四級圖表作文講解

圖表作文題型介紹“圖表作文〞是指根據(jù)統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)表格(table)、坐標(biāo)曲線圖(linegraph)、條形圖(barchart)、餅形圖(piechart)等寫出的作文。圖表作文的寫作要求考生比照、分析數(shù)據(jù)、發(fā)現(xiàn)規(guī)律，提出主題，進(jìn)而說明原因，給出建議或結(jié)論。CET四、六級考試圖表作文的獨(dú)特之處在于開頭先對圖表所反映的變化、趨勢、傾向進(jìn)行概述，而其后兩局部的寫作又可演變成命題作文的寫作〔問題解決型或觀點評述型〕。圖表作文寫作步驟①開門見山地描述數(shù)據(jù)，分析數(shù)據(jù)間的主要差異及趨勢，說明數(shù)據(jù)所反映的現(xiàn)象或問題，點明本圖表所反映的主題?？忌槐貙γ總€數(shù)據(jù)都進(jìn)行描述，而應(yīng)選擇有代表性或有規(guī)律性的典型數(shù)據(jù)。②說明造成數(shù)據(jù)間差異、變化等的理由，注意層次清晰、邏輯合理。③歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評論。陳述個人觀點，指出這些現(xiàn)象、問題的后果或帶來的影響，并指出解決措施等。圖表作文的根本框架1①概述圖表主題。②分析原因。③提出解決方法或建議。圖表作文的根本框架2①概述圖表主題。②對這一問題的對立觀點。③我的觀點真題回放2023年12月CET-4真題作文Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow(Weeklyearningsin2023).Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.范文1EducationPaysNumerousindividualsarequestioningtheworthofhighereducationwiththejobmarketweakening,yetthechartofweeklyearningsin2023revealsaforcefulcounterevidencethattheincomeisproportionaltoone'seducationalbackground.Thosewithadoctoraldegreeearnnearly3.5timeseveryweekasmuchasthosewithaless-than-a-high-schooldiploma.〔說明圖表趨勢，用典型的數(shù)據(jù)例證，不必列出所有數(shù)據(jù)〕Asanincreasingnumberofgraduatesfinditdifficulttogetasatisfactoryjobafteryearsofperseveranceintheirstudies,ahotdebatearisesonwhethereducationpays.Proponentsinsistthateducationisthetickettoasteadierandbetter-payingjobandthebasisofacomfortablelife.Ontheotherhand,theopponentsassumethattheywillnotstaketheirmoneyonsuchariskyinvestmentwhichdoesnotguaranteeapromisingorprofitablecareer.〔對立的觀點〕However,weshouldnotstopeatingforfearofchoking〔因噎廢食〕.Inmyopinion,abettereducation,inmostcases,notonlymeansabetterjob,ahighersalaryandalowerunemploymentrisk,butapavingstonetotheintegrateddevelopmentandfurtherimprovementofoneself.Inabroadsense,itiseducationthatcontributestothedevelopmentandadvancementofthewholenation,whichinturnbenefitseveryindividual.Inconclusion,educationisaworthyinvestment.〔我的觀點〕范文2EducationPaysGivenisasimplebutenlighteningchartbyUSBureauofLaborin2023.Ithasbecomeatrendfordoctors,mastersandbachelorstoearnmoremoneyinaweekinUS---$1551,$1272and$1038.Meanwhile,wecannoticethatweeklyearningsofcollegegraduateswithnodegrees,thosewithhighschooldiplomaandpeoplewithlessthanhighschooldiplomawere$712,$626and$444respectively.Obviously,thischartcanbenaturallyassociatedwiththeimportanceofeducation:ifindividualsintendtoacquire/gain/getbetterearnings,itisadvisableforthemtogainhigherdegrees.IncontemporaryAmerica,ithasbecomeatrendforahostofcompanies/firms/corporations/organizationstohiredoctorsandmastersandpaythembettersalaries.Itiseducationthatenablesthemtobuildupadequateknowledge,skillsandabilitytodealwithimportanttasks.Asamatteroffact,employeesandemployersinlargenumbershavecometorealizethesignificanceofhigherdegrees.〔原因分析〕Asacollegestudent,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstoenhanceourselvesbystudyinghardandgettingbetterdegrees.Dobearinmind:educationisaworthyinvestment.

