(通用版)2017屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)第1部分專題5短文改錯訓(xùn)練3短文改錯(Ⅲ)

訓(xùn)練3短文改錯(Ⅲ)A(2016·陜西咸陽三模)Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasmybirthdaygift.IfeltsuchexcitedthatIcouldn'thelptryridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill，Ihadmanyfalloffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhilemyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Becausemuchpractice,Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,andIcouldn'thaveriddenabikewellwithouttryinghardbecausesuccesslieincontinuouseffortsthroughfailures.Wecan'toftensucceedatthetime.Ifwesticktotheirwork,wecanmakeitintheend.【答案】Attheageoftwelve，Igotanicebikeasmybirthdaygift.Ifelteq\f(such,so)excitedthatIcouldn'thelpeq\f(try,trying)ridingit.However，itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeeq\f(seem,seemed)tooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill，Ihadmanyeq\f(fall,falls)offthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupeq\f(while,when)myfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Becauseeq\o(\s\up12(∧),of)muchpractice，Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,eq\o(﹨,and)Icouldn'thaveriddenabikewellwithouttryinghardbecausesuccesseq\f(lie,lies)incontinuouseffortsthroughfailures.Wecan'toftensucceedateq\f(the,a)time.Ifwesticktoeq\f(their,our)work，wecanmakeitintheend.B(2016·山東泰安一模)Everyoneshouldtaketheactiontoreducehaze(霧霾),whichisharmlesstoourhealth.Firstofall,Ibelievethatifweplantmoretree,therewillbelesshazeintheircity.Treescanabsorbcarexhaustfumes,thusreducepollution.Second,thegovernmentshouldpunishthefactorieswhereproducetoomanyfumes.Exhaustfumesisthemaincauseofhazeanddogreatlyharmtopeople'shealth.Third,Ithinkitwasagreatideatoencouragepeopletousepublictransportation.Lastbutnotleast,wecancalloncitizensridebikesiftheytravelshortjourneys.【答案】Everyoneshouldtakeeq\o(﹨,the)actiontoreducehaze(霧霾)，whichiseq\f(harmless,harmful)toourhealth.Firstofall，Ibelievethatifweplantmoreeq\f(tree,trees)，therewillbelesshazeineq\f(their,our)city.Treescanabsorbcarexhaustfumes，thuseq\f(reduce,reducing)pollution.Second，thegovernmentshouldpunishthefactorieseq\f(where,which/that)producetoomanyfumes.Exhaustfumeseq\f(is,are)themaincauseofhazeanddoeq\f(greatly,great)harmtopeople'shealth.Third，Ithinkiteq\f(was,is)agreatideatoencouragepeopletousepublictransportation.Lastbutnotleast，wecancalloncitizenseq\o(\s\up12(∧),to)ridebikesiftheytravelshortjourneys.C(2016·河南中原名校一聯(lián))DearSirorMadam，I'mWangLin.Myyoungerbrother,whowasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,wantstoreceiveeducationinourInternationalDepartment.I'mwritingtogetsomeinformationsontheissue.Tobeginwith,I'dlikeknowwhentheentranceexaminationwilltakeplacebutwhichsubjectswillbetested.Inadditionto,couldyoutellmethetuitionandtherelativerulesaboutthescholarship?Finally,beforefinishingthestudiesinyourschool,whichforeignuniversitiescouldoneapplyfor?IwouldbegratefullyifyoucouldbesokindtoprovidemefortheinformationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully，WangLin【答案】DearSirorMadam，I'mWangLin.Myyoungerbrother，whoeq\f(was,is)ajuniormiddleschoolstudent，wantstoreceiveeducationineq\f(our,your)InternationalDepartment.I'mwritingtogetsomeeq\f(informations,information)ontheissue.Tobeginwith，I'dlikeeq\o(\s\up12(∧),to)knowwhentheentranceexaminationwilltakeplaceeq\f(but,and)whichsubjectswillbetested.Inadditioneq\o(﹨,to)，couldyoutellmethetuitionandtherelativerulesaboutthescholarship？