讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)講義高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)試題原題第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IknewIwouldhaveabeyondbusy

summer,IwouldbeajuniorteacherfortheLittleDragonsKarate(空手道)Camp.AndIhadtodosummerswimteam.AndOllieandIalreadyhadtwocustomersforourdogwalkingbusiness.“Youmightbebitingoffmorethanyoucanchew,”

mymomsaidwithawarningglimpsewhenItalkedtoheraboutitandannounced,

“Iwanttodoeverything!”“Don'tworry.”

Igrinned,“Ihavestrongteeth!”Mymomsmiledback.“Inthiscase,it'syourorganizationalskills,notyourteeth,thatneedtobestrong.”Ididn'ttakeittomyheart.Andthefirstweekreallywasnoproblem.MyfriendOlliewasoutoftownandkaratecamphadn'tstarted,somyswimstuffwasallIneededtoworryabout.Thenextweekwasgreattoo.Iswam,anda

LittleDragonatkaratecamptoldmeIwashisfavoriteteacherever!Ididlearn,though,thatstayingorganizedwithtwoactivitieswasharder.Mybackpackwasalreadystuffedwithatowelandswimthings,soIneededanotherformykarateclothing.Ridingmybikefromkaratecamptothepoolwithtwobackpackswasachallenge.ButIstillhaditundercontrol

untilOlliegotback.“We’relategettingourbusinesstogether!”hesaid.“We’llhavetospendeveryspareminutepreparing.”“ButIdon'thaveanyspareminutes!”Isaid.“DidyouforgetweagreedtowalkAlfieeverySaturday?AndMuffinonTuesdaysat4:00?”

Ollieasked.Icouldn'tletOlliedown,soItookoutathirdbackpackandfilleditwithdogtoys,treats,andplasticbags.IthoughtIwasallset.ButIwaswrong!Itdidn'ttakelongformydogwalkingstuffandkaratestuffandswimstufftogetallmixedup,forgotten,orlost.Oneday,IforgotmykaratebackpackandhadtoborrowEmma'sextraoutfit,whichwastootight.Thenextday,Irememberedmykaratestuffbutforgotmyswimsuit,soIhadtohelpoutinthesnackshopandstayoutofthepoolallafternoon.Andanothertime,whenIreachedintomydogwalkingpackforplasticbags,allIcouldfindwereswimgoggles(護(hù)目鏡)andsunscreen.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.

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Luckily,l,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.___________________________________________________________________________試題分析1.人物:①Ollie:myfriend/OllieandIalreadyhadtwocustomersforourdogwalkingbusiness②mymom:Youmightbebitingoffmorethanyoucanchew

/it'syourorganizationalskills,notyourteeth,thatneedtobestrong③I:Ididn'ttakeittomyheart

/Later,itwasamess./WhatcouldIdo?2.前文故事梗概:

雖然對(duì)即將到來的忙碌的暑假有心理準(zhǔn)備，要去空手道夏令營當(dāng)教練，要去參加夏季游泳隊(duì)的訓(xùn)練，還要跟Ollie一起為客戶遛狗等。媽媽也提醒我，要減少活動(dòng)，但我覺得可以對(duì)付。開始的兩周，總體感覺還行。當(dāng)Ollie回來告訴我要為客戶遛狗后，為了不讓他失望，我干起了第三份活。我以為我準(zhǔn)備好了，但事實(shí)表明，我把三件事情安排起來干真的是一團(tuán)糟。我該怎么辦呢？……3.續(xù)寫安排:第一段:Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.①（與前一句銜接）如何keeptrackofthespecialtimes②（過渡）我對(duì)付這些specialtimes的結(jié)果（想法和行動(dòng)？）③（承上啟下）接下去，我該怎么辦第二段:Luckily,l,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.①（與前一句銜接）這個(gè)solution是怎么做②（過渡）按照這個(gè)solution，我能否輕松地去做幾件事情③（收尾）對(duì)此經(jīng)歷的反思下水作文Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.Asthejuniorteacher,

