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1、(完整)專四作文輔導-圖表作文講解ppt(完整)專四作文輔導-圖表作文講解ppt主要輔導內(nèi)容模擬3圖表作文講解（含提綱）圖表作文概述（四種類型的圖表）圖表作文的結構（2類）圖表作文的開頭圖表作文的數(shù)據(jù)描述圖表作文的結尾幾個范文主要輔導內(nèi)容模擬3圖表作文講解（含提綱）?？?作文審題：Introduction: mini research project, bar chartBody: 圖表中的趨勢Conclusion（也許有未來行動方向？材料的附加信息可以用）?？?作文審題：縱軸：某年齡段參與慈善捐款的人口占本年齡段人口的比例橫軸：5個不同年齡組變量：兩個年份：1990年和2010年趨勢分析年份

2、比較參與慈善捐款的人口占總人口數(shù)的比例: 19902010年齡組比較（1）總體：參與慈善捐款的人口比例在不同年齡段有顯著差異。（2）兩年相比：與20年前相比，中青年人的捐款人口比例顯著下降，老年人的捐款人口比例略有上升?？v軸： Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the flow of traffic.這個圖表 描述了時間內(nèi)在地區(qū)對象的方面的信息。The main users of the Internet in Taiwan are young adults be

3、tween 16 and 30 years old.情況(數(shù)據(jù))在達到頂點，為60%。（3）bar chart柱狀圖-用來比較兩個以上數(shù)據(jù)的值There was a steady/gradual/slow/slight increase/rise in the number of from1990 to 2000.如果有比例差不多的，或比例相差特別懸殊的情況，可以提一下。題目只要求描述圖表類（見P6） Therefore, it is obvious that that the number of car accidents in Walton city declined in 1990.（2

4、）采用正式書面文體 （避免Lets look at, Let me show you, It shows us之類帶有口語性質(zhì)的描述（1）line graph線型圖-描述某事物的發(fā)展變化In conclusion, all the countries in the graph showed at least a 12 percent increase in employment rates of both men and women over the ten yeares.緊隨其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。（3）結尾：總結圖表的主要規(guī)律（1-2句）專四作文輔導:圖表作文In conclu

5、sion, all the countries in the graph showed at least a 12 percent increase in employment rates of both men and women over the ten yeares.there was a +幅度+名詞there was a +幅度+名詞提綱Introduction: mini research project, bar chartBody:Compared with 1990, there was a lower percentage of British people donatin

6、g money to charity in 2010. 舉例：1990年，捐款比例最小的年齡組17%，其他年齡組都超過30%，最高值42%。 2010年，捐款比例最小的年齡組7%，其他年齡組超過20%, 最高值39%。In general, the percentage of British people giving money to charity vary among different age groups. Compared with 1990, there is a significant decline of the percentage among three age grou

7、ps under 50, and only a slight rise of the percentage among two age groups over 50. 舉例：下降組的數(shù)據(jù)對比，上升組的數(shù)據(jù)對比Conclusion: 發(fā)現(xiàn)：The percentage of British population contributing money to charity is declining and the decline is found most significantly among the young and middle aged people. 建議：People should

8、be encouraged to participate more actively in charity. They could be suggested to donate food, clothes etc. if they have less money in possession. Second, new roads were builtLanguage Expression: 百分比1. X accounts for xx per cent of Y (總數(shù)) (也可用take up) X占Y的百分之xxE.g. Male respondents accounts for 48%

9、of the total respondents. Female respondents takes up 52% of the total respondents. 2. The percentage of X among Y is xx%. Y中X的含量是百分之xxE.g. The percentage of the 18-25-year-old group donating money to charity is 15% in 1990.3. The number of X is, accounting for xx per cent of Y. X值為，占Y的百分之xx The num

