高考英語(yǔ)三輪沖刺查補(bǔ)易混易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)12 應(yīng)用文寫作之告知信、建議信、道歉信（含解析）

查補(bǔ)易混易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)12應(yīng)用文寫作之告知信、建議信、道歉信體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談II卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談全國(guó)卷乙卷說(shuō)明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報(bào)社投稿甲卷應(yīng)用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向校刊表達(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應(yīng)用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國(guó)卷乙卷應(yīng)用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應(yīng)用文征求建議征求外國(guó)朋友建議，哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人2020全國(guó)卷I卷應(yīng)用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛(ài)戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應(yīng)用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動(dòng)III卷應(yīng)用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請(qǐng)幫忙指導(dǎo)【告知信】首段：交代寫信背景及寫信目的I'mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyouwill...Therefore，I'mwritingtoremind/informyou...得知你將……我非常高興。因此，我寫信提醒/通知你……I'mveryexcited/gladtoknowthatyoutakeagreatinterestin...Consequently，I'dliketointroduce...toyou.得知你對(duì)…很感興趣，我非常興奮/高興。因此，我想給你介紹…Knowingyouintendto/aregoingto...，Iamdelightedtosharewith./tellyousomeinformationabout...知道你打算…..，我很樂(lè)意和你分享/告訴你一些關(guān)于……的信息。主體部分：闡述活動(dòng)目的及活動(dòng)內(nèi)容Inordertoraiseourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection，wewillorganizeatree-plantingactivityinthewesternmountainousarea.為了提高我們的環(huán)保意識(shí)，我們將在西部山區(qū)組織一次植樹(shù)活動(dòng)。Thedetailsof..areasfollows.一些關(guān)于…的細(xì)節(jié)如下。Theeventisscheduledtostartat..活動(dòng)安排在……（時(shí)間）開(kāi)始。Firstly，inorderto.，youshould..Besides，you'dbetter..首先，為了……，你應(yīng)該……。另外，你最好……Toachievebetterperformance，you'dbetter..為了獲得更好的表現(xiàn)，你最好…….尾段：表達(dá)祝愿與期待Ifyouhaveanydifficulty/troublein...，pleasefeelfree/donthesitatetoturntomeforhelp.如果你在……方面有任何困難，請(qǐng)盡管找我?guī)兔?。Wishyouanice/pleasantstay/timein...！祝你在……過(guò)得愉快！Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucan...如果你能夠，我將非常感激?！緷M分范文】DearTom，KnowingyoutakeagreatinterestinChineseculture，IamdelightedtosharewithyousomeinformationabouttheBeijingOperaWeek.It'stheperfecttimeforyoutojoinusbecausetheannualBeijingOperaWeekiscomingsoon.Therewillbelotsofrehearsalsbeforetheshowsandwe'dlikeyoutoplayarole.Youdon'thavetomemorizelinesbutneedtolearnsomemovements，sobesuretocometotheconcerthallforpracticeonFridayandSundayevenings.Inordertofeeleasyandcomfortable，you'dbetterwearlightclothesandshoes.Ihopeyouwillfinditfun.Yours，LiHua【建議信】首段：開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山表明寫信目的I'mverysorrytohearthatyouhavetroublein.......atthemoment.Herearesometipsforyou.獲悉此刻你遇到……麻煩，我深感遺憾。這是給你的一些建議。Learningthat......，'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto........得知，我寫信給你一些關(guān)于如何…的建議。主體部分：提出具體建議Whenitcomestosuchasituation，Iwouldliketosuggestthat........Foronething，........Foranother,.......What'smore........當(dāng)遇到這種情況時(shí)，我想建議…。一方面，……。另一方面，……。而且，…AsfarasI'mconcerned/Frommypointofview，itisagoodideato......./itwouldbewiseofyouto.......Besides，Istronglyadviseyouto..Lastbutnotleast，youcan.........就我而言/在我看來(lái)，……是個(gè)好主意/你……是明智的。此外，我強(qiáng)烈建議你……。最后但同樣重要的是，你可以……尾段：希望采納建議并表示祝福Personally，itwouldbebeneficialifyoustickto........