Finally，eq\f(before,after)finishingthestudiesinyourschool，whichforeignuniversitieseq\f(could,can)oneapplyfor?Iwouldbeeq\f(gratefully,grateful)ifyoucouldbesokindtoprovidemeeq\f(for,with)theinformationandIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully，WangLin【導(dǎo)學(xué)號：90892095】D(2016·東北三省四市二模)Inageneral,mosthouseparentsareannoyingforboystudentslivingindormitories.Ididn'tbegintolikeourhouseparentswhensomethinghappenedonenight.Iwassoundasleepwhenmyalarmclockdropsontothefloorandwerebrokenintopieces.Afteraminute,thehouseparentsondutyopenedthedoorandrushedin.Insteadblamingme,heaskedmeanxiouswhatwasgoingon.BeforemakingsureIwasOK,heaskedmetogobacktosleepandcleanedupherself.Sincethen,Ihavecompletelychangedmyopinionofourhouseparents.Theyarelikeourparents,keepallofussafe.【答案】Ineq\o(﹨,a)general,mosthouseparentsareannoyingforboystudentslivingindormitories.Ididn'tbegintolikeourhouseparentseq\f(when,until)somethinghappenedonenight.Iwassoundasleepwhenmyalarmclockeq\f(drops,dropped)ontothefloorandeq\f(were,was)brokenintopieces.Afteraminute,theeq\f(houseparents,houseparent)ondutyopenedthedoorandrushedin.Insteadeq\o(\s\up12(∧),of)blamingme,heaskedmeeq\f(anxious,anxiously)whatwasgoingon.eq\f(Before,After)makingsureIwasOK,heaskedmetogobacktosleepandcleanedupeq\f(herself,himself).Sincethen,Ihavecompletelychangedmyopinionofourhouseparents.Theyarelikeourparents,eq\f(keep,keeping)allofussafe.【導(dǎo)學(xué)號：90892096】E(2016·河北百校聯(lián)盟一次聯(lián)考)Iamanonlychildinmyfamily.Whileeating,myparentsalwaysleavemyselfthebestdish.ButIdon'teatoutmuchbecauseIdon'thavesomeappetiteallthetime.Oneday,myfriendAliceaskedmecometoherhomefordinner.Inherfamily,afeelingwassopleasantbecausetherehadtwokidsinthefamily.Whentheywereeating,myfriendandhersisterfightforthefood.Theyatealotandlaughedhappy.Ijoinedtheminfightingforthefood.Ifeltsohappybutatealot.Igottoknowthattheeatingatmospherescouldbeveryimportant.【答案】Iamanonlychildinmyfamily.Whileeating，myparentsalwaysleaveeq\f(myself,me)thebestdish.ButIdon'teateq\o(﹨,out)muchbecauseIdon'thaveeq\f(some,any)appetiteallthetime.Oneday，myfriendAliceaskedmeeq\o(\s\up12(∧),to)cometoherhomefordinner.Inherfamily，eq\f(a,the)feelingwassopleasantbecausethereeq\f(had,were)twokidsinthefamily.Whentheywereeating，myfriendandhersistereq\f(fight,fought)forthefood.Theyatealotandlaughedeq\f(happy,happily).Ijoinedtheminfightingforthefood.Ifeltsohappyeq\f(but,and)atealot.Igottoknowthattheeatingeq\f(atmospheres,atmosphere)couldbeveryimportant.F(2016·福建福州3月月考)Haveyouevergonetoamusicfestival?DuringasummerholidayinHungary,Iwenttoattendmythefirstmusicfestival.Itwasreallyanexcitementtous!Since2002theSzigetFestivalhadbeenrunningeveryyearinBudapest.Itlastsforaweek,whichfamoussingersandbandsfromaroundtheworldperformverybrilliant.InHungariantheword“sziget”meanisland,whichisaveryappropriatenamealthoughthefestivaltakesplaceonalargeislandinthemiddleoftheDanubeRiverinBudapest.Thousandspeoplecomeon