新教材高中英語UNIT5RevealingnaturePart4Writing提升訓(xùn)練含解析外研版選擇性必修第一冊

PAGEPAGE5Part4Writing應(yīng)用文寫作寫作題目假設(shè)你是李華,英語老師讓你觀察某種植物的生長過程。請根據(jù)你所拍攝的圖片寫一篇觀察日記,記述蒜苗的生長過程,以便在英語課上跟大家分享。內(nèi)容包括:1.種植方式;2.生長環(huán)境;3.生長變化。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:garlicclove蒜瓣;tendershoot嫩芽;garlicsprout蒜苗

思路點(diǎn)撥主題觀察植物生長體裁應(yīng)用文人稱以第一、三人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主布局第一部分:播種方式;第二部分:生長過程;第三部分:生長結(jié)果。遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空1.肩并肩地,并排地

2.出來

3.n.根

4.n.厘米

答案1.sidebyside2.getoutof3.root4.centimetreⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用1.完成句子(1)我小心地把蒜頭分成蒜瓣,并排地種在一個(gè)圓形塑料碗里,尖頭朝上。Icarefullydividethegarlicbulbsintoclovesandinaroundplasticbowl,andthepointedends.

(2)隨著大蒜的生長,根長得越來越長。Withthegarlic,therootsgrow.

(3)根看起來像爺爺?shù)陌缀?。TherootsthewhitebeardofGrandpa.

(4)蒜苗一天天長得越來越高,已經(jīng)長到20厘米左右了。Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigher,andtheyabout20centimetres.

答案(1)plantthemsidebyside;faceup(2)growing;longerandlonger(3)looklike(4)daybyday;havegrownto2.句式升級(5)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句(1)

(6)把句(2)和句(3)合并成一個(gè)含有定語從句的復(fù)合句

答案(5)Icarefullydividethegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.(6)Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.連句成篇

參考范文January8Icarefullydividethegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.ThenIpourenoughwaterintothebowlandputitinasunnyplace.Everyday,Iwaterthemontime.January16Manylightgreentendershootsaregettingoutofthecloves.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.January24Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andtheyhavegrowntoabout20centimetres.Allofthemlookverybeautiful,andarenotlessbeautifulthandaffodils.寫作積累1.Letmetellyouabouthowtoplantatree.讓我告訴你如何種樹。2.Digaholelargeenoughforthetree,buttheholeshouldnotbetoodeep.給樹挖一個(gè)足夠大的坑,但坑不應(yīng)該太深。3.Itisnecessarytokeepthesoildamp.保持土壤潮濕是必要的。4.Youhadbetterputthemintheshade/acoolplace.你最好把它們放在陰涼處。5.TheseedsproutstwodaysafterIputtheflowerpotbesidethewindow.我把花盆放在窗邊兩天后,種子就發(fā)芽了。6.Iwillcoveritwhentheweatheriscold.天氣冷的時(shí)候我會把它蓋上。7.Newleavessproutfromthestem.新葉從莖中萌發(fā)。8.Aflowerbudisgrowingatthetopofthestem.花芽在莖的頂端生長。9.Abudgraduallybecomesaflower.花蕾逐漸變成花朵。10.Therootsgrowdeeperintothesoil.根向土壤更深處生長。11.Astimegoesby,itgoes/runstoseed.隨著時(shí)間的推移,花謝結(jié)籽。12.Thewhiteflowershavefallenfromthestem.白花從莖上落下來了。13.Thepinkflowerattractsseveralbees,whicharedancingaroundit.這朵粉紅色的花吸引了幾只蜜蜂,它們圍著花兒跳舞。14.Itlooksasifeveryflowerissinging.好像每朵花都在唱歌。15.Youmustplaceitwherethereisenoughsunshine.你必須把它放在陽光充足的地方。16.Remembernottodisturbthemfrequentlywhiletheyareeating.記住不要在它們吃東西時(shí)經(jīng)常打擾它們。17.IamsocuriousthatIgotoseeitseveraltimesaday.我如此好奇以至于每天去看它好幾次。18.Itturnsoutthatyoucan'tfeedittoomuchfoodoritwillgetsick.事實(shí)證明,你不能喂它太多食物,否則它會生病。19.Afterconservation,hishairgetsbrighterandbrighter.經(jīng)過養(yǎng)護(hù),它的毛發(fā)越來越亮。20.Itseyeslooklikesapphires,anditsbodyisdottedwithseveralyellowspots.它的眼睛好像藍(lán)寶石,身上點(diǎn)綴著幾個(gè)黃色的斑點(diǎn)。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練P132()假設(shè)你是李華,你的英語老師要求同學(xué)們利用星期天的休息時(shí)間去觀察某種動(dòng)物,并用英語寫一篇觀察日記,準(zhǔn)備回來在英語課上跟大家交流。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Part4Writing實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練Onepossibleversion:Sunday,August22nd,FineThismorningIgotupveryearly.Iwantedtogotoseemygrandmother.WhenIwentdownstairs,Isawseveralantsdoingsomethinginthecorner.Iwassocuriousandstoppedtowatchthem.Itturnedoutthattheyweretryingtocarryalittlepieceofmeat.First,twoofthemcaughtoneendofthemeat.Th