高中英語基礎(chǔ)寫作課件市公開課一等獎(jiǎng)百校聯(lián)賽優(yōu)質(zhì)課金獎(jiǎng)名師賽課獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

1/29BasicWriting2/29時(shí)間分配題型題量賦分時(shí)間（分鐘）基礎(chǔ)寫作11510基礎(chǔ)寫作命題特點(diǎn)：考生按所給內(nèi)容及要求，用5個(gè)規(guī)范英語句子描述所給信息全部內(nèi)容，并組成連貫短文。簡而言之，考查考生整理信息和組詞造句成文能力。3/29對于書面表示要求：1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆蓋全部語言關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)

Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性

3.coherent,tight上下文連貫性

即有效地使用語句間連接成份，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。4.usethewordsproperly

語言得體性5.Writeyourarticleclearly.6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.4/29Tomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.

表示時(shí)盡可能用一些較高級詞匯，防止使用重復(fù)詞語，使語言不至于單純和幼稚。也能夠給文章增添亮點(diǎn)。

（2）Tousesometransitionalwords

恰當(dāng)選取過渡詞，使文章緊湊，流暢。

(3)Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial

適當(dāng)使用各種句型，注意語言豐富性，多樣化，以改變多端形式來表現(xiàn)豐富多彩內(nèi)容。5/29Basicwritingskills

Waysofwritinggoodsentences6/29方法一.一句多譯

Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly….

Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…7/29Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosooner

hadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardly

hadwearrivedatthevillagewhen

we….8/29Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture

方法一.一句多譯

一…就受到歡迎9/29AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…方法一.一句多譯10/29Practice

一句多譯

這本書花了我300元。

Ispent300yuanonthebook.Ipaid300yuanforthebook.

Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.

11/29Practice

一句多譯昨天下午他才來。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.

Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.

Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.

12/29Rewritethesentences

方法二.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡練高檔

（1）MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

（2）Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.

Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.

13/29方法二.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡練高檔Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非謂語動(dòng)詞)聽到這個(gè)消息,他們變很激動(dòng)._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.盡管被通知許多遍,他依然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò).__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀請講話,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持緘默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

Havingbeentoldinvited14/29Translatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非謂語動(dòng)詞)1,面對困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。2，引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.

Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.15/29方法三.豐富句式DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒裝句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.16/29方法三.豐富句式SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUsefulThedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.17/29Ifailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.

18/291.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒裝句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虛擬語氣）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice

怎樣使用較豐富句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

19/295.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用狀語從句）

6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（用并列句）7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

(使用倒裝句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.20/29Usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.Makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.Sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful

Summaries:

21/29Practice此四幅畫描述了愛鳥周活動(dòng)中李明某一天所經(jīng)歷事，由此寫一篇文章。要求：1必須使用5個(gè)句子表示圖畫內(nèi)容。2將5個(gè)句子組成連貫短文。22/29步驟一審題narrationpasttensethethirdpersontimeorderwritingstyle:tense:person:order:23/29caughtabirdfixedastringtoitagirllookformotherapolicecomforther步驟二關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)24/29sendherhomelostinthoughtsetthebirdfreefeelhappy步驟二關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)25/29步驟三.擴(kuò)展成句，連句成篇1.Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.

2.Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.3.ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought.4.LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.26/29步驟四.仔細(xì)檢驗(yàn)，認(rèn)真修改①查是否遺漏關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，信息是否