在我看來(lái)，如果你堅(jiān)持……的話會(huì)有好處的2.Iwillbeveryhappyifyoucantakemyadvice/ideasintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議/想法，我會(huì)很開(kāi)心。Hopefullythesesuggestionswillbeofgreathelptoyou.希望這些建議對(duì)你有很大的幫助?！緷M分范文】DearMichael，I'mmorethandelightedtolearnthatyouaregoingtoparticipateintheTraditionalChineseCultureCompetition.I'mwillingtogiveyouahandandoffersomepracticalsuggestionsatyourrequest.Tobeginwith，itisnecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningtraditionalChineseculture，thusbroadeningyourhorizonsandwellequippingyouforthecomingcompetition.Secondly，whynotwatchsomevideoclips？Youareboundtogetsomeinspirationfromthem.Asforwhenandwheretomeet，canwemakeitat4：00thisFridayafternooninyourclassroom？Ifit’snotconvenientforyou，pleaseletmeknowwhattimeissuitableforyouinadvance.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua【道歉信】首段：表明寫作意圖，對(duì)某事表示歉意1.I'mtrulysorrytotellyouthat.….,andI’mwritingtoexpress/conveymydeepestapologytoyou...很抱歉告訴你……，我寫信向你表達(dá)我深深的歉意。2.Iamwritingtooweyouanapologyforbeingunableto...我沒(méi)能……,我寫信向你道歉。3.IamterriblysorryforwhatIdid,butbelieveIdidn'tmeanto...對(duì)于我做的事，我感到十分抱歉。但請(qǐng)你相信,我并非有意要……4.IapologizemostsincerelyforwhatIsaidthatday.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou.我誠(chéng)摯地為那天我說(shuō)的話向你道歉。我不是有意傷害你的。5、Pleaseforgivemefornotbeingabletoinformyou.請(qǐng)?jiān)徫覜](méi)能通知你。6、Ioweyouanapologyforbeingunabletohelpyou.我沒(méi)能幫助你，應(yīng)該向你道歉。7.IamindeedsorryforwhatIsaid,butbelieveIhadnointentionto...對(duì)于我說(shuō)的話，我確實(shí)感到很抱歉。但請(qǐng)相信，我并非故意要......。8.Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.請(qǐng)?jiān)徫艺f(shuō)話欠妥。 主體部分：說(shuō)明道歉的具體原因1、IfeelawfullysorryaboutitandIwonderifit'sconvenientforyoutomakeitanothertime.為此我感到非常抱歉，我想知道你是否方便另約時(shí)間。2、Muchtomyregret,Iwasunableto.….andIwishthatmyapologycouldhelptosomeextent.很遺憾,我不能夠……希望我的道歉在某種程度上能起到作用。3、I’mafraidIhavebroughtyoutoomuchtroubleandIwantyoutoknowhowregretfulIamfeeling.恐怕我給你帶來(lái)了太多麻煩，同時(shí)我也想讓你知道對(duì)此我覺(jué)得很抱歉。4、Ijustdonotknowwhattosayaboutthematter. 關(guān)于這件事我不知該說(shuō)些什么。5、IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.我想讓你知道現(xiàn)在我是多么遺憾。6、Ididnotmeantohurtyourfeelings.我不想傷害你的感情。7、Ifeelyouaredispleasedatmyfailingtokeepmypromise,butIhopeyouwillforgiveme.恐怕你會(huì)因?yàn)槲业氖Ъs而不高興，但是希望你能原諒我。段尾：再次表明歉意，請(qǐng)求諒解并提出補(bǔ)救措施1.Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.對(duì)于造成的不便，我再次表示歉意。2.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapologies.我衷心希望你能理解我的處境,并接受我的道歉。3.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再次表示歉意。4.I'msorryforalltheinconvenience.我為引起的所有不便表示歉意。5.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyoncemoreforanyinconveniencecaused.對(duì)于任何帶來(lái)的不便，請(qǐng)?jiān)俅谓邮芪艺嬲\(chéng)的道歉。滿分范文DearTom,Iamterriblysorryfornothavingattendedyourclassontime.NowIamwritingyouthislettertoshowmydeepregret.Iwillbeverygratefulifyouarekindtolistentomyexplanation.BecauseitismyfirsttimetoliveinGuangzhouandIcannotadapttotheweatherherequickly,I'vehadaheadachethesedays.behonest,IthinkyouwillbemybestteachertohelpmeimprovemyEnglish.SoIapologizeagainformynotattendingyourclass.IwillmakemygreateffortonEnglishinthefutureandwillnotdisappointyounexttime!Iwonderifyoucouldexcuseme.Sincerelyyours,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Awareofyourenthusiasmfor/Delightedtolearnthat______(活動(dòng)主題、你對(duì)主題的興趣),I’mwritingtoextendmy______(看法、關(guān)心、歡迎等)andinformyouofsomerelevantinformation. ______(活動(dòng)信息).Tobeginwith,______(要點(diǎn)一).Furthermore,______(要點(diǎn)二).Tosumup,______(要點(diǎn)三). Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Youcan’timaginehow______(情感)Iamhearingabout______(寫信的原因).I’mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Firstly,youaresupposedto______(建議一).Additionally(Foronereason),itmakessenseto______(建議二/理由一).Moreover（Foranotherreason）,______(建議三/理由二)isalsoagoodchoice.Dobearinmindthat（Therefore）______(建議四/理由三) Iamfullyconvincedthatusethe