10、ber of smokers is 10 million, accounting for 6.2% of the entire population. Language Expression: 百分比1. X 比較On the top of the list is , which accounts for 60% of .占比重最高的是，占60%。2. At the bottom is , which accounts for 10% of .占比重最低的是，占10%。3. A is ranked/rated first, accounting for 60% of. It is follow

11、ed by B at 30% and C at 25%.A占最高比重，占的60%。緊隨其后的是占30%的B和占25%的C。比較On the top of the list is 變化趨勢-上升/增長、下降/減少1. The number of increased/rose+ suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeply from 1900 to 2000.在1900到2000間，的數(shù)量有了急劇的增長。2. There was a sudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial

12、/considerable/sharp/steep increase/rise in the number of from 1990 to 2000.在1990到2000間，的數(shù)量有了急劇的增長。3. The number of increased/rose steadily/gradually/slowly/slightly from 1990 to 2000.在1990到2000間，的數(shù)量在持續(xù)穩(wěn)定的增長。4. There was a steady/gradual/slow/slight increase/rise in the number of from1990 to 2000.在19

13、90到2000間，的數(shù)量在持續(xù)穩(wěn)定的增長。5. decrease/fall/drop; a decrease/drop/reduction/decline in the number of （可替換上述表明增長的詞）變化趨勢-上升/增長、下降/減少1. The number 變化趨勢-達到頂點1. The situation/figures reached/hit a peak/a high at 60% in .2. The situation/figures peaked at 60% in .情況(數(shù)據(jù))在達到頂點，為60%。3. The situation/figures bottom

14、ed out at 20% in .The situation/figures hit a trough at 20% in .情況(數(shù)據(jù))在達到最低點，為20%。變化趨勢-達到頂點圖表作文概況圖表作文要求對圖表相關的信息進行歸納，對其重點和主要趨勢進行匯報。圖表主要有四種 (圖例見P11-12)（1）line graph線型圖-描述某事物的發(fā)展變化（2）pie chart餅圖-描述一個總體的不同部分的比例（3）bar chart柱狀圖-用來比較兩個以上數(shù)據(jù)的值（4）table表格-用一行/多行單元格中的文本和數(shù)字展示數(shù)據(jù)的方式。圖表作文注意事項：（1）時態(tài)一致（根據(jù)圖表描述的事物的時間確定時

15、態(tài)，無特定時間的用一般現(xiàn)在時）（2）采用正式書面文體 （避免Lets look at, Let me show you, It shows us之類帶有口語性質(zhì)的描述（3）客觀描述圖表，邏輯條理清晰，不增加個人主觀猜想圖表作文概況圖表作文要求對圖表相關的信息進行歸納，對其重點和Line GraphPie ChartLine GraphPie ChartBar ChartPie ChartBar ChartPie Chart圖表作文結構分成兩大類:描述類和描述+分析建議類1. 題目只要求描述圖表類（見P6）（1）開頭：概述圖表的主題思想和總體特點（2句左右）（2）正文：用文字有條理地客觀描述圖表

16、傳遞的信息，并找出某種規(guī)律。（可以分成兩三段）（3）結尾：總結圖表的主要規(guī)律（1-2句）2. 題目要求描述并分和提建議的 (見P7)（1）開頭：概述圖表主題思想，描述數(shù)據(jù)的總體特點并用數(shù)據(jù)支持，根據(jù)題目要求提出個人觀點（3-4句）（2）正文：對個人觀點進行論述（3）結論：總結、提建議或方案（2句）圖表作文結構分成兩大類:描述類和描述+分析建議類1. 題目純描述類圖表作文 (此文字數(shù)不足，如果是純描述類作文，圖表應該比這個復雜，比如會有兩條線，此文只用來展示作文結構) (1) As is indicated in the line graph, the number of car acciden

17、ts in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990. (2) The first two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. After August the rate began to decline remarkably,

18、and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year. Therefore, it is obvious that the first eight months of 1990 witnessed a fluctuated increase in car accidents in Walton and it was followed by a trend of decline in car accidents in the last four months of the year.主題句/概述表格反映的內(nèi)容(5

