概要寫作12-6月高考真題概要(課件)-高考英語作文新題型

1、 概要寫作文本內容與結構解讀寫作思路解讀表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達篇牛刀小試參考范文欣賞 概要寫作體裁：主題：結構：1.文本內容與結構解讀體裁：主題：結構：1.文本內容與結構解讀體裁：說明文主題： Praise結構：Para 1&2Para 3&4Para 51.文本內容與結構解讀體裁：說明文主題： Praise結構：Para 1&2Par閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy

2、 and Confident Kids, says, “Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think theyre building their childrens confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when give

3、n in a way thats insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents praise has put them. Still, dont go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like the

4、yre not good enough or that you dont care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments. So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, yo

5、u can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our childrens efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One

6、thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.” Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if hes out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome

7、 can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate (相稱的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.negative effets for lack of praise

8、negative effects of too mouch praise suggestionssuggestions閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。 Para.1: Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, “Weve gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be mor

9、e strict.” By giving kids a lot of praise, parents think theyre building their childrens confidence, when, in fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way thats insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay

10、 on top where their parents praise has put them.2. 寫作思路解讀Although parents think praise will build kidsconfidence, too much praise may result in opposite effects.（要點1） Para.1: Parents everywhere p2. 寫作思路解讀Para.2: Still, dont go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as d

11、amaging as giving too much. Kids will feel like theyre not good enough or that you dont care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments. Not giving enough praise can also be damaging to kids confidence and motivation.（要點2）2. 寫作思路解讀Para.2: Still, dont 2. 寫作思路解讀Para.3:

12、 So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. “We should especially recognize our

13、 childrens efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal,” says Donahue, author of Parenting Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. “One thing to remember is that its the process not the end product that matters.”Experts say that the quality of praise is

14、more important than the quantity and its the process not the end product that matters.（要點3）2. 寫作思路解讀Para.3: So what is th2. 寫作思路解讀Para.4: Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if hes out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether hi

15、s team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate (相稱的) to the amount of effort y

16、our child has put into it. Praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate to the amount of effort your child has put into it.（要點4）2. 寫作思路解讀Para.4: Your son may 2. 寫作思路解讀若將上述的所有要點連句成文，便得到了這樣一段概要： Although parents think praise will build kids confidence, too much praise may result

17、 in opposite effects. Not giving enough praise can also be damaging to kids confidence and motivation. Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity and its the process not the end product that matters. Praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate

18、to the amount of effort your child has put into it. (76 words)評點：該概要盡管覆蓋了文章的全部要點，但有多處表達直接引用原文，此外，有些要點之間缺乏連貫性。這些與概要寫作的評分標準要求相差甚遠。那么,我們該如何用自己的語言進行改寫，同時讓文章更準確精煉呢？2. 寫作思路解讀若將上述的所有要點連句成文，便得到了這樣一3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達本章節(jié)將以此文本的初寫概要為例聚焦積累“說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達”對于改寫概要寫作語段的重要性。Although parents think praise will bu

19、ild kids confidence, too much praise may result in opposite effects. Not giving enough praise can also be damaging to kids confidence and motivation. Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity and its the process not the end product that matters. Praise should be give

20、n on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate to the amount of effort your child has put into it.3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達本章節(jié)將以此文在這段概要中，學生若能掌握一些常見的替換表達，就可以很快地發(fā)現，上述文中加黑字體部分可以被替換。1.認為：think/ believe/ argue/ claim/ assume/ insist/ consider/ hold the view that2.促進/ 加強/ 提高：boost/ promote/ enhance/ improve

21、/ strengthen/ benefit/ contribute to3.導致：contribute to/ lead to/ result in/ contribute to/ bring about/ give rise to4.對.有害：harm/ impair/ hinder/ be detrimental/ be harmful/ do sb. no good5.對.有影響：exert/ have an influence/ effect/ impact on6.不足的：not enough/ lack of/ insufficient7.重要的：(adj.) important/

22、 significant/ vital/ essential (v.) matter/ count8.建議(應該)：Sb. be supposed to/ ought to/ be advised to do sth./ Its (high/ about) time that sb. should do/ did sth./ It is advised/ suggested that sb. (should) do sth.9.基于/ 依據/ 與一致：baseon/ match/ in line with/ according to/ on the basis of/ correspondin

23、g to3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達在這段概要中，學生若能掌握一些常見的替換表達，就可以很快地發(fā)然后，我們可以將這些句子串起來，連成一篇邏輯連貫，表達獨立的概要寫作：Although parents assume that praise will boost kids confidence, too much praise may give rise to detrimental influences. Lack of praise will impair kids confidence and motivation. Experts argue that the quali

