2024屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫跑步訓(xùn)練途中路遇樂觀堅強的陌生人（參考范文五篇）素材

讀后續(xù)寫原題目呈現(xiàn)：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Yesterdayevening,mypartnerJohnandlwenttothelevee（堤壩）wherewewouldtakerunningtraining.Aheadofuswasaverytallmanwithaplasticbagwhoseemedtobeunabletowalksteadily.Johnsaid,“Youkeeprunning.Iwillcheckonhim.”ItriedtocontinueonbutthenturnedaroundonlytofindthatthemanhadfallenandwaslyingonhisbackwithJohnathisside.Johnwasholdinghishand.Isawtheman’sstomachgofromquickbreathstooneofease.Afewminuteslater,themancalmeddown.Then,Johntoldhim,“Wearegoingtocomebackthisway.Ifyouarestillhere,wewillcheckonyouagain.”Themansaidthathewasfinebuthewasgoingtohavearestforawhile.Weranonfor10-15minutesorsoandturnedaround.Manypeoplehadpassedby.ItoldJohnthatthemanwouldnotbetherebecauseforsuresomeoneelsewouldhelphim.Johnranaheadtoseeifhewasstillthere.WhenIgottothespot,Johnwasleavingandtoldme,“Heisfine.

Let’sgoon.”Themaninthemeantimetriedtoclimbuptheleveeandfellagainandashesatthere,Iwalkeddown.Isaid,“Hi,mynameisMia.What’syourname?”Laughingandlookingatme,hesaid,“MynameisWhite.”

Icontinued,“Ifindyouhavetroublewalking.Doyouwantanyhelp?”Hesaid,“I’mpracticingwalking,becauseIhadaserioustrafficaccidentoneyearago.Luckily,Ihaverecoveredfromthepain.”Hearinghiswords,Ifeltastonishedandaskedhimhowhecouldmakeit.Hetoldmeitwashispositivethoughtsthathelpedhimovercomeallthedifficulties.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwantedtogoontalkingwithhimandaskedwhetherwecouldwalktogether.Itwasgettingdarkandwewantedtoaccompanyhimtoreturnhome.參考答案：Iwantedtogoontalkingwithhimandaskedwhetherwecouldwalktogether.

Heagreed,buthewasunwillingtobegrabbedbyhishandorarmtogetassistance.IpatientlyexplainedtohimthatIjuststoodbyhimincasehefelldown.

However,heinsistedthatheshouldexperienceeveryfailureuntilhegotsuccess.Soheclimbeduptheleveetowards

Johnwhowasreadytohelp,slowly

but

firmly.Johnwenttogethimsomewater.Heaccepteditandbowedlowto

us,showinghisappreciation.Weheldhimupandwalkedalongtheleveewithhim.Itwasgettingdarkandwewantedtoaccompanyhimtoreturnhome..

?а?kеdаfеwt?mе??nvаr?оu?k?nd

waysandeachtimeheshookhishead.“I’mgratefulforgettinghelpwhileclimbingupthelevee,butit’stime

foryoutogohome,”hesaid.Then,hepolitelyaskedustoleave.Westoppedandwatchedhimuntilhemadethe

rightturn.Onourwayback,catchingaglimpseofthe

starry

night,neverhadIseensuchbreath-takingscenery.Toacertainextent,itwashispositiveattitudeandperseverancethataddedmorebeautyandcharmtotheunforgettableexperience.Undoubtedlyitwouldhaveaprofoundimpactonme.

(WordCount190)下水文1：Iwantedtogoontalkingwithhimandaskedwhetherwecouldwalktogether.

Uponfinishingmylastword,onhisfaceemergedasurprisedexpressionandafterawhileheslightlynoddedhishead.Itwasapparentthatwalkingforhimwasatoughprocessashedraggedhimselftowardsusarduously,tryingtokeeppacewithus.Althoughitwaschallenging,itwasabsolutelyunbelievableforapersonwhowastoldtobetrappedinawheelchairtopracticelikethat.Whathediddrasticallyimpressedus,makingusslowourwalksub-consciously.Notnoticingwhathedid,laughterescapedfromhimwhenhefoundhewasclosertous.Andtheatmospherewasfullofjoybecauseofhisoptimisticspirit.Itwasgettingdarkandwewantedtoaccompanyhimtoreturnhome.

Hearingourrequest,however,heshookhisheadinstantlyandrejectedourofferseriously.Sowehadtopartonthemainroadandhewasadvancingtowardshishomefirmly.Watchingfromhisback,wewerenotsurprisedthatheedgedlittlebylittlewithhislegsasifdraggingtwologs.Exhaustedbutdetermined,hewasabsolutelynotdefeatedbyhisfatigueandpain.Onourwayback,JohnandIdiscussedthismancontinuouslyandreflectedonthisspecialexperienceandweconcludedthatnothingstoppedamanwithadeterminedwillandpositivethoughts.Thiswastrulyalessontolearnforusall.

