高考寫作(漫畫及話題雷)

高中英語書面表達(dá)寫作指導(dǎo)之漫畫作文及讀寫作文優(yōu)秀高考英語作文的六個(gè)根本特征1、層次不亂 2、句式多變3、亮點(diǎn)假設(shè)干 4、巧妙串聯(lián)5、蠢錯(cuò)不犯 6、整潔卷面開頭：第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)層次不亂主體：第二個(gè)要點(diǎn)結(jié)尾：第三個(gè)要點(diǎn)1,句式多變長(zhǎng)短變化主、被動(dòng)變化主語變化同義詞變化同功能句型變化橫向比較變化2,亮點(diǎn)假設(shè)干高中常用詞匯高級(jí)句型各種復(fù)合句倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句型虛擬語氣非謂語動(dòng)詞巧妙運(yùn)用名言警句3,巧妙串聯(lián)起：承：轉(zhuǎn)：合：firstofall,tobeginwith,aboveall...inaddition,besides...however,ontheotherhand...inmyopinion,allinall,inshort...4,

5,蠢錯(cuò)不犯Iverylikesports.2.Heworkshardly,heisagoodstudent.3.Therehavemanystudentintheclassroom.4.Theybybustothecompany.整潔卷面英文書寫標(biāo)準(zhǔn)詞與詞間距適當(dāng)文章有層次〔分三段〕少有修正涂改6,ComicWriting1.Whatiscomicwriting?

2.Whatarethefeaturesincomicwriting?3.Whatarethedifficulties?漫畫的特點(diǎn)幽默嘲諷(humorous,sarcastic)生動(dòng)夸張(vivid,overstated)寓意深刻(thought-provoking)2.interpretingDifficulties?1.reading3.planningStep1讀圖DescribethepictureLet’spractise!Picture1Describe

thepicture

Thepictureistalkingaboutastoryaboutneighborhood.Twoladiesdon’tknoweachothereveniftheyhavebeenlivingonthesamefloorfor5or6years.Let’spractise!Picture2Describethepicture

Achildisburdenedwithheavyschoolbagaswellashugementalpressure.Whenyoung,hewasexpectedtogotoakeyelementaryschool,andlaterakeyhighschool.Andnowheisexpectedtobeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.解意注意:文字說明局部往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切記要認(rèn)真閱讀?。。?interpret)-----tothepointStep2Example12014.12015.05比較comparisonThesituationindicatesthephenomenonthatthekidsdon’tenjoyequalrightsofschoolinginmodernChina.主旨2016.09釋義interpret主旨Thestudentaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusesontheiracademicachievements,neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards.Example2Judgethethemesofthefollowingcomics.Onefalsemovemaylosethegame.Lookbeforeyouleap.Picture1Protectanimals.Nobuying,nokilling.Picture2Moneycan’tbuyeverything.Healthisthebestwealth.Picture3Step3謀篇(Planning)Threeparts:1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning3)voiceyouropinionsaboutthephenomenonPart1DescribethepictureAsisshowninthepicture…2.Aswecanseefromthepicture…3.Thepicturerevealsacommonphenomenon.

4.Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.5.Accordingtothepicture,wecansee…Part2InterpretthepictureThepictureindicatesthatwe…Thecartoonvividlydescribes…3.Thepictureisarealreflectionof…4.Thepicturereflectsacommonsocial…5…..mayaccountforthisphenomenon.Part3

Voice

opinionsAsfarasI’mconcerned,Inmyopinion/view,onmypart,Frommyperspective,Onlyinthiswaycan….Onlybydoing…can…1.Itishightimewetooksomemeasuresto…2.Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento…3.Thegovernmentshouldmakelawsto…Let’shaveagoatawholeessay!小試牛刀What?Why?How?

Thepictureistalkingaboutastoryaboutneighborhood.Twoladiesdon’tknoweachothereveniftheyhavebeenlivingonthesamefloorfor5or6years.

Inmyview,thisphenomenonisnogoodforus,norforoursociety.It’stimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit.Weshouldcallonpeopletobefriendlytoeachother.Ifeveryonecandoalittlebitforit,oursocietywillbecomeabeautifulparadise.