24、ty of praise is more vital than the quantity and its the process not the end product that counts. It is also suggested that parents give praise on the basis of actual cases and kidsefforts.3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達然后，我們可以將這些句子串起來，連成一篇邏輯連貫，表達獨立的常用詞塊/句型的積累：（接上文）10.與.有聯系;與.有關：be associated with./ be rela

25、ted to./ be connected with./ be linked to11.對.負責：be responsible for./ take responsibility for/ be to blame12.深受歡迎: gain/ enjoy/ win growing/ great/ wide popularity13.有益的：be useful/ beneficial to / be of great benefit to.14.重視：value/ attach importance to/ lay emphasis on15.解決：solve/ deal with/ cope w

26、ith/ settle16.拒絕：reject/ refuse/ resist17.困難的：challenging/ tough/ difficult18.優(yōu)缺點：strengths and weaknesses / advantages and disadvantages19.在許多方面：in many ways/ aspects20.利用：use/ employ / make use of / take advantage of 21.盡力做某事：try ones best to do sth./ spare no effort to do/ make every effort to do

27、22.毫無疑問：theres no doubt that/ without doubt/ undoubtedly23.減輕壓力： reduce/ relieve/ ease peoples pressure24.事實上：actually/ in fact/ as a matter of fact/ virtually3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達常用詞塊/句型的積累：（接上文）3.表達微技能之說明議論類概常用詞塊/句型的積累：（接上文）25.成功做成某事：manage to do/ succeed in doing / make it26.各種各樣的：all kinds of/

28、 a variety of/ various+n.27.激發(fā)：inspire/ stimulate/ encourage28.越來越多：more and more/ an increasing number of29.描述現象(越來越流行,引起關注等)：It is becoming a common phenomenon.The phenomenon of.is gaining popularity. .is now a hot topic/ a big hit worldwide.The phenomenon that.has long confused/ puzzled scientist

29、s.30.未解決的問題是：. is a big problem waiting for us to deal with. .is still/ remains a problem to be solved. 31.采取措施做：take (various) measures/ steps/ action to do32.報告顯示/ 表明：A report/ research shows/ finds/ discovers/ indicates/ suggests/ says 33.某人做了一項實驗/ 研究：do/ conduct/ perform/ design/ carry out a res

30、earch/ an experiment 3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達常用詞塊/句型的積累：（接上文）3.表達微技能之說明議論類概常用詞塊/句型的積累：（接上文）34.某人同意： Sb. agree/ support that Sb. approve of sth./ be for sth./ be in favor of (doing) sth.35.某人反對： Sb. disagree/ challenge that Sb. argue against/ object to/ be against/ be opposed to (doing) sth./ disappro

31、ve of sth.36.不同人有不同的觀點：Different people have different opinions about Peoples attitudes/ opinions towards vary from person to person.People hold different opinions/ views towards 37.（表原因）由于：because of/ due to/ as a result of/ as a consequence of/ owing to/ thanks to & because/ since/ as+句子（表結果）所以：as

32、 a result/ consequence/ consequently/ therefore/thus38.（表并列）而且：additionally/ in addition/ moreover/ furthermore/ more importantly39.（表轉折）然而：however/ nevertheless/ unfortunately/ unexpectedly/ whereas/ nonetheless盡管：1) despite ./ in spite of+n./ 短語 2) although/ though+句子40.（表不同）instead/ unlike/ diffe

33、rent from/ conversely/ while/ on the opposite/ on the contrary（表相同）like/ in the same way/ in a like manner/ similarly/ likewise/ equally important3.表達微技能之說明議論類概要寫作中的高頻表達概要寫作1.2 6月高考真題概要（課件）-高考英語作文新題型概要寫作1.2 6月高考真題概要（課件）-高考英語作文新題型常用詞塊/句型的積累：（接上文）3.表達微技能之說明議論類概改寫下述句子中斜體字部分。1. People have different opi

34、nions towards punishing children._2.Playing in the dirt improves kids immune system._3.A report has found technology benefits family bonds because it takes members closer._4.牛刀小試Different people have different opinions about punishing children. / Peoples attitudes towards punishing children vary fro

35、m person to person./ People hold different opinions towards punishing children.Playing in the dirt boosts/ promotes/ enhances/ strengthens/ benefits/ contributes to kids immune system.A report/ research shows/ discovers/ indicates/ suggests/ says that technology is beneficial to family bonds as/sinc

36、e it takes members closer.概要寫作1.2 6月高考真題概要（課件）-高考英語作文新題型概要寫作1.2 6月高考真題概要（課件）-高考英語作文新題型改寫下述句子中斜體字部分。4.牛刀小試Different p參考范文欣賞1Contrary to the common assumption that much praise will boost childrens confidence, overpraise tend to have negative effects (point 1), while lack of praise would also harm childrens self-trust and motivation (point 2). Thus, experts suggest that parents lay more emphasis on the quality of their praise, rather than the quantity, and value their childrens efforts, rather than the results (point 3). Meanwhile, praise for kids need to be based on