(WordCount215)下水文2：Iwantedtogoontalkingwithhimandaskedwhetherwecouldwalktogether.

A

surprisedlookcrossedhisface.Itseemedthattherewasnobodyinvitinghimtohaveawalk.Andthenhesmiled,“Ofcourse,please!”Walkingalongthetree-linedlevee,webeganajoyfulchat.Whenmentioningthepastdays,hereactedtobequitecalm,tellingusheoncedreamtofbecominganathlete.However,thetrafficaccidentdestroyedall.Adeepsenseofdespairoverwhelmedhimonthosedays.Butsoonhewasdeterminedtochangehislifecourseandovercome

all

thedifficulties.Deeplymovedbyhisexperience,wewalkedwithoutnoticingthetimepassingquietly.Itwasgettingdarkandwewantedtoaccompanyhimtoreturnhome.

Toourastonishment,herefusedsincehethoughthehadtroubledustoomuchandthoughwithchallengehecouldgohomebyhimself.Wewatchedhimploughondifficultly,northwardsatalowspeeduntilhedisappearedfromsight.SuddenlyitdawnedonusthatmillionsofindividualslikeMr.Whitewerefearlesslybattlingagainstwhatseemedtheimpossiblewithinspiringpositivethoughtsandincredibleperseverance.Thenwhycouldn’twe?Afterall,nothingisimpossibletoawillingmind.

(WordCount178)下水文3：Iwantedtogoontalkingwithhimandaskedwhetherwecouldwalktogether.

Henoddedwithpleasure.

Consideringhisphysicalcondition,wejustwalkedaroundthelevee

slowly.Duringthewalk,hetoldushis

prior

experience

actively.Infact,whenhewasinformedthathecouldn’twalklikeanormalmananymore,the

tremendous

sadnessenvelopedhim,makinghimfeelthathisworldhadcollapsed

completely.Onanordinarynight,however,whenhelookeduptothesky,hewasshockedbythestarshanginginthesky.Someshiningglimmerswerelikelytogetextinguishedinthenextsecond,buttheystillstrainedtheirnervetoshineforasecond’sbrightnessandbeauty.Hethoughteveryonewasastar,includinghimand

tablescouldbeturned

withastrongbelief.

Immersedin

theconversation,weforgotaboutthetime.Itwasgettingdarkandwewantedtoaccompanyhimtoreturnhome.

Insteadofrespondingtousdirectly,heledustoseethedarksky.Themomentwelookedup,JohnandIweresinkinginastonishment.Wesuddenlyunderstoodhoweffectivethepositivethoughtshadonhumansandrealizedhisstrongwilltopracticeonhisown.Sowedidn’tinsistandseparatedpleasantly.Onourwaybackhome,occupyingourmindwasnotthestunningviewonthelevee,butthoseglimmersthatneverwentoutinthesky,weakbutbreathtaking.

(WordCount212)下水文4：Iwantedtogoontalkingwithhimandaskedwhetherwecouldwalktogether.

With

adelightedandbrightsmile,hesaidofcourse.Tokeepthesamepacewithhim,wewalkedslowly,noticingthatevenifwalkingwasenergy-consumingandtoughforhim,hewalkedbyhimselffrombeginningtoend.Inourpleasantconversation,topicsvariedfromthelatestnews

onTVtoourvarioushobbies,fromwhichwecouldapparentlytellthathewasanoptimisticmanwithatrue

passion

andloveforlife.Itseemedthatdifficultiesandpaincouldneverbringhimdown.Soenjoyablewasourtalkthattimepassedbybeforeweknewit.Itwasgettingdarkandwewantedtoaccompanyhimtoreturnhome.

With

our

wordsending,herefusedinnotime,insistingtryingonhisown.Afterafiercedebate,however,wefailedtopersuadehim.ButJohn

and

I

still

followedhimquietly.Icouldn’tcontainmytearswhenseeingMr.Whitefallagainandagain.Nomatterhowmanytimeshehadfallen,thistoughmangotonhisfeetandstruggledtocontinue.Watchinghimstandandfall,webothdeeplymovedtotears.Theperseveranceandpositiveattitudeheconveyedtousunknowingly,westronglyreassure,wouldhaveaprofoundimpactonus.(WordCount194)精彩的句子和段落收集I

wasfascinatedbythefactthatIfeltsomethingabouthimwaswhatIlacked.Iwaseagertolearnhisexperience