第8課時　體裁類比突破(8)-圖表類寫作Vs圖畫類寫作

第8課時體裁類比突破(8)——圖表類寫作

圖畫類寫作一、“圖表類”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目](2022·全國乙卷)學(xué)校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．學(xué)習(xí)活動狀況描述；2.簡單評論；3．你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．短文的題目和首句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.InordertofindouttheapproachestolearningEnglishbeyondtheclassroom,weconductedasurveyamongstudents.Aswecanseefromthechart,moststudentsbeinginterviewed，specifically65%,choosetolistentoEnglishsongs,whilehalfofthestudentsprefertowatchEnglishmovies.ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%respectively.ItturnsoutthatstudentsfavortheentertainingwaysoverthetraditionaloneswhenitcomestoEnglishlearning.MysuggestionisthatstudentsshouldtrymultiplewayswhenlearningEnglishsothattheycanfindthewaywhichfitsthemmostandimprovetheircomprehensiveEnglishability.學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)亮麗開頭

首段第二句清楚告知調(diào)查的目的與調(diào)查對象，為下文做好了鋪墊。2．學(xué)高級表達(1)使用高級詞匯和詞塊，如：findouttheapproachesto,conduct,specifically,accountfor,respectively,turnout,favor等。(2)準(zhǔn)確運用高級句式，如：定語從句Aswecanseefrom...,whochoosetoread...；并列句whilehalfofthestudents...；It作形式主語Itturnsoutthat...；狀語從句whenitcomesto...,whenlearningEnglish,sothattheycan...；表語從句Mysuggestionisthat...等。3．學(xué)精彩結(jié)尾

尾段作者表明了自己的觀點，合情合理，突出了觀點的實用性。4．學(xué)行文邏輯

首段第二句中Inordertofindouttheapproachesto...巧妙承接了本文題目和首段第一句，第二句中weconductedasurveyamongstudents與第二段連貫銜接。第二段中Aswecanseefromthechart，specifically,while,only,respectively流暢銜接了圖表中的調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)，最后一句Itturnsoutthat...總結(jié)上文。尾段作者給出自己的觀點?？傊?，本文思路清晰明了，圖表的表述簡潔準(zhǔn)確，作者的觀點客觀實用，全文意義完整，邏輯連貫。[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：描述圖表內(nèi)容1．Thetable/chart/graphshowsthat...2．Accordingtothesurvey/table/chart...3．Asisshowninthetable/chart/graph...4．Itisclear/apparentfromthetable/chart/graph...5．Thetableshowsthechangesinthenumberof...overtheperiodfrom...to...6．Thechartprovidessomeinterestingdataregarding...Ⅱ.主體部分：簡評圖表呈現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象1．It'scommontofind...2．Thereisagrowingtendencythat...3．Asisoftenthecase,studentsinclinetolearn...4．Nowadays,learningsomethingnewisnotconfinedto...5．Fromthegraph,itisindicatedthat...6．Basedonthechart,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat...7．Overall,theresultsarequiteinteresting,indicatingthat...8．Behindthisphenomenon,wecanfindthat...9．Itturnsoutthatthemajorityofstudentsfavour...Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：針對現(xiàn)象給出建議1．Youaresupposed/required/expectedto...2．Considering...,Istronglyrecommendthat...3．Onlyinthiswaycanyou...4．Inviewof/Consideringthelackof...,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken...5．AsfarasIamconcerned,itwouldbesensible/wiseofyouto...6．IfIwereyou,Iwould...7．Moreover,nevershouldweforget...8．However,wehavetokeepinmindthatthetoppriorityis...9．Frommyperspective/AsIseeit/Personally/Inmyview/Frommypointofview,...[建寫作模型·展規(guī)范形體]Ihaverecentlymadeasurveyamong_______________(調(diào)查對象與主題)．Asisshowninthechart,___________________(圖表內(nèi)容一).What_________________is__________________(圖表內(nèi)容二).Bothboysandgirlslike_________________(圖表內(nèi)容三).Maybetheythink________________(簡評現(xiàn)象).Asfor_______________，but________________(圖表內(nèi)容四)．Personally,__________________(針對現(xiàn)象給出建議)．二、“描述型圖畫”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目]假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。端午節(jié)將至，上周末你和父母去看望爺爺奶奶，并學(xué)習(xí)了包粽子。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為?？坝⒄Z角”投稿，記述整個過程。注意：1

．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]WiththeDragonBoatFestivalrightapproaching,lastweekend，myparentsandIwenttoseemygrandparents.Beforegoingtomygrandparents'house,wewentshoppinginthenearbysupermarketforgroceriesincludingingredientstomakethetraditionalfood,zongzi.Carryingallourpurchases,wemadeit.Nothavingseenoneanotherforsometime,wehadapleasantchitchat,afterwhichIaskedmygrandmatoteachmehowtomakezongzi.NeverhadIrealizeditwouldtakesomuchdelicatehandwork.However,mygrandmaprovedagreatteacher.Notonlydidweenjoythedeliciousmeal,butalsorelaxedlaughterfilledourroom.學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)亮麗開頭