〔建議〕2023年12月大學(xué)英語六級考試真題(三)Directions':Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledGlobalShortageofFreshWater.Youressayshouldstartwithabriefdescriptionofthetables.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.國際公認(rèn)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)人均水資源量〔立方米／人)輕度缺水2000～3000中度缺水1000～2000重度缺水500～1000極度缺水≤500國家法國以色列加拿大英國中國德國人均水資源量(立方米／人)3370250914202460214018702023年人均水資源量統(tǒng)計結(jié)果GlobalShortageofFreshWaterAsisvividlyindicatedintheabovetables,nowadays,withthedevelopmentofmodernindustryandeconomy,moreandmorecountriesareconcernedabouttheproblemofglobalshortageoffreshwater.Intheyear2023,accordingtotheinternationalstandardofwatershortage,onlytwocountriesoutofsixarenotinthelistofwatershortage.Thereisonecountryextremelyshortoffreshwater.Somepeoplethinkthatfreshwaterisinexhaustible；nevertheless,freshwaterresourcesarescarce.Thereasonsfortheglobalshortageoffreshwaterareasfollows.Firstly,withthegrowthofworldpopulationandindustrialdevelopment,theneedoffreshwaterhasbeenincreased.Secondly,waterpollutionallovertheworldmakesshortageworse.Fromthechangesreflectedinthetables,wecanseeitisquiteurgentthateffectivemeasuresbetakentotackletheproblem.Thereisnodoubtthateveryoneshouldsavewaterconsciouslyindailylife.Inaddition,regulationsshouldbelaiddownbythegovernmenttocurbwaterpollution.Perhapspeoplecanhardlyrelyononewaytosolvetheproblemcompletely.往年真題范文1OwnershipofHousesinaBigCityinChina①根據(jù)上圖描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化。②分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因。③說明這些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響。ChangesintheOwnershipofHousesAscanbeseenfromthechart,ownershipofhouseshassignificantlychangedinthe1990s.Whilethenumberofstate-ownedhousesdecreased,thatofprivatehousesincreased.In1990,seventy-fivepercentofhouseswerestate-owned,butbytheendofthecentury,80percentofhouseswereprivate.Twomainreasonscanaccountforthistrend.Foronething,withthereformandopenpolicyinthe1990s,thegovernmentpushedthroughahousingreform,whichputastoptoChina’slow-rentwelfareallocationsystemandpromotedtheprivatizationofthestate-ownedhouses.Peoplewereencouragedtobuyhousesorapartmentstheywerelivingin.Foranother,withthedevelopmentofChina’seconomy,peoplearebetteroffnowthan10yearsago.Theyrequirebetterlivingconditions,andmoreandmorepeoplehavetheabilitytobuyahouseoftheirown.Andthosewhocannotaffordtobuyahousecanhaveonebyinstallmentsasbanksoffermortgageatlowinterest.Suchchangeshavehadgreatinfluenceonthesocietyaswellastheindividuals.Thegovernmentnolongerhastheburdenofprovidinghousesforpeopleanditcanfocusonthedevelopmentofeconomy.Asfortheindividuals,theyareencouragedtobemoreindependentandworkharderthanbefore.Althoughtheyhavetosavemoneytobuyhouses,theyaregladtheirdreamofhavingahouseoftheirownhascometrue.范文2FilmIsGivingWaytoTV①電影觀眾越來越少。②電視觀眾越來越多,因為…③然而,還是有人喜歡看電影.