六級寫作課件

寫作資源庫一、寫作技能二、常見錯誤分析三、標點符號的使用四、提綱式作文五、段首句作文六、圖表作文七、應用文八、校園生活九、交通旅游十、環(huán)境氣候十一、體育影視十二、人物描寫十三、文化風俗十四、日常生活十五、職業(yè)工作十六、社會生活十七、情感話題十八、節(jié)日祝福十九、勵志格言二十、寫作常用句型二十一、銜接詞寫作資源庫、寫作技能W1.SentenceWriting句子寫作Producingacompletethoughtbyasimplesentenceacomplicatedsentence1.2Ebinationb.contractionexpansiontransitionW2.ParagraphWriting段落寫作WritingatopicsentenceDevelopingthetopicsentencethroughexamplescauseandeffectcomparisonandcontrastprocessdefinitionanalogyclassificationcombinedmethodParagraphunityParagraphcoherenceW3.PassageWriting成段文章的寫作GuidedwritingParaphrasingOutliningSummarizingInformationtransferDescriptionNarrationExpositionArgumentationW4.LetterWriting寫信Writingpersonalletters4.2WritingbusinesslettersW5.AbstractWriting寫摘要W6.Note-taking記筆記W7.FreeComposition無提示寫作二、常見錯誤分析.不一致(Disagreements)所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，它還包括了數的不一致、時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等。［例］Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.［剖析］one是第三人稱單數，因而本句的have應改為has;同理，want應改為wants.本句是典型的主謂不一致。［改為］Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)..修飾語錯位(MisplacedModifiers)英語與漢語不同，同一個修飾語置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化。對于這一點，中國考生往往沒有引起足夠的重視，因而造成了不必要的誤解。［例］Heisahandsomeman;hehasawideforehead,astraightnose,andlongbrownhairwithglasses.［剖析］withglasses位置不當，容易引起誤解。從修飾關系上來看，它應該修飾longbrownhair,這樣的話，意思就成了“戴眼鏡的褐色長發(fā)”，顯然不恰當。［改為］Heisahandsomemanwithglasses;hehasawideforehead,astraightnose,andlongbrownhair..句子不完整(SentenceFragments)在口語中，交際雙方可借助手勢、語氣、上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是書面語就不同了，句子結構不完整會令意思表達不清，這種情況常常發(fā)生在主句寫完以后，作者又想加些補充說明時發(fā)生。［例］Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.［剖析］本句后半部分“forexamplebyTV,radio,newsp叩erandsoon.”不是一個完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語，不能獨立成句。［改為］Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper..懸垂修飾語(DanglingModifiers)所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關系混亂不清。［例1］Attheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.［剖析］這句中attheageoften只點出10歲時，但沒有說明“誰”10歲時.按一般推理不可能是mygrandfather,如果把這個懸垂修飾語修改得更明確?點，全句就不那么費解了。［改為］WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.［例2］Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.［剖析］句中不定式短語“todowellincollege”的邏輯主語不清楚。［改為］Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades..詞性誤用(MisuseofPartofSpeech)“詞性誤用”常表現為：介詞當動詞用；形容詞當副詞用；名詞當動詞用等。［例］Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.［剖析］negative系形容詞，誤作動詞。［改為］Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney..指代不清(AmbiguousReferenceofPronouns)指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關系不清，或者前后所用的代詞不?致。［＜列1］Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.［剖析］讀完上面這一句話，讀者無法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結婚，誰將當伴娘。如果把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對象加以明確，意思就一目了然了。［改為］Marywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.［例2］Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.［剖析］句中人稱代詞we和反身代詞yourself指代不?致。［改為］Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves..融合句(FusedSentence)融合句指的是兩個或兩個以上的句子在?起使用，沒有標點符號將它們隔開，也沒有連詞將它們連接起來。糾正這種病句的方法仍然是從邏輯關系上對其進行分析，或者對原句的結構作適當的調整，或者給原句加上適當的標點符號。如：［例1］AtfirstIwonderedifIshouldspeaktohersheseemedsoabsorbedinherthoughts.［剖析］本句中有Ishouldspeaktoher和sheseemedsoabsorbedinherthoughts是兩個具有獨立主謂結構和完整意思的句子，應該把它們用句號分開或用連詞連接起來。［改為］SheseemedsoabsorbedinherthoughtsthatatfirstIwonderedifIshouldspeaktoher.［例2］IenteredthehouseIsmeltsomethingburning.［剖析］同例1-一樣，本句中的Ienteredthehouse和Ismeltsomethingburning也是兩個具有獨立主謂結構和完整意思的句子，應該把它們用句號分開或用連詞連接起來。［改為］IsmeltsomethingburningwhenIenteredthehouse..措詞毛病(TroublesinDiction)措詞是指在特定的句子中如何適當地選用詞語的問題。［例］Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsomakespollution.［剖析1顯然,本句把obstacles“障礙”，“障礙物”誤作substance“物質”了。另外“theincreasinguse(不斷增加的使用)”應改為“abusiveuse(濫用)”。［改為］Theabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution..累贅(Redundancy)言以簡潔為貴，寫句子沒有一個多余的詞，寫段落沒有一個不必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組，能用詞組的不用從句或句子。［例1］Inspileofthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.［剖析］本句的**thefactthatheislazy"系同謂語從句，用在此處，使句子顯得較為復雜。［改為］Inspiteofhislaziness,Ilikehim.［例2］Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.［剖析］整個句子可以大大簡化。［改為］Diligentandcaringpeopleusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed..不連貫(Incoherence)不連貫是指一個句子前言不對后語，或是結構上不暢通。［例］Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.［剖析］Thefreshwater與逗號后的it不連貫。It與things在數方面不一致。［改為］Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld..綜合性語言錯誤(ComprehensiveMisusage)所謂“綜合性語言錯誤”，是指除了上述10種錯誤以外，還有諸如時態(tài)、語態(tài)、標點符號、大小寫等方面的錯誤。［例］Today,Moneytoeverybodyisveryimportance,our'seat,cloth,live,goetc.alldependonmoney,andpeoplejointoworkitforthemoney.［剖析］句中的第?個Money的首字母應小寫：our本身為物主代詞，'s多余；eat,live和go為動詞,不能用物主代詞來修飾；work意為“工作”時為不及物動詞，后面不能直接跟賓語。［改為］Today,moneyisveryimportanttomanypeople.Wedependonmoneytoprovidethedailynecessitiesoflife,suchasfood,clothing,shelter,andtransportation,andweworkinordertoearnthemoney.三、標點符號的使用句號Period［.］1)用以表示一個句子的結束：HockeyisapopularsportinCanada.ThefederalgovernmentisbasedinOttawa.2)用在縮寫中：B.C.(BritishColumbia)isaprovincelocatedontheWestCoast.Dr.BethunewasaCanadianwhoworkedinChina.Thecompanyislocatedat888BaySt.inToronto.Itis4:00p.m.inHalifaxrightnow.問號QuestionMark［?］在句子的結尾使用問號衣示是直接疑問句：HowmanyprovincesarethereinCanada?注意：在間接疑問句結尾不要加問號：Theteacheraskedtheclassaquestion.Donotaskmewhy.嘆號ExclamationMark[!]在句子的結尾使用嘆號表示驚訝、興奮等情緒:WewontheStanleyCup!Theforestisonfire!逗號Comma[,]1）句子中的停頓：Therefore,weshouldwritealettertotheprimeminister.2）在疑問句中引出說話人：“Icancometoday,vshesaid,“butnottomorrow.3）排列三個或以上的名詞：Onlario,Quebec,andB.C.arethethreebiggestprovinces.4）引出定語從句：EmilyCarr,whowasbornin1871,wasagreatpainter.單引號Apostrophe[']1）表示所有：ThisisDavid'scomputer.Thesearetheplayer'sthings,（thingsthatbelongtotheplayer）注意：對于復數形式的名詞，只加Thesearetheplayers'things,（thingsthatbelongtotheplayers）2）縮寫：Idon'tknowhowtofixit.引號QuotationMarks直接引出某人說的話：Theprimeministersaid,“Wewillwintheelection.^^“Icancometoday,“shesaid,“butnotlomorrow.”冒號Colon[:]1）弓I出一系列名詞：Therearethreepositionsinhockey:goalie,defense,andforward.2）引出一個較長的引語:Theprimeministersaid:uWewillfight.Wewillnotgiveup.Wewillwinthenextelection/'分號Semicolon[;]1）將兩個相關的句子連接起來:Thefestivalisverypopular;peoplefromallovertheworldcomehereeachyear.2）和逗號,同使用引出--系列名詞：ThethreebiggestcitiesinCanadaareToronto,Ontario;Montreal,Quebec;andVancouver,B.C.破折號Dash[—]1）在一個句子前作總結：Mild,wet,andcloudy—thesearethecharacteristicsofweatherinVancouver.2）在?個句子的前面或后面加入額外的注釋：Thechildren——Pierre,Laura,andAshley—wenttothestore.MostCanadians—butnotall—votedinthelastelection.3）表示某人在說話過程中被打斷：Thewomansaid,llIwanttoask—“whentheearthquakebegantoshaketheroom.10,連字符Hyphen[-]1）連接兩個單詞：sweet-smellingfire-resistant2）連接前綴和單詞：anti-Canadianon-contact3）在數字中使用：one-quartertwenty-three下面的第四~七部分是按照寫作形式對不同文體的作文進行的總結，便于考生根據文體需要來調用相關的詞匯、句子、知識內容以及利用其中給出的若干練筆題H進行實際寫作練習。四、提綱式作文（一）比較類作文I.常用句式與結構Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.AandBhaveseveralpointsincommon.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.AandBdifferinseveralways.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.ThesameistrueofB.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...Nowadays,isplayingamoreandmoresignificantroleinpeople'sdailylife.However,people'sopinionsarestilldividedonthispoint.Thosewhoareinfavorofclaimthatithasalotofadvantages.Foronething...Foranother...Thosewhoareopposedtoholdthattherearemanydisadvantages.Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...Byandlarge,theadvantagesderivedfromfaroutweighthedisadvantagesentails.Fewthingscanbecomparedwithintermsof...Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...However,justlikeanythingelse,therearealsodisadvantagesfor...Foronething...oranother...Allinall,wecouldsafelycometotheconclusionthattheprosoutweighthecons.Thepasttwentyyearswitnessedthefastdevelopmentof...Abrighterfutureisawaitingusifwemakegooduseofit.Thereisagoodsideandabadsidetoeverything,andarenoexception.Generallyspeaking,thepositiveaspectscouldbelistedasfollows.Foronething...Foranother...However,aseverycoinhastwosides,thenegativeaspectsarealsoobvious.Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand...Upuntilnow,wecouldseeitclearlythat...Thekeyliesintheusersolongaswecouldmakeproperuseofit.Itcanbemosthelpfultousinmanyrespects.表示好處Ithasthefollowingadvantages.Itdoesusalotofgood.Itbenefitsusquitealot.Itisbeneficialtous.Itisofgreatbenefittous.表示壞處Ilhasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.Ildoesusmuchharm.Itisharmfultous.II.練筆一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnElectiveCourses.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..開設選修課的好處.選修課出現的問題.如何看待這一問題III.練筆二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPelRaising.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..圈養(yǎng)寵物的好處.圈養(yǎng)寵物帶來的問題.我的看法IV.練筆三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicComputerinOurLife.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..計算機給人類生活帶來了很多變化.計算機給我們的工作和學習帶來了方便.計算機也帶來了一些問題ComputerinOurLifeV.練筆四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCyberGameandYouths.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..介紹電腦游戲在年輕人中的受歡迎程度.電腦游戲可以使年輕人認識電腦、開發(fā)智力.但沉溺其中也會損害他們的身心健康CyberGameandYouthsVI.練筆五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicFace-lifting.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..現在社會上整容的人越來越多.整容的益處.整容帶來的問題（二）對比類作文I.常用句式與結構Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoing,,,Theypointoutthefactthat（支持X的第?個原因）.Theyalsoarguethat（支持X的另個原因）.However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyconsideritharmfultodo...Theyfirmlypointoutthat（反對X的第,個理由）.Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument',,Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,alsomay（的乂?個壞處）.Peopleholddifferentviewsabout...Somepeoplebelieve（argue,think）that...Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat...Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Peopleholddifferentviewsabout...Somepeopleareinfavoroftheopinionthat...whileotherspointoutthat...AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething...Foranother...Lastbutnotleast...Toconclude...Therearenosameopinionsamongpeopleabout（爭論的焦點）.Somepeopleareinfavoroftheviewthat,whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,...;secondly,...;Finally,...Firstofall...Furthermore...Amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.Thatis...Anaturalconclusionfromtheabovediscussionisthat...Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto.Fromabove,wecanpredictthat...II.練筆一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtospendourtime.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninEnglish)below.SomepeopleprefertospendmostoftheirtimealoneOthersliketobewithfriendsmostofthetimeDoyouprefertospendyourtimealoneorwithfriends?GivereasonstosupportyouranswerIII.練筆二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShouldPhysicalExercisebeRequired.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninEnglish)below.SomepeoplesaythatphysicalexerciseshouldbearequiredpartofeveryschooldayOtherpeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldspendthewholedayonacademicstudiesWhat'syourpointofviewIV.