善用反復(fù)和排比使得句子更加高級(jí)- 高考英語(yǔ)作文專項(xiàng)突破講義（全國(guó)通用）

高考英語(yǔ)作文專項(xiàng)突破一輪復(fù)習(xí)講義（全國(guó)通用）[13]善用反復(fù)和排比使得句子更加高級(jí)反復(fù)和排比是提高英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的兩種方式，兩者相似，但略有不同。反復(fù)往往是一定詞匯的重復(fù)。兩種方式都會(huì)加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)，使句子較有文采，而排比往往是指一定的結(jié)構(gòu)，詞匯可能不重復(fù)，不相同，但結(jié)構(gòu)是重復(fù)的或相同的

反復(fù)：1、主語(yǔ)并列：如果主語(yǔ)相似，或可以并列連接同一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，則體現(xiàn)出來(lái)的語(yǔ)氣會(huì)非常的直接、有力。這樣的句式，在英文中叫repetition，中文叫“反復(fù)”，屬于一種修辭。Parents,educators,physicians,andresearchers

begantoquestionwhattheimpactofthesechangesmightbe.

Hugeamountsofmoney,large-scaleinfrastructureconstruction,andtechnicalassistance

allappeartobeanidealsolution.

2、表語(yǔ)并列：多個(gè)表語(yǔ)（比如形容詞）并列描述主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài)或特點(diǎn)，句子的語(yǔ)氣會(huì)非常強(qiáng)烈。Thegame-showcontestantwastoldtobecheerful,charming,andenthusiastic.

3、形容詞重復(fù)：形容詞并列或相同形容詞修飾不同名詞也會(huì)構(gòu)成一種repetition（反復(fù)）修辭，語(yǔ)言上會(huì)形成一種力量和品位。Playingviolentgamesleadstoincreasedphysiologicalarousal,increased

aggressivethoughts,increasedaggressivefeelings,increasedaggressivebehaviors,anddecreasedprosocialhelping.

4、動(dòng)詞并列：不同動(dòng)詞之間并列，引出相似的但不相同的賓語(yǔ)，是repetition里面最有力量的一個(gè)。

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排比句：英語(yǔ)的排比跟漢語(yǔ)不同，往往是一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)的排比，而不是一個(gè)句子的排比。1Letusberuthlessinourcriticism,crueltopersonalvanities,indifferenttoage,rankorexperienceifthesestandinourway.點(diǎn)評(píng)：Ruthlessin，Cruelto和indifferentto是三個(gè)“形容詞加介詞”形式的排比，詞匯不同，但格式相同。

2Itdoesnotdotoliveinmemories,inregretsforthegoodolddays,orinsadnessaboutfriendswhoaredead.One’sthoughtsmustbedirectedtothefuture,andtothingsaboutwhichthereissomethingtobedone.點(diǎn)評(píng)：inmemories,inregrets和insadness是“介詞加名詞”形式的排比。Bedirectedtothefuture和tothings是反復(fù)。

3Thefeelingofthenationmustbequickened;theconscienceofthenationmustberoused;thepropriety

ofthenation

mustbestartled;thehypocrisyofthenation

mustbeexposed;anditscrimesagainstGodandmenmustbeproclaimedanddenounced.點(diǎn)評(píng)：mustbequickened,mustberoused,mustbestartled,mustbeexposed和mustbeproclaimedanddenounced既是排比（主系表結(jié)構(gòu)），又是反復(fù)（must詞匯）

4Onhearingthenews,hewasangered,andI

wassaddened.點(diǎn)評(píng)：hewasangered,andIwassaddened.屬于排比，結(jié)構(gòu)相同。

5Thepoliticianisconcernedwithsuccessfulelections,whereasthestatesmanisinterestedinthefutureofhispeople.點(diǎn)評(píng)：beconcernedwith和beinterestedin是結(jié)構(gòu)相同，屬于排比。

6InPlato’sopinionmanwasmadeforphilosophy;inBacon’sopinionphilosophywasmadeforman.點(diǎn)評(píng)：manwasmadeforphilosophy和philosophywasmadeforman是結(jié)構(gòu)相同，特別是意思相反，屬于排比。

