述自己的理由). Although high grades a So I suggest that _ (提出自己的具體建議). So I suggest that _第二步打造亮句，增色文章1而且，懲罰絕不是幫助他們身心發(fā)展

7、的明智選擇。Whats more, punishment isnt a wise choice of helping them grow up mentally and physically at all. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.第二步打造亮句，增色文章2因此，我建議你采取你朋友們的建議。Therefore, I advise you to take your friends advice. So I suggest th

8、at you take your friends advice. 2因此，我建議你采取你朋友們的建議。第三步串句成文，保證流暢Hi, TigerMom, What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university ad

9、mission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude 第三步串句成文，保證流暢should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents a

10、llows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.should never be ignored. There So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friend

11、s and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do. So I suggest that you 在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)家長博客上你看到如下內(nèi)容 作為一名中學(xué)生，平時(shí)你是否愿意和自己的老師交流？你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該是什么樣的？如何才能建立這種關(guān)系？請(qǐng)寫一篇120150詞的短文，就這一話題談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?作為一名中學(xué)生，平時(shí)你是否愿意和自己的老師注意：1可以使用一些具體的事例支持你的論點(diǎn)；2標(biāo)題自擬。_注意：參考范文： Love and Concern Make

12、 an Ideal Relationship Students are becoming unwilling to confess to their teachers because they are not equal in position and teachers lay too much emphasis on the study of the students.參考范文： But I am willing to share my inner thoughts with my teachers. They show love and concern for their students

13、 and are good listeners. I always find it easy to seek support and advice from them, from which I benefit and learn a lot. But I am willing to In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filled with love, care, understanding, and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends o