5-Unit 1 寫作課-勸說信

Howtowriteapersuasiveletter?

如何寫好說服性信函？

2021/5/91DearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem.I'mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit.

Itiswell-knownthatthecomputergamesaveryexciting.

However,theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem.First,itisbadforyourhealth,especiallyyoureyes.Second,ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetime,youhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading.Third,ifyouoftenstayuplate,youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletodowellatschool.SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit.Yours,LiHua（闡述理由）（引出話題，表明目的）（總結全文，表達祝愿）2021/5/92

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文體時態(tài)人稱信件一般現(xiàn)在時Thefirstperson（第一人稱）Thesecondperson（第二人稱）Step1審題的步驟:2021/5/93好文章的評分標準覆蓋所有要點語言結構和選詞恰當豐富有效使用連接詞，層次清楚2021/5/94DearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem.I'mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit.

ItiswellknownthatthecomputergamesaveryexcitingHowever,theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem.First,itisbadforyourhealthespeciallyyoureyes.Second,ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetimeyouhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading.Third,ifyouoftenstayuplateyouwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletodowellatschool.SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit.Yours,LiHua（闡述理由）（引出話題，表明目的）（總結全文，表達祝愿）正文語言欠豐富，表達不夠出彩2021/5/95（引出話題，表明目的）（總結全文，表達祝愿）Yours,LiHuaDearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyouaresocrazyaboutcomputergamesandthatyouoftenstayuplateplayingthemI'mwritingtopersuadeyoutoquit.Thereisnodenyingthatcomputergamesareveryexciting.However,theycanhaveagreatinfluenceonbothyourhealthandstudiesifyouareaddictedtothem.First,itisharmfultoyourhealth,especiallyyoureyes.Second,itisawasteoftimebecauseyouhavemuchmoreimportantthingstodo,suchasreading.Third,ifyoudon'tgetagoodnightsrest,youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletofocusonyourstudiesTherefore,Ihopeyouunderstandtheharmfuleffectofplayingcomputergamesandgetridofthehabits.2021/5/96Itisyourturnnow2021/5/97Haveadiscussionwithyourteammates

假設你是李華,你的外籍朋友Jack不久前選修了他們學校的漢語課程,由于感覺學習起來困難很大,他打算放棄請你給他寫一封信，勸他堅持學習

2021/5/98I’msorrytolearnthatyouwanttogiveuptheChinesecourse.I’mwritingtotrytopersuadeyoutocarryonwithit.

Herearethereasons.

Tobeginwith,itisnormalforyoutohavedifficultylearningaforeignlanguageatfirst,especiallyChinese.Butastheoldsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”Sodon’tloseheart.Inaddition,learningChinesewellwillbeofgreatimportanceanduseforyou.NotonlywillithelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture,butalsoallowyoutocommunicatewithChinesepeoplebetter.Besides,asanativespeakerofChinese,I’mmorethanwillingtohelpyouwithit.

Allinall,ifyou’redeterminedtolearnChinesewell,I’msureyouwillhaveagoodcommandofitoneday.IhopeyoucansticktoChineselearning.

2021/5/99DearJack,I’msorrytolearnthatyouwanttogiveuptheChinesecourse.I’mwritingtotrytopersuadeyoutogoonwithit.Herearethereasons.

Tobeginwith,itisnormalforyoutohavedifficultylearningaforeignlanguageatfirst,especiallyChinese.Sodon’tloseheart.Inaddition,IknowyoulikeChinaverymuchandwanttovisititsomeday.LearningChinesewellwillbeveryimportantandusefulforyou.NotonlywillithelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture,butalsoallowyoutocommunicatewithChinesepeoplebetter.Besides,asanativespeakerofChinese,I’mmorethanwillingt