八年級(jí)上冊(cè)Unit-8寫(xiě)作課件

Unit8Howdoyoumakeabananamilkshake?(writing)112021Unit8HowdoyoumakeabananaDeliciousfood(美食)22021Deliciousfood(美食FirstpeelSecond,cutupNext,put…inThen,pour…intoAfterthat,turnonFinally,drinkHowcanwemakeabananamilkshake?abananamilkshake32021FirstpeelHowcanwemaYunnanricenoodles42021Yunnanricenoodles42021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenoodles?

（怎樣制作云南米線？從文中找出原材料吧）chickenLettucechickensoupricenoodleseggrelish（佐料）Ingredients(原料):52021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenSteps(閱讀短文找出米線制作過(guò)程）

Putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.

Washthelettuceandcutitup.Cutthechickenintopieces.Makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.FirstNextThenThenFinally62021Steps(閱讀短文找出米線制作過(guò)程）PuttheriYunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Beginning開(kāi)頭Ending結(jié)尾3a72021YunnanRiceNoodlesBeginningOutline提綱Steps步驟Topic話題YunnanRiceNoodlesMainpart正文InYunnan,manypeopleeat…Now,it’stimetoenjoy…Ingredients原料First,wash…cut…upNext,cut…into…Then,make…Then,cook…Finally,put…into…

ricenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuce…Beginning開(kāi)頭

Ending結(jié)尾82021OutlineSteps步驟Topic話題MainparH owtomake…目標(biāo)：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作技巧完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。Doyouknowhowtomakeotherfood?Canyouwritetherecipe(食譜）92021H owtomake…目標(biāo)：Doyouknowho寫(xiě)作第一步Howcanwemakeourwritingperfect?(怎樣才能使我們的寫(xiě)作更完美?）？102021寫(xiě)作第一步Howcanwemakeourwriti第一步列列舉出文中涉及的具體信息1Whatfooddoyouwanttomake?Iwanttomake______.2Whydoyoulikethefood?Because__________3Whatingredientsdoyouneed?Ineed_______.4Howcanyoumakeit?First,___.Next,____.Then,____Afterthat,____.Finally,____List

112021第一步列1Whatfooddoyouwantt第二步變變換句式Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!It’stimetoenjoy…Let’senjoy…/Wecanenjoy…change122021第二步變Now,it’stimetoenjoy

1添首尾句/段首句In…,weusuallyhave…尾句It’stimetoenjoy…/Let’senjoy第三步添add132021第三步添add132021

添過(guò)渡句Tomakethisspecialdeliciousfood,weneedto…添過(guò)渡詞First，next,then,afterthat,finally142021142021YunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Topic話題過(guò)渡句過(guò)渡詞152021YunnanRiceNoodlesTopic話題過(guò)渡句過(guò)檢查人稱

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第四步查自查和互查check162021第四步查check162021列1變2添3查4書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧同義句式亮點(diǎn)句式添過(guò)渡詞添首尾句/段查人稱查時(shí)態(tài)查句法查詞數(shù)What…How…Why…172021列1變2添3查4書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧同義句式添過(guò)渡詞查人稱WhaWriting(話題作文）我們常吃面條作為早餐，營(yíng)養(yǎng)又健康。結(jié)合云南米線的制作過(guò)程，寫(xiě)一篇西紅柿雞蛋面制作過(guò)程的文章。要求書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，內(nèi)容全面，80詞左右。小提示（列出提綱）Yourwritingwillbeeasierifyouwriteanoutline（提綱）

first.先列出提綱會(huì)讓你的寫(xiě)作更容易。182021Writing(話題作文）小提示（列出提綱）182021Beginning開(kāi)頭Mainpart正文Ending:結(jié)尾Ingredients原料Steps步驟First…Next…Then…Afterthat…Finally…

Forbreakfast,weusuallyeat....Onetomato,twoeggs,somenoodles,salt,waterandcoriander(香菜）Now,it’stimetotaste…/Let’senjoy….Keywords(關(guān)鍵詞):wash,cutup,put...in,addcook,Topic:TomatoandEggNoodlesOutline提綱192021Beginning開(kāi)頭Mainpart正文Ending:TomatoandEggNoodles__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________小提示：（查）完成寫(xiě)作后要記得檢查喲！檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、內(nèi)容、句法結(jié)構(gòu)202021TomatoandEggNoodles___作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一檔12---15分書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，詞數(shù)符合要求二檔9---11分書(shū)寫(xiě)較工整，要點(diǎn)基本齊全，語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)較完整，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤不影響意義表達(dá)，詞數(shù)基本符合要求三檔5---8分書(shū)寫(xiě)不夠工整，要點(diǎn)不齊全，語(yǔ)篇結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)單一，錯(cuò)誤較多，詞數(shù)不足50四檔0-4分只能寫(xiě)出與所要求內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些詞匯，詞數(shù)不足20212021作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)Goodmethodwillletusstudybetter.（好方法會(huì)讓我們學(xué)習(xí)事半功倍）Yourwritingwillbebetterandbetter.Comeon!222021GoodmethodwillletusstudySummary(總結(jié))Four-stepWritingStrategyishelpful.StepsTopicBeginningMainpartEndingIngredientsFirst,…Next,…Then,…Finally,……232021Summary(總結(jié))Four-stepWritingS1perfect(完善)yourwritingafterclass.2Makesomefoodforyourfamilyandwritedowntherecipe2420211perfect(完善)yourwritingaft252021252021Unit8Howdoyoumakeabananamilkshake?(writing)1262021Unit8HowdoyoumakeabananaDeliciousfood(美食)272021Deliciousfood(美食FirstpeelSecond,cutupNext,put…inThen,pour…intoAfterthat,turnonFinally,drinkHowcanwemakeabananamilkshake?abananamilkshake282021FirstpeelHowcanwemaYunnanricenoodles292021Yunnanricenoodles42021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenoodles?

