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ContinuationwritingMicro-skill-----tohighlightthethemeattheendofthestoryLearningaims:Knowwhatisamoralending01Finishastorywithamoralending02Improvestudents’wrtingskills03LessonorMoralEndingThemaincharacterinthestorygrows,changes,orlearnssomethingattheendofthestory,whichwillhighlightthetheme.主題升華式結(jié)尾，也稱哲理式結(jié)尾，即在結(jié)尾用富含哲理的語句，總結(jié)全文，升華主旨，并給人以啟發(fā)。同學(xué)們平常可以積累一些含哲理的句子，如果引用得當(dāng)，不僅能深化主題，而且能啟人深思，給讀者以有益的啟迪。Findoutthetheme1.Finditintheoriginaltexttopicsentencekeywords:suchas,love,courage,confidence,smile,challenges,difficulties...2.Concludeitbyyourself諺語通式：Asasaying/proverbgoes,+名言.E.g.Amancanbedestroyedbutnotdefeated.人可以被毀滅，但不能被打敗。（面對挫折）Evensmallactsofkindnesscanmakeabigdifference.即使是很小的善意行為也會產(chǎn)生很大的影響。（友善助人）PS.要具體文本具體分析，不要生搬硬套諺語名言。Strategy1.運用諺語名言1.

Itisnevertoooldtolearn.2.Nocross,nocrown.3.Doingisbetterthansaying.4.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.5.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.6.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.7.Nothingisimpossibletothemanwhowilltry.Guessthemeaningofthesayings.

活到老，學(xué)到老。不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨，怎么見彩虹。行勝于言。少壯不努力,老大徒傷悲。良好的開端就是成功的一半?；茧y之交才是真朋友。世上無難事,只怕有心人。Asasayinggoes,“Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.”Aslongasyoutakecouragetotakethatfirststep,youwillbeonyourhalfwaytosuccess.Afterall,ajourneyofonethousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.QuoteasayingQuoteasayingUseyourownlanguage句式1：強調(diào)句：Itis+被強調(diào)部分+that+其他部分1.困難和障礙使我們更強大。Itis

difficultiesandobstaclesthatmakeusstronger.2.愛使世界轉(zhuǎn)動。Itislovethatmakestheworldgoaround.3.冷靜和智慧幫助我們脫離危險。Itiscalmnessandwisdomthathelpusgetoutofdanger.Strategy2.Useyouownlanguagetosummarizethetheme句式2：Thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonthat...Fromthenon,Ibecame/grew...1.這段難忘的經(jīng)歷使我學(xué)到了一個道理：只要我們不放棄希望，任何困境都有出路。從那天起，我變得更聰明，更自信了。(個人成長類/脫困類)Theunforgettableexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonthat

there’salwaysawayoutaslongaswenevergiveupourhope.Fromthatdayon,Igrew

wiserandmoreconfident.2.這段難忘的經(jīng)歷使我學(xué)到了一個道理：我們遇到困難時一定要有積極的態(tài)度。從那天起，我變得更勇敢，更樂觀了。(個人成長類)Thisunforgettableexperiencetaughtmeavaluablelessonthatweshouldhaveapositiveattitudewhenfacingdifficulties.Fromthatdayon,Igrewbraverandmoreoptimistic.句式3：Onlythendidsb.realize...直到那時，他才意識到原諒和愛/善意/友誼的重要性。Onlythendidherealizetheimportanceofforgivenessandlove/kindness/friendship.直到那時我才意識到真誠和誠實在友誼中的價值。Onlythendid

I

realize

thevalueofsincerityandhonesty

infriendship.句式4：感嘆句：Whata+adj+experience!Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere’salwaysawayoutofanydilemmaaslongaswestaycalm/nevergiveuphope/unitetogether.多么難忘的經(jīng)歷??！事實證明，只要我們保持冷靜/不放棄希望/團結(jié)一致，就總有辦法擺脫困境。句式5：典型表達(dá)：流淚；心里想①流淚Tearsblurredone'seyes.淚水模糊了某人的雙眼。One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.淚水模糊了某人的雙眼。Tearsrolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face.淚水順著某人的眼睛/臉頰/臉流下來。②心里想Aninnervoicetoldsb.that...內(nèi)心的聲音告訴某人……thought/saidtooneself自己盤算；自思自忖3．轉(zhuǎn)折(個人努力或借助外界)典型表達(dá)：鼓起勇氣(或通過另外一方的鼓勵)；毫不猶豫①鼓起勇氣pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo...)②毫不猶豫sb.couldhardlywaittodosth.withoutasecondthought/withouteventhinking/withoutdelay/withouthesitation4．事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機，并抱有希望，感到寬慰典型表達(dá)：似乎；希望；寬慰①似乎Itwaslikedoingsth.Itseemedthat../asif...②希望Hopingthat......see/feelaglimmerofhope...tryinghardtodosth.③寬慰breatheasighofrelief松了一□氣sighwithrelief如釋重負(fù)Awaveofreliefflooded/washedoversb.一陣如釋重負(fù)的感覺淹沒了某人。toone'srelief令某人寬慰的是……5．但是問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題典型表達(dá)：不幸的是；不知道(接下來)做什么①不幸的是Butbadluckforsb.,...但是某人真不走運，……...butinvain......butwithoutsuccess......butnouse...②不知道(接下來)做什么Sb.didsth.,wonderingwhattodonext.Sb.didsth.,notknowingwhattodonext.Sb.didsth.,unsureofwhattodonext.Sb.wasatalosswhattodo.Sb.wasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.6．突然有了一個想法(一句話說明這個想法)典型表達(dá)：某人突然想到/明白……；某人突然有了主意①某人突然想到/明白……Itsuddenlyoccurredtosb.that...＝Ithitsb.that...＝Itstrucksb.that...＝Itdawnedonsb.that...②某人突然有了主意(idea，thought...)occurred/cametosb.＝...came/flashedintoone'smind....crowdedinone'smind.One'smindbegantorace...某人的腦子開始飛快地運轉(zhuǎn)起來……7．過了一段時間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折典型表達(dá)：過了一段時間；有了結(jié)果；皆大歡喜①過了一段時間Notlongafterthat,...＝Shortlyafterwards,...＝Beforelong,...＝Itdidn'ttakelongbefore...＝Ittooksometimebefore...比喻句我明白了一個忠實的朋友抵得上一萬個親戚。Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.那份親情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，溫暖人心。Thataffectiontowardsourfamilyislikeatouchofgreentea,refreashingandheartwarming.善良就像一縷陽光，可以照亮我們的生活。Kindnessislikearayofsunlight,whichcanlightupourlife.沒有愛的家庭就像沒有靈魂的身體。Ahomewithoutloveisnomorethanabodywithoutsoul.開頭AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.一天，亞瑟在上班的路上發(fā)生了一件有趣的事情。結(jié)尾Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilariousexperience.多么有趣的一天啊，每當(dāng)亞瑟回想起這次歡樂的經(jīng)歷，他就忍不住笑個不停。首尾呼應(yīng)比喻句我明白了一個忠實的朋友抵得上一萬個親戚。Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.那份親情像一抹清茶，沁人心脾，溫暖人心。Thataffectiontowardsourfamilyislikeatouchofgreentea,refreashingandheartwarming.善良就像一縷陽光，可以照亮我們的生活。Kindnessislikearayofsunlight,whichcanlightupourlife.沒有愛的家庭就像沒有靈魂的身體。Ahomewithoutloveisnomorethanabodywithoutsoul.比喻句生活是一盒巧克力，你永遠(yuǎn)不知道下一步你會得到。