tipsaboveandwewill______(以上建議的好處).Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount(表達(dá)希望接受建議).Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)I'mterriblysorrytoinformyouthat______(寫信事由).Thus,Iamwritingtoapologizefornotkeepingmyword.Somethingunexpectedhappenedand______(失約理由).Shallwefixanothertime?I’llbeavailableanytimeafter______(補(bǔ)救辦法).Will______(另約時(shí)間)suitsyourconvenience?Ifit’sok,let’smeetat______(見(jiàn)面地點(diǎn)).Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ihopetheadjustmentwon’tputyouintomuchtrouble.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua1．（2021·北京·高考真題）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國(guó)好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說(shuō)明原因;2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)好友Jim寫一封電子郵件，就因故不能赴約而致歉并建議再約。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累通知：tell→inform除此之外：inaddition→besides適合：fit→suit有空的：available→free2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.拓展句：Inaddition,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiParknextSaturday,whenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)2．（2019·天津·高考真題）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國(guó)友好校將派教師來(lái)你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動(dòng)?；顒?dòng)期間，英方教師Chris將做一個(gè)有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座、現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件:

⑴你喜歡的講座話題（從音樂(lè)、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一）；⑵選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；⑶希望從中有何收獲。注意：⑴詞數(shù)不少于100；⑵可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；⑶開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出、不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【參考答案】DearChris,

I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.It’sourgreatpleasuretohaveyouvisitourschoolandgivealectureonwesternartduringthecomingsummervacation.Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadvice,andIhopethatIcangainmoreknowledgethroughthelecture.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英方教師Chris寫信，就一個(gè)有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座內(nèi)容給出意見(jiàn)?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累做演講：givealecture→makeaspeech提供：providesb.withsth.→refersb.sth.機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity→chance采納建議：takeone’sadvice→followone’sadvice2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Servedasabridge,westernmusicprovidesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.拓展句：Westernmusic，whichisservedasabridge，providesusteenagerswiththeopportunitytobroadenourhorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingonculturediversities.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Whenitcomestomysuggestions,Iamquiteinterestedinwesternmusic,andexpectthatyoucoulddeliverthelectureonthistopic.