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Howtoshowfear

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Howtoshow“fear”

1.描寫心理感受2.面部表情3.肢體動(dòng)作4.心理活動(dòng)

（想什么）5.環(huán)境描寫一、ExpressionsForthefeelingof“fear”n.

:

great/extremefear

terror/horror恐懼，驚恐

panic恐慌（不知所措）

alarm驚慌

vt.:

terrify使恐懼/驚恐adj.:

panicky恐慌的alarmed

驚慌的

scared/frightened害怕的

terrified恐懼的fear/fright害怕

scare/frighten使..害怕

panic（vi.&vt.）

(使）恐慌alarm驚慌

great/extremefeargreat/extremefear

ExpressionsFor“fear”n.:fear/fright害怕;terror/horror

恐懼，驚恐;panic

恐慌;alarm

vt.:scare/frighten;terrify;panic(vi.&vt.);alarm驚慌

adj.

:scared/frightened;

terrified;panicky;alarmed

Choosetheproperwordstofillintheblanks:1.Atthesightofthegiantgreybear,Ifelt___________.

2.Atthesightofthegiantgreybear,awaveof______________floodedoverme.

scared/frightened/terrified/panickyfear/fright/

terror/horror

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句Awaveofterror+floodedover+me.

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句

描寫心理的高級(jí)句式

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)

+有靈動(dòng)詞+sb無(wú)生命的情感名詞））（）

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句

“某人感到…”

burst

wave

Afloodof+

rush

sense/feelinghint/trace(一絲）

情感狀態(tài)名詞++sb

有靈動(dòng)詞

））（）

慢慢產(chǎn)生_______

掠過(guò)________

席卷________

抓住,控制________

淹沒(méi)________

吞噬________+漲涌_________+壓倒________

creepuponpass/runthrough

sweepover

seize

floodover

swallow

wellup

overwhelm/

overcome“一陣/一種…向某人襲來(lái)”

用“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句，續(xù)寫描述感受的句子：當(dāng)她意識(shí)到她在森林里迷路時(shí)，…Realizingshegotlostintheforest,__________________________________________________

awave/rush...ofpanic/terror/fright/fearseized/sweptoverher.

shewasseized/sweptoverbyawave/rush...ofpanic/terror/fright/fear.

二、ExpressionsFor“physicalreactions肢體反應(yīng)”嚇呆了

freeze

scream

couldn’thelpcrying

throattighten(vi.)

coverone’seyeswithone’shands

one’slegsfeelweak

one’sheartwaspounding/beatingviolently

shiver/tremblesb’spalmssweat(vi)/beinacoldsweat(n.)

喉嚨發(fā)緊

sb’eyes/mouthbewide

open.

Variouswaystocombinethefeelingandthephysicalreactions1.

因?yàn)榭謶?，呆住?.

驚恐地尖叫

1.肢體動(dòng)作+with+情感n.（原因：…得…）

3.太害怕了，以至于一動(dòng)也不敢動(dòng)。

肢體動(dòng)作+in+情感n.（狀態(tài)：…地…）Ifroze

withterror/horror.Iscreamed

interror/horror.I

wastooscaredtomoveaninch.I

wassoscaredthatIdarednotmoveaninch.

2.too..to…;so…that從句

4.那條狗突然跳出來(lái)沖向我，我嚇呆了，一動(dòng)也不敢動(dòng)。Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch/,so

scaredthatIdarednotmoveaninch.

3.

主句肢體動(dòng)作，

too..to…/

so…that從句（補(bǔ)充）

5.Astrongsenseofhorrorseizedme.Itrembled

alloverandmypalmsweresweating.

4.

情感和動(dòng)作

分開(kāi)造句：無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句。+

肢體動(dòng)作句

。（多個(gè)肢體動(dòng)作用并列句）6.BecauseI

wasoverwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,Iheldtheropetightly.(請(qǐng)改用非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)升級(jí)句子）Overwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,

Iheldtheropetightly.

5.

情感adj.,+主句（肢體動(dòng)作，主語(yǔ)必須是人）7.請(qǐng)給上句加多一個(gè)肢體動(dòng)作：心砰砰地跳。

Overwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,

Iheldtheropetightly，withmyheartpoundingviolently.

5.

情感adj.,+主句（肢體動(dòng)作，主語(yǔ)必須是人）,+with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu).Overwhelmedwithastrongsenseofhorror,

Iheldtheropetightly，withmyheartpoundingviolently.

