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題號(hào)押題09浙江卷大作文概要寫)〖真題顧

年6月,浙卷要作題閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennauthorAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“Wegonetotheoppositeextremeofadecadeswhenparentstendedtostrict.Bygivingkidslotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,initmayjusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisebackfirewhengivenwaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingstakeariskforfearofbeingabletostayonwheretheirparentspraiseputStill,don’tgotoointheotherdirection.givingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswilllikethey’renotenoughorthatyoudoncareand,asresult,mayseenopointintryinghardforaccomplishments.Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertsthatqualityofpraisemoreimportantthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedthenottheoutcome,cangiveoftenyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstothemselvesworkhardtoachieveagoal,saysauthorofParentingWithoutFearLettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReally.“Onethingtorememberthatit’sprocessnotendproductthatmatters.Yoursonnotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisifoutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehisregardlesswhetherhisorloses.Praisingthenottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehashardtocleanthedinner,orfinishbookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenacase-by-casebasisand相稱的toamountofeffortchildhasintoit.

【答案】Parentstogoextremeswhenpraisingtheirkids.點(diǎn)一Yet,toomuchandtoolittlepraisecanbeequallydamaging.(

要點(diǎn)二givingpraise,parentsshouldbesincereandconcentratetheprocessinsteadtheresult.(

要點(diǎn)三Similarly,oughtgivepraiseformuchefforttheirkidsinvestedintheworkthey’reinvolved要點(diǎn)四【解析】本次浙江高考書面表達(dá)采用了概要寫作題型。概要寫作是閱讀理解和書面表達(dá)的溝通梁,考查的是學(xué)生在實(shí)現(xiàn)自由的思維表達(dá)之前,對(duì)他人的信息在理解的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行概括表達(dá)的能力。選上,提供一篇350詞內(nèi)的短文,題材不限,要求考生寫出一篇60詞右的內(nèi)容概要?!驹斀狻客瓿梢黄乓獙懽?,需要經(jīng)過(guò)三個(gè)步驟,1.讀原文,抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過(guò)程中,需要準(zhǔn)確把握文章的段落大意,學(xué)會(huì)剔除非重信息,弄清楚不同體裁的文章的內(nèi)部邏輯關(guān)系以及文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。2.組語(yǔ)言,轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎(chǔ)上,組織好語(yǔ)言,注重語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的立性和準(zhǔn)確性以及高級(jí)性,不全盤照抄原文句子,盡量用自己的語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá),同時(shí)要注意篇幅的比例排,用較多的文字去表達(dá)重要的內(nèi)容。3.通全文,邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點(diǎn)之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接,用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞去連全文。

年,江概寫真閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。’saideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanstarttolooksoundthesame.Nothingwillgivethesenseofwhatitactuallylikelivecollege校likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsacrazysenioryearhitstothetimetovisitcollegecampuses,andalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtotobemorethanacarrideButkeepinmindthatyouaremakingdecisionaboutnextfouryearsyourlife,doalltheresearchcanmakesureyouaretheone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,lotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskhavevisitedandobviously,ifliveacrossthecountrythatwonmuchofpossibility,butifyou

livenearby,checkout!Ifcampusvisitsgoingtobeforeyouapply,atveryleastyoushouldfindsometimeapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstotheschoolsyou’dlikeattend.Itsaveyoualotheartacheruleoutnowthethingsthatdon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyou’tknowunlessactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandaremakingitimpossible,thenchecktheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.Itachancetoonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(

顧問(wèn)),itwoncostyouapenny!Youregisterforonlinecollegeat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttakeplaceofactualcampusvisit,itbeveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillyouinformeddecisionaboutcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dlikeattend.【答案】’sreallyworthwhilevisittotheirdesiredcollegespersonallybeforeapplying.Undoubtedly,studentsshouldvisittheircolleges,whichmayincludedinapplications.Atleast,theyshouldvisittheschoolfigureoutrealconditionsadvance.Forstudentsaretime,registeringforonlinecollegefairisagoodalternativehelpthembetterunderstandschools.【解析本文要求閱讀短文據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞右的內(nèi)容概要即用盡可能少的詞匯集中現(xiàn)原材料的主要思想和觀點(diǎn)。這主要是考查學(xué)生把握文章主旨大意和段落大意的能力以及總結(jié)概括能,熟練掌握從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)和遣詞造句的能力?!驹斀狻?.要讀懂、讀透原作。這是準(zhǔn)確再現(xiàn)原文、寫好概要的前提。動(dòng)筆前多讀兩遍原文,直至弄讀透。

2.抓文中的關(guān)鍵句,確定寫作主題。開(kāi)頭areallygoodideavisitcollegesbeforeyou點(diǎn)了本文主題;Butkeepinmindthatyouadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchcantomakesureyoutherightone.There’sexcusenottovisitschoolsinyourlocalarea.說(shuō)明了去學(xué)看看的必要性和可行性campusvisits’tgoingtohappenbeforeapply,theleastshouldfindsometimeapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstotheschoolsyou’dliketo在間上提供了更多選擇iftimearemakingimpossible,thenchecktheonlinecollegefairs

為不能親自去大學(xué)看的學(xué)生提供了另外一種方法。3.擬提綱。有了提綱,寫概要就會(huì)有章法,也不會(huì)遺漏原作中的要點(diǎn)。4.快成文,反復(fù)推敲。按照文要求和擬好的提綱一氣呵成,寫完初稿。5.對(duì)修改潤(rùn)色,再讀原文,查是否漏掉了重要信息或主要內(nèi)容。用詞是否恰當(dāng),可有可無(wú)的刪掉。注意詞類、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的適當(dāng)調(diào)整。【點(diǎn)睛】范文觀點(diǎn)明確點(diǎn)出簡(jiǎn)練數(shù)適當(dāng)在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式語(yǔ)從句includedin和whoareshortofmoneyand動(dòng)詞registeringonline作語(yǔ),顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力?!济}探〗概要寫作即所讀過(guò)的文章簡(jiǎn)概,寫出文章的中心大,也稱之為摘要。寫概要,要文的具體信息用一些具有概括功能的詞和句進(jìn)行表,而不是抄襲文章的原句更不能把細(xì)節(jié)性信息為中心即要對(duì)文章中的單詞、詞組和句子進(jìn)行合理轉(zhuǎn)換,對(duì)文章的具體信息進(jìn)行概括,再適合的語(yǔ)言達(dá)。這一題型主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)文章主旨大意的概括和準(zhǔn)確獲取關(guān)鍵詞的能,同考查學(xué)生用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)概括文章重要信息的能力以及對(duì)文章整體結(jié)構(gòu)把握的能力。因,概要寫作是基于對(duì)閱讀理解和書面表兩者考查的有機(jī)結(jié)合體。概要寫作的目的不僅是要重述原文的主旨要,還要在不改變?cè)囊馑嫉那疤嵯伦儞Q詞匯和句子,也就是要使用自己的語(yǔ)言寫概要。一概寫的綱明題介1.考說(shuō)根據(jù)教育部考試中心的相關(guān)說(shuō)明概要寫作中提供給考生一篇以的短文要其基于該短文寫出一篇60詞右的內(nèi)容概要。2.試選特提供給考生閱讀的短文詞數(shù)在350以內(nèi)選材料體裁雖然沒(méi)有限,但以說(shuō)明文論為主偶

爾也會(huì)有記敘文或夾敘夾議的閱讀材料??荚囌f(shuō)明所給的樣題是一篇科普知識(shí)類的文章,句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜,難度較大。3.熟概寫的分準(zhǔn)()要作查求()原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況;()用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性;()下文的連貫性;()各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況???概要應(yīng)具有獨(dú)性和自明,擁與文章等量的主要信息,即閱讀全文,就獲得必要的信息;其次概不贅,故逐字推敲;最后概要內(nèi)必須完、目然〖解題秘籍一答步1.確主句確定閱讀文章的主題,一般在段首。沒(méi)有主題句的需要自己組合。2.尋關(guān)詞分主題句意義確關(guān)詞,關(guān)鍵詞一般體現(xiàn)為名詞、形容詞關(guān)詞的數(shù)目決定了概括的信息濃度。前2點(diǎn)為中重看每段,問(wèn)自:一講什呢傳了么要息,統(tǒng)的息是么支撐息哪?后定主句在之的讀不理解修3.確時(shí)和稱如果閱讀材料是過(guò)時(shí),那么基本時(shí)態(tài)用過(guò)去時(shí);如果是現(xiàn)在的,那么基本時(shí)態(tài)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。但模板的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)一般為現(xiàn)在,如:Thepassagetells一般情況下采用第三人稱來(lái)寫作。3.重主句概括的主題句邏輯上要統(tǒng)攝后面所有的支撐句。可以從作者的寫作目的逆反映寫作目的主題句是高度抽象,它基本定了概括的質(zhì)量。4.重支句。撐句的意義在邏輯上受制于主題,可是補(bǔ)充過(guò)程或者提供證據(jù)兩步驟其實(shí)就是改閱讀料的主句和支撐句口訣簡(jiǎn)概括縮長(zhǎng)間,省卻細(xì)膩(見(jiàn)間接引語(yǔ)。:短的連詞。細(xì)膩:細(xì)節(jié)和例子5.檢潤(rùn)草。要確保初稿準(zhǔn)確完,再慮謄抄??梢詮囊韵聨讉€(gè)方面來(lái)進(jìn)行檢查和潤(rùn)色:a.主是否分明主句和支撐句比例、順是否安排得當(dāng);b.邏關(guān)系是否清,前觀點(diǎn)是否一致;c.人時(shí)態(tài)和概要字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求;d.查法是否正確特是時(shí)態(tài)主謂一致,確“言規(guī)”e.是否使用一些較為豐富、高級(jí)的句型和恰的連接過(guò)渡詞句等。二具的法巧()磨組改句的力

考生重組、改寫句子的能力直接影響著概要寫作的好,所以考生在平時(shí)訓(xùn)練時(shí)就要下意識(shí)提高這些能力。由于本專題前幾章學(xué)案已經(jīng)具體闡述了造句改寫的能力,這里就不再贅述具請(qǐng)?jiān)斠?jiàn)幾期學(xué)案。這里只簡(jiǎn)單列舉幾個(gè)技巧。1.同替法Tomthoughtofanidea.→ideaoccurredtoTom.2.正反法Ithinkwealthislessimportanthealth.→don’tthinkwealthismoreimportantthanhealth.Youwill→wonsucceed.3.詞轉(zhuǎn)法Yoursuggestionsveryvaluable.→Yoursuggestionsareofgreatvalue.4.介短法Wesuretofinishittimebecausesomanypeoplearehelpingus.→somanypeoplehelpingus,wearesurefinishtime.5.句變法(1)語(yǔ)變換Itwidelyacceptedthatmorepeoplecomputerstheworldtoday.→Computersarewidelyusedinworldtoday.(2)簡(jiǎn)單變復(fù)合句Theweatherturnedouttoverygood.Thisthanwecouldexpect.→Theweatherturnedtoverygood,whichwasthanwecouldexpect.(3)連詞接法注意使用一些短而精的連,如but,and,so,while,however,yet,therefore,thus,including,insteadof等。Heinsistedonstaying.Hewasnotwillingtogo.→Heinsistedonstayingratherthan/insteadgoing.(4)詞序變法ProfessorWhite,ProfessorSmithandmanyotherguestspresentthemeeting.→PresentthemeetingProfessorWhite,Professorandotherguests.

(5)特殊式法Jimwantsboatingandhisparentswanttoboating,too.wantstoboating,sodohisparents.〖題關(guān)押題1學(xué)中學(xué)

閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇詞右的內(nèi)容概要。GettingsleephasahabitforAmericantosurveybyNationalSleepFoundation,51%kidsagedgoatonnights,thoughtheygetyearFoundationreportedthat7-12-year-oldsfelttheandsaidtheyhadfallenHowsleepneeddependsalotage.Babiesneedlotofhoursaday!Adultsaboutmosttenhoursideal.newsurveythat10-12-year-oldsonlyseveneighthours.guessalmostofthesurveyedsaidtheybedtime?Watch“MorechildrenaregoingtobedwithTVson,andtherearemoreopportunitiestostayawake,withmorehomework,theInternetthephone,”saysDr.MaryasleepSchool.Shesaysactivitiesbedtimeallexcitedmakeithardthemtoandsleep.Othersayproblembodycalledonlymakenagers’bodiesdevelopadultcharacteristics,alsomakeithardforteenagerstoasleepbeforepm.sleepinessisproblemforteenagers,somedistrictshavedecidedhighlaterthantheyusedto.ThreeyearsinMinnesota,changedthestarttime7:25amtoam.andarewiththeresults.

【范文】trendforlesslarge.AccordingsurveybySleepschool-agechildrenDr.thattheinternetphonenegativeonchildren'ssleepingwhileexpertsthisphenomenonstemslevelsofTorelievethebeenmadeaccordinglyinsomehighlater.押題2閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Surfingtheshouldbefinishingworkchangingclotheswhenyouhaveato,orperhapsevenlyingwhenyou’vepromisedyourselfout.Soundfamiliar?Youaren’talone.Weallprocrastinate(拖)sometimes,especiallywhenitcomestothingswearenreallyfondAstudyshowedthatwespendaboutminutesprocrastinatingeveryamountstodaysoflosttimeeachmightnotthinkthesefiguresparticularlyworthyworry,whenwelooktheoverallimpactofprocrastinationourlives,’sdifferentstory.Notonlythiscostfinancialloss,affectspeaceofmind.Ingeneral,whocontinuallythingsoffunhappier,wellasbeinglesswealthyandhealthy.Sodowedoweavoidtaking,’rereallyavoiding,explains精病學(xué)家PhilStutz.Formostof,avoidanceisnlimitedtoonesituation.Itappliestoalmostanythingthat’spainful.Mostofusourbestnevertocomfortzone.Thatsacrificesomethingmorevaluable:time.“Ourtimeonearthislimited,”Stutzadds.momentisanopportunityneverhaveagain.Procrastinatorsactiftheyhaveallthetheworld.Butdeep,knowthey’rewastingpartsoftheirlives.Thetrouble,ofthemdonknowhowtofreethemselves.”O(jiān)newayhesaysweridprocrastinationisbyovercomingthepainofavoidanceusingdailyvisualization(想象.“Picturethepainyou’reavoidingablackcloudinfrontofyou,Stutzsays.“Noticehowyoutiredofthethispainhasheldyoubackin,tellyourselfthatyoudeterminedtoconquerit.Then’stimetogetthroughthecloudandtotheotherside—whereyoufree.Expertsinsist:procrastinatorscantheirbehaviortakesalotofself-workin,’sworththeeffort.Andstart,tomorrow.

參考范文Inourdaily,everyonehasexperienced,hasagreatinfluenceourwealthandhealth.Thereasonwhyprocrastinateisthatwerefusetoleaveacomfortzone.Onetogetridofprocrastinationisovercomethepainavoidancewithdailyvisualization.3閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Theremanybenefitsofpublictransportation.Forpublictransportationmakesiteasierforpeopletogetwheretheytogo.Italsohelpspeoplesavemoney,thecostofmaintaining(維保養(yǎng))aworkingvehicleisoftenmuchmorethantheassociatedpublictransportation.Thefrequencytrafficjamsaccidentsmayreducedwhenapersonusespublictransportation.Onethemainbenefitspublictransportationisthefactthatmakeseasierpeopletogetaround.Without,people—especiallythosewithoutcars—wouldbelimitedinwheretheycouldwhattheycoulddo.Withpublic,peoplegettoschoolwork,gettothegrocerystoreandtodoctorsoffices,andvisitrelatives,eventheydonotvehicles.Publictransportationservespeopleofallandallwalksoffromincludingtheir,tobusinesspeopleontheirtothe,toelderly.Often,complainaboutthecostofpublictransportationwhentheratesraised.Whencomparedwiththecostofbuyinga,peoplefindchoosingtoridetransportationisamuchcheaperoption.publictransportationis,manypeoplechoosetouseinsteadofdrivingtoworkandschool.Thistrueevenofmanypeoplecarsasmayprefertorideworkonbusortrainratherthandealwithtrafficjamsparkingfrustrationsday.Whenpeoplemakethis,resultlesstraffic

ontheroadways,meansfewertrafficjamsandlesspollution.In,choicemanypeoplemaketoridepublictransportationmayeventranslateintofewercaraccidentsandvehiclerelateddeathsand,theuseofpublictransportationalsomeanslessgasisconsumedeachyear.參考范文Peoplecanbenefitgreatpublic,enablespeoplewherevertheywantorto,takingtransportationpeoplemayalargeamountof,helpreducemanytrafficjamsandaccidents.Finally,ofpublictransportationisalsoefficientwaytodecreaseconsumptionofgas.押題4閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇詞右的內(nèi)容概要。A,firstofitskindstudyexaminestheconnectionbetweenteacherburnoutandstudentsstresslevels.ResearchersfromtheUniversityofBritishColumbiacollectedsaliva(液)samplesfromover400elementaryschoolgradesfourto,publicschools.Cortisol(皮醇levelswereassessedfromthesamplesasthehormoneusedasabiologicalindicatorofstress.Correspondingly,teacherburnoutdeterminedthroughsurveyresults.Investigatorsthatinclassroomsinwhichteachersexperienced,feelingsofemotionalexhaustioncortisollevelswere升cortisollevelsinelementaryschoolchildrenhavebeenlinkedtolearningdifficultiesaswellasmentalhealthproblems.ThestudyappearsintheSocialScience&Medicine“Thissuggeststhatstresscontagion(蔓延mightbetakingplaceinclassroomamongstudentsandtheirteachers,saidOberle,thestudy’sleadauthor.,relationshipbetweenstudentstressandteacherbur

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