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Italsogivesusstrengthandhopewhenweareovercomingdifficulties.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）3．（2023屆遼寧省普通高中高三第二次模擬考試英語(yǔ)試題）假定你是李華，你的一個(gè)朋友經(jīng)常感到疲憊，因此非?？鄲馈Ｕ?qǐng)你給他一些建議，要多鍛煉，提高身體素質(zhì)。內(nèi)容包括：1.鍛煉的好處;2.建議一種鍛煉形式并說(shuō)明理由。3.祝愿健康。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】Tobefitandhealthyyouneedtobephysicallyactive.Regularphysicalactivitycanhelpprotectyoufromdiseases.Cyclingisahealthyexercisethatcanbeenjoyedbypeopleofallages.Itonlytakestwotofourhoursaweektoachieveageneralimprovementtoyourhealth.Itcauseslessstrainandinjuriesthanmostotherformsofexercise.Besides,cyclingdoesnotrequirehighlevelsofphysicalskill.Onceyoulearn,youdon’tforget.Isincerelyhopeyouwillbehealthyandenergeticwiththehelpofphysicalexercise.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就“朋友經(jīng)常感到疲憊，因此非?？鄲馈苯o他寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：鍛煉的好處、建議一種鍛煉形式并說(shuō)明理由并祝愿健康?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累獲得：achieve→obtain此外：besides→what’smore要求：require→demand真誠(chéng)地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Tobefitandhealthyyouneedtobephysicallyactive.拓展句：Youneedtobephysicallyactivesothatyou

keepfitandhealthyand,moreimportantly,moreenergetic.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Cyclingisahealthyexercisethatcanbeenjoyedbypeopleofallages.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Onceyoulearn,youdon’tforget.（運(yùn)用了once引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）4．（2023屆天津市南開(kāi)區(qū)高三資料調(diào)查試卷英語(yǔ)試題）假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，你最近收到英國(guó)好友Chris的郵件。信中提到他將于4月中旬隨學(xué)訪團(tuán)到天津交流學(xué)習(xí)，希望你給他推薦一下最值得去的景點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示歡迎；(2)簡(jiǎn)單介紹天津；(3)推薦一處旅游景點(diǎn)并給出理由。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,I’msogladtoreceiveyouremail.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopethisishelpful.Can’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiJin【參考答案】DearChris,I’msogladtoreceiveyouremail.WhatmakesmereallyexcitedisthatyouaregoingtovisitTianjin.Whatawonderfulidea!Welcometomyhometown!Tianjinisacitywithalonghistory.Theweatherisgoodbutperhapsalittlebithotinsummer.You’llhavevarioussnacksinTianjinandmeanwhilefindlotsofwesternstylebuildingshereontheFiveMajorAvenues.Ifyouwanttoenjoybeautifulcityviews,HaiheRivershouldbeagoodchoice.Ifyouliketohavefunandseesomeanimals,theWaterParkandTianjinZoocouldmakeyoucontent.MyfavoriteplaceistheAncientCultureStreetwherethereareplentyofinterestingtraditionalthings.Ihopethisishelpful.Can’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiJin【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，你最近收到英國(guó)好友Chris的郵件。信中提到他將于4月中旬隨學(xué)訪團(tuán)到天津交流學(xué)習(xí)，希望你給他推薦一下最值得去的景點(diǎn)?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累各種各樣的：various→avarietyof欣賞：enjoy→admire/appreciate滿意的：content→satisfied與此同時(shí)：meanwhile→atthesametime2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Tianjinisacitywithalonghistory.拓展句：Tianjinisacitywhichhasalonghistory.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】WhatmakesmereallyexcitedisthatyouaregoingtovisitTianjin.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】MyfavoriteplaceistheAncientCultureStreetwherethereareplentyofinterestingtraditionalthings.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）5．