練筆三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShouldEuthanasiaBeLegalized.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有的人贊成實行安樂死.有的人反對安樂死合法化.我的看法V.練筆四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicBuyingorBorrowingBooks.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些人認為書應該借來看.有些人認為書應該買來看.你的選擇BuyingorBorrowingBooksVI.練筆五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAdultEducation.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有人認為成人教育是有必要的.有人認為成人教育沒有多大的價值.我的看法AdultEducationvn.練筆六Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCorporalPunishment.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below..有些國家父母可以體罰孩子.而在有些國家這樣做是違法行為.我的看法（三）駁論類作文.常用句式與結構Manypeoplearguethat（錯誤觀點）.Bysayingthat,theymean（對這個觀點的進一步解釋）.Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat.Theremightbesomeelementsoftruthinthesepeople'sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat（與錯誤觀點相反的觀點）.Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief...Somepeoplelakeitforgrantedthat（錯誤觀點）.Forinstance,.Yetmanyothersdon'tthinkso.TheythinkIhal（與錯誤觀點相反的觀點）.Theyregardas.Theylaughatthosewhothink.Tminfavorofthelatteropinion.Ithink.Wemustn't.Weshould.Althougheveryonebelievesthat...,Idoubtwhethertheargumentbearsmuchanalysis.Asopposedtowidelyheldviews,Iarguethat...Ifstruethat...,butthisisnottosaythat...Onemaysay...Iprobablywill.But...Ilisonethingtobelievethat...,itisquiteanothertosaythat...練筆一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCanborrowingmoneyharmthefriendship.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些人認為借朋友錢會傷害友情.我不同意這種看法III.練筆二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicDonatingBlood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些學校把“無償獻血”活動與學分掛鉤.我不同意這種做法IV.練筆三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonMarrowDonation.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..有些人認為骨髓捐獻有害健康，因此不提倡這一做法.我不同意這種說法V.練筆四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPhysicalEducationCourses.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..近些年來有些大學的體育課越來越少.我不同意這種做法VI,練筆五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicPersonalSpace.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..每個人都應該有自己的空間.家長不應該干涉孩子的學習和生活.我不這樣認為(四)立論類作文I.常用句式與結構ItistrueIhat（普遍存在的觀點）.However,（談不同的觀點）.【ihink（提出自己的觀點，即文章的論點）.（過渡句，轉向觀點的論證，根據情況選擇具體的詞）canbelistedasfollows.Firstly,（論證理由一）.Secondly,（論證理由.）.Forexample,（舉例具體說明理由二）.Thirdly,（論證理由三）.Acaseinpointisthat（舉例具體說明理由三）。Itgoeswithoutsayingthat（轉折句，提出執(zhí)行該觀點時應注意的事項）.Thereisnodoubtthat（得出結論）.Inconclusion（總結全文）。Onlywhenwe...canwe...Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat...Consequently,wecanseeclearlythat...Inaword,Iwarmlywelcome...Inmymind,weshould...Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecanseeclearlythatthekeyliesin...II.練筆一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicwhatjobsdocollegegraduateswanttotake.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below..目前大學畢業(yè)生的擇業(yè)情況.男、女同學就業(yè)選擇的區(qū)別.結論III.練筆二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheWaytoGetInformation.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..獲得信息的方式有很多種.我最喜歡通過…獲得信息.結論IV.練筆三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSaveOurMotherTongue.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..我國這兩年掀起了“英語熱”.人們對漢語的重視程度遠不如英語.結論SaveOurMotherTongueV.練筆四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicQualityProvidesBestGuarantee.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..目前市場上存在著一些劣質產品.激烈的市場競爭中劣質產品最終會被優(yōu)質產品所淘汰.結論QualityProvidesBestGuaranteeVI.練筆五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWasteinHumanResource.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..國內部分用人單位片面強調高學歷.很多優(yōu)秀的本科生被拒之門外WasteinHumanResource（五）解釋說明類作文.常用句式與結構Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat...Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...Wemayblame...,buttherealcausesare...Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat...Butthefundamentalcauseisthat...Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).Withthedevelopment/improvementof,(problem).Itisnecessarythatweshouldlearnsometrickstoperformbelterin.Ontheonehand,.Ontheotherhand,.Therefore,howto(solvetheproblem)isworthpayingattention.Firstly,.Forexample,Secondly,.Forexample,.Thirdly,.Inotherwords,.Infact,thewaysto(solvetheproblem)arecountless.It'stimethatwe(solvetheproblem).Inonewayofthinking,is.Forsomeobjectiveorsubjectivereasons,.Inanotherway,maybea.Itmakesusthinkalot.Forexample,.Inmyopinion,is.Aspeopleoftensay,is.Inaword,...練筆一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAQualifiedCollegeStudent.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..我國現在大學生越來越多，面對激烈就業(yè)競爭，如何提高個人的索質是當務之急.我認為一名合格的大學生應具備哪些基本的素質III.練筆二Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominAdultEducation.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:.現在許多成年人都利用業(yè)余時間去大學或夜校讀書.出現這種成人教育熱的原因是….結論W.練筆三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSandstorms.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..目前我國有些地區(qū)沙塵暴越來越嚴重.造成這種現象的原因.如何解決這?問題SandstormsV.練筆四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHealth—ASeriousIssueonCampus.Youshouldwriteabout150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..大學生的健康狀況令人擔憂.導致這一狀況的原因.如何解決這一問題Health—ASeriousIssueonCampusVI.練筆五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoFindaJob.Youshouldwriteabout)50wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below..現在找工作不是件容易事.大學生找工作的途徑有哪些.應該注意哪些問題HowtoFindaJob五、段苜句作文■常用句式與結構（略）.練筆一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionaboutMyFirstJobinthreeparagraphs,thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphisgiven.Yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan120words.BeforeIstudiedatuniversity,.Inagreathurry,.Worstofallwasthat..練筆二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionaboutMoviesofViolenceinthreeparagraphs,thefirstsentenceofeachparagraphisgiven.Yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan120words.Nowadays,therearemoreandmoremoviesofviolenceonthemarket..However,.Therefore,itisessentialthat.六、圖表作文1.對圖表的描述.介紹圖表Asisshown/described/illustrated/indicated/revealedinthecartoon/picture/graph/chart/table,...Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthecartoon...Whatavividpictureitis!Ittellsusthat...Accordingtothetable...,Ascanbeseenfromthetable...,Itcanbeseenfromthetable...Itisself-evidentthat...,Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...,Thereisnodenyingthefactthat統(tǒng)計數據的表達方法increase/fallslightly/alitlle/sharply/dramatically/drasticallyfrom...to...,skyrocket/soar/rise/decline/jumpfrom...to...remainsteadyat...,leveloffat...,peakat...,reachtheclimaxat...,reachthelowat...,accountfor...twice/three...timesasmany/muchas...,onefifth/aquarter/athird/ahalfof數據變化的表達方法Thenumber/amountof...increased/jumped/rose/decreased/dropped/fell/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steadily/gradually/slowly/slightlyfrom...to...Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steady/gradual/slow/slightincrease/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fallinthenumber/amountof...from...to開頭和結尾的常用句型Thetwographsdescribethesamethingseenintwodifferentways.Thefirstdiagramsimplyrecords...Thesecondgraphthrowsanewlighton...Thekeyfindingstakenfromthesurveysareasfollows:...ThistableprovidesseveralimportantpointsofcomparisonbetweenAandB.Itisobviousinthegraph/lablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears（asXvaries）.AtthepointofXLYreachesitspeakvalueof…（多少）.Whatisthereasonforthischange?Mainlythereare…（多少）reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraph/table.Firstofall,…（第一個原因）.Moreimportantly,…（第二個原因）.Mostimportantofall,…（第三個原因）.Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraph/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime（ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢）.2.對于線性圖表的描述.對于上升趨勢的描述a.可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組:toincreasetogouptorisetogrowtojumptoleaptosoartoshoottopickupb.可以使用的名詞：anincreaseagrowthajumpasoaranupwardtrend.對于上升到某個位置的描述：①a.中的動詞+to+具體數據。②a.中的動詞+to+thepeakof+具體數據。③a.中的動詞+reachingthepeakof+具體數據。④a.中的動詞+reaching+具體數據。⑤topeakat+具體數據⑥toclimbto+具體數據(3)對于上升的程度的描述①a.中的動詞+by+具體數據。②a.中的動詞+副詞*。(4)對于下降趨勢的描述：a.可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組：tofalltodecreasetogodowntoslidetocollapsetodeclinetodropb.可以使用的名詞：acollapseadecreaseafalladeclineadrop.對于下降到某個位置的描述：①a.中的動詞+to+具體數據。②a.中的動詞+to+thebottomof+具體數據。③a.中的動詞+reachingthebottomof+具體數據。④a.中的動詞+reaching+具體數據。.對于卜.降程度的描述：①a.中的動詞+by+具體數據。②a.中的動詞+副詞*。.對于平穩(wěn)的趨勢的描述：a.可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組：tohardlychangetohavelittlechangetokeepsteadytolevelofftoremainconstanttostaythesame*表示程度的副詞:(1).程度較大：considerablydramaticallygreatlymarkedlyobviouslyquicklyrapidlysharplysignificantlysuddenly(2).程度較?。簊lightlygraduallyslowlysteadily.上升和下降趨勢的組合描述(嵌入了時間和程度之后)：.嵌入時間時所使用的介詞和介詞詞組：infrom...to...betweenand...during...and...atthestartof...bytheendof...over...attheendof...throughout時間+具體數據.先上升后下降的句型： increasedslowlyduring...and...butfellsharplyinAsteadyfallin...during...and...followedthesharpincreasein先下降后上升的句型：...fellbefore...begantomakearecoverycontinuetherecovery,climbingtodroppedduring...butincreasedagaininfellandthenpickedupduringcollapsedbeforerisingto...attheendof起伏波動的句型：...fluctuatedsharplyallthrough...波動不大的句型:...hardlychangedthroughtheperiodbetween...and...3.餅狀圖形的描述.對于百分比進行描述所使用的句型:...%the...is/has/have/areaccountsfor...%ofthetotal...lakesup...%inthewholechart.趨勢的比較：.表示相似的句型(實例)：BothsharepricesrosesharplyinJanuary.Neithercompanyhasmadeaprofityet.LikeX,YfellinJune.XrosejustassharplyasY..表示差異的句型(實例)：Xfellsharplywhereas/whileYremainedsteady.XfellquicklycomparedtoY.UnlikeY,Xroseby10%.XrosefarmoredramaticallythanY..表示倍數的句型：the...doubled/paredwiththosein客觀比較的句型：...is...incontrastto...3).數據的修飾：.表示不足的詞或詞組：upto,below,under,almost,nearly.表示超過的詞或詞組：Over,morethan,justover常用詞與短語上升：increase,rise,ascend,surge,goup,climb,mount,levelup卜降：decrease,fall,drop,descend,decline,reduce,lessen,leveldown平穩(wěn):stable,steady,remain/maintain/keep/bethesameas/similarto波動：fluctuate,fluctuation,riseandfallsupanddown占：occupy,takeup,accountfor,gain而：while,however,whereas,ontheotherhand,actually/infact相比:bycontract,onthecontrary,likewise,comparedwith最高點：thehighest,thetop,thesummit,thepeak,themost最低點：bottom,less,least,rockbottom平均：mean,average趨勢：tendancy,trendinclination預見：prediction達到頂峰：mountto在...中占...：gainthepercentageof有一個穩(wěn)定的過程:astableperiodcanbeseen練筆一Directions:Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordsontopic:TheIncreaseintheNumberofCandidatesandPassersintheCET.Studythefollowingchartcarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformationgiveninthechart..說明圖表所表明的報考和通過CET考試人數的變化趨勢。.分析產生這些變化的原因。.你從這張圖表中所得出的結論。練筆二Directions:Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan120wordsontopic:AverageincomeoftheChinesepeasantsbetween1978and1986.Studythefollowinggraphcarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformationgiveninthechart..說明圖表所表明的農民平均收入變化趨勢.分析產生這些變化的原因.你從這張曲線圖中所得出的結論AverageIncomeoftheChinesePeasantsBetween1978to1986練筆三Directions:Inthispart?youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposit