年全國高考英語應用文寫作訓練之倡議信 省賽獲獎

倡議全國高考英語應用文寫作holdthewrongidea持有錯誤的觀點donateblood獻血doharmto對……有害asmallamountof少量的makeaquickadjustment做出快速調整patient病人survive活下來；生存haveabetterunderstandingof有更好的理解medicalknowledge醫(yī)學知識setagoodexampleforsb.為某人樹立好榜樣holdaseriesofactivities舉辦一系列的活動callonsb.todosth.號召某人做某事giveaway捐獻；捐贈lowergrade低年級【必備詞語】beintendedto為……準備的promotefriendship促進友誼encourageeconomy鼓勵節(jié)約behighlypraisedbysb.被某人高度贊揚bestronglyfor強烈贊成breaktrafficrules違反交通規(guī)則littering亂扔垃圾keepsth.inmind記住某事keeptotheright靠右runtheredlight闖紅燈thepedestriancrossing人行路口spitting隨地吐痰behavior行為；表現(xiàn)makeadifference起作用；產(chǎn)生不同【必備詞語】1.Therefore,let’staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.因此，讓我們負起責任來通過騎自行車建設一個低碳城市。2.Somepeopleholdthewrongideathat...有人持有錯誤的觀點：……3.WestudentsofSeniorThreearecalledontogiveawayourusedbooks.我們高三學生被號召來捐贈舊書。4.Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.我強烈贊同這個活動，因為它很有意義，很有幫助。【好句朗誦】5.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.我希望我的行為可以起到作用。6.Ashighschoolstudents,it’sourdutytotelleveryonearoundustosavewater.作為高中生，告訴身邊的每一個人節(jié)約用水是我們的責任。7.Let’sstartrightnowandsparenoefforttodoalittleeveryday,everyhourandeveryminute.讓我們從現(xiàn)在開始每天努力一點點，抓緊每一天、每一小時、每一分鐘?！竞镁淅收b】1.Ourgovernmentisaimingtobuildan“harmonioussociety”.1.an改為a2.Ithinkitiseverycitizen’sdutytoworkhardlytoachievethisgoal.2.hardly改為hard【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤3.Firstly,weshouldloveourgreatmotherland,oursocietyorourschool.3.or改為and4.Secondly,weshouldberespectandloveourparents.4.刪掉be5.Weshouldtrustourfellowstudentsandhelpeveryother.5.every改為each【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤6.LeiFengsetagoodexampleforustolearnfromhim.6.刪掉him7.Tobuildourcountryintoapowerfulsocialistcountry,“LeiFengSpirit”stillnecessary.7.still前面加is8.Becausehewasonlyasoldier,hemanagedtosaveaconsiderableamountofmoneyandgaveitawaytopoorpeople.8.Because改為Although/Though/While【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤9.Whateverhewasaskedtodoandnomatterhowdifficultthetaskwas,healwaystrieshisbest.9.tries改為tried10.LeiFengdiedover30yearsbefore.10.before改為ago【單句改錯】每句只有一個錯誤【2011江西卷改編：騎自行車倡議】假設你是星光中學的李華，將參加主題為“Let’sRideBicycles”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內容包括：

1．目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2．騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。參考詞匯： 低碳生活low-carbonlife； 節(jié)能energysaving【真題滿分佳作賞析】滿分佳作（一）Goodmorning,everyone,

IamLiHuaformXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.①Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen?②AsfarasI’mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.③Foronething,bicyclesdon’tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Therefore,theyareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon’tgiveoffwastegas.④Foranother,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexercise,whichisbeneficialtoourhealth.⑤Therefore,let’staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!

Thankyou!滿分賞析①Asisknowntoall(眾所周知)和withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards(隨著人們生活水平的改善)這兩個表達用來引出現(xiàn)象，顯示了語言實力；且有means作“方式”意思，是高級詞匯；bringing現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語；整句話顯得有檔次。②用AsfarasI’mconcerned(依我之見)引出自己的觀點，這是必備的表達觀點的套語。③兩個觀點用到了foronething,foranother來連接，使篇章連貫；且energy-saving,environmentallyfriendly,giveoffwastegas等描述環(huán)保的相關詞匯體現(xiàn)了作者深厚的語言功底。④本句運用到了which引導的定語從句，which指代前面整句話的事情。⑤最后兩句是加強呼吁，let’staketheresponsibilityto…和Comeonandjoinus!十分值得學習模仿。滿分佳作（二）Goodmorning,everyone,

IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”. ①Asourlivingstandardshaveimproved,carshaveincreasinglybecomeavailabletoordinaryfamilies. Buttoomanycarsontheroadmaycausemanyproblems.Foronething,wastegascomingfromcarshasbeenabigthreattotheenvironment.②What’smore,whilecarshavebroughtconveniencetous,theymayalsocausetrafficjams. ③Inthiscase,moreandmorepeoplehavebeguntotakeupbicyclesasanalternativewaytogetaround.Ononehand,asanenergy-savingmeansoftransportation,theydon’tcauseanypollutiontotheenvironment.Besides,ridingbicyclesisagoodformofexerciseandcancontributetowhatwecalllow-carbonlife. ④Therefore,let’sridebicycles,forthebenefitoftheenvironmentaswellasourownhealth.

Thankyou!滿分賞析①Asourlivingstandardshaveimproved用于引出一種現(xiàn)象，這一說法在中英文中一樣常用；available屬于中高難度的詞匯，體現(xiàn)出水平。②本句的while是“盡管”的意思，引出讓步狀語從句。③analternativeway(另外一種可選擇的方式)，alternative是較難詞匯，能給評卷老師好印象。④最后一句加強呼吁，簡單的一句let’sridebicycles就能起到這個作用。【模擬真題：提倡無償獻血】作文原題假如你是育才中學學生會主席李華，針對目前一些地方血庫紛紛告急的情況，請參照以下提示，用英文寫一份倡議書，提倡無償獻血（donatebloodforfree）。 要點提示：1.社會上對獻血的錯誤認識；

2.指出獻血的意義；

3.開展相關活動?！灸７路g】作文翻譯同學們，

最近，據(jù)報道，全國的一些血庫供血短缺。

一些人持有錯誤的觀點，認為獻血會對捐獻者的身體有害。但是事實是，當身體抽出少量的血，身體會很快作出調節(jié)，正常運作。

我們都知道，獻血非常重要。血對病人很重要，沒有血很多病人不能活下來。在我們這樣的年輕人中，獻血是一個社會責任。

我們高中學生，對醫(yī)學知識有更好的理解，應該為其他人樹立榜樣。從現(xiàn)在開始，我們學校會舉行一系列的活動來解釋獻血的好處。

現(xiàn)在就來獻血，拯救生命。學生會Boysandgirls,

Recentlysomebloodbanksacrossthecountryarereportedtobeinshortsupplyofblood.Somepeopleholdthewrongideathatdonatingblooddoesharmtothedonor’shealth.Butthetruthisthatwhenasmallamountofbloodistakenout,thebodywillmakeaquickadjustmenttoworknormally.Asweknow,donatingbloodisofgreatimportance.Bloodisimportanttopatients,withoutwhichmanycan’tsurvive.Amongyoungpeoplelikeus,donatingbloodisasocialresponsibility.Weseniorhighschoolstudents,whohaveabetterunderstandingofmedicalknowledge,shouldsetagoodexampleforotherpeople.Fromnowon,ourschoolwillholdaseriesofactivitiestoexplainthebenefitsofdonatingblood.Donatenowandsavealife!TheStudents’Union【2007福建卷改編：活動報道】假設你是李華，福建省某中學高三學生，請你根據(jù)以下學生會倡議書的內容給某英文報社寫一封信，敘述擬開展活動的內容并發(fā)表自己的看法。參考詞匯： 增進promote； 鼓勵節(jié)約encourageeconomyDeareditor,IamastudentofSeniorThreeinamiddleschoolinFujianProvince....Yourssincerely,LiHua【全真考場】【2007福建卷改編：活動報道】Deareditor,

IamastudentofSeniorThreeinamiddleschoolinFujianProvince.Inorderthatwecanmakethebestoflearningmaterials,theStudents’Unionofourschoolisarranginganactivity.WestudentsofSeniorThreearecalledontogiveawayourusedbooks,newspapersormagazinestothestudentsinthelowergrades.Theidea,whichisintendedtopromotefriendshipandencourageeconomy,ishighlypraisedandsupportedbytheteachersandstudentsalike.Theactivitywilllastabouttendays,fromJune10to20.Asastudent,Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.Ihopethatthiskindofactivitywillcontinueinthefuture.Yourssincerely,LiHua【2013安徽卷改編：倡導文明交通】假設你校英語社團正舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“OntheWaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文。內