首段結(jié)合四幅圖片，概括表達了本文要敘述的事情，吸引讀者去了解詳情。2．學(xué)高級表達

準(zhǔn)確運用高級句式，如：with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)WiththeDragonBoatFestivalrightapproaching；非謂語動詞短語作狀語Nothavingseenoneanotherforsometime...；定語從句afterwhichIasked...；倒裝句NeverhadIrealized...Notonlydidweenjoy...等。

3．學(xué)精彩結(jié)尾

本文最后一句Notonlydidweenjoythedeliciousmeal,butalsorelaxedlaughterfilledourroom.讓我們仿佛看到快樂的一家人享受節(jié)日的溫馨畫面，自然而然地升華了文章的主旨。[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：引出主題1．December5wasmemorablebecauseitwasVolunteerDayandwedidsomemeaningfulwork.2．IwillneverforgethowmyfriendJackandImet.3．Lastweek，ItookpartintheRedCrossfirstaidtrainingontheplaygroundofourschool,fromwhichIbenefitedalot.4．Thepastweekwasbynomeansordinary,forIhadfinallydecidedonmymajor.Ⅱ.主體部分：敘述詳情1．Atthebeginning,weassembledintheschoolhalltolistentotheimportanceandbasicstepsoffirstaid.2．Afterrealizinghowimportantfirstaidis，wecouldn'twaittolearnmore.3．Havingfiguredoutwhathadhappened,werusheddownstairs.4．Facedwithsomanychoices,Iseemedtobelost.Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：個人感受1．Beforeleaving,wetooksomephotostorecordourvoluntaryactivity，holdingaflagwiththelogo，which，Ithink，isthebestexplanationforouractivity：trytogiveothersahandasmuchaspossible.2．Fromthatdayon,JackandIbecamefriendsandwewillneverforgetthedaywemet.3．Whatameaningfulexperience！Asmallactofkindnesscanmakeabigdifference.[建寫作模型·展規(guī)范形體]LastSaturday__________(引出主題)．Earlyinthemorning,_________________(圖畫一內(nèi)容)．To____________，I__________________(圖畫二內(nèi)容)．Intheevening，we______________.After_______________，he________________(圖畫三內(nèi)容)．Thenwe________________(圖畫四內(nèi)容)．WhenI____________________，Iwasfilledwithafeelingof(個人感受)．三、“說明議論型圖畫”寫作增分指導(dǎo)[寫作題目]假如你校正在舉行英文征文比賽，請結(jié)合圖片寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．簡要描述圖片；2.說明圖片揭示的現(xiàn)象；3．發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________[悟滿分作文·厚寫作功底]Asisshowninthepictures,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutsuccess.Somepeoplethinksuccessissimpleanddirect,whileinfact,thewaytosuccessisfulloftwistsandturnsanditneedshardwork.Asforme,perseveranceanddiligencearethetoppriority.Facedwithfailure,youmustbuildupyourconfidenceandworkevenharder.Youshouldalwayskeepinmindthatperseveranceisthemotherofsuccessandindustryisthekeytoit.Besides,sumupyourexperienceconstantlyandimprovetheefficiencyofyourwork.Followtheseprinciplesandyouwillcertainlyachieveremarkablesuccessinthefuture.學(xué)亮點寫法1．學(xué)亮麗開頭

首段言簡意賅描述了圖片內(nèi)容，并說明了圖片揭示的現(xiàn)象。2．學(xué)高級表達(1)使用高級詞塊，如：twistsandturns,asfor,perseveranceanddiligence,thetoppriority,facedwith,buildupyourconfidence等。(2)準(zhǔn)確運用高級句式，如：定語從句Asisshowninthepictures；并列句．..whileinfact...；非謂語動詞短語作狀語Facedwithfailure；賓語從句keepinmindthat...；祈使句＋and＋陳述句Followtheseprinciplesandyouwill...等。3．學(xué)精彩結(jié)尾

尾段作者用“祈使句＋and＋陳述句”表明了自己觀點的價值，增加了文章的說服力。4．學(xué)行文邏輯

首段中．..whileinfact,thewaytosuccessis...引出第二段內(nèi)容。第二段中第一句Asforme,perseveranceanddiligencearethetoppriority.為主旨句；...youmustbuildup...Youshouldalwayskeepinmindthat...Besides...邏輯銜接了本段內(nèi)容。尾段再次強調(diào)第二段作者表明的觀點?？傊?，全文組織有序，內(nèi)容邏輯順暢，表達意義完整。[積寫作素材·造吸睛亮點]Ⅰ.開頭部分：描述圖畫中的信息和表達的含義1．Thepictureshowsthat...2．Fromthispicture,wecansee...3．Asisshowninthepicture...4．Thepictureisfarfromcomplicated,butyetcarriesdeepimplication,whichisawake-upcallforthewholehumanrace.5．Thesymbolicimplicationconveyedinthecartoonisthat...Ⅱ.主體部分：具體分析圖畫中暗含的社會現(xiàn)象1．Simpleandfunnyasthecartoonis,itreflectsthat...2．Thepictureimplicitlyraisesthequestionoftheimportanceof...3．Thepurposeofthepictureistoinform/remindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglectthesignificanceof...4．Theuniquemetaphorinthisenlighteningdrawingendowsuswiththenotionthat...Ⅲ.結(jié)尾部分：提出自己的建議以及針對現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該采取的措施1．Inconclusion,Ibelie