原創(chuàng)-Writing-(低年級寫作)-公開課一等獎?wù)n件

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5、me My Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.My Bedroom This is my bedrMy Bedroom

6、 This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedrMy Bedroom Th

7、is is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:語言啰嗦There is a bed, a sofa and a table in

8、the bedroom. My Bedroom This is my bedrMy Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:句式單一My Bedroom This is my bedrMy Bedroom

9、 This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedrMy Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a tab

10、le in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.Your idea:Whatsnext to the table? There is a chair.My Bedroom This is my bedrMy Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the be

11、droom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much. Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedrooWe can divide(分成)the passage into three parts. How can we make the passage better and better?(我們?nèi)绾文苁刮恼赂?)We can divid

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13、y are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much. Your idea:My Bedroom This is my bedrooMy Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV.

14、 I like my bedroom very much. Your idea:Beginning Body Ending My Bedroom This is my bedrooBeginningBodyEnding 總領(lǐng)全文引出話題分層描述詮釋主題總結(jié)全文深化主題What function does each part have?(文章各段的作用）BeginningBodyEnding 總領(lǐng)全文引出話題2. We can write a better beginning. How can we make the passage better and better?(我們?nèi)绾文苁刮恼赂?)

15、We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts. 2. We can write a better begin My Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like m

16、y bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence 主題句法Two common kinds of beginning My 2、Ask a question 提問式 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me!Two common kinds of beginning2、Ask a question 提問式 2、Ask a question 提問式Two common kinds of beginning1、Topic Sentence 主題句法2、Ask a q

17、uestion 提問式Two comm3. We can write a better ending. How can we make the passage better and better?(我們?nèi)绾文苁刮恼赂?)We can divide(分成)the passage into three parts. 2. We can write a better beginning. 3. We can write a better endin My Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the be

18、droom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see the pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.1、Topic Sentence -總結(jié)主題Three common kinds of ending My 2、Ask a question 提問式 My Bedroom . . Do you like my bedroom? Can you introduce y

19、ours to me?Three common kinds of ending2、Ask a question 提問式 3、Exclamatory Sentence 感嘆式 My Bedroom . . (1)What a nice bedroom I have! I like it very much. (2)How nice my bedroom is! I really like it.Three common kinds of ending3、Exclamatory Sentence 感嘆式 Three common kinds of ending 1、Topic Sentence -

20、總結(jié)主題2、Ask a question 提問式3、Exclamatory Sentence 感嘆式Three common kinds of ending 1 My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me! There is a bed, a sofa and a table in the bedroom. Whats next to the table? There is a chair. Where is the TV? Its on the table. Can you see t

21、he pictures? Yes, they are above the TV. How nice my bedroom is! I really like it. My My Bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a bed in the bedroom. There is a sofa in the bedroom. There is also a table in the bedroom. There is a chair next to the table. There is a TV on the table. There are two pictures above the TV. I like my bedroom very much.My Bedroom Do you want to look at my bedroom? Please come to see it with me! There is a bed, a sofa and a table in t