中考英語作文指導(dǎo)課

Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考寫作指導(dǎo)課1第一頁，共51頁。basicstructure(根本結(jié)構(gòu)的安排)2第二頁，共51頁。DearMr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用說)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.

Let’sgoforit!

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody〔正文〕3第三頁，共51頁。basicrules(寫作考試規(guī)那么)search〔審〕list〔列〕add(加:開頭和結(jié)尾)connect(連)beautifY(美：諺語/例子)4第四頁，共51頁。健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告,并提倡大家進行假日休閑。審(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork5第五頁，共51頁。

如何度假調(diào)查報告建議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用

簡單的句子列出文章的要點。6第六頁，共51頁。

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)7第七頁，共51頁。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.〔thebeginning〕Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.〔theending〕加(add)加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔、漂亮。8第八頁，共51頁。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)9第九頁，共51頁。Writingskills〔“寫〞的技巧〕方法一:善用高級詞匯10第十頁，共51頁。Whichisbetter?

他們很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.11第十一頁，共51頁。

我們應(yīng)該保護環(huán)境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.12第十二頁，共51頁。方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills〔“寫〞的技巧〕13第十三頁，共51頁。

她還小，搬不動這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…14第十四頁，共51頁。方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills〔“寫〞的技巧〕15第十五頁，共51頁。1.表示并列或遞進:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示選擇:or,either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示比照:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示強調(diào):also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)16第十六頁，共51頁。Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast17第十七頁，共51頁。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)美(beautify)18第十八頁，共51頁。Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)19第十九頁，共51頁。Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.〞Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb〔諺語〕/saying20第二十頁，共51頁。集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.〞Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于〞beginning〞和〞ending〞，多用后者。21第二十一頁，共51頁。參加英語俱樂部是學(xué)習(xí)英語的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.〞SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于〞beginning〞和〞ending〞，多用后者。22第二十二頁，共51頁。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

23第二十三頁，共51頁。Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水難收。一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠離我。條條大路通羅馬?；畹嚼?，學(xué)到老。24第二十四頁，共51頁。方法四:妙用諺語和例子

〔多用于“thebody〞〕Writingskills〔“寫〞的技巧〕25第二十五頁，共51頁。青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子26第二十六頁，共51頁。加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.27第二十七頁，共51頁。Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!結(jié)尾：提出建議或號召28第二十八頁，共51頁。

First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.

WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,

letalone(更不用說)answerthequestions

aboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.

Let’sgoforit!12346529第二十九頁，共51頁。DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.〞______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.Yourturntogoforit!〔試填一填〕30第三十頁，共51頁。DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.〞______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYourturntogoforit!〔check〕12331第三十一頁，共51頁。Let’spractise.32第三十二頁，共51頁。Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so33第三十三頁，共51頁?？偡种底魑臉?biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：〔17~20分〕完全符合題目要求，觀點正確,要點齊全，立意高。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有邏輯性。卷面書寫干凈，整潔，無涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密適宜，書寫美觀。標(biāo)點，大小寫正確。最好能有一兩個亮點句?！仓鲝?，定從，表從，諺語〕34第三十四頁，共51頁。

標(biāo)準(zhǔn)三寫：大小寫,拼寫,書寫35第三十五頁，共51頁。36第三十六頁，共51頁。37第三十七頁，共51頁。

隨著人口的增多，人類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住，而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動物的棲息地；許多動物遭到獵殺······所有這些都導(dǎo)致了越來越多的動物瀕臨滅絕。然而動物是我們?nèi)祟惖呐笥?，我們有?zé)任去保護他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們。請根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。要求：

1.語言標(biāo)準(zhǔn)、意思連貫、表達完整；

2.提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(練練筆)38第三十八頁，共51頁。Let’sHelpOurFriends〔總分值作文賞析〕Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No〞.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don’tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!39第三十九頁，共51頁。Thankyou!Goodbye!Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+

Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/end40第四十頁，共51頁。HOMEWORK:書面表達〔共20分〕

根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意：1．字數(shù)60一80。

2．所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上?！部蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮〕3．發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出?！舱埐灰瓕懺诖痤}卡上〕

假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅〞夏令營活動。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。發(fā)言稿〔介紹〕41第四十一頁，共51頁。name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActivitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,drawpicturesofplants,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketheearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemyselftoyou.

That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.

42第四十二頁，共51頁。Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce〔介紹〕myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfifteenyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping〔野營〕,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist〔生物學(xué)家〕whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.43第四十三頁，共51頁。Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.

Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/Iwillbehappinessplayinggrow44第四十四頁，共51頁。

TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybestto

doeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!

It’syourturn!〔總分值作文賞析〕45第四十五頁，共51頁。Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling〔拼寫〕〔others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgett