2020-2022年高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)三年高考真題及滿分作文匯總

2020-2022年高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)三年高考真題及滿分作文匯總

-2022年高考真題

1.（2022年全國(guó)高考新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltown

werewarmingupandwalkingtheroute（路線）throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallforten

yearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn*twiththeother

children.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.nIwasafraidthatkidsfrom

otherschoolswouldlaughathim,**heexplaineduncomfortably.nIgavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethim

decide.**

Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊惱）.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.After

makingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcoiningtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfrom

sidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.

Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhis

classmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheywere

doing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.It

justtookhimlonger一thafsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlong

aftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwiththe

challengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldnftlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

【范文賞析】

Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

Iturnedhimaroundandlookedhimintheeyesincerely.Iquietlysaid,"David,ifyou'renotrunningbecauseyou're

afraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that'snotagoodenoughreason.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyou

reallywanttonm,David,run!”IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwitha

fiercebutquietdetermination,4€Fmgonnarun.”

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartingline.

Thestarter'sgunsounded.Buthehadonlygoneafewmetresbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheart

sank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundmetookupthecall.uComeonDavid,youcandoit!”

Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagainuntilhecrossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.

最后幾句結(jié)尾有三種：

第一種：（首選結(jié)尾）

Thatday,Davidgotaspecialawardforhiscourage.Healsogotrespectofallstudents.Tohim,thatwasworthawhole

lotmorethananaward.（169words）

第二種：（原文結(jié)尾）

Then,whenDavid'scoachslappedhimonthebackandsaidproudly,"Goodjob,David!”hecaughtmyeye,flashed

meatoothygrinandsaid,“Thatwaseasy!”（169words）

第三種：

Thatday,Davidgotaspecialawardforhiscourage.Hewasshiningonthewinner'spodium.David,withsomany

birthproblems,wasaherotoallofusandmostimportantly,tohimself!（175words）

2.（2022年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）

WhenDr.Hendersonwasassigning（指定）projectmatesfbrhispsychologyclass,Isecretlyhopedhewouldpair

mewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopedhewouldn'tassignmeto

workwiththefiercelycompetitive,extremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhada

personalitytomatch.Asfate（命運(yùn)）wouldhaveit,Dr.Hendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassand

announcedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.

Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself.HelookedatmeasthoughIweren'tthere.Ifelthetreatedme

asthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn*tmeanorabusive;he

justgavemetheimpressionhecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedupbetterifhediditalone.

Needlesstosay,Ididn*tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn*t

sayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.

Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis（假說(shuō)）,setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothe

statisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.

WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohada

reputationfbrsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades—theexactoppositeofme.Iwasoutmatched.Iactuallywantedto

droptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn*twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.I

decidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.

Afterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn'tsure

whatitmeantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3.結(jié)部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

Para1.Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.

Para2.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.

【范文賞析】

Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.ThoughIwantedtosharemyideaswithhimfully,Ifailedtodoso

fbrfearthatIwouldholdhimback.Ijustkeptnoddingwhenheaskedmewhetheritisoktodothiswayorthatway.I

thoughtitwasimpossibletopersuadehimintoacceptingmyviews,soIdidn'twanttowasteourtimetodiscuss.I

startedtowaittoleaveimmediatelywearrivedattheplace,andsodidhe.Ijusthopedthatthepresentationdaycould

comeearlier.

OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalfbraseriousdisease.IfeltsosorrytohearthatandIthoughtI

shouldvisithiminanycase.HewasalittlesurprisedtoseemewhenIsteppedintohiswardwithsomeflowersand

fruits.Iofferedtodotherestworkofourprojectandheinvitedmetosharemyideastoperfectit.Webegantoworkas

afineteamandfinallyfinishedourprojectontime.OurhardworkpaidoffandDr.Henderson'swasverysatisfied

withourwonderfulfindings.Fromthisproject,wealsolearnedthesignificanceofteammates.Justasthesayinggoes,

onepersoncangofar,butagroupofpersonscantravelfarther.

二2022年高考真題

1.（2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）

AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningfbrMother'sDay.How

pleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastand

chickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactly

whattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedto

boiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeff

broketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.

Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstarted

flyingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothe

sinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledover

andputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasa

messnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouched

thehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellof

burning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

2,請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

【范文賞析】

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father'sappearingwaslikeasaviortothe

twochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.Theymadethe

breadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Itwasall

rightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfect

breakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmoved

herverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn'texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,

“HappyMother'sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.

2.（2021年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.

Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.

Ididn*treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass（超過(guò)）

anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.

Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingfbr

myfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（長(zhǎng)號(hào)）.

ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringTrmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.

Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingfbrweedstospraywith

chemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.This

happenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydiflerentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb^-quarters,foxtails,

andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn't

surehowmuchitwouldamountto.

Athome,mydadsaid,nAjob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.**Mydad's

wordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.

Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.Idecidedit

wasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

Paragraph1：Thepayarrivedatlast

Paragraph2：Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.

【范文賞析】

Thepayarrivedatlast.Althoughthejobwasverytiring,IwasveryhappyinmyheartforIgotsomethingfrommy

work.Thetoiloflaborwasforgottenforthetimebeing.IthoughtIshouldhavemyownmoneyandplannedhowto

spendit."Howmuchmoneyhaveyoueamed?,,Dadasked.Iwassurprised,reluctanttosaymyincome.Thenext

morning,mydad'slivestocktruckstartedrunning.Isawmyfather^hard-workingfigureandthoughtofhiswords“A

job'sabigsteptogrowingup^.

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.TheywereworriedthatIwastooselfishtogive.

Irealizedthatmylaborwasveryhard,butmygrowthandourwholefamilyhadbeendependingonthehardworkof

myparents!Dadnevercomplainedaboutunfairness!Heevenseemedtothinkthatwasfair.Ithought,'Tveonly

workedfortwoweeks,buthowmanyyearsmyfatherhasworked!,9Intheevening,Dadcameback.Iproudlytookout

myownmoneyandhandedittoDad.

【解析】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者高中畢業(yè)后，參加農(nóng)場(chǎng)工作，辛辛苦苦掙到的錢(qián)，不情愿貢獻(xiàn)

給家庭，后來(lái)在看到父親的辛勞之后，理解了父母擔(dān)心的是自己太過(guò)自私而不知奉獻(xiàn)，終于想通，并自豪地

將自己勞動(dòng)所得交給父親的故事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“工資終于到了?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼?xiě)作者的工資到手后，高興地計(jì)劃自己用這筆錢(qián)，

不愿意交給父親，然后看到父親的辛勞。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我立刻明白了父母的擔(dān)心?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)作者明白了父母擔(dān)心自己不懂得奉

獻(xiàn)，想通了，然后自豪地把錢(qián)交給了父親。

2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線索：高興——計(jì)劃——不情愿——發(fā)現(xiàn)——奉獻(xiàn)——自豪

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①計(jì)劃：programme/plan

②.奉獻(xiàn)：give/devote

③發(fā)現(xiàn)：see/find

情緒類

①.不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant

②.自豪地：proudly/withpride

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].IthoughtIshouldhavemyownmoneyandplannedhowtospendit.（運(yùn)用了疑問(wèn)詞加動(dòng)詞不

定式作賓語(yǔ)）

[高分句型2].Irealizedthatmylaborwasveryhard,butmygrowthandourwholefamilyhad（that弓I導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句以

及過(guò)去完成進(jìn)行時(shí)）

三2020年高考真題

1.（2020年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)）

Onefall,mywifeEHiandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside

“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld^-thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.

Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears-likeallwildanimalsshouldbephotographed

fromasaffedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.But

sometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.

AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledour

garlicbread.

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthe

wire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.

Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblank

shotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough-hejustkept

tryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws（爪子）.

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeit

arrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter（相遇），Itooksomepicturesofthebear.

ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.Thecampmanager

suggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears9eyes,butdoesn*thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvited

guestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebearrantothelaketo

washhiseyes.

注意:1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

Paragraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoour

camp.____________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph?:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopter

arrived.___________________________________________________________________________________________

【范文賞析】

Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp,thenwerealizedthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,for

heseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefbncclikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhatto

do.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elli