作文2Changesinme文檔資料

composition-changesinme【題目】寫一篇以前你是什么樣子的，現(xiàn)在的你是什么樣子的短文?？梢杂靡韵绿崾驹~，不少于5句話。(quiet,active,short,tall,thin,strong,gocycling,ice-skate,...)一、審題：以前——一般過去時（過去式）現(xiàn)在——一般現(xiàn)在時（原形）以前：before,3yearsago,then,atthattime現(xiàn)在：now二、選擇標(biāo)題。ChangesinmeThenandNowBeforeandNow列表過去和現(xiàn)在對比，一一對應(yīng)?？梢詮耐饷病⑿愿?、能力、愛好等方面作對比。列3點最佳。三、寫作1、分3段。Before,I'mcouldn'tgocycling.Now,I'mcanrideabike.be動詞用法：(1)是(2)be＋形容詞(…的)(3)be＋動ing(4)begoingto+動原(表將來)不能加be動詞的情況。(1)動詞原形。l'mliketogoice-skating.(2)動詞過去式。I'mrodeahorselastweekend.四、開頭1.Hi,everyone.I'mAmy.I'm12yearsold.I'mdifferentnow.2.Changesarearoundme.3.Changesarewithme.4.Everythingischanging.Metoo!五、中間。（一）外貌對比1.（身高）Before,Iwasshort.Now,I'mtallerthanbefore.2.（體重）Before,Iwasthin.Now,I'mstrongerthanbefore.3.（身高＋體重）Before,Iwasshortandthin.Now,I'mtallerandstrongerthanbefore.4.（頭發(fā)）Before,Ihadshorthair.Now,Ihavelonghair.5.（眼鏡）Before,Ididn'twearglasses.butnow,Iwearglasses.二、性格對比quiet-active,shy-funny,strict-friendly/funny,（not）hard-workingatschool,(not)helpfulathome/school(1)Before,Iwasquiet.Now,I'mveryactiveinclass.Ialwaystalkwithjoy.(2)OnceIwasn'tanactivegirl.Ididn'ttalkalot.Now,Italkmorethanbefore.Ialwaystalkwithjoy.過去、現(xiàn)在寫一句也可以。寫你不會寫錯的。三、能力對比(couldn't/can+動原)1.Before,Icouldn'tgocycling.Now,Icanrideabike.Irideabikeeveryday.(Ilikeitverymuch.)(I'mgoodatridingabike.)gocycling=rideabikeice-skate=goice-skating(球類)playbadminton(樂器類)playthepianodosports=playsportscleanmyroom=dothecleaningwashmyclothescookdokungfumakeasnowmanswim=goswimming四、愛好對比didn'tlike/like+動ing+to+動原liked/don'tlike+動ing+to+動原1.Before,Ididn'tlikewinter.Ithoughtitwastoocold,andIcouldn'tgocycling.NowIliketoice-skate,soIlikewinter.(spring,summer,autumn,winter)2.(music,sports,English,maths)Before,Ididn'tlikemusic.Becauseitwastoohard(困難).Now,Icanplaythepiano.SoIlikemusicverymuch.五、tips1、可以把外貌、性格、能力、愛好相結(jié)合，寫作更出彩。2、高級詞匯、高級句子可以為你的作文增加光彩。3、但是，如果你不確定寫地對不對，還是改用一般的詞匯、一般的句子吧。因為錯詞、錯句會扣分，而且很嚴(yán)重。4、過去和現(xiàn)在對比，以三個為宜。如果句子足夠多，兩個也可以。5、寫作一般不少于5句話。不多于10句話。6、不要通篇都是Before,...Now,...Before,...Now,...Before,...Now,...寫作并不是造句子。7、表示過去，可以用before,then,atthattime,3yearsago時間可以放句首，也可以放句末。放句首，需要加逗號，放句末則不需要。六、范文(一)ChangesinmeHello,everyone.I'mAmy.I'mdifferentnow.3yearsago,Iwasshortandthin.Icouldn'trideabike.Now,I'mtallerandstrongerthanbefore.SoIcancycling.Ilikeitverymuch.Whatabigchange!ThenandNowEverythingischanging.Metoo!Before,Ihadshorthair.Butnow,Ihavelonghair.OnceIwasn'tanactivegirl.Ididn'ttalkalot.Now,Italkmorethanbefore.Ialwaystalkwithjoy.Changesarewithme.BeforeandNowHi,mynameisMike.Changesarewithme.3yearsago,Ididn'twearglasses.Iwasquietinclass.Atthattime,Ididn'tlikemusic.Ithoughtitwa