7Myjobincludescheckingtheinventory,initialingtheorders,andcallingthesuppliers.點(diǎn)評(píng)：三個(gè)doing并列，屬于排比。

8Grandmotherlikestoreadmysterynovels,todoneedlepoint,andtobrowsetheInternetonherhomecomputer.點(diǎn)評(píng)：toreadmysterynovels,todoneedlepoint,和tobrowsetheInternet是三個(gè)不定式并列。屬于排比。

練習(xí)：修改句子，使其變成排比句1Thenovelty

storesellshandbuzzers,plasticfangs,andinsectsthatarefake.答案：handbuzzers,plasticfangs,andfakeinsects才是“定語(yǔ)+名詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。2Manypeoplesharethesamethreeintensefears:beinginhighplaces,workingwithnumbersandspeeches.答案：beinginhighplaces,workingwithnumbersandmakingspeeches才是“doing”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。3Todecideonacareer,studentsshouldthinkcloselyabouttheirinterests,hobbies,andwhattheyareskilledat.答案：theirinterests,hobbies,andskills才是“their+名詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。4Atthebodyshop,thecarwassandeddowntothebaremetal,paintedwithprimer,andredenamelwassprayedon.答案：paintedwithprimer,andsprayedonwithredenamel才是“分詞+介賓短語(yǔ)”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。5Inordertobecomeadancer,Lolaistakinglessons,workinginamateurshows,andauditionedforprofessionalcompanies.答案：takinglessons,workinginamateurshows,andauditioningforprofessionalcompanies.才是“doing”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。6Juan’slastjobofferedsecurity;abetterchanceforadvancementisofferedbyhisnewjob.答案：securityandabetterchanceforadvancement這倆才是名詞的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。7Peopleintoday’sworldoftentrytoavoidsilence,whetheronthejob,inschool,orwhenrelaxingathome.答案：whetheronthejob,inschool,orathome.這三個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)才是并列的。8Mythreefavoritejobswereveterinaryassistant,gardener,andsellingtoys.答案：veterinaryassistant,gardener,andtoyseller.這才是三個(gè)職業(yè)的并列。9Thepoliticiantrustednoone,rewardedloyalty,andwasdependentonlyonhisowninstincts.答案：trustednoone,rewardedloyalty,anddependedonhisowninstincts才是三個(gè)動(dòng)詞的并列。10Ifwe’renotcareful,we’llleavethenextgenerationpollutedair,contaminatedwater,andforeststhataredying.答案：pollutedair,contaminatedwater,anddyingforests這才是“定語(yǔ)+名詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。11Jesseprefersbooksthat

areshort,scary,andfilledwithsuspense.答案：short,scary,andfullofsuspense.才是形容詞的并列。12Asaleonelectricalappliances,furniturefortheoffice,andstereoequipmentbeginsthisFriday.答案：electricalappliances,officefurniture,andstereoequipment這才是“定語(yǔ)+名詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)并列。13Toescapethestressesofeverydaylife,I

relyuponwatchingtelevision,readingbooks,andmykitchen.答案：watchingtelevision,readingbooks,andstayinginmykitchen.這是doing的并列，或者relyontelevision,books,andkitchen這是三個(gè)名詞的并列。14Thekeystoimprovinggradesaretotakeeffectivenotesinclass,toplanstudytime,andpreparingcarefullyforexams.答案：totakeeffectivenotesinclass,toplanstudytime,andtopreparecarefullyforexams.這是三個(gè)todo不定式的并列。15QualitiesthatI

lookforinfriendsareasenseofhumor,beingkind,anddependability.答案：asenseofhumor,kindness,anddependability.是三個(gè)名詞的名列。下面練習(xí)無(wú)答案：16Thehomelesswomanshuffledamongthestreet,bentovertopicksomethingup,andwasputtingitinhershoppingbag.17Housekeepingshortcutswillhelpyouspeedupdoinglaundry,cleaningrooms,andfoodonthetable.18Studyingalittleeverydayismoreeffectivethantocram.19Thechickenstravelonaconveyorbelt,wheretheyareplucked,washed,rinsed,and