（2023屆陜西省西安市新城區(qū)高三下學(xué)期第二次模擬考試英語(yǔ)試題）假定你是李華，為迎接高考，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)將舉辦“我為學(xué)習(xí)獻(xiàn)計(jì)策”的征文比賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以Howtokeeppositiveunderpressure為題寫一篇短文參賽。內(nèi)容如下：1.背景介紹；2.提出建議；3.鼓勵(lì)前行。注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Howtokeeppositiveunderpressure_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】HowtokeeppositiveunderpressureWiththecollegeentranceexamapproaching,somesenior3studentsareloadedwithextrapressure.Howtokeeppositiveiscrucialtoimprovinglearningefficiency.Herearesometipsforthat.Firstofall,beconfidentinyourself.Nomatterwhatarises,believeyouhavetheabilitytodealwithit.Second,focusyourattentiononperformingthetaskathandinsteadofworries,fearsanddoubts.What’smore,setshorttermgoalsandrewardyourselfwhenyouhaveachievedeachone,whichwillmakeyoufeelmotivatedtokeepupwiththegoodwork.Keepingahealthylifestylesuchasbalanceddietsorregularexercisealsomattersinreducingpressure.Nopressure,nodiamonds.Sopleasechoosetobepositiveevenifyouarefacingpressure.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，為迎接高考，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)將舉辦“我為學(xué)習(xí)獻(xiàn)計(jì)策”的征文比賽活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以Howtokeeppositiveunderpressure為題寫一篇短文參賽?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累首先：firstofall→tobeginwith集中：focuson→concentrateon實(shí)現(xiàn)：achieve→realize處理：dealwith→handle2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Keepingahealthylifestylesuchasbalanceddietsorregularexercisealsomattersinreducingpressure.拓展句：Itiskeepingahealthylifestylesuchasbalanceddietsorregularexercisethatmattersinreducingpressure.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Howtokeeppositiveiscrucialtoimprovinglearningefficiency.(運(yùn)用了“特殊疑問(wèn)詞+不定式”結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]What’smore,setshorttermgoalsandrewardyourselfwhenyouhaveachievedeachone,whichwillmakeyoufeelmotivatedtokeepupwiththegoodwork.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)6．（2023屆海南省高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)調(diào)研考試英語(yǔ)試題）近年來(lái)，中學(xué)生近視率呈上升趨勢(shì)。請(qǐng)你為學(xué)?！坝⒄Z(yǔ)園地”宣傳欄寫一份倡議書,呼吁大家合理用眼,保護(hù)視力。倡議書內(nèi)容包括：1.倡議的原因和目的；2.提出合理用眼的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Protectoureyesight________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】ProtectoureyesightRecentyearshavewitnessedanincreasingnumberofstudentswhobecomenear-sighted,bringingeyesightproblemsofteenagerstopublicattention.Therefore,Icalloneveryonetotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectoureyesight.Wecanmakeitahabittostopforafewminutesduringourstudyandlookatdistantobjectstogetregularbreaks.Besides,weshouldkeepatleast30centimetersawayfromthereadingmaterial.Lastbutnotleast,wheneversignsofeyesightproblemsoccur,consultadoctorimmediately.Intheseways,wecanprotectourselvesfrombecomingnear-sighted.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。近年來(lái)，中學(xué)生近視率呈上升趨勢(shì)。請(qǐng)你為學(xué)?！坝⒄Z(yǔ)園地”宣傳欄寫一份倡議書,呼吁大家合理用眼,保護(hù)視力?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累呼吁：callon→appealto咨詢：consult→counsel立即：immediately→atonce采取措施：takemeasures→takeaction2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Therefore,Icalloneveryonetotakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectoureyesight.拓展句：Therefore,itiseffectivemeasuresthatIcalloneveryonetotaketoprotectoureyesight.