19、)反映交通事故的變化情況(6)小結：總結表格數(shù)據(jù)反映的總趨勢純描述類圖表作文 (此文字數(shù)不足，如果是純描述類作文，圖表圖表描述+分析建議類作文 (1) According to the line graph, the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990. (2) From January to March of 1990, the car accidents increased from 22 to 32 but fell to 26 in June. From June on, t

20、he rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the year. Therefore, it is obvious that that the number of car accidents in Walton city declined in 1990. There are several

21、 reasons for the decline. First, a new traffic law was made and came into force. It provided August, when humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient and easily lead to car accidents, dropped steadily. Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the fl

22、ow of traffic. Finally, the city administration made great efforts to heighten peoples awareness of observing traffic rules. With all these new measures, Im sure the rate of car accidents in Walton city will go on falling this year.主題句 原因/措施一解釋措施一/次要輔助采取措施一后的結果原因/措施二原因/措施三(這部分的原因是根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容結合數(shù)據(jù)趨勢分析出來的)總

23、結：展望未來的情況圖表描述+分析建議類作文 (1) According t如何開頭：概述圖表主題思想和總體特點主題思想：根據(jù)圖表的標題和題干中的背景信息，改寫出這樣一句話： 這個圖表 描述了時間內(nèi)在地區(qū)對象的方面的信息。例如： (1) The table below shows social and economic indicators of four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. (2) The given table provides an overview of social and economi

24、c conditions from different aspects in four countries, namely, Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire in the year 1994. (3) The given table provides the information of social and economic conditions in four countries in the year 1994. (4) The pie chart describes the distribution of population in Beijing in t

25、he year 2016.這個圖表：The table/ pie chart/bar chart/line graph/bar chart/illustration/diagram描述：show, describe, offer an overview, present, compare（對比）, indicate信息：寬泛的：information，data，figures；具體的：percentage，distribution，proportion如何開頭：概述圖表主題思想和總體特點主題思想：根據(jù)圖表的標題如何開頭：概述圖表主題思想和總體特點2. 概述圖表的總體特點: 動詞+幅度 sth.

26、 experience a 名詞 there was a +幅度+名詞動詞：變化，波動：To change, fluctuate (波動)增加，上漲：To increase, climb, rise降低，減少：To decrease, drop, decline平穩(wěn)，不變：To remain unchanged, stable; to level off幅度：大幅-wildly劇烈, sharply急劇，greatly，大幅 小幅-slightly輕微, slowly緩慢，gradually逐漸，steadily穩(wěn)步，如何開頭：概述圖表主題思想和總體特點2. 概述圖表的總體特點開頭主題思想的常

27、用句型Itcanbeseenfromthetablethat由表格我們可以看出Thetableshowsthechangesinthenumberofovertheperiodfromto該表格展示了從到數(shù)據(jù)的變化Thetableprovidessomedataof該表格提供了有關的數(shù)據(jù)Ascanbeseenclearlyfromthetable,從表格中我們可以清楚地看出，Asis indicatedin the graph正如圖形所示As is shown in the chart正如圖表顯示的As is illustrated/presented in the diagram正如圖表顯示

28、開頭主題思想的常用句型Itcanbeseenfrom正文：抓住規(guī)律和重點，描述趨勢（參見沖擊波英語專業(yè)4級全新改革題型寫作P77-87）折線圖（通常橫軸是時間）：找最低點，最高點，找波動，上升，下降，平穩(wěn)等趨勢餅圖：如果分塊少于5塊，可以按照從大到小的順序依次說，如果分塊大于5塊，可以按照大、中，小、其他來介紹。如果有比例差不多的，或比例相差特別懸殊的情況，可以提一下。柱狀圖：比較相同、差異(1) 如果橫軸有明顯的時間推移的話，應連接柱子頂點，重在描述柱子的升降起伏，寫法類似于線狀圖。(2)如果無時間推移，則寫法和餅狀圖一樣。即按照各比較對象所占比例的高低寫，同時要注意各所占比例之間的比較。4

