2021年6月浙江卷續(xù)寫真題我的工資講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

2021年6月浙江卷續(xù)寫真題我的工資一、原文Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn’tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn’treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超過)anythinghehadacplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(長號).ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb’squarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup.I’mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.”Mydad’swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn’tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.Paragraph1:

WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhomeitwas$119mydadwantedtotalktome.Paragraph2:

IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasIwished.二、前文情節(jié)梳理1.最終我的工資是被我花了，還是補(bǔ)貼家用呢？2.從自私地想要支配收入到主動把錢給爸爸，中間的轉(zhuǎn)折是什么？三、原創(chuàng)作文：Paragraph1:

WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhomeitwas$119mydadwantedtotalktome.（1）我用滿是汗水的拳頭緊緊攥著那筆錢，腦子里一直在想該說些什么去和爸爸爭論，如果他要求我把工資貢獻(xiàn)給家里的話。Clenching

themoney

tightly

inmy

sweatingfist,Ikept

digginginmymindforwords

to

disputewith

dadifhe

requested

meto

contributemysalarytothehousehold.（2）沒想到，他并沒有強(qiáng)迫我交錢，而是走近我，用溫和的語氣問我:“你打算怎么花這筆錢?”Unexpectedly,insteadofpellingmeto

submit

themoney,he

approached

me,

utteringinagentletone,“Howdoyouplantospendthemoney?”（3）我呆住了，嘴巴張得大大的?！拔摇蚁胭I一雙結(jié)實(shí)的運(yùn)動鞋或一支新的長號”我結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說。Ifroze,mouth

hangingopen.

“I...wouldliketobuya

sturdy

pairofsportsshoesoranew

trombone”I

stammered.

（4）在長時間的停頓之后，他對我說的只是:“你可以隨心所欲地使用這筆錢，這是你應(yīng)得的!”Pattingmegentlyontheshoulder,hesaid"Youcanusethemoneyasyouwish,andyoudeserveit!"Paragraph2:

IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasIwished.

（5）看到我的困惑，他解釋說:“雖然我不能理解你的學(xué)?；顒邮澜?，但我還是會支持你?！盤erceivingmypuzzlement,heexplained,

“ThoughIcan’tunderstandyourworldofschoolactivities,stillIwill

standby

you.”（6）就在這時，他那駝背和灰白的頭發(fā)映入了我的眼簾。Atthatveryinstant,

his

hunching

backand

gray

hair

cameintomysight.（7）我突然意識到，他作為一名卡車司機(jī)的辛苦工作為這個家庭做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)，我也有責(zé)任為這個家庭盡我的一份力量。Shamehitting,itsuddenlydawnedonmethat

hehadcontributedenormouslytothefamilythroughhis

exhausting

workofbeingatrucker

and

it

was

also

my

responsibility

to

do

my

part

to

the

family.（8）我為自己如此自私感到無比羞愧?！皩Σ黄?，爸爸，這一次，我會上交我所有的收入?！盜feltincredibly

ashamedof

myselfforgettingsoselfish.“Sorry,Dad,thistime,Iwillhandinallmyearnings.”（9）爸爸深受感動，伸出雙手緊緊地抱住了我，眼里噙滿了淚水。Touched

immensely,Dad

reachedout

hishandsandhuggedmetightly,hiseyes

brimmingwithtears.（10）我下定決心將在夏天繼續(xù)為農(nóng)民工作。Iwas

resolved

to

proceed

toworkforthefarmerduringthesummer.續(xù)寫范文：Paragraph1:

WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhomeitwas$119mydadwantedtotalktome.Clenching

themoney

tightly

inmy

sweatingfist,Ikept

digginginmymindforwords

to

disputewith

dadifhe

requested

meto

contributemysalarytothehousehold.Unexpectedly,insteadofpellingmeto

submit

themoney,he

approached

me,

utteringinagentletone,“Howdoyouplantospendthemoney?”Ifroze,mouth

hangingopen.

“I...wouldliketobuya

sturdy

pairofsportsshoesoranew

trombone”I

stammered.

Pattingmegentlyontheshoulder,hesaid"Youcanusethemoneyasyouwish,andyoudeserveit!"Paragraph2:

IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasIwished.

Perceivingmypuzzlement,heexplained,

“ThoughIcan’tunderstandyourworldofschoolactivities,stillIwill

standby

you.”Atthatveryinstant,

his

hunching

backand

gray

hair

cameintomysight.Shamehitting,itsuddenlydawnedonmethat

hehadcontributedenormouslytothefamilythroughhis

exhausting

workofbeingatrucker

and

it

was

also

my

responsibility

to

do

my

part

to

the

family.Ifeltincredibly

ashamedof

myselfforgettingsoselfish.“Sorry,Dad,thistime,Iwillhandinallmyearnings.”Touched

immensely,Dad

reachedout

hishandsandhuggedmetightly,hiseyes

brimmingwithtears.Iwas

resolved

to

proceed

toworkforthefarmerduringthesummer.續(xù)寫亮點(diǎn)：（1）我用滿是汗水的拳頭緊緊攥著那筆錢，腦子里一直在想該說些什么去和爸爸爭論，如果他要求我把工資貢獻(xiàn)給家里的話。Clenching

themoney

tightly

inmy

sweatingfist,Ikept

digginginmymindforwords

to

disputewith

dadifhe

requested

meto

contributemysalarytothehousehold.運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語以及條件狀語從句。（2）沒想到，他并沒有強(qiáng)迫我交錢，而是走近我，用溫和的語氣問我:“你打算怎么花這筆錢?”Unexpectedly,insteadofpellingmeto

submit

themoney,he

approached

me,

utteringinagentletone,“Howdoyouplantospendthemoney?”運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。（3）我呆住了，嘴巴張得大大的?！拔摇蚁胭I一雙結(jié)實(shí)的運(yùn)動鞋或一支新的長號”我結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說。Ifroze,mouth

hangingopen.

“I...wouldliketobuya

sturdy

pairofsportsshoesoranew

trombone”I

stammered.

運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。（4）在長時間的停頓之后，他對我說的只是:“你可以隨心所欲地使用這筆錢，這是你應(yīng)得的!”Pattingmegentlyontheshoulder,hesaid"Youcanusethemoneyasyouwish,andyoudeserveit!"運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語以及條件狀語從句。（5）看到我的困惑，他解釋說:“雖然我不能理解你的學(xué)?；顒邮澜?，但我還是會支持你?！盤erceivingmypuzzlement,heexplained,

“ThoughIcan’tunderstandyourworldofschoolactivities,stillIwill

standby

you.”運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語以及條件狀語從句。（6）就在這時，他那駝背和灰白的頭發(fā)映入了我的眼簾。Atthatveryinstant,

his

hunching

backand

gray

hair

cameintomysight.（7）我突然意識到，他作為一名卡車司機(jī)的辛苦工作為這個家庭做出了巨