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hope

you

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these

suggestions

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.Yours,Li

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explain

your

reason

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be

used?What

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it

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your

advice

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am

sorry

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the

new

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days

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advice

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surroundings

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teachers

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classmates

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like

to

make

friends

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if

theyknow

youbetter.

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of

all

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it’s

a

good

idea

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talk

to

ourclassmates

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which

can

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know

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us

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friends

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give

others a

hand

if

theyneed

your

help

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I

hope

you’ll

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my

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,Li

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have

welearned

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the

reason

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writingPara.

2

the

analysis

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theproblemsPara.

3

offering

advice

/

makingsuggestionsPara.

4

summary

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conclusionUseful

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