（怎樣制作云南米線？從文中找出原材料吧）chickenLettucechickensoupricenoodleseggrelish（佐料）Ingredients(原料):302021HowcanwemakeYunnanricenSteps(閱讀短文找出米線制作過(guò)程）

Putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.

Washthelettuceandcutitup.Cutthechickenintopieces.Makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.FirstNextThenThenFinally312021Steps(閱讀短文找出米線制作過(guò)程）PuttheriYunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Beginning開(kāi)頭Ending結(jié)尾3a322021YunnanRiceNoodlesBeginningOutline提綱Steps步驟Topic話題YunnanRiceNoodlesMainpart正文InYunnan,manypeopleeat…Now,it’stimetoenjoy…Ingredients原料First,wash…cut…upNext,cut…into…Then,make…Then,cook…Finally,put…into…

ricenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuce…Beginning開(kāi)頭

Ending結(jié)尾332021OutlineSteps步驟Topic話題MainparH owtomake…目標(biāo)：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作技巧完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。Doyouknowhowtomakeotherfood?Canyouwritetherecipe(食譜）342021H owtomake…目標(biāo)：Doyouknowho寫(xiě)作第一步Howcanwemakeourwritingperfect?(怎樣才能使我們的寫(xiě)作更完美?）？352021寫(xiě)作第一步Howcanwemakeourwriti第一步列列舉出文中涉及的具體信息1Whatfooddoyouwanttomake?Iwanttomake______.2Whydoyoulikethefood?Because__________3Whatingredientsdoyouneed?Ineed_______.4Howcanyoumakeit?First,___.Next,____.Then,____Afterthat,____.Finally,____List

362021第一步列1Whatfooddoyouwantt第二步變變換句式Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!It’stimetoenjoy…Let’senjoy…/Wecanenjoy…change372021第二步變Now,it’stimetoenjoy

1添首尾句/段首句In…,weusuallyhave…尾句It’stimetoenjoy…/Let’senjoy第三步添add382021第三步添add132021

添過(guò)渡句Tomakethisspecialdeliciousfood,weneedto…添過(guò)渡詞First，next,then,afterthat,finally392021142021YunnanRiceNoodlesInYunnan,manypeopleeatricenoodlesforbreakfast,andevenforlunchanddinner.Tomakethisspecialfood,youneedtohavericenoodles,chickensoup,chicken,lettuceandeggs.(Ofcourse,youcanalsohaveotherthingslikefishanddifferentvegetables.)First,washthelettuceandcutitup.Next,cutthechickenintopieces.Then,makethechickensoupveryhot,over100℃.Then,cooktheeggs,meatandlettuceinthepotofhotsoup,onebyone.Finally,putthericenoodlesintothesoup.Now,it’stimetoenjoythericenoodles!Topic話題過(guò)渡句過(guò)渡詞402021YunnanRiceNoodlesTopic話題過(guò)渡句過(guò)檢查人稱

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第四步查自查和互查check412021第四步查check162021列1變2添3查4書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧同義句式亮點(diǎn)句式添過(guò)渡詞添首尾句/段查人稱查時(shí)態(tài)查句法查詞數(shù)What…How…Why…422021列1變2添3查4書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧同義句式添過(guò)渡詞查人稱WhaWriting(話題作文）我們常吃面條作為早餐，營(yíng)養(yǎng)又健康。結(jié)合云南米線的制作過(guò)程，寫(xiě)一篇西紅柿雞蛋面制作過(guò)程的文章。要求書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，內(nèi)容全面，80詞左右。小提示（列出提綱）Yourwritingwillbeeasierifyouwriteanoutline（提綱）

first.先列出提綱會(huì)讓你的寫(xiě)作更容易。432021Writing(話題作文）小提示（列出提綱）182021Beginning開(kāi)頭Mainpart正文Ending:結(jié)尾Ingredients原料Steps步驟First…Next…Then…Afterthat…Finally…

Forbreakfast,weusuallyeat....Onetomato,twoeggs,somenoodles,salt,waterandcoriander(香菜）Now,it’stimetotaste…/Let’senjoy….Keywords(關(guān)鍵詞):wash,cutup,put...in,addcook,Topic:TomatoandEggNoodlesOutline提綱442021Beginning開(kāi)頭Mainpart正文Ending:TomatoandEggNoodles_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________