因為…FilmIsGivingWaytoTVAsisclearlyshowninthegraph,thenumberoffilmgoersdecreaseddramaticallyfrom85,000to15,000between1975and1985.Thisindicatesthatfilmislosingappealtomoreandmorepeople.Meanwhile,thereweremoreandmoreTV-watchers.TV’samazingpopularityisassociatedwithgreatconvenienceitoffers.PeoplecanwatchTVathomequitecomfortablywhiledrinking,eating,andchattingwithfamilymembers.Inaddition,TVismoreinformativewithavarietyofprograms;andpeoplecanchooseandenjoytheirfavoriteprograms.Moreover,comparedwiththehighpriceoffilmtickets,watchingTVisamuchcheaperformofentertainment.Nevertheless,therearestillanumberoffilmfans.Theyclaimthatcinemahasaspecialatmospherethatisnotavailableathome.Asfarastheyareconcerned,goingtoseeafilmisaformalanddecentkindofentertainment.范文3AverageNumberofHoursaStudentSpendsontheComputerperWeek①上圖所示為1990年、1995年、2000年某校大學(xué)生使用計算機(jī)的情況,請描述其變化；②請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因(可從計算機(jī)的用途、價格或社會開展等方面加以說明)；③你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題。Students’UseofComputersStudentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays.Asisrevealedinthegraph,theaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsoncomputersperweekhasincreasedsharply.In1990,itwaslessthan2hours;andin1995,itrosetoalmost4hours;whilein2000,thenumbersoaredto20hours.However,thefactorstriggeredthischangearenodifficulttounderstand.Firstly,computershavenowbecomeanessentialpartofourmodemsocietyandhavegreatlyfacilitatedusinalmosteveryaspectoflife.Secondly,thefastdevelopmentoftheInternetenlargesourdemandsforusingcomputers.WecaneasilycontactfriendsinremoteplacesandsearchforneededinformationthroughtheInternet.Thirdly,thepricesofcomputersaregettinglowerandlower,whichenablesmorestudentstogetaccesstothem.Alongwiththeincreasingtimespentoncomputers,therearesomeproblems.ThemostseriousoneisthatmanystudentsarespendingsomuchtimeplayingPCgamesorchattingonlinethattheyignoretheirnormalstudies.Itisurgentforthestudentstousecomputersinaproperway.圖表作文常用表達(dá)描述上升趨勢：動詞或動詞詞組：toincrease,togoup,torise,togrow,tojump,toleap,tosoar,toshoot,tomount,torocket名詞：anincrease,agrowth,ajump,asoar,anupwardtrend描述下降趨勢：動詞或動詞詞組：tofall,todecrease,togodown,toslide,tocollapse,todecline,todrop,toreduce名詞：acollapse,adecrease,afall,adecline,adrop描述平穩(wěn)趨勢：tohardlychange,tohavelittlechange,tokeepsteady,toleveloff,toremainconstant,tostaythesame表示比擬的詞匯：by/incontract,comparedwith,onthecontrary,likewise表示“說明〞的動詞：show,describe,portray,illustrate,indicate,reveal,represent,present表示程度的副詞：程度較大：considerably,dramatically,greatly,markedly,obviously,quickly,rapidly,sharply,significantly,suddenly,steeply,excessively程度較?。簊lightly,gradually,slowly,steadily表示趨勢的名詞:tendency,trend,inclination

表示時間的介詞和介詞詞組

in,from……to……,between…….and……,during……and……,atthestartof……,bytheendof……,over……,attheendof……,throughout……表示缺乏的詞或詞組：

upto,below,under,almost,nearly表示超過的詞或詞組：

exceed;over,morethan,justover

表示大約的詞：about,approximately，roughly，around，closeto，justabout，moreorless，orso2.4.5圖表作文A開頭常用句型Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,…Thetable/piechart/barchart/linechartshows/indicatesthat…Thechart/diagramshowsthereisadeclining/increasingtrendof…from…Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat…Aswecanseefromthegraph,…Ascanbeseenfromthechart,…Asisshowninthetable,…Asisrevealed/indicatedinthegraph,thenumberof…grewdramaticallysince…Thelinegraphpresentsthenumberof…Thechartdescribesthepercentageof…Thefiguresinthetableillustratetheratioof…Thetablesuggeststhat…Thecurveshowstherapidincreasein…B表示上升、增長趨勢的句型Theoutput/price/temperature...grew/increased/climbed/mounted/wentup/rocketed/ascended/leapedup…significantly/suddenly/slightly/dramatically/greatlyin/over...Therewasaslight/slow/steadyrise/increasein…Therewasasharp/steep/rapid/dramatic/markedleap/jump/boost/boomin…Theprice/rate/output/income…increased/roseby+(percentage)in…Theprice/rate/output/income…increasedtriple/threetimesthan…in…Comparedwith…,....stillincreasedby…C表示下降、減少趨勢的句型Theoutput…decreased/declined/wasreducedslowly/steeplyin…Thetemperature/price…wentdown/dropped/plunged/fellsharply/dramatically/rapidlyin…Therewasarapid/dramatic/markeddecrease/decline/plungein…Therewasagradualdeclinein…Therewasasteadyreduction/fallin…D表示先上升后下降的句型......increasedslowlyduring…and…,butfellsharplyin…Asteadyfallin…during…followedthesharpincreasein…Afterasteadyincreasefor…years,the…showssignsofdropping.E表示先下降后上升的句型1.…fellbefore…begantomakearecovery…

2.…droppedduring…butincreasedagainin…

3.…fellin…andthenpickupduring…

4.…collapsedbeforerisingto…attheendof…5.Therewasadropin…,andthencameasharpriseinthefollowingyears.F表示持平趨向的句型Theprice/rate/ratio…remainedthesame/wasstable/wassteady/leveledoffin…G表示波動趨向的句型Theprice/rate/ratio…fluctuated/wentupanddown/roseandfelldramatically/significantly/sharply/slightlyduring/over…H表示百分比關(guān)系的句型Theoutput/population…constitutes/accountsfor/takesup+percentageofthetotal…I表示倍數(shù)關(guān)系的句型Thefigure…increasedmorethansixtimescomparedwith…2.Thenumber…droppedalmosttwicecomparedwith…3.Thepercentage…decreasedabouttwoandahalftimescomparedwith…Thepercentage…istwiceasmuchasthatof2003.Thenumber…isfourtimesasmuchasthatof2002.Thepercentage….ishalfasmuchasthatof2001.圖表作文練習(xí)1.MenandWomeninExecutivePositions擔(dān)任行政職位的男女比例ThePercentageofMenandWomeninExecutivePosition①上圖所示為某公司男女擔(dān)任行政職位方面的狀況。其中把行政職務(wù)依次分為A到E五個等級,A級最高,E級最低。請描述圖表含義,分析原因。②得出結(jié)論。MenandWomeninExecutivePositionsThegraphshowstheproportionsofmenandwomenemployedinexecutivepositionsinsomecompany.Comparedwithmen,asthegraphshows,womenhavethehighestpercentage(about72%)inthelowestgradeE,whiletheproportionofwomenworkinginthehighestgradeAisthelowest(about8%).Itisobviousthatwomenstillhavealongwaytogointheirstruggleforrealequalitywithmeninholdingexecutivepositions.Theobviousinequalitybetweenmenandwomeninsociallife,especiallyinexecutivepositions,maybemainlyduetothefollowingreasons.Foronething,womenarestillthoughtofasinferiorthatcannotholdresponsiblejobseventhoughwomencantakeupalmostalltheprofessionsonceonlyoccupiedbymen,andcanevenreceiveequalpayforequalwork.Thecasesofsexualdiscriminationareoftenheardof.Onthejobmarket,manycompaniesareunwillingtoemploywomenbecausetheythinkwomenarelessefficient,competitiveandtough.Foranother,thedoubleburdenwomanhavetocarryinsideandoutsidehomerendersitimpossibleforthemtomakefulluseoftheirknowledgeandtalents.Despitethegreatstrideswomenhavemade,thepictureofwomen'sequalitywithmenisnotquitethatrosy.Thesexdiscriminationisstillprofoundsothatequalitycontinuestobethelong-termgoalofwomen.[亮點詞語]struggleforrealequality爭取真正的平等bethoughtofasinferior被認(rèn)為劣等,下等takeupalmostalltheprofessions從事幾乎所有職業(yè)equalpayforequalwork同工同酬sexualdiscrimination性別歧視tough強(qiáng)硬的,堅強(qiáng)的,堅韌的doubleburden雙重負(fù)擔(dān)render使得,使…成為makegreatstrides取得很大的進(jìn)步rosy美好的,有希望的long-termgoal長期目標(biāo)[文章點評]本文為圖表式比照分析型論說文。文章首先點明圖表主題,通過數(shù)據(jù)分析,得出文章主題：女性要在行政職位上做到男女平等還有很長的路要走。第二段從兩個方面分析原因：性別歧視仍然存在,女性身負(fù)家庭和事業(yè)兩重重?fù)?dān)。最后總結(jié)全文,指出男女平等的前景并不樂觀,還需要長期的努力。全文布局嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),條理清晰,銜接自然；措辭準(zhǔn)確,句式豐富。2.DifferentTuitionSourcesofCollegeStudents中美大學(xué)生學(xué)費(fèi)的不同來源ExamineesTuitionsourcesAmericanstudentsChinesestudentsParents50％90％Part-timejob35％5％Scholarship15％5％概括說明中美大學(xué)生學(xué)費(fèi)的主要來源。分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因。我對將來趨勢的預(yù)測或結(jié)論。DifferentTuitionSourcesofCollegeStudentsAsisshowninthetable,bothAmericanandChinesecollegestudentshavethreeincomesources—fromtheirparents,theirpart-timejobsandfromtheirscholarships.Thedifferenceliesinthepercentageofstudentsforeachsource.About90%ofChinesestudentsgetmoneyfromtheirparents.Incontrast,only50%oftheAmericanstudentsturntothisway,andtheother50%comesfrompart-timejobs(35%)andscholarships(15%).ItisevidentthatAmericanstudentsaremuchmoreindependentthanChinesestudentsare.Threereasonscanaccountforthisdifference.First,AmericanstudentsaretaughttobeindependentrightfromchildhoodwhileChineseparentsareinclinedtoofferingthefinancialsupportfortheirchildren’seducation.Secondly,comparedwithChinesestudents,Americanstudentshaveamoreflexibleclassscheduleandmoreopportunitiesforpart-timejobsonthejobmarket.Finally,thescholarshipsofferedbyAmericanuniversitiesareofgreatvarietyandlargerthanthoseprovidedbyChineseuniversities.Nevertheless,withtheculturalintegrationoftheEastandWest,Chinesestudentsarelearningtobemoreandmoreindependentoftheirparentsphysicallyandmentally.Teachersandparentsshouldgivethestudentsmoreencouragementontheirwaytoindependence.[亮點詞語]turnto轉(zhuǎn)向,求助于accountfor說明,解釋beinclinedto傾向于flexibleclassschedule靈活的課程表beofgreatvariety各種各樣culturalintegration文化融合[文章點評]本文為圖表式比照分析型論說文。