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hadtobeintheKarateCampearlyeverymorningtill11am.Afterashortlunchbreak,Ihadtoinvolvemyselfinthesummerswimteam,thepracticealwayslastingthreehours,whichseemedendless.WhatpuzzledmemostwasthatOlliegotmoredogwalkingbusiness!Allofthosethrewmeintoastateofmess.Ifeltabitregretful,thoughIbehavedasifnothinghadembarrassed

me.Eventually,mymom’swarningglimpsedraggedmetoherforhelp.(88words)Luckily,l,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.Accordingtomyparents’

experience,theypresentedtheirvaluablesuggestions.Theyhelpedmecreateatableontheboardhungonthewall.Ifilledintheblankswiththespecificactivitieswiththeirdetailedinformation,includingplaces,timesandwhatIshouldtakeontheexactdayetc.Afterthat,myawesomeparentsevenprovidedmethreedifferentbagstocontaindifferentstuffs,whichwasareallyexcellentwaytoavoidthemess.Thesolutionprovedtobeasuccess,whichtaughtmeagoodlessonoftheimportanceoforganizationalskills.(93words)續(xù)寫題目Theeasywayoutisn'talwaysthelearnedthatlessonwhenIdecidedtotreatmyfatherto

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bread.Knowingthebreadwouldtaketime,Istartedonitassoonasheleftforwork.AsIwasnotexperiencedincooking,Ithoughtifadozenwasgood,twodozenwouldbebetter,soIdoubledDadlovedoranges,Ialsoopenedacanoforangeandpoureditallintothebowl.Soontherewasstickydough(生面團(tuán))coveredwithuglyyellowishmarks.RealizingIhadbeendefeated,IputthedoughintherubbishbinoutsidesoIwouldn'thavetofaceDad'sblame.Iwentonpreparingtherestofthemeal,andwhenDadgothomewesatdowntoeatthemeal.Hetriedtoenjoythemealbutseemeddisturbed.Twicehegotupandwentoutside,sayinghethoughtheheardanoise.Thethirdtimeheleft,Iwenttothewindowtoseewhathewasdoing.Lookingout,IsawDadstandingaboutthreefeetfromtherubbishbin,holdingthelidupwithastickandlookingintothecontainer.WhenIcameoutofthehouse,hedroppedthestickandexplainedthattherewassomethingaliveintherubbishbin.Pickingupthestickagain,heheldthelidupenoughformetosee.Ifeltscared.ButIsteppedcloserandlookedharder.Withoutdoubtitwasmywork.Thehotsunhadcausedthedoughtodoubleinsizeandthefermentingyeast(酵母)madethesurfaceshakeandsighasthoughitwerebreathing.

Ihadtoadmitwhatthe“l(fā)ivingthing”wasandwhyitwasthere.Ididn'tknowwhowasmoreembarrassedbythewholething,Dadorme.Para1:Mydadtappedmegentlyontheshoulder,andwewentinside.Para2:Atapartythreemonthslater,everyonewantedtotrymybread.參考范文Worsestill,Ihadtokeeptrackofallthespecialtimes.

IhadtoarriveearlyforthekaratetestonMonday.lhadtostaylatertohelpwithswimmingpoolcleanuponFriday.lhadtopickupAlfie15minutesearlyonSaturday.IhadtowalkMuffnonTuesdayafternoons.Iranaroundlikeachickenwithitsheadoff,onthevergeofbreakingdown.ltwasthenthatIrecalledmymother'swarning.Althoughembarrassedbeyondwords，lworkedupthenerveandwalkedtomyparents,makingacleanbreastofmytroubleandcallingforbackup.(95words)Luckily,l,withmyparents,cameupwithasolutiontogetorganized.Westartedwithacalendar,onwhichImarkedallmytaskswitharedmarker.Thenwefoundthreebags

respectivelyusedformydogwalkingstuff,karatestuffandswimstuff.WealsoputawhiteboardinthekitchentomakesurethatItooktherightbagontheappropriateday.Fromthenon,mybeyondbusysummerwassmoothsailing,duringwhichIlearnedavaluablelesson:lfyoutriedtousethedog'sropeasyourkaratebelt,it'stimetoimproveyourorganizationalskill.(89words)Para1:Mydadtappedmegentlyontheshoulder,andwewentinside.

Seated,Iimmediatelyloweredmyhead.Yet,insteadofblamingme,hesatandwentbacktohismeal.Forawhile,therewereonlythesoundofhischewingandtheoccasional,faintbutdistinctive“breathing”ofmyblunder.Myheartrainedinthesilencebutitwasn’tastormthatawaited.Whenhefinished,mydad