新概念英語第三冊(cè)作文指導(dǎo)

新概念英語第三冊(cè)作文指導(dǎo)一、題型解析要求考生在閱讀一篇短文后，根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容和提示，進(jìn)行續(xù)寫。該題型旨在考查考生的閱讀理解能力、思維能力和寫作能力。二、解題步驟1.仔細(xì)閱讀短文，理解文章主旨和思路。2.根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容和提示，確定續(xù)寫部分的主題和寫作方向。3.結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)和語言儲(chǔ)備，進(jìn)行構(gòu)思和寫作。4.檢查所寫內(nèi)容是否符合題目要求，是否與原文內(nèi)容相吻合。三、寫作技巧1.認(rèn)真審題，明確續(xù)寫任務(wù)。2.確定主題和寫作方向，確保續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與原文內(nèi)容相吻合。3.注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱的使用，保持前后一致。4.注意上下文的連貫性和邏輯性，使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和短語。5.注意語言的質(zhì)量和表達(dá)方式，盡量使用生動(dòng)、形象的語言。6.檢查拼寫、語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等細(xì)節(jié)問題，確保語言準(zhǔn)確無誤。四、優(yōu)秀范文閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly'sfamily.HereldersisterSerenawasnowdancingatatopcollege.ThoughKelly'smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersister'sfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethadfadedyearsbefore,andshewaseagerforanewchallenge.Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudio,shewalkedpastthegym,fascinatedbyboxers(拳擊手)traininginsidetheboxingring.Shewasdeeplyimpressedbyhowhardtheyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infact,she'dlongbeenattractedtoboxing.Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT(選拔).ThatwaswhatKellyreallywantedtodo.Sheknewhermomhadhighexpectationsforherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.Thenextday,shegatheredhercourageandtoldSerenaabouthernewpassion.Atfirst,Serenadidn'tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious,shereplied,"YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingisonlyforboys,andyou'resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly.""ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,"Kellyinsisted,"andwhatexactlydoes'onlyforboys'mean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!"Gradually,touchedbyherdeterminationandpassion,Serenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingtorespectherdecision,nomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunching(擊打)abilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn'tcomenaturaltoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindtostickwithherchoice.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)要求應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。范文一：ThenKellybeganhertraining,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Everydayafterschool,Kellydashedtotheboxinggym,occupyingherselfwiththeintensetraining.Stretchinglegs,practicingherfootworkandimprovingendurancehadbecomethebittersweetroutineofherlife.Evenwhenshewasmadefunofbyboysinthegym,shebitherliptightlyandcontinuedhertraining.Finally,thetryoutcame.Extremelynervousthough,shesteppedintotheboxingring,movedfastandpunchedhardtothesurpriseofothercandidates.Afterthetryout,Kellyleftthegymconfidently,knowingshedidherbest.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Toherdelight,Kellyfoundhernameonthelist.Thrilled,shesharedthenewswithSerena,bothreadytorevealthesecrettotheirmom.Atdinnerthatday,Kellygatheredhercourageandsaidtohermom,“I'msorry,Mom.I'vemadetheboxingteamandI'mreadytocarvemyownpath."Atfirst,aflickerofdisbeliefandshockcrossedhermom'sface,butafteralong,heart-to-hearttalk,shegaveKellyabearhugandwhisperedsoftly,“I'msoproudofyouforbeingyourself.”高純同學(xué)：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.DaysandnightswitnessedKellyputtingherbackintotraining.Shekeptrunningeverymorningandpunchingthesandbageverynightdespitedoubtsandlaughtercomingfromothers.Withsweatservingasatokenofherrelentlesseffortsandunflaggingdetermination,shetoneduphermuscles,madestridesinfootworkandpunchingabilitiesandbrokedownthebiasthatboxingisonlyforboys.Asthetryoutfinallycame,Kellyperformedperfectlywithstrengthandconfidence,whileSerenawasconcealingthewholethingfromtheirmother.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.WithKelly'snameshiningonthelist,sheknewthathereffortspaidoff.Scarcelyhadthenameleaptintothetwosisters'eyeswhentheycouldn’tcontaintheirecstasyandexcitement.Halfanxiousandhalfjoyous,theydartedbackhomeandpouredoutthethingtotheirmom.Atfirst,Momfurrowedhereyebrow.Butgradually,Kelly'sdeterminationinhervoiceironedhermom'swrinklesout.Finally,shewrappedherarmsaroundKellyandsaid,"I'mproudofyou!"Thesewordsmadeaboutasmuchsenseasbreezeandhintedthatit'struepassionthatcarvesherownpath.向澤宇同學(xué)：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Comparedwithotherboxersshemet,shehadlittleexperienceandlostgroundtothemattheverybeginning,butthatneverdefeatedher.Everyday,whenshehadsparetime,sunandmoonalwayswitnessedafigurehittingandmovinginthegym.Despiteherbeinglaughedatbysomeboysandreceivingmisunderstanding,neverinhermindpoppedthewords"givingup",andherskillswereenhanceddaybyday.Finallythedayoftryoutcame.Confident,sheshowedeverythingshehadpracticedperfectlywithoutevenanerror!Breathingasighofrelief,shesawtheshockedlooksofothersandknewshehadmadeit.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Crowdsgathering,everycandidatewaseagertofindhisownname.Squeezingherselfintothecrowds,Kellywasimmediatelygreetedbyhername.Transfixedwithirresistibleexhilaration,shejumpedoverthemoonandsharedthisthrillingnewswithSerena.However,shehadtofaceanotherconcernnow:howwouldhermomreact?WhatifMomdidn'tsupport?Thatnightatdinner,KellylookedatSerena,noddedherheadandsummoneduphercouragetotellalltohermom.Tohersurprise,afterafewsecondsofsilence,Momsmiledanduttered,"Idon'tmeantolimityourfuture,andit'sgreatthatyoucarveyourownpath!"Haditnotbeenforthisexperience,Kellywouldneverdevelopherpassionforboxingandpursueadifferentpath.Now,thispathwassuretohaveapromisingfuture.范文四：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Everyafternoonafterschool,shedirectlystrodetotheboxingringtolearnthebasicfooting,differentstrikingfromdifferentangles.Itwasanexhaustedworkout,especiallyforabeginnerlikeher.Yearsofballetpracticemadeherbotharmsandfiststoosuppletochangethemintopowerfulones.Butshecouldendureallthehardshipbecausethatwaswhatshechose.Whatshecouldnotbearwaswhenshecamebackhomeandliedtohermomaboutherday,makingupalltheballetthing.ThesenewnormalcametoanendwhenthefinaldayofselectionwasscheduledforaFriday.ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Kelly'snamewasprintedonthetopofthelist.Shesmiledtoherselfinwardly.Hardworkpaidoff.Theonlyproblemleftwastoconvincehermomthatboxingwasherrealpassionandshewishedtochasewhatshelovedtodo.Serenapromisedtohelpherwhenshebrokethenews.AtfirstMomwasstartledandfuriousthatKellycheatedher.However,graduallyMomsensedthatitwastimetoletherchildfollowherhearttodosomethingshepersistedwith.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Sincemychildhood,Ihavelovedtopaintandinfact,thisisagreatfascinationforme.Tobeanartist,IkeptlearningandpracticingpaintingwhenIwasintheprimaryschoolandthejuniorhighschool.Aftercompletingmyseniorhighschool,ItriedtogetadmittedtoalocalartcollegeinDurbaninSouthAfrica.Atthesametime,ItooktheadmissiontestofsomeotherlocaluniversitiesincaseIdidnotmissayear.Becauseofsomanytests,Iwasunabletocollectmyresultofartcollegetest.Oneday,IwastoldbymyrelativesthatIwasonthewaitinglistandthereforethepossibilitytogetadmittedtotheartcollegewasprettyslim.Ibelievedthemandwentontakingtheotheruniversitytests.Butlater,whenIwenttotheartcollegeafterafewweeks,Icametoknowtherealtruth.Ipassedthetestwithhighmarksandwasontheadmissionlist,buttheadmissiondatewasover.Finally,Irealizedthatthiswasakindofplotagainstmeandoneofmyuncleswasthekeyplotter.Ialsofoundthatmydadagreedontheissuenottoinformmeaboutmyresult.Infact,theydidnotwantmetobeapainter.Theythoughtbeinganartisthadlessvalueinthepresentage.Itmaynothelpmetosurviveinthiscompetitiveworld.Theywantedmetobeabusinessmanlikethem.Intheiropinion,theyareabitcommercialineveryaspectandtheymaylendmeahandinmyfuturecareer.So,theymadetheplananddecidedtohidemyresultfromme.Buttheydidnotrealizethatwhattheydidwouldcausemealotofanxietyandpain.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。范文一：IfeltsadwhenImissedthechanceforadmissiontotheartcollege.Afterall,itwasmyidealcollege,whosemajoriswheremyburningpassionlies.Besides,Ihadcommittedmyselftolearningandpracticingpaintingsincemyprimaryschool.Mixedwithmysorrowwasadeepsenseofanxiety,painandanger.WhatifIwouldnotbeadmittedintoanycollege?WhatifIwouldhavetorackmybraintodealwiththecommercialbutboringsciencesubjects?Thoughoutofgoodintention,mydadanduncleweredefinitelyinnopositiontohidetheresultfromme.Sureenough,it,partly,wasmyfault.Ishouldhavecheckedthetestresultbymyself.Fortunately,Ihadtakenadmissiontestsofothercolleges.Now,Ihave