英語基礎(chǔ)寫作-人物描寫

WelcomeToOurClassWelcometoourEnglishwritingclass人物簡(jiǎn)介的一般步驟

therightorder(1)概況age,sex,birth-place,background(2)外貌／性格appearance,character(3)教育education(4)生平bigeventsinhisorherlife(intheorderoftime)(5)評(píng)價(jià)evaluation【Usefulwordsandexpressions】年齡、出生1）二十歲的時(shí)候_____________________2）于1987年5月生在北京__________________________________attheageof20wasborninBeijinginMay1987【Usefulwordsandexpressions】2.外貌、性格特征：1）漂亮__________________________________2）1.80米高_(dá)________________________3）勤奮的________________________beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking1.80meterstall/inheightdiligent/hardworking3.教育：1）努力學(xué)習(xí)_______________________2）獲得碩士學(xué)位_________________________3）畢業(yè)_______________workhardathisstudiesreceive/gainamaster’sdegreegraduatefrom4.經(jīng)歷：1）致力于______________________2）有……天賦_____________________devoteoneselftohaveagift/talentfor5.評(píng)價(jià)：①做出了……貢獻(xiàn)_________________________

②對(duì)…的評(píng)價(jià)很高_(dá)______________________makegreatcontributionstospeak/thinkhighlyof

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followingsentences.1.Bornonthe13thofDecember,1989inAmerica,shewasbroughtupasthefirstchildandonlydaughterofAudreaandScottSwift.2.Showinginterestinmusic,shebeganwritingsongsandsingingthematkaraokecontests,festivalsandfairsaroundherhometownattheageoften.3.Whenhersecondalbum(唱片)“Fearless”wasreleasedin2008,shegottheworld'sattention.4.Shebecomesverypopularwiththeyoung,whichallowedhertorecievemanyhonorsincludingthe52ndGrammyAwardin2010.

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①Bornonthe13thofDecember,1989inAmerica,TaylorSwift,afamoussinger,wasbroughtupasthefirstchildandonlydaughterofAudreaandScottSwift.

分詞結(jié)構(gòu)

同位語身份與概況盡量用分詞短語、同位語結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順②Showinginterestinmusic,shebeganwritingsongsandsingingthematkaraokecontests,festivalsandfairsaroundherhometownattheageoften.

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Taylor’ssecondalbum(唱片）wasreleased（發(fā)行）in2008,shegottheworld’sattention.④

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whichallowedhertorecievemanyhonorsincludingthe52ndGrammyAwardin2010.經(jīng)歷分詞結(jié)構(gòu)狀語從句定語從句注意盡量用非謂語動(dòng)詞,使文章精煉盡量用復(fù)合句,如定語從句等，潤(rùn)色文章⑤Heruniquecountrymusicstyleandrefreshingimageareunparalleled（無法匹敵的）byothersandshecontinuestomakebreakthroughs

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tryingnewthings.評(píng)價(jià)evaluation注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語、詞組A.巧用同位語結(jié)構(gòu),使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順Tom,themonitorofourclass,alwayshelpsotherclassmatestosolvetheirproblemsinstudy.1)鐘南山1941年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一。ZhongNanshan,

,wasborninGuangzhouin1941.*語法，句法高分tipsoneofthegreatestdoctorsinChina2）為人自信樂觀的男孩劉翔,出生在1983年的上海.LiuXiang,___________________________,wasborninShanghaiin1983.3)莫言，當(dāng)代著名作家，在2012年10月11日獲得諾貝爾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)。MoYan,_____________________________,wontheNobelPrizeforLiteratureonOctober11th,2012.aconfidentandoptimisticboyafamouscontemporarywriter思考：什么時(shí)候可用同位語？職位頭銜年齡性別B.巧用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章精煉eg.對(duì)音樂有濃厚的興趣，泰勒在十歲就開始在卡拉OK比賽和節(jié)日活動(dòng)演唱自編的歌曲。

Taylorshowedgreatinterestinmusic.Shebeganwritingsongsandsingingthematkaraokecontests,festivalsandfairsaroundherhometownattheageoften.

1）獲得中山大學(xué)碩士學(xué)位后，她出國深造。________________________________fromZhongshanUniversity,shewentabroadtofurtherherstudy.2）姚明1980年出生于上海，是世界著名籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。YaoMing,_______________________,isaworldfamousbasket