6.

情感adj.,+主句（肢體動(dòng)作，主語(yǔ)必須是人）,+獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)？：下面哪題可以用非謂語(yǔ)合并兩分句？

1.Iheldtheropetightly.Ishouted,“Help!Help!”

2.Iheldtheropetightly.Myheartwaspoundingviolently.Iheldtheropetightly,shouting“help！Help！”（能用非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)的前提是：兩句的主語(yǔ)要一致）

那主語(yǔ)不一致就不可以用非謂語(yǔ)了嗎？Iheldtheropetightly,________poundingviolently.可以，在非謂語(yǔ)前加上自己的主語(yǔ)。myheart加上自己獨(dú)立的主語(yǔ)，這樣的非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，叫獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。1.Whenspringcomes,everythingwillcomebacktolife.2.Becausealltheworkwasfinished,wecangohomenow.Spring________(come),everythingwillcomebacktolife.comingAllthework_______(finish),wecangohomenow.finished(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)用ing還是done，取決于它前面那個(gè)“獨(dú)立主語(yǔ)”)

1.看到一頭大棕熊，我害怕極了，心臟砰砰狂跳,雙腿發(fā)軟。

2.害怕極了，我的喉嚨發(fā)緊，手心出汗。(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，或獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）3.她臉色發(fā)白，眼里滿是恐懼。(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，或獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）4.

她嚇得渾身發(fā)抖。

Let‘spractice!

1.看到一頭大棕熊，我害怕極了，心臟砰砰狂跳,雙腿發(fā)軟。

Atthesightofagiantbrownbear，Iwassweptoverbyterror.Myheartwaspoundingviolentlyandmylegsfeltweak.2.害怕極了，我的喉嚨發(fā)緊，手心出汗。(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，或獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）3.她臉色發(fā)白，眼里滿是恐懼。(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，或獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）Herfaceturnedpale,(with)hereyesfilledwithterror.4.

她嚇得渾身發(fā)抖。

Sheshivered/trembledalloverwithterror/fear/fright.

Let‘spractice!Overwhelmedwithterror,Ifeltmythroattighten,(with)mypalmssweating.

三、Whatwillyousayandthinkwhenyouarefrightened?

1.我大腦一片空白，只想離開(kāi)這個(gè)恐怖的地方。

2.他問(wèn)自己/喃喃說(shuō)：“我該怎么辦？我該怎么辦？”3.她大聲喊：“救命！救命！”/她大聲呼救。4.她祈禱/希望直升機(jī)helicopter會(huì)再一次回來(lái)。5.她祈求好運(yùn)。

Mybrainwentblank.Ijustwantedtoleavethishorribleplace.

Heaskedhimself/murmured,“WhatshouldIdo?WhatshouldIdo?”

Sheshouted/cried,“Help!Help!”/Sheshoutedforhelp.

Sheprayed/hopedthatthehelicopterwouldcomebackagain.

Sheprayedforgoodluck/fortune.“心理活動(dòng)和語(yǔ)言描寫”以伴隨狀語(yǔ)，加入之前的句式里。被火震驚到了，Lucy僵住了幾秒鐘，然后拼命沖向他們的營(yíng)地，同時(shí)大喊救命。

Shockedby

theflames,Lucyfrozeforafewseconds,andthendesperatelydashedtotheircamp,shoutingforhelpinthemeantime.

四、Whatisatmospherefor“fear”？1.除了森林，她什么都看不到。2.黑暗籠罩森林。3.夜幕降臨（fall/settlein），風(fēng)在她的四周可怕地怒吼著。4.天空烏云密布。5.刺骨的（biting）寒風(fēng)咆哮，像鋒利的小刀一樣割著我的臉。6.大雨傾盆，溪水上漲，狂風(fēng)咆哮，撞擊著窗戶。7.

她聽(tīng)到狼的嚎叫聲。

Shecouldseenothing,buttheforest.

Darknesscovered/ruledtheforest.

Thenightfell/settledin,andthewindhowledaroundher.

Theskywascoveredwithdarkclouds.

Thebitingwindwashowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.