Whatmayaccountforthisphenomenon?Thereasonsmaybeasfollows…..EnjoythepossibleversionTouse

linkingwords

ifnecessary2.Touse

complicatedstructures

ifpossibleWhenwritinganessay,pleaseremember

Hintsforwriting1.Touselinkingwords表示平行、對(duì)等或選擇關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

表示比照關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系

and,aswellas,togetherwith,notonly…butalso...but,however,inspiteof,though,otherwise,whileonthecontrary,insteadof,ononehand..ontheotherhand...so,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto.

1.Touselinkingwords表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系

表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系表示解釋、說明關(guān)系表示結(jié)論

firstly,secondly,foronething.foranother,intheend,firstandforemostbesides,what’smore,inaddition,worsestill,aboveallsuchas,forexample,forinstance,inotherwords,andsooninshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,onthewhole,inconclusion,lastbutnotleast,江蘇新增高考題型

Task-basedwriting讀寫作文的特點(diǎn)和要求特點(diǎn)：1.具有一定開放性。2.考生比較熟悉的題材。3.“讀”和“寫”的結(jié)合，“讀”是前提，“寫”是拓展。要求：1.找到文中主要信息，掌控全局。2.把握好關(guān)鍵詞與句。3.用正確的句子表達(dá)〔２８－３２詞〕寫作分三局部Step1、Beginning：

Summary

用兩三句話概述原文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，30詞左右。

Step2、Body：opinions&examples

依據(jù)材料陳述觀點(diǎn)并加以例證,約100個(gè)詞。Step3、Ending：

Conclusion

陳述你的觀點(diǎn)或看法，約20個(gè)詞。

新增高考讀寫作文Task-basedwriting

Apeacockwasveryunhappywithitsuglyvoiceandhespentmostofhisdayscomplainingaboutit.“Itistruethatyoucannotsingwell”saidthefox,“butlookhowbeautifulyouare!”“Oh,butwhatgoodisallthisbeauty”criesthebird,“withsuchanunpleasantvoice!”“Listen,”saidthefox,“eachoneownssomethinggood:Youhavesuchbeauty;thenightingale〔夜鶯〕hasitssong;andtheowl〔貓頭鷹〕hashiseyes.Evenifyouhadasweetvoice,youwouldstillcomplainaboutanotherthing.Whycan’tyoujustbehappyaboutwhatyouhavealreadygot?”

要求：

1.以約30詞概括短文主要內(nèi)容。

2.以約120詞就“停止抱怨并珍惜自己所擁有的”這一主題舉例說明并發(fā)表你的看法。

3.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；4.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

PracticemakesperfectPeacockunhappynotsingwellcomplainOnepossibleversion

AppreciationofthebeautifulessayAswecanseefromthearticle,apeacockiscomplainingaboutitsvoicefornotsingingwell,butitdoesnotseethebeautyofitsfeathers.〔28〕Asisoftenthecase,peoplealwaysfocusontheirweak-pointswhiletheyignoretheirstrong-points.Forexample,inourdailylife,manypeopleonlypayattentiontounhappythings,suchasnotbeauty,lackofmoney,unsuccessfulcareer,etc,sotheyareunhappyalldaylong.What’sworse,someofthemevenholdnegativeattitudestowardslife.Inmyview,it’sfoolishofthemtohavesuchbadfeelings,becauseitonlyaddstomoresadnessanddepression.Instead,theyshouldstayoptimisticwhenfacingdefectsorsetbacks,whichcanmakethemconfidentandhopeful.Iftheytreasurewhattheyhavepossessed,I’msuretheirlifewillturnforthebetter.(150)----Tom2016江蘇高考英語作文，用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章

Inrecentyears,internetvotinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves,butalsourgeotherstovoteforcompetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang,ahighschoolstudent,isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer

competition,organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers’dailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbecomingpolicemanhimselfinthefuture.SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger冶competition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthecompetition,thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch,buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote,ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.【寫作內(nèi)容】1. 用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；2. 用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2~3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法?！緦懽饕蟆?. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】?jī)?nèi)容完整，語言標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。Possibleversionone:

On-linevotingbecomesincreasinglypopular,andmanycompetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople,whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.

Inmyopinion,on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbewelcomed,sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition,theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient,regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.

Tobehonest,voterssometimesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.(150words)Possibleversiontwo

Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzledatthenegativesideofthevoting,althoughsomearequitehappywithit,andactiveindoingit.Inmyopinion,internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestron