初中 初一 英語7BU Writing：A rescue story 7B U3 Wrting課件

Unit3Writing:ARescueStory 深圳市?崗區(qū)百合外國語學(xué)校

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yourcreativeideas

withus!!!Winnersgetawards!!!Whatisarescuestory?rescue/?reskju?/v.tosavesb/sthfromadangerousorharmfulsituationn.anattempttosavesomeonefromadangerousorunpleasantsituation (inastory/movie)akindofaction-orientedplot

?adangeroussituation

?savesomebody/something

?action-oriented(動作型的)Step1：Preparation?textbook

?apieceofpaper

?apen

?adictionaryFolloweverystep！1.Introduction2.Beginning3.Middle4.End1.Introduction2.Beginning3.Middle4.EndARescueStory2.Beginning1.Introduction3.Middle 4.EndStep2：IntroductionCharacter(s)1.Characters

thepeopleoranimalsTimethestoryisabout2.SettingPlace whereandwhenthestorytakesplace1.Introduction?Characters

?SettingExample Yourstory?Characters:

MaryandKevin

MrsSmithandherdog,Jimmy?Characters:

??Setting:

Time:lastyear,holidayPlace:Mountain,?Setting:

Time:?

Place:?MrsSmith’shouseStep3：Plot(BME)

Theplottellsuswhathappensinthestoryandtheorderithappensin.Beginning?thestartofthestory?catchreaders’attentionMiddle?theeventsinthemiddlepart?thedangeroussituationandtheproblemEnd?whathappenstothecharacters intheend

?thesolutionMB E2.Beginning?thestartofthestory?catchreaders’attentionExampleYourstoryMaryandKevinclimbedthemountainandcouldn’tfindtheirwayinthesnow.3.Middle?theeventsinthemiddlepart

?thedangeroussituationandtheproblemExampleYourstoryMaryandKevincoulddonothingbutwaitedforhelp.Theyfellasleep.MrsSmithandJimmylookedforthem.4.End?whathappenstothecharactersintheend?thesolutionExampleMaryandKevinwokeupandshoutedout.MrsSmithandJimmyfoundthem.Theywentbacktogether.YourstoryStep4：Action

Rescueisakindofaction-oriented(動作型的)plotinstories.VerbsInsuccession

(連續(xù)地)2.Beginning3.Middle4.EndExampleclimbthemountainask/sayhearwakeupsitdownshoutstarttosnowwaitforhelpsee,say,bark(not)findtheirwayfallasleepgobacklookfor/findhavedinnerYourstoryStep5：Details

Readandcompare:Whichversiondoyouprefer?JohnsaidCharlie

washisguidedog.DialoguesCharliebarked.JohnwokeupandfoundSmallmomentsthehotelwasonfire.Example?Yourstory?Dialogues:Dialogues:1.M:“Whatshouldwedo?”?K:“Nothing.Wehavesomefood.Let’ssitdownandwait.?Smallmoments:2.M&K:“Help!Help!”3.S:“Jimmyledmealltheway?here.”M&K:“Thankyou,MrsSmith,andthankyoutoo,Jimmy!”?Smallmoments:Changesinweatherandtime:

coldanddark

Changesinemotion:scaredStep6：SentencesandConnectionsNow,it’stimetochangetheideasintosentences.Then,wecanuseconnectingwordstoconnectsentencesandparagraphs.Connectingwords?Beginning: Itstartedwhen…,ontheweekend,inthe evening,onthemorningofthesecondday,etc.?Middle:?End:Next,then,inthemeantime,atthesametime,allofasudden,suddenly,laterthatday,afterawhile,soon,whilethey…,etc.Atlast,intheend,finally,then,afterwards,etc.ARescueStory2.BeginningConnectingwords?Plot ?Beginning?Action ?Middle?Details ?End1.Introduction3.Middle?Characters?Plot4.End?SettingTimeandPlace?Plot?Action ?Action?Details ?DetailsStep7：EditingandProofreading(校對)AkeytocatchingerrorsgeneralspecificInthesnowLastyear,MaryandKevinwentonaholiday.TheystayedatMrsSmith’shouseatthebottomofamountain.Onthemorningofthesecondday,theydecidedtoclimbthemountaindespitethedarkcloud.Afterhoursofclimbing,theywereabouttoreachthetop.Suddenly,itstartedtosnowandgotdark.Anditwaswindy!MaryandKevinwerescared.Theycouldn’tfindtheirwayhome!“Whatshouldwedo?”askedMary.“Nothing.Wehavesomefood,”saidKevin.“Let’ssitdownandwait.”Itgotcolderintheeveningandtheyfellasleep.Inthemeantime,MrsSmithwasworriedaboutMaryandKevin.SoshesaidtoJimmy,“Goodboy!Go!Let’sfindthem!”Aftersometime,Kevinheardsomenoise.HewasexcitedandwokeMaryup.“Wakeup,Mary!Someoneiscoming!We’resaved!”“Help!Help!”Theyshoutedtogether.SoontheyheardMrsSmith,“Thereyouare!”“Howdidyoufindus,MrsSmith?”askedMary.“Jimmyledmeallthewayhere,”MrsSmithsaid.“Thankyou,MrsSmith,andthankyoutoo,Jimmy!”saidMaryandKevin.Jimmybarkedhappily.ThentheyallwentbacktoMrsSmith’shousetohavedinner.Step8：PresentingandPublishingThismustbeanexcellentrescuestory!Shareitwithyourfriends.Beproudofyourself!SummaryStep1：Preparation Step2：Introduction Step3：Plot(BM