Therainpoureddown,thestreamsrose,andthewindhowled,hittingthewindow.環(huán)境描寫不僅起到烘托人物心情，渲染氣氛的作用，還能推動(dòng)情節(jié)的發(fā)展。

Sheheardthehowlingofwolves.結(jié)合環(huán)境描寫，肢體動(dòng)作，神態(tài)，心理活動(dòng)和語(yǔ)言，表現(xiàn)一個(gè)人在森林迷路過(guò)程中可能出現(xiàn)狀況和恐懼。環(huán)顧四周，除了森林，她什么都看不到。意識(shí)到自己迷路了，她感到十分害怕，雙腿發(fā)軟。她繼續(xù)往前走，祈禱著好運(yùn)?？蓛蓚€(gè)小時(shí)后，夜幕開(kāi)始降臨，很快，黑暗籠罩森林。聽(tīng)到狼的嚎叫聲，她嚇得渾身顫抖，想著自己可能會(huì)死在這里。

Lookingaround，shecouldseenothing,buttheforest.Realizingshegotlostintheforest,shewassweptoverbyarushoffright，（with)herlegsfeelingweak.Shekeptwalking,prayingforgoodfortune.However,twohourslater,thenightbegantofall.Notlongafterthat,/Soon,darknesscovered/ruledtheforest.Hearingthehowlingofwolves,sheshiveredwithterror,thinkingshemightdieintheforest.當(dāng)她看不見(jiàn)弟弟的時(shí)候,她感到十分驚慌。

Whenshelostsightofherbrother,1.(awaveof)panicseized/overwhelmed/overcomeher.2.shewasseizedby/overwhelmedwith/overcomewith(awaveof)panic.她十分生氣，一把抓起桌上的油畫，把它撕成碎片。1.Shewasoverwhelmedwithanger,andshegrabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitintopieces.2.Shewasso

overwhelmedwithanger

thatshegrabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitintopieces.

3.Overwhelmedwithanger（原因狀語(yǔ)/伴隨狀語(yǔ)）,shegrabbedthepaintingonthetableandtoreitintopieces.看到臺(tái)下的觀眾，她非常緊張，頭腦一片空白。Seeingtheaudiencebelowthestage,aburstofnervousnesssweptoverherhermindwentblank.（錯(cuò)）

Seeingtheaudiencebelowthestage,shewassweptoverby/wasoverwhelmedwithaburstofnervousness.Atthesightoftheaudiencebelow,shewassooverwhelmedwithnervousnessthathermindwentblank.

他十分沮喪，低下頭，眼里滿是淚水。2.Hewassooverwhelmedwithfrustrationthathe….1.Overwhelmedwithfrustration,heloweredhishead,withhiseyesfullof/filledwithtears.全用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)：激動(dòng)地鼓掌：

激動(dòng)得發(fā)狂：高興得揮舞雙手：他既驚訝又失望：雷鳴般的掌聲從群眾中爆發(fā)出來(lái)：

他想出一個(gè)主意：

clappedwithexcitement

wentwildwithexcitement

wavedone’shandswithgreatjoy

Hefeltamixtureofsurpriseanddisappointment

1.Hecameupwithanidea.2.Anideaoccurredtohim.

Thunderousapplauseburstoutfromthecrowd.

ExpressionsFor“physicalreactions肢體反應(yīng)”嚇呆了

befrozenwithfear.etc

screaminterror

couldn’thelpcrying

throattighten(vt.)

coverone’seyeswithone’shands

one’slegsfeelweak

one’sheartwaspounding/beatingviolently

shake/tremblesb’shandssweat/beinacoldsweat1.Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,Iwas

frozenwithterror,tooscared

tomoveaninch.那條狗突然跳出來(lái)沖向我，我嚇呆了，一動(dòng)也不敢動(dòng)。

Howtocombine

“physicalreactionsandemotion”

with+情感n，too...to...,情感adj.短語(yǔ)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)2.Iwasseized/overcomebyastrongsenseofhorror.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.我害怕極了,渾身發(fā)抖,手心都出汗了。

并列句3.Hepanicked,coveredhiseyeswithhishandsandscreamedloudlyinfright/fear/terror.他驚慌失措,用手蒙住眼睛,驚恐得大聲尖叫。

并列謂語(yǔ)（動(dòng)作鏈）4.Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.

+獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)5.Overwhelmedbyastrongsenseofhorror,Iheldtheropetightly,myheatpoundingviolently.

