高中英語(yǔ)：國(guó)畫(huà)展仿寫(xiě)之分析和下水作文

1、02-國(guó)畫(huà)展仿寫(xiě)之分析和下水作文假定你是李華，你校最近舉辦了主題為uGrowing up with the Red Songsv的校園音樂(lè)會(huì)。請(qǐng)你為校英文 報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn).音樂(lè)會(huì)過(guò)程.同學(xué)們的感受注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，可是行文連貫。審題：（此文當(dāng)做對(duì)浙江卷國(guó)畫(huà)展作文的仿寫(xiě)）此文為報(bào)道，時(shí)態(tài)已一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱：第三人稱為主；尾段已第一人稱為主首段：點(diǎn)名音樂(lè)會(huì)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)主體段：音樂(lè)會(huì)過(guò)程，這也是對(duì)于同學(xué)來(lái)講最難的局部，就是不知道寫(xiě)什么。結(jié)合浙江卷國(guó)畫(huà)展的寫(xiě)法, 思考音樂(lè)會(huì)應(yīng)該是怎樣的?？蓞⒖嘉覀儗W(xué)校平時(shí)組織的文藝晚會(huì)，無(wú)非就是主持人，演員兩類 人，而

2、這些人無(wú)非就是老師和學(xué)生，由他們來(lái)表演節(jié)目，此為共同點(diǎn)一；共同點(diǎn)二就是一般開(kāi) 頭和結(jié)束的時(shí)候都會(huì)有大合唱，可以考慮；而區(qū)別的是：常規(guī)的文藝晚會(huì)各種形式都有，這個(gè) 音樂(lè)會(huì)要局限于“紅歌”，既然是“紅歌”，那就只能是彈唱或者跳了，圍繞這幾點(diǎn)去展開(kāi)， 思路就慢慢成形了。推薦寫(xiě)法：1）.音樂(lè)會(huì)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾；2）.音樂(lè)會(huì)中尾段：同學(xué)們的感受。注意：這段很容易寫(xiě)自己的感受，那么審題就出現(xiàn)偏差了！語(yǔ)言組織：.星期六晚上，一場(chǎng)已“Growing with the Red Songs”為主題音樂(lè)會(huì)在學(xué)校禮堂舉行。A concert themed Growing with the Red Songs/with it

3、s theme Growing with the Red Songs” was held in the school hall on Saturday night.（此句90%以上使用our school作主語(yǔ)，用主動(dòng)，個(gè)人認(rèn)為被動(dòng)會(huì)更好）.音樂(lè)會(huì)以老師們的合唱春天的故事開(kāi)始。期間來(lái)自于各個(gè)班級(jí)的學(xué)生演唱或演奏了人們耳熟能詳 的樂(lè)曲。The concert began with a chorus sung by teachers-the Story of the Spring, during which the students from different classes sang or p

4、erfbmied many songs that were familiar to people.音樂(lè)會(huì)最后，當(dāng)合唱我愛(ài)你，中國(guó)，臺(tái)下的同學(xué)們也伴隨著動(dòng)人的旋律，滿懷激情地 放聲歌唱，At the end of the concert, the students off stage sang I Love You, China with great passion/passionately to the charming music while the chorus rang out.音樂(lè)會(huì)很受學(xué)生們的歡迎，許多人說(shuō)，這真的是一場(chǎng)耳朵的盛宴。The concert gained great p

5、opularity with the students. The majority of them said that it was really a great feat fbr the ears.音樂(lè)會(huì)不但讓同學(xué)們更好地了解了中國(guó)的歷史和成長(zhǎng)歷程，還弘揚(yáng)了中國(guó)優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)文化，培養(yǎng)了學(xué) 生的愛(ài)國(guó)精神。Not only did the concert allow students to have a better understanding of the history and development of China, but it also promoted the splendid tr

6、aditional culture and cultivated their patriotism.結(jié)合上面分析和理解，屠屠老師下水作文：A concert themed Growing with the Red Songs/with its theme Growing with the Red Songs was held in the school hall on Saturday night.The concert began with a chorus sung by teachers-the Story of the Spring, during which the students

7、 from different classes sang or performed many songs that were familiar to people. At the end of the concert, the students off stage sang I Love You, China with great passion/passionately to the charming music while the chorus rang out.The concert gained great popularity with the students. The major

8、ity of them said that it was really a great feast fbr the ears. Not only did the concert allow students to have a better understanding of the history and development of China, but it also promoted the splendid traditional culture and cultivated their patriotism.參考例文Our school held a concert themed Z

9、/Growing with the Red Songs in the school hall last Sunday.The concert began at 4:00pm. There was not an empty seat in the hall. First, a group of young teachers sang the well-known red song “The Eat is Red, their singing was full of feelings and really touched my heart. Then students from different

10、 class played a few red songs and gave some creative performances. We finished the concert with the song Ode to the Motherland.Throughout the concert, the atmosphere inside the hall was exciting and encouraging. While we watched and listened, we felt proud of being Chinese and we new out country wou

11、ld become stronger and more beautiful.今日作業(yè)仿寫(xiě)：假定你是李華，上周你校舉辦了中國(guó)古典音樂(lè)演奏會(huì)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1,時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；.演奏內(nèi)容；.音樂(lè)會(huì)反響。注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，可是行文連貫。A Chinese Classical Music Concertwas held in the school hall on Saturday night.The concert was really popular with the students, Many said that they would pass on

12、the traditional music and look forward to the next music feast.A Chinese classical music concert was held in the school hall on Saturday night.（被動(dòng)比主動(dòng) 好）Many masterpieces of ancient musicians（of+名詞作后置定語(yǔ)）,such as High Mountain and Flowing water and The Spring Snow were played by a famous band. The stu

13、dents present felt the mountain, the water; the winter snow the silk bamboo and the endless call of life flowing in the air at the concert. Additionally, students from different classes also performed music that was familiar to people.The concert gained great popularity with the students, especially those who love Chinese classical music. It was really a great f