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Recentyearshavewitnessedanincreasingnumberofstudentswhobecomenear-sighted,bringingeyesightproblemsofteenagerstopublicattention.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Wecanmakeitahabittostopforafewminutesduringourstudyandlookatdistantobjectstogetregularbreaks.(運(yùn)用了it作形式賓語(yǔ))7．（2010·山東·高考真題）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件：1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)120~150；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。DearTom,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Sincerelyyours

LiHua【參考答案】DearTom,IwasfartoohappythatwemadeanappointmenttovisitBeijingtogethernextweekend.HowIappreciatetheopportunitytobeyourguideinBeijing!ButI’mafraidwe’llhavetomakeitanothertime,becauseI’llbemeetingmyuncleattheairport.HeisonbusinessfromAustralia,andwillbehomeforonlytwodays.It’sararechanceforourfamilytogetreunitedsincehelefthometenyearsago.Ihopeyou’llforgivemefornotkeepingmyword.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,wecanmakeittheweekendafternext,oryoumaymakethechoice,OK?Bytheway,myfamilyandIwillbeoverjoyedtohaveyourcompanywhenmyuncleishome.Ifyouhavenoplan,pleaseletmeknow,andI’llfetchyouuponmyuncle’sreturn.Haveahappyweekend.Sincerelyyours

LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類作文?！驹斍榻馕觥窟@是一篇電子郵件寫作，寫作緣由是因?yàn)樽约阂蚬?，而不能赴與在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom下周末去北京旅游的約定。郵件內(nèi)容主要包括表達(dá)歉意，解釋原因，以及另約時(shí)間。在結(jié)構(gòu)上面，文章使用了三段式，第一自然段首先真誠(chéng)地表達(dá)自己的歉意，第二自然段，仔細(xì)說(shuō)明自己失約的緣由，第三自然段，再次主動(dòng)真誠(chéng)的邀請(qǐng)Tom一起去北京旅游。文章結(jié)果層次分明，調(diào)理清晰。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句和固定句型：HowIappreciatetheopportunitytobeyourguideinBeijing!這句話運(yùn)用了感嘆句。Ifit’sconvenientforyou,wecanmakeittheweekendafternext,oryoumaymakethechoice,OK?運(yùn)用了條件主語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。8．（貴州省六校聯(lián)盟2022-2023學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期適應(yīng)性考試英語(yǔ)試題）假如你是李華，你的來(lái)自美國(guó)的留學(xué)生朋友Mike跟你約好去參觀茶文化博物館，但你因故將不能赴約，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給Mike寫一封電子郵件，說(shuō)明情況。內(nèi)容如下：1．表示歉意并說(shuō)明原因;2．邀請(qǐng)他參加你校下周六茶藝社團(tuán)的活動(dòng)。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右;2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：茶藝teaceremonyDearMike,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearMike,Duetoachangeinmyschoolarrangement,I’mverysorrythatIwon’tbeabletokeepmyappointmenttovisittheTeaMuseumwithyouasscheduled．Isincerelyapologizeforanyinconveniencecausedbytheunexpectedchange.Isuggestweputoffourmeetingfrom3pmthisSaturdaytothesametimenextSunday．Willthatbesuitableforyou?ThegoodnewsisthatsomeactivitiesaboutteaculturearetobeheldinourschoolnextSaturday．Alectureandateaceremonyshowwillbeincluded,whichwilldefinitelyattractteacultureloverslikeyou．Isincerelyinviteyoutotheevent,whichwillhelpyoubetterunderstandChineseteaculture．Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply．Yourssincerely,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假如你是李華，你的來(lái)自美國(guó)的留學(xué)生朋友Mike跟你約好去參觀茶文化博物館，但你因故將不能赴約，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給Mike寫一封電子郵件，說(shuō)明情況?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累因?yàn)椋篸ueto→becauseof建議：suggest→advise舉行：hold→host誠(chéng)摯地：sincerely→heartfeltly2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Isincerelyapologizeforanyinconveniencecausedbytheunexpectedchange.拓展句：Isincerelyapologizeforanyinconvenience,whichwascausedbytheunexpectedchange.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Alectureandateaceremonyshowwillbeincluded,whichwilldefinitelyattractteacultureloverslikeyou.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]ThegoodnewsisthatsomeactivitiesaboutteaculturearetobeheldinourschoolnextSaturday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句)9．（2018·全國(guó)·高考真題）你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫一則通知，請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英語(yǔ)短片GrowingTogether，內(nèi)容包括：(1)短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；(2)放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；(3)歡迎對(duì)短片提出意見(jiàn)。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Boysandgirls,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudentsUnionJune8,2018【參考答案】Boysandgirls,Ihavegoodnewsforyou.TheEnglishfilmGrowingTogethermadebyourteachersandsomeseniorstudentswillbedisplayedthisweekend.Itshowsusthewholehistoryofschool’sdevelopment,whichisIthinktheattractiontous.Ifyouarecuriousaboutthehistoryofourschoolorconcernedaboutitsfuture,youmustn’tmissthisexcellentopportunity!Besides,allyoursuggestionsandcommentsaboutthisfilmwillbewelcome.ItwillbedisplayedintheSchoolFilmHall,from9:00amto10:00am,June9th,Saturday.That’sall.Thankyou.TheStudentsUnionJune8,2018【詳情解析】英語(yǔ)書面通知的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，多使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、簡(jiǎn)單句。在通知中不應(yīng)當(dāng)過(guò)度的使用較復(fù)雜的詞語(yǔ)和讀起來(lái)拗口的句子。第二個(gè)注意點(diǎn)：層次一定要清晰，一個(gè)層次要表達(dá)一件事情，使人看起來(lái)一目了然。10．（山東省濟(jì)南市2022-2023學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末統(tǒng)考英語(yǔ)試題）你校外教Frank受邀本周末在學(xué)校報(bào)告廳做報(bào)告。因特殊原因，學(xué)校將報(bào)告調(diào)整為線上舉行。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，通知相關(guān)內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)如下:1.變更原因;2.變更后的時(shí)間和方式;3.表達(dá)歉意。注意:1.詞數(shù)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearFrank,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearFrank,I’msorrytoinformyouthereportscheduledinthelecturehallthisweekendwillhavetobemadeonline.Giventhattheequipmentinthehallbrokedownanditneedsrepairing,wehavenochoicebuttorearrangeyourlecture.IwonderifitispossibleforyoutoconductaTencentconferenceorTintinconferencethisSaturdayevening.Shouldyouhaveanyproblemorsuggestion,dofeelfreetocontactmeforfurtherinformation.Ideeplyapologizeforanyinconveniencewemayhavecaused.Yourearlyreplyiswhatweareexpecting.Yours,LiHua【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以李華的身份給受邀本周末在學(xué)校報(bào)告廳做報(bào)告的外教Frank寫一封郵件，告知他因特殊原因?qū)W校將報(bào)告調(diào)整為線上舉行并說(shuō)明相關(guān)內(nèi)容。【詳情解析】詞匯積累告訴：inform→tell別無(wú)選擇：havenochoicebutto→havenooptionbutto/havenoalternativebutto會(huì)議：conference→meeting/session聯(lián)系：contact→incontactwith/contactwith句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)化原句：Giventhattheequipmentinthehallbrokedownanditneedsrepairing,wehavenochoicebuttorearrangeyourlecture.拓展句：Wehavenochoicebuttorearrangeyourlecturebecausetheequipmentinthehallbrokedownanditneedsrepairing.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]IwonderifitispossibleforyoutoconductaTencentconferenceorTintinconferencethisSaturdayevening.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Ideeplyapologizeforanyinconveniencewemayhavecau