文章第一段概括圖表的數(shù)字信息,并依此推出：美國大學(xué)生比中國大學(xué)生更獨(dú)立〔文章主題〕。第二段分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因。通過比照法,得出三點原因：美國學(xué)生從小就學(xué)習(xí)獨(dú)立,而中國家長總是供孩子學(xué)費(fèi)；美國學(xué)生的課程表靈活,可以打工掙錢；美國大學(xué)提供的獎學(xué)金比中國大學(xué)多。第三段展望未來,中國學(xué)生正在變得比以前獨(dú)立。而且呼吁老師和家長應(yīng)該鼓勵學(xué)生自立。本文內(nèi)容完整,簡明扼要,分析透徹,語言準(zhǔn)確。3.ScholarsReturningfromOverseas留學(xué)歸國學(xué)者TheNumberofScholarsReturningfromOverseasoverthePastYears①上圖反映了近年來留學(xué)歸國學(xué)者人數(shù)的變化,描述這種變化；②分析產(chǎn)生這一變化的原因。ScholarsReturningfromOverseasAsisindicatedinthechartabove,thenumberofscholarsreturningfromoverseashasbeenmountingoverthepastfewyearsandrocketedto25thousandintheyearof2004.Whatisbehindtheseamazingfigures?Theforemostreasonsforthetremendousincreasecanbeillustratedasfollows.Firstly,asetofpreferentialpolicieshascontributedtotheincreaseofthenumberofreturningscholars.Tomotivatestudentsstudyingoverseastoreturnmotherland,Chinesegovernmenthassetupasuiteofpreferentialpoliciesintermsofsalaries,housing,choiceofjobs,andchildren’seducation.What’smore,therapiddevelopmentofourmotherlandhasattractedmorescholarsreturningfromoverseas.Withthefurtherimplementationofthereformandopening-uppolicy,Chineseeconomyhasbeengrowingatanastonishingspeed.Theboomingeconomyhaslaidasolidfoundationfortherapiddevelopmentofscientificstudy,whichmakesChinaamostinvitingcountrytobothoverseasChineseandforeigners.Inconclusion,thegovernment’spreferentialpoliciesandtherapiddevelopmentofthecountry’seconomyarethefundamentaldrivefortheincreaseofthenumberofscholarsreturningfromoverseas.[亮點詞語]mount增長,上升rocket迅速上升,猛漲amazingfigures驚人的數(shù)字foremost最重要的tremendousincrease巨大增加beillustratedasfollows說明如下preferentialpolicies優(yōu)先政策motivate促動,激發(fā),促成furtherimplementationofthereformandopening-uppolicy改革開放政策的進(jìn)一步實施boomingeconomy急速開展的經(jīng)濟(jì)layasolidfoundationfor為…打下堅實的根底inviting引人動心的,有魅力的fundamentaldrive根本的驅(qū)動力[文章點評]本文為圖表式原因闡述型說明文。文章開頭簡要概述圖表信息,然后提出疑問：Whatisbehindtheseamazingfigures?這一問句暗示了全文的主題,又起到了引起下文的作用。第二段分析人們留學(xué)歸國人數(shù)增加的原因：國家制定的針對留學(xué)歸國人員的優(yōu)惠政策,中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的迅猛開展和改革開放的進(jìn)一步深入。最后一段總結(jié)全文,重申主題。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,解析透徹,上下連貫；語言樸實流暢。4.ChangesintheNumbersofInternetCitizensinChina中國網(wǎng)民數(shù)量的變化①上圖所示為2001,2003,2006,2007中國網(wǎng)民的數(shù)量,請描述其變化。②請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因。③指出其中存在的問題。ChangesintheNumbersofInternetCitizensinChinaFromthechartwecaneasilyfindthatthenumberofInternetcitizensinChinaismountingmarkedly.In2001,thenumberofInternetcitizensinChinawas33,700,000,whilein2007thenumbersoaredto182,000,000.ThisindicatesthatsurfingtheNethasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.ThepopularityoftheInternetstemsfromitsgreatutility.WiththeNet,itisconvenientandfastforpeopletogetavarietyofinformationjustbypressingsomekeys.E-mailcantransmitmessagesquicklyandaccurately.Inaddition,theInternetserveasapopularmediumofentertainment,suchaslisteningtomusic,enjoyinglatestfilms,orchattingwithfriends,etc.TheInternetalsohasmanyapplicationsinmedicine,education,business,etc.Withsomanyusesandadvantages,thereisnodoubtthatagrowingnumberofpeoplearewiredtotheInternet.However,someproblemsalsoarisewiththeInternet’sdevelopment.Somepeople,especiallytheyoung,becomeaddictedtotheInternet.Theyaresolostinplayingonlinegamesorchattingwiththeirweb-palsthattheyneglecttheirschoolwork,nottomentiontheharmcausedbytheviolentorporncontents.Besides,theNetvirusesandhackersarethreateningWebusers,andmanyWebadsareannoyingandmisleading.Therefore,effectivesolutionstotheseproblemsshouldbeworkedout,andeffortsshouldbemadetosafeguardtheNetsecurity.[亮點詞語]Internetcitizen網(wǎng)民mountmarkedly顯著增長soar飛漲,高漲stemfrom源自,起源于greatutility巨大的實用性transmitmessage傳遞信息bewiredtotheInternet連線到網(wǎng)絡(luò)becomeaddictedto耽溺于…belostin沉湎于web-pal網(wǎng)友nottomention更不用說porncontent色情內(nèi)容virusesandhackers病毒和黑客safeguardtheNetsecurity維護(hù)網(wǎng)絡(luò)平安[文章點評]本文為圖表式話題評述型論說文。第一段首先描述圖表中網(wǎng)民數(shù)量的變化,然后概括出：在中國上網(wǎng)變得越來越流行,這也是文章的主題。第二段依據(jù)提綱要求,分析網(wǎng)絡(luò)流行的原因。第三段指出這些變化后的問題。作者列舉了網(wǎng)絡(luò)對孩子的負(fù)面影響,病毒和黑客以及不良廣告的危害等,最后呼吁采取措施維護(hù)網(wǎng)絡(luò)平安。全文主題鮮明,分析合理；語言流暢,選詞準(zhǔn)確,搭配得當(dāng),句式豐富。5.TheChangesinCollegeStudents’WaysofSpendingVacations大學(xué)生度假方式的變化系列1：stayingathome系列2：travelling系列3：doingsocialpractice系列4：otherways①描述1990年和2005年大學(xué)生度假方式的變化。②分析變化的原因。③你的評價。TheChangesinCollegeStudents’WaysofSpendingVacationsThetwopiechartspresentgreatchangesinthewayscollegestudentsspendtheirvacations.Thenumberofstudentswhogotravelinganddosocialpracticesduringvacationsin2005increasedgreatlywhilethenumberofthosechoosingtostayathomedecreasedsharplycomparedwiththatin1990.Threemainfactorscontributetothisenormouschange.Therapidgrowthoftourismandtheimprovementofpeople’sstandardoflivingrendermoreandmorepeopleopportunitiestotravel,ofcourse,includingthecollegestudents.Thesecondreasonliesinthefactthefiercecompetitioninsocietyrequirescollegegraduatestobeequippedwithnotonlyacademicknowledgebutalsopracticalknowledgeandsocialskills.Someuniversitiesorcollegesencouragetheirstudentstogooutofthe“ivorytower〞todosocialpracticesinthehopethatthestudentswouldbroadentheirhorizon,learnmoreaboutthesocietyandbecomemoreadaptabletothefuturework.Therefore,morestudentsgotravelingordoingsocialpracticesduringthevacations.Asacollegestudent,Ithinkthechartsreflecttheexcitingprogressonthecollegestudents’thinkingpatterns.Wehavebecomemuchmaturetorealizehowtospendourvacationsmeaningfullyandpractically.Basedontheaboveanalysis,itiseasytopredictthatmoreandmorecollegestudentswillengageinvariousvacationactivitiesinthefuture.[亮點詞語]increasegreatly大幅上升decreasesharply急劇下降enormouschange巨大變化render給予,提供fiercecompetition劇烈的競爭beequippedwith裝備有…gooutofthe“ivorytower〞走出“象牙塔〞intheh