29、. 表格：最多、最少，總體變化趨勢等正文：抓住規(guī)律和重點，描述趨勢（參見沖擊波英語專業(yè)4級全新描述增減變化常用的句型Comparedwith, isstillincreasedbyThenumberofgrew/rosefromtoAnincreaseisshownin;thencameasharpincreaseofInthenumberremainsthesame/dropstoTherewasaveryslight(small/slow/gradual)rise/increasein1990.Therewasaverysteady(marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/dr

30、amatic)drop(decrease/decline/fall/reduction)in1998/comparedwiththatofyear)描述增減變化常用的句型Comparedwith, 結尾：It is clear thatIt is obvious thatIn shortIn conclusion.結尾：It is clear that備考建議看范文，熟悉各種圖表的圖例、橫軸縱軸的意義，熟悉書面語表達形式學習數(shù)據(jù)、百分比、比較級、最高級的一些相關表達法中間正文部分一定要注意邏輯順序和條理雅思的小作文是圖表題，可以看看雅思范文。備考建議看范文，熟悉各種圖表的圖例、橫軸縱軸的意義，

31、三根以上柱形且多種趨勢：應對這樣的柱形圖，我們可以先描寫最長的那根柱的數(shù)據(jù)，也可以將最長的2根柱的數(shù)據(jù)放在一起描寫。以下我們就來看一個例子：范文： The main users of the Internet in Taiwan are young adults between 16 and 30 years old. In 1998, they accounted for more than half of all users. In 1999 the number dropped slightly to 45%, but even in 2000 they were the biggest

32、 group. The second biggest group of users is aged between 31 and 50.They made up 41% in 1998, falling slightly to 37% in 2000. When combined with the 16-30 age group, over 94% of users in 1998 were between 16 and 50. However this number is dropping steadily as more children and older users log on. I

33、n 1999, the number of children online quadrupled from 2% to 8%, and it continued to increase in 2000. There were similar increases for older users, rising from 4% in 1998 to 10% in 2000. In summary, while adults between 16 and 50 still represent thegreat majority of Internet users in Taiwan, their s

34、hare is declining as more children and older users join the web.題干：The graph shows Internet Usage in Taiwan by Age Group, 1998-2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The graph shows changes in the age profile of Internet user

35、s in Taiwan between 1998 and 2000.三根以上柱形且多種趨勢：應對這樣的柱形圖，我們可以先描寫最橫軸為地點，交通工具等其他專有名詞：遇到這樣的情況，不管柱形有幾根，建議都可以按照長度從長寫到短，也可以先以描述總體趨勢作為突破口，如以下這個圖： The graph above show information of employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarize the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and mak

36、e comparisons where appropriate. The graph shows changes in employment rates in six countries between 1995 and 2005, for men and women.Overall more and more people of working age are employed, and there have been significant improvements for women, although they leg behind men in entering the workfo

37、rce. The most obvious trend in the graph is that women have lower employment rates in most of the countries in the graph.For example, in Australia in 1995, 57 percent of men could find work or retain a job, but only 27 percent of women. The difference was even bigger in New Zealand, with 60 percent

38、of women. Even in Switzerland and Iceland, slightly more men than women were in the job market. The second biggest trend in the graph is the improvement in employment between 1995 and 2005.In all countries shown, figures for both men and women improved. The biggest change was in the United Kingdom,

39、from 55 percent of men in 1995 to 73 percent over the ten years period. Furthermore, the increases in employment rates for women were much higher in New Zealand. The percentage of working women jumped from 25 percent to 42 percent, and in the United States from 45 percent to 61 percent over the decade. In conclusion, all the countries in the graph showed at least a 12 percent increase in employment rates of both men and women over the ten yeares. While men had relatively higher employment rate throughout the period, more and more women appear to be entering