句首放情感adj.，+主句（肢體動(dòng)作）仿寫：1.Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,Iwasfrozenwithterror,tooscared

tomoveaninch.2.Iwasseized/overcomebyastrongsenseofhorror.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.3.Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.4.Overwhelmedbyastrongsenseofhorror,Iheldtheropetightly,myheatpoundingviolently.1.看到一頭大棕熊，我嚇呆了，一動(dòng)不敢動(dòng)。2.Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,我害怕極了，心臟砰砰狂跳,雙腿發(fā)軟。3.Atthesightofagiantbrownbear,我一下子慌了，手心出汗(（獨(dú)立主格）4.害怕極了，我的喉嚨發(fā)緊，雙腿發(fā)軟。

Atthesightofagiantbrownbear，Iwasfrozenwithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.

Iwasseizedbyterror.Myheartwaspoundingviolentlyandmylegsfeltweak.

Iwasthrownintopanic,mypalmssweating.

with+情感n，too...to...,情感adj.短語(yǔ)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)（獨(dú)立主格）（并列句）

句首放情感adj.，+主句（肢體動(dòng)作）Overhelmed/Overcome/Seizedbyastrongsenseofterror,mythroattightened,mylegsfeelingweak.

turnpale

ExpressionsFor“facialfacialexpression”

eyesfullof/filledwithterror1.看到一頭大棕熊，她臉色發(fā)白，眼里滿是恐懼。（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）

Atthesightofagiantbrownbear，herfaceturnedpale,withhiseyesfilledwithterror.

ExpressionsFor“Psychologicalactivity”心理活動(dòng)描寫”

1.我大腦一片空白，只想離開(kāi)這個(gè)恐怖的地方。

2.去那里的路上我有一種毛骨悚然的感覺(jué),

3.他問(wèn)自己：“我該怎么辦？我該怎么辦？”

Mybrainwentblank.Ijustwantedtoleavethishorribleplace.

I

gotarealcreepyfeelingonthewaythere.

Heaskedhimself,“WhatshouldIdo?WhatshouldIdo?”1.除了森林，她什么都看不到。2.黑暗籠罩森林。

Howtodescribetheatmosphere.

Shecouldseenothing,buttheforest.

Darknesscovered/ruledtheforest.襯托人物，渲染氣氛Shocked,Gradyfrozeforafewseconds,andthendesperatelydashedtotheircamp,shoutingforhelpinthemeantime.butthewindhadfannedtheflamesofthefiretowardsourtent.Frightenedbytheflames,Iranoutofthetentimmediately.Shestoodthereshockedwithhereyeswide

open==Shewasshockedandstoodthere,andher...Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademe

quiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright

(難以控制地發(fā)抖).4.Lookingatthe

vast

sea,Ifeltasenseoffear

surgingthroughmywholebody.(在身體涌動(dòng))Astimetickedby,fear

creptuponmyheart(爬上我心頭)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcould

ploughon

(前行).6.

Thethoughtofhopelessness

sentshiversdownmyspine(讓我后脊背發(fā)涼).Tearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.11.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”展開(kāi)想象：結(jié)合環(huán)境描寫，肢體動(dòng)作，神態(tài)和心理活動(dòng)，嘗試表現(xiàn)一個(gè)人在森林迷路過(guò)程中可能出現(xiàn)狀況和恐懼。

terrified

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句

“某人感到…”

burst

wave

Afloodof+

rush

sense/feelinghint/trace(一絲）

情感狀態(tài)名詞++sb

有靈動(dòng)詞

））（）

慢慢產(chǎn)生_______

掠過(guò)________

席卷________

抓住,控制________

淹沒(méi)________

吞噬________+漲涌_________+壓倒________

creepuponpass/runthrough

sweepover

seize

floodover

swallow

wellup

overwhelm/

overcome“一陣/一種…向某人襲來(lái)”

用“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句，翻譯句子:當(dāng)她以為自己把票丟了時(shí)，她著實(shí)驚慌起。__________________________________________________________atthethoughtthatshehadlostthetickets.

Awave/rush...ofpanicseized/sweptoverher

“無(wú)靈”主語(yǔ)句

burst

wave

Afloodof+

rushhint/trace(一絲）

情感狀態(tài)名詞++sb

有靈動(dòng)詞

））（）掠過(guò)________

席卷________

突然侵襲________

淹沒(méi)________

吞噬________壓倒

_______

pass/runthrough

sweepover

seize

floodover

swallow

overwhelm/ove