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現(xiàn)象描危害分原因分建議措觀點闡述（利弊意義闡寫作概況試題形式（考場注意事項評分方法（高分作文要求評卷實例（高分模版思路PartIWriting（30PartIIReadingComprehension（SkimmingandScanning）（15試題形式Writing：200812Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofLimitingtheUseof sticBags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegiven塑料袋曾被廣泛地使審題關(guān)注120140-150，若題目讀不懂：英文題目+寫作概況：評分GlobalRewarding原始：滿分15分→標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分：107分五個分數(shù)檔次：、、、、、寫作概況：評卷 分：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表 分：基本切題，表達思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴重錯誤14分：文章切題。文字通順，條理清楚，無重大語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。實例英文題目：Bicycles——AnImportantMeansofTransport漢語提綱為什么自行車這樣普自行車的前模版的提煉過程：思路和表Bicyclesareverypopularin .Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.Thatiswhy iscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.單復(fù)數(shù)錯誤：manandwomanmenand詞性誤用：oldandyoungtheoldandthe專有名詞：第一個和最后一個單詞首字母大寫，其他：實詞（名動形副代數(shù)）首字母大寫；虛簡單句(Bicyclesareverypopular .→長難句我愛記歌Inmyeyes,youarethemostInmyeyes,nooneismorebeautifulthan高分句式:結(jié)構(gòu) is/are 原句：Bicyclesareverypopular →In,nomeansoftransportismorepopularandimportantthan首句改寫：Bicyclesareverypopularin.詞性轉(zhuǎn)化：popular→ ,bicycleshavegainedgreatpopularity 二句改寫：Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthree法描述：Basedonarecentreport,amajority familiesinthecitiesacknowledgethattheyhavetwoorthreebicycles.首段現(xiàn)象描述（正面In,bicycleshavegainedgreatpopularityamong people.Basedonareport,amajorityofresidentsinthecitiesacknowledgethattheyhavetwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,itcanbenoticedthatthousandsofpeople–menandwomen,theoldandtheyoung-ridebicyclestoworkandComparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsand常用詞積分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開頭comparedwithcarsbesuperiorto=beinferior =層次與邏輯first,second,third,cheap/economical/方便 convenience/對…有begood/beneficial/rewardingInmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Sinceisadevelocountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriateto presentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisvery→Iamconvincedthatthefutureofbicycleisvery→whatconvincesmeisthat高分特征內(nèi)容相（切題即可結(jié)構(gòu)清 聯(lián) 語（句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多變審讀英文題目和漢語提綱：識別提綱功內(nèi)容如何擴展在你家周圍建一個工廠，你是否同意你認為科學(xué)家對人類的貢獻大還是藝術(shù)家對人類的貢獻你的職業(yè)夢想作業(yè)：題目：OnEnglish英語者所的1992-你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中有哪 你是如何克服這 的HowIOvercamemyDifficultiesinLearning1993-我最喜愛的電視(或無線電)是這類的內(nèi)容和特1994-人們對職業(yè)各有不同的理我怎樣為我理想的職業(yè)做準(zhǔn)1997-怎樣理解“熟能生巧例如：在英語學(xué)習(xí)中又如PracticeMakes2000-HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation2000-很多人認為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是也有人持不同意見IsaTestofSpokenEnglish簡單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生病(或受傷)同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是建議報考的專報考該專業(yè)的你認為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、等)可以勝任學(xué)生會的工如果當(dāng)選,你將為本校同學(xué)20056向老師致以節(jié)從一件難忘的事回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻我如何回報老2006-6校學(xué)生會將組織一次暑期活動，現(xiàn)招募本次活動的目的，內(nèi)容、安排等報名條件及20076歡迎辭 etoour對作一個簡要介200712各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選學(xué)生因為選擇了不同的選修20106如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫出現(xiàn)這種情況DueAttentionShouldBeGivento就寫什日常寫作學(xué)習(xí)方背寫：一個單詞、標(biāo)點都不仿寫：寫作思翻譯：英→漢→英→寫作基礎(chǔ)：句子結(jié)構(gòu)詞多遣詞兩方面ThespeechbyIfthereisanyoneouttherewhostilldoubtsthatAmericaisacewhereallthingsarepossible,whostillwondersifthedreamofourfoundersisaliveinourtime,whostillquestionsthepowerofourdemocracy,tonightisyouranswer.廣度：awide/richvarietyofb.同根詞代詞替

think:deem=claim=hold=argue=maintain=Eg:importantvery =ofgreatveryvaluable =ofgreat significant=ofgreatvery =of“hard“heartflowerangry“Myheartissevenupeightdown”“yougivemestop” Yesterdaynight,Iwaskickedbymygirlfriend.Sheranawaywithasmallwhiteface.SheismygreenplumandbambooHowever,couldyouplease lmywhytheinjuredisalwaysme.Iamveryregretthatshespentmealotofmoney.造句原→簡單句XiaoShenyangisdisgusting.Ilike并列句XSYisdisgustingandIlike復(fù)合句Ifyoushedtearswhenyoumissthesun,youwillalsomissthe的。加狀語（時間、地點、目的、方式等5Therearemanyrecreational33Inrecentyears,owingtothespeedydevelopmentofoursociety,thereareagreatmanyrecreationalactivitiesinpeople’sdailylife,whichincludesports,watchingTV,surfingtheInternet,andyingReview:六種功問題解決型寫現(xiàn)象描述+問題分析（原因或危害）+建議措施,例如：20106Topic：DueAttentionShouldBeGivenTo如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼→引出現(xiàn)象+具體描述+總☆首句1.Nobody/Noonecouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatkids’lackofindependencehaseagraveprobleminmanyfamilies.：agrave→正面：acommon/popular2.Inthecontemporarysocietythereisnodenyingthefactthat+客觀事實（3.Onmanycampuses/Inthecontemporarysociety/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,theshortageofhousingisoneofthemostseriousproblemswithwhichpeopleareconfronted.☆首句4(正反均可):Nowadays/Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentdecades,itcanbenoticedthatchildrendependmoreontheirparentsthaneverbefore.(引出問題)首句5(正反均可)：Inthepresent-daysociety/Inrecentyears,ithas eaprevalent/populartendency/trend/practicefor 首句6:Inrecent has/havegainedgreatpopularity 首句7：Thepastyears/decadeshaveseen/witnessedthehuge/speedy ofpeople’slivingstandards/quality.1_spellsimplewords正面話題：convenient/inexpensive/beneficial越來越多的→Agrowingnumber→Peopleingrowingbestillustratedbythefactthat （2）Turningalookaround,wecanfindagreatmany/plentyof/agooddealofexampleslikethis:兩個例子.(舉例描3)：Ourdailylifehasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexampleslikethis二句4：（法描述：）Accordingtoarecentsurvey/report,amajorityof/72.34%ofpeople/students/individuals/citizens/residentsadmit/reckon/acknowledgethatAccordingto…→Basedonamajorityofaminorityof（ eamatterofconcern.☆三句2承上）Asaresult/Consequently/Accordingly（啟下） forcloseattentionofthewholesociety.三句3:(承上)So,（啟下1）dueattentionshouldbepaid （或）weshouldpaydueattentiontothis危害分析四句話（總分總句+1+2+總結(jié)危①分析危害：1：Such_phenomenonphenomena_isareboundtogenerate/engender/resultingiveriseto/leadto)(severe/negative/serious)(consequences/effects/impacts)ifwekeepturningablindeye.☆句2:Apparentlyenough,therearesomenegativeimpactswhichweshouldnot☆句3：Quiteobviously,itisofgreatnecessitytofigureoutthenegativeinfluencesbehind句4：Totacklethisproblem,itisofgreat/vitalsignificanceto yzethepotentialnegativeimpactsofthismatter.☆危害1：Tobeginwith,itmaydamage/hurt/injure/harm/impair/underminethepresent-day (orthepromisingfuture0f 分析危害：現(xiàn)☆危害2：Moreover,(強調(diào)句式)itis thatexerts/produces/generatesbadimpactson_physicalhealth/psychologicalfitness.危害3：Inaddition/Furthermore/Whatisworse/Besides, setbadexamplestoyoungsters,leadingthemto ☆危害4：Then,itismanifestthatwearedevelo attheexpense /失：honesty/morality☆危害結(jié)果論esides,theresults/influences/impacts/effects/qualitiesof aspositive/credible/trustworthy/reliableasexpectedbecause 危害6：Besides,itcanbeargued meansagravewasteoftime/energy/natural危害總危害總結(jié)1：Ashasbeen do/doesimpact negativelytoalarge/some☆危害總結(jié)2：Toconclude,itisundeniablethatthebadimpactsof canneverbeturnedablindeyeto.原因分析原因分析段=原因分析句+具體原因（2-3個）+原因總1：Generallyspeakingseveralreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon.中性話題☆句2：Ingeneral,thereareseveralreasons/factors/causes/purposesresponsiblefor thefollowingmaybethemostcritical.（中性話題）句3：Itisevidentthatthecauses are4(Tosolve/dealwith/addressthisworrying/disturbingissue,)itisofvitalsignificancetodetermine/exploreinvestigatethepossiblereasons.☆原因1：Inthefirstce,_thepresent-dayfamilystructureistherootcause.Anillustrationofthispointwouldbethatthereisonlyonechildineachfamily.(原因+具體描述)原因2：Inthesecondce, constituteanothermajorcause.Specifically, 原因3：Inaddition,social ysacriticalroleinthis原因4：Besides,the_employment_beingcarriedoutin_jobmarkets_(doesn’t)_women_toenjoytheequalrightsas萬能詞匯5:（強調(diào)句式Whatismore,it thatmakes/attracts/ 原因總結(jié) has(not)been☆原因總結(jié)2：Asaconsequence, paidrelativelylessattentionto less→more=總結(jié)+（建1+2）+展總結(jié)句1(針對問題建議Inviewoftheseriousnessofthesituation,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetseriousness→prevalence總結(jié)句2(針對問題建議):Therefore/Thus/Hence/Accordingly/Totacklethisproblem,itishightimethatwetookfeasiblestepstostop/limitthistrend.總結(jié)句3:(正反均可）People’sways do（☆替換：1.Evidently,thereareavarietyofwaysinwhichpeoplecan .或2.Itisapparentthatwaystotacklethisissuearevarious.）Some ;some ;someothers 建議1：Ontheonehand,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsshouldbeworkedoutandendto ☆建議2：Ontheotherhand,itissuggestedthat shouldenhance/promote/cultivate/strengthentheirawarenessof .（強化意識）建議3：Then,itis ynecessary/important/significant 建議4（句：Additionall arehighlyhoped/expected/well-advised ☆建議5（發(fā)動群眾）：Lastbutnotleast,weshouldeducate/advocate/encourage friends,classmatesandacquaintances展望未來1：Onlybyadoptingthesemeasures,canwehope/expecttowitnesstheidealscenesin totheutmost.2：Apromisingandhopefulfutureisjustawaitingusifwesparenoeffortto展望未來3：Undoubtedly,ifwesparenoeffortstodoso,thefuture/prospectof willberosy,hopefulandpromising.觀點對比型作文寫作思Ⅱ段：觀點闡述:支持方觀點（利）Ⅲ段：觀點闡述:支持方觀點（弊）Online現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，同現(xiàn)象描述段寫如 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時Ⅱ段：觀點闡述:支持方觀點（利支持方句1：Therearesomeindividualsarguing isofgreatimportance/benefit.☆支持方句2：Anumberofindividualsfavor/advocate (basedonthefollowing支持方句3：Thosewhoareinfavor claim is/aresuperior ☆支持方觀點1：Intheireyes, ,itisimpossibleforindividuals☆支持方觀點2：Theyalsopointoutthat willbringgreaterbenefit/convenience/moreopportunitiesto ☆支持方觀點3:Whatmakesthemconvincedisthat isofgreatvalue/necessity/significanceforthemto will ypromotethedevelopment/efficiency,whichotherwisewouldbe支持方觀點5：Theyfirmlybelievethat willenablethemtoenrichtheirsocial/academic/professionalexperienceandbroadentheirhorizons.支持方觀點6：Anotherevidentadvantage/merit/benefitisthat mayoffer/provideentertainment/pleasure/enjoyablelife.Ⅱ段：反方觀點（弊反方觀點（弊本質(zhì)為分析危害，因此用于分析危害的表達也可以用來寫反方觀點句1：Evenso,othersholdadifferentview carriessome2：Others,howeverregardit3Advantageous/beneficial/rewarding/good/popularasitis,othershavean.4：Inspiteofalltheseclaims,othersmaintainthatitisunnecessary☆反方觀點 meansagreatamountoftimeormoney; maybeafflicted☆反方觀點3：Intheireyes, callsfor/requires/necessitiesplentyofenergy;nonetheless,theresult/qualityisnotassatisfactoryasexpected.反方觀點4：Inaddition,whatworriesmanyparents/teachersisthatsome exert/generate/havenegativeinfluence .Forinstance, ; ;.+理+展望未我的觀點1：AsfarasIamconcerned,theadvantagesof willfaroutweighits/their我的觀點2：I,aswellasmanyothers,amconvinced willdomoregoodthan我的觀點3：Asacollegestudent,Iamfirmlyconvincedthatitisnecessaryforus 我的觀點4：（折中型）Whoisright?Ithinkthereissomethingrightinbotharguments.However,whatconvincesmeisthatweshould firstly.Then,wearealsoexpectedto 理由句：寫法同第一段和第展望未來：同問題解決型展望未來寫法觀點對比型實2008-6